Reviews by FlSunshine
Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother

wow, those girls are absolute bitches.  Love Bella up on a chair, too f........ funny !!!!!! 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow so much in that chapter, glad all things all lining up for them, she had quite the presentation ready for the parents -- smart, funny, and classy

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

nice wrap up

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Wookies & Good Friday

Really love this story, anbd the outtakes in lrm.  You knwo Edward in a shower woudl be nice !!!!!!



Author's Response:

o my...now i'm very distracted.  maybe a hot tub too....mmmm.  Thanks for totally screwing up my head for the rest of the day.  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

omg poor bella, wireless mic's....  gotta suck,  and then that the audience twittered all about it.  and Jill, wodner if Alec is the baby daddy????



Author's Response:

Alec is not the baby daddy...but that would have been very funny!  Glad you liked the chap.  LRM next!  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

great chapter, love the parting gifts they gave each other



Author's Response:

Thanks!  next up is a chap for LRM...but I'll be back to V&V soon.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Swing Dancing & The Dearly Departed

Ok, reading this way after it  was written but just found this story yesterday. Love the epov idea.  but see that it is elsewhere.  love your story !!!



Author's Response:

Hope you'll read EPOV also,  'Love Rescue Me'.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

i love how the girls support each other !!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

too funny, can't wait till they all get back at Emmet thou !!!!!!!  Update soon please !!!!!  needed my Edward and Bella time !!!!



Author's Response:

emmett will get his soon enough.  I need to torture him in other ways first...wow..that was cryptic. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

AWWW poor Emmett!!!  Too funny !!!  Good chapter with Bella and Edward



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

poor Edward, now Charlie knows too

Love that song Need you Now.

Good Chapter



Author's Response:

a lot of this stuff will be fun when i write it from Edward's pov...like beating up the guys at the bar....maybe not the part where he walks in on em and rose...but...lol. 

I'd heard that song playing off and on for months...in the background when i would be at someone's house ...or one of my daughter's would play it...had no idea who even sang it...obviously i don't listen to much country, although i think it's considered a crossover.  I like it too....thought it fit in well with the mood of that part of the chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

you had me rolling with that outtake !!!!!  



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Some Justice & Escargot

omg a hazmat suit !!!!!     Ilove your wit, and writing style !!!!



Author's Response:

i have a short list of people i wouldn't want to go near without a hazmat suit....one of them is Larry Flynt..ewww.  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

i loved that they were still connected to skype and Edard was watching her sleep..



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you're liking the story.  posting 2 chaps for LRM today..then back to V&V.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class

lovely chapter !!   really enjoy your story !!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad.  THanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises

oh i was laughing so ahrd and her ramble to the customs agent,  so Bella !!!!  Love the chapter !!!



Author's Response:

she is a goofball...a lot of her ramblings are things I say out loud, and my kids tell me to shut up.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Is it Jhonny Depp?    Love your story, goo dchapter, love the bubble incident.



Author's Response:

i promise you will find out at the very beginning of next V&V chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

omg, there better be a woudl you do me the extreme honor of becoming my wife next !!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

at least we know that Emmett is too far away to screw anything up!  lol  thanks

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

SO LOVIN IT !!!  YOU DID A F_ _ k AWESOME JOB!! LOVE THE KEEPING TRACKOF THE DAY THING !!



Author's Response:

it was all Edward...he sufferes from OCD...undiagnosed of course. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

loved her trying to sneak a peek, and her pictures were fabulous !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

GOOD CHAPTER, GLAD SHE PUT JAMES INHIS PLACE



Author's Response:

me too...he's a pig in any incarnation.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

good chapter, like the peek back at renee being a fun thing



Author's Response:

yeah...i toyed with the idea of making that day an outtake...but decided not to.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

loved the cemetary, meeting with Esme and chris and alice.  WEll just loved the whole chapter !!!!



