Reviews by FlSunshine
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123470
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

beautiful, wonderful ending



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 33003
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

glad for the update.  REally enjoyed it, glad they were able to get to Bella, what happened to her after they pulled her into the shed?  Just Jane tryignher thing or did anythign else happen

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
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Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

loved your story and writing style.  You are very talented !!!!  Thnaks for sharing !!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64701
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind

wow, very powerful first chapter, lots of promise, can't wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Edward Meets Julian

very intriguing. Julian huh. hmmmm

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Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Incapacitate...Don't Decapitate

oh holy crap !!!!!!  i understand maybe bring tied up, but the black ski mask really....  thank goodness alic eand the crew are on the way.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-For Her Own Good

hmmm sounds like a bomb ticking waiting to go off

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Since When Does Bella Use the F Word?

gotta love advice from alice jasper and emmett

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Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12-Julian Meets The Cullens

oh holy bdsm batman......   ding ding ding Emmett is a smart man but what the heck

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Research

omg too funny, loving the edward is taking baby steps with Bella

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Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

hmm tanya showing up don't know wheter that is good or bad, i will admit i am not a big tanya fan

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Operation Cunnilingus

omg i am laughing so hard my stomach hurts

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Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Would you Give Me the Honor?

yes yes yes give me the E train ride tooplease !!!!!

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Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections

sos, so glad he knows now, she was able to tell him with a gentle nudge. now they just need to get rid of julian, is there a runaway bus anywhere???

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Second Chances

well i agree with Missypooh, this is great !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29-A Peach By Any Other Name...

uh oh.    pissed bella

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Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32-Halloween Horny Nights

yes !!!!  fist pump for edward !!!!!!

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

glad for the update , thought the story had been abandoned

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Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Hungry Games

things are starting to heat up  I love it !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

very cute, love the exchange between them but must admit i would love a  little epov

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 How Hard Could it Be?

oh wow, great update !!!!  Poor Bella, what will she do next to him....

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation.  Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago. 

Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!

TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34252
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes

:)



Author's Response:

Back atcha - :-)

Hope the reveal lived up to your expectations.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Interview

wow that chapter blew me away !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breathless

so how long until we get the backsground scoop on Bella ????



Author's Response:

It's all spilled out a little at a time but the big reveal is chpt 9 & 10

 

Summary:

"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…”  I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."

 

 

 

~*~*~

 

"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"

 

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This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11221
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2014
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Meeting Renesmee

great story !!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42793
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Safe

a chapter with resolving  issues  :)



Author's Response:

yes... finally, right?!  thank goodness for that.  lots more where that came from coming up next!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

holy shit, bent his knees backwards breakign them,  nasty,, at least James is done.  WTG  Bella kickin some ass.  poor Alice , please let it be the police at the door



Author's Response:

i hated writing that about emmett.  it made me cringe!  but i agree that bella kicked some major ass.  and help is definitely on the way!!  hang in there!  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255143
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

loved it,  and shit just got fucking real !!!!  She has to see the danger now, she can't be that stupid or obtuse

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

good update. i stilldon't understand the past 2 chapters but it was severe not enough for me to stop reading when i didn't liek it i just skimmed down.  i guess my confusion comes in the story line maybe i need to go back 4 chapters and read them staright thru or something.  one day when i have lots of time i will try that.  Still love your story.  I read your a/n at top and i have never compared your story to motu.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

I loved the update, was kind of looking foward to knookie on the boat thou. :(   Btu iguess the Edward is the boat woudl have been rocking probably. 



Author's Response:

lol ...Nooky on the boat...LOL....that would have been something with all those people there and as Carlilse said - Thin Walls - lol...but maybe E&B can borrow it one day ...lol...

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I don't liek Edward 's behavior, I understand the whole dom/sub thing.  But it was not Bella who broke into the house, he told her to revmove the clip, she had never had a clip on before so she would not know the consequnces when she removed it. He is the one at fault. So she did nto steal hsi orgaism from him when she had the very small one when she did as he told her.  And she should be rewarded for tellinghim, and not hiding it. I am very dissappointed in him. And I think it is the bitches at the club, mostly Tanya working together to try adn get rid oh Bella so they got that girl onthe inside at the shelter Bella's involved with



Author's Response:

Don't be too mad at Edward..his POV is coming up and then maybe you will understand his motives better....just remember he loves her, but he's a Dom and that side of him always comes out...lol....and I hate those Bitches from the club...alll of them ...lol....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

wow lots of the little details int his chapter.  I like it.  and ok Leah geta a pass on being bitchy

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Great update !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

i am really kind of iffy on the motel room session.      not sure where istand on it.    i guess as long as bella was ok with it i can be too.  I can sit on a hard surface just fine.  anyway,  I understand the nipples - beamers - headlight thing, Edward has a right to be upset especially after he had told her already.  you had me freaked out, i thought james got aqhodl of teh dog

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well found your story 2 days ago and have been reading, quite happily.  i like oyur writng style, and the alternating pov.  I liked it better when he called her little girl during their usual (play ) time, as opposed to slut.  So i have been catching the odd things going on, the contractors van on Bellas street, the dog collar, the giving out of Bellas number, the near hit and running over of Bella, Seth (dog version) barking at somehting in the back yard, looking out Edwards window,  hmmmm  did i miss any?  Wonder if it is James, or someone on Edwards side trying to mess (fuck) things up.  How many chapters do you see for this story?  Thanks again. for sharing your story.



Author's Response:

Well first off, welcome to the story. I'm glad you found it and you like it. Hmmm, when I first set out with and outline, I had thought 45 - 50 chapters. But since this is my first FF and I had no idea how the characters seem to take on their own life, and things seem to happen that I had not antisapated I believe there will be more. My idea was to tell a day-by-day story of the summer they met and fell in love and all the things that happened around them. As well as letting people figure out who and why. All I can tell you is I know where the story is going and what has to happen along the way to get there. And as I said in my A/N's this is a slow boil and the pot is just starting to bubble....Thanks for reading and leaving the comment, I have a teaser for you...lml....

 

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.  

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

ok, so by yellowing she did nto get in trouble.  That is good to know. iwas worried she would nto get her reward, can't wait to see(read)  what it is.  Have a good weekend !!



Author's Response:

No No No ... she would never get into trouble for saying a safe word - ever... The object of that exercise on the way home was...do you remember when she used the ice on her boobs from the bands and he said i'if it was so bad - why didn't you say yellow?' he wanted her to say yellow, so he could help her through it, and reenforce the fact that she can depend on him...does that make sense? ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Loved the dance floor orgasm, understand the slut thing, nothing thrown yet.......

 

Now dressing Edward, better duck that shoe......

Leah being a class a1 b...... there is the other shoe better duck

 

other than that lovely chapter



Author's Response:

You missed me...lol

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

panties wet ---- check !!!

understand the smell and sounds triggers.  Good chapter !!!  i rellay like Jane.



Author's Response:

Jane is going to be very close to Bella ,,,actually she already is ...Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thanks for a great chapter, funny that Edward is shy about askign her abotu finances.  That woudl be good dinner conversaation maybe.  have a wonderful Thanksgiving !!!!!



Author's Response:

I don't know that he is shy, he just never thought about it,,,and then when they got home ..well you know what happened, when given the choice between a talk about money or some back door love'n...I think he made the right choice...lol ..but hey that's just me....usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

lots of emotion, Thank god Esme called Edward.  I thought the extar chocolate cake was going to end up on his dick thou, what a tease...... lol.



Author's Response:

smiles...cake will last more then one day ...lol

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

love your advice, and i agree whole heartly.  What was really in Edwards head?  Hope you got your tv.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

poor bella, one step foward 2 steps back.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

very different,  so did she never climax during the usual ??   Love the way Edward takes such good care of her.



Author's Response:

what she did was better than an orgasm... and Edward's POV will explain what happened...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

o  wow, Merry Christmas !!   Oh no the alarm, you have me sitting on the edge of my seat, so many people(assholes opps did i say that outloud).   Wonder who it or what it is???????

 

ps, I thought Bella would throw up during Emmetts story about the mouse



Author's Response:

lol ... i tried to make her sound like she was getting sick over it ....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

so she never got to talk to teh girl on why heather left?    Good chapter



Author's Response:

Next update you will get that conversation....

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

stunning update, thank you.  Question for Aro ..  If he had a daughter would he want her to be a submissive or dominant?   Question for jane ...  Dis she ever not feel that she was a submissive?  Meaning did she ever want to grow up and be something other?   I really hope that the visit to Forks goes smoothly but only time will tell.  till next week ...



Author's Response:

thanks for the question ...Forks will be interesting, there is alot that will happen there...Edward meets Charlie, Leah and Bella are thrown together in a small little house. Parties with old friends oh and don't forget they will be in the same small towm as James....hmmmm ..my-o-my....fun times ahead..lol,....

Thanks for reading ...I have this weeks teaser for you..lml

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

great update, i was just looking on Monday at this and thinking wow she hasn't updated for awhile hope everything is ok.  I loved how Edward worked wiht her on the cane, I am very interested for his side of that and bringnig seth in to help her was genious.  And Aro requesting that song, priceless !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ..I have this weeks teaser for you...