Author's Response:

i'm glad.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

loved it,    karma found ngeri



Author's Response:

she needed a memorable end...  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

ok, lots of things this chapter, strange, strange things.  love the ending thou



Author's Response:

i know it was a jumble...lol   Prom is next.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

loving the story, but i don't understand Edward's reaction to Bella , why woudl he be upset unless there is a remote chance it woudl be true



Author's Response:

he's definitely still a virgin.  He's just overprotective, overreacting (where Bella's concerned), over the top Edward.  He pushed away the person he worries about most.  frustrating, but he wasn't in control of his emotions at that moment.  Glad you liked it.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

wow,     stunning chapter !!!!!!  love the graduation !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

lol,   squeezebox , lol    great chapter



Author's Response:

i'm twisted what can i say.  There's a photo of a squeezebox on the blog and on the Facebook page.  no not THAT one.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

aww crap more tears and no warning



Author's Response:

i am sorry.  Everyone's reaction is different....some people have admitted to crying.  I really wasn't sure how this chap would go over.  Thanks very much.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

omg i trust you but coemon,..... how long are we going to have to wait for the next update,   and mot lrm.     I have to know what is going on.  please.     as a faithful reader and reviewer,  i need something !!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

okay....i'm obviously behind with my review responses...been chained to my laptop...writing and writing.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

whew....   what a relief.   now did edward survive or is he sedated??  



Author's Response:

poor edward.  he is a long-suffering hero isn't he?  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

great update !!!!  Oprah huh ????



Author's Response:

yep.  just posted the latest chapter...still behind with review responses. i apologize.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Fireworks & Dream Homes

great update !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

too funny, just to imagine a sign outside of a church on a limo.   too funny

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135060
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

wow, what a powerful story.  Thank you for sharing, can't wait for the next update, btw Bella and Edward need more pancakes !!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

lovely story !!!   very emotional, very touching, very hard subject, thank you for sharing !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

awwww great update

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

wow, didn't see that one coming.  I wonder what brought that about.  great story really enjoy it !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

i think she was possibly asking carlise the symptoms of pregnancy , you know just so she would know what to be on the lookout for, i think she would be to shy to just ask him outright , thats the reason she wanted to see esme so bad.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

oh no !!!!!!!  Bella had that feeling... :(

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

whew, glad that was over realtively quickly, wonder how Edward feels about  no-one saying hey dumbass you married Bella

 

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged

omg your last lien is about Emmett's dick.  rofl



Author's Response:

i know.  i apologize.  i am so inappropriate. lol   Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

loved this, so cute he followed her to forks.  !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

I love these outtakes,  can't wait for your next update !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

love it, glad for how did you put it repeat of conversations, no other way to really write it.  It needs to be there.  You are wonderful.



Author's Response:

That was very nice!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

I just love your style and these outtakes.  !!!!! More edward in the shower please !!!!!



Author's Response:

i would..but the movie studio will give me hell for letting him get all pruney.  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Resolutions For The New Year

Always a delight to get Edwards pov !!!!!



Author's Response:

i think so too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Calm Before The Storm

as always you do not dissapoint !!!   well written !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I enjoy writing it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Destiny Interrupted

I have been waiting for this chapter, but youmade it a 2 parter .........   please post the rest soon, can't wait to get his pov on the meeting with rose after flying back to talk to Bella.  



Author's Response:

Sorry.  It was so long, I had to break it.  I will post the next LRM in a day or two.  then another V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

Genuis!!!  you did a great job  on this chapter !!  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Setback To A Full Recovery

Thanks again so much for sharing your stories !!!! 



Author's Response:

you are welcome... i needed to empty that space in my head where they were living...whew!  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Crash And Burn

it is so great of you writing this, I love have both pov's for a story !!!!



Author's Response:

thanks, I'm glad you like it, especially the depressing parts.  lol

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

omg  too funny, loved Edwards pov on the pool, I woudl love to handle his Benedict Arnold anyday !!!!!



Author's Response:

mind out of the gutter young woman! lol  i have soooo much room to talk..haha  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

awww I love this story too, along with v&V.  You rock !!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks! you are very sweet.  The next LRM is almost ready...as well as the next V&V.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Give And Take

my pleasure to send in a review, glad for your story.  Angel got some pretty