“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.

 

Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”

 

At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”

 

Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”

 

Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”

 

Why?

 

“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”

 

“What is it?”

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

good chapter, love how their realtionship keeps growing !!!!!



Author's Response:

They are bonding ...i sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for leaving a review...lml

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Question for Aro   How did he find or whom showed him the D/s lifestyle?  

Question for Jane    How do you feel about mentoring Bella deep down inside your heart speaking freely ?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the questions ...

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

oh crap, poor Edward.  And leah i guess that is hormones. 



Author's Response:

Leah is pent up frustration ...you'll see in the next chapter ...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

good dog Seth,  hope Bella doesn't get to upset over this

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Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

great update, loved the prespective you put it in.   well done



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading i have a small teaser for you....

After Bethany got everyone’s order Sue leaned over to talk to the table “You all look tired, what time did you go to bed last night?”

“What time did we go to bed or what time did we go to sleep?” Leah asked smugly raising her eyes in my direction.

“You couldn’t sleep?” Sue was concerned but Kim couldn’t resist “No there was a lot of yelling going on”

“Lots of yelling and banging” Emery added.

Before the conversation with Maggie Kim and Leah were teasing me in the restroom about how loud Edward and I were. So that meant that everyone else must have heard us too, which should have been evident by the laughter at the table. My face heated up as I tried to control my embarrassment while Edward just winked at me. Charlie on the other hand had no idea what was so funny came to his own conclusion. “I guess the kids on the beach must have been putting up quite a raucous if you heard it all the way back at the house”  

Thank god Charlie is so oblivious

“Oh yeah it was a raucous alright, as a matter of fact there was two of them”

“Two?” Emery questioned looking at Kim “We must have missed the second one”

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

tough chapter,  JAmes and then this with Charlie

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Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Jared????  I would like EDward and him to have a talk,  loved the chapter and Bella smacking the crap out of James.  And why woudl James even go there with all of Bella's extended family there anyway???  So did his good girl get her reward??????  I think she will



Author's Response:

Because James is an arrogant Asshole... and i don't think that he thought that Bella was in there...it's not something she would normally do ...thanks for reading ...lml

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

loved Water for Elephants, I read the book awhile back, i think the screenwriter did a great job in the adaptation to themovie, wish they coudl have done the Twilight series.  Now your chapter, loved it, poor Bella didn't understand how the dogs mated???  Jacob is an ass for doing that without her permission.  I was very glad to Edward's reacton with the sweatshirt  and her boobies business.  LEah and Edwards talk hmmmm  yes they needed to have it, surprised at Edward handling it so well, at giving a glimpse into their world.  But my queston -- did every one else leave from the table?  So noone overheard anything?

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

wow very long chapter, good, not alot of over the top drama, but good connection time !!!

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Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

very cute family timeon th ebach with some sexy thrown in.  Very well done !!!!!



Author's Response:

And Bella didn't even need to flash him...lol...thanks for reading..louise

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

have fun in D.C., it will be very hot and humid.  i grew up outside of DC and we went a couple years ago to DC .  loved it. parking is a pain in the ass and driving is stressfull. find a good parking place wear comfortable shoes.  Love the update, and you are a genious with the talk between Edward and Jasper !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

great update !!!  wish you had gotten to the phone call from Jane thou.  please update soon



Author's Response:

It's coming...It's coming...that is a conversation for Bella and Edward to have in private...

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Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

wow, loved the edward side of  things,  great update !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

great update, very emotional with Rosalie and bella

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

great update, sorry you got hurtful reviews.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment ... hurtful reviews i could deal with ..having no way to respond was what got to me...anyway ..thanks again...louise

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

I totally forgot about the FRuity Pebbles, but I guess Bella didn't  LOL

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Great update !!!!  very teary !!!

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

The bet - BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB   big time "B"

And the funny part he finds he really likes fruity pebbles.  That would be so funny.,   So loved the update,  and i agree with Edward she will have to hit rock bottom  , and then she can get it out.  Maybe Rose will help her with it, I mean she can help Rose and she understands that for other people they were nto t tfault maybe she needs that added strength of Rose and Emmett wiht Edward for her to see it for herself as well.  I have faith that you will get it where you want it.  Thansk for all your hard work on the chapters !!!!

Kris

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

i want a hot ftd-ward in my house.   guess they nanny just wanted a piece of the money pie herself huh.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

wow, really enjoyed it so far.  you have pulled me in hook line and sinker !!!!!

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Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

good story i have been reading it for the past three days.  

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

well done !!!!!

Summary:

stories/8628/images/Dreaming_of_Edward.jpg

This is Edward's side of Dreaming of Edward. Many have wondered what was Edward thinking when he would visit Bella at night, well here's your chance. Be warn like with Dreaming of Edward, this is not a light and fluffy story. It has bad langueage and sex as the main theme! So dont read it if you dont like that sort of thing! These chapters were originaly sent out as a reward for reviewing but now I have a stories worth. Cannon couples, no incest or slash or rape!  OOC

This story doesn't stand alone you must read Dreaming of Edward to follow it.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15544 Read Count: 5155
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2010 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

really love your story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467434
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

so wonderful as always !!!!

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Gray Matter

i love your crazy cullen family

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Imagine that

really love this chapter, Bella and Edward in bio lab  the best !!!!!

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Spring is in the air pt one

love your chapters, they go thru everything a-z.  Love your lemons the best thou. !!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Testing Testing

holy crap a baby !!!!!! 

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Thor, Loki, and the gang

Todl you before will tell you again,  love your story.  have you ever doen Michaels pov?  I know he is young but my gosh, the therapy only that boy will need from CC and Alex and EJ's girlfriends.....   Oh well.  REally love your Edward and Bella they rock!!!!!  You do too !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 47: The Best Years

wow amazing update !!!!  

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Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue

loved it , loved it all

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: An interview with Aro & Jane

well done, thanks for getting the interview done !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Ladies Luncheon

wow, so much insight into Esme,  I really loved getting her backstory and the intereaction between her adn Jane.  Seems Bella is like a soothing balm for teh cullens.  Thank you for thinking of gving us that.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238938
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love your story it is nowin my favorites !!!  How often do you update?   Can't wait for Bella and Edwards true marking (while sex)  but that will be   HOT!!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much! I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. I used to update once a week because the chapters were much shorter. But now it's like every two weeks, however I've already started chapter 10 so I may be able to finish much sooner... Hopefully, by the end of this week. I guess the longer the chapter, the longer the wait.

I hope that you will enjoy the next chapter. And thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it! =)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh yea, vampire lovin>>  Loved this chapter.  So where did you come up with the vamnpire language ?



Author's Response:

Thank you =D So happey you enjoyed this chapter. It was a pain in the a**. lol

The vamp language was a killer because I had no idea how I wanted it to sound at first. I reallly wanted to use Romanian or Swedish or even Polish but I decided against it because these vamps are from another planet, I needed something different. So basically I just made soemthing up. lmao It's not exactly how I wanted it to sound, but hey, I tried. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh shit had to bring tanya back.   that was just shitty.  Lovin on that Edward lovin !!!!  so muchin this chapter.  a+



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.

Tanya is just crazy...but I don't think she'll be around for too much longer. ;)

Thanks again! Love hearing from you.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

wow so much happening in this chater



Author's Response:

Yeah...too much. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

~Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow full riot gear for charlie, too funny !!!!!!   hope next chapter comes faster than this one did, it was hard waiting to hear what happened from mikes attack



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you! =)

I'll try my very best to get the next chapter out asap!

I'm sorry about that wait esp with that mean cliffy =(

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i thought it was great, a third change.  very interesting.  i love that she ran out and got him blood.  loved how the guys had to pulll him off of her.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. =) Glad you liked.

Carlisle has a theory for Edward's rapid change. Hope you'll like ch 16.

Thanks again, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

holy crap, her eyes are bleeding what the hell??????   great chapter adn lemons !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad that you still like =)

Thanks again,

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm still reading



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

 

Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105129
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

what the heck are they up too?    hopefully Alice will see and intervene .

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

wow, so it was a spell that tanya used tog et esme to do that???  i was owndering I meas come on, i know edward is nto hers biologically but still, it was worng.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

nice chapter :)

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom

great chapter,  read the outtake, very well done !!!

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148711
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

yes really love your story, added to my favorites !!!!   the kids are so adorable, and sexy Edward dad, yummy !!!!!

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

very interesting story line.  Wonder how this will play out ?

Summary:

parental

 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15418
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Worth It?

well interesting story, can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Adesse Olympus Banner

Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 30119
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

wow great story,  hope to find a sequel out there. !!!!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh my, this is such a  wonderful, steamy (hopefully more soon).  i love the background you have laid, sure do wonder how Emmett will handle this.  I really think the parents will be cool.  How often do you update?  Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

WOW !~!!!!!! hopefully emmett will see it differently inthe morning.  I think the parents will unserstand alot better.   

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i want to be Juliet !!!!!!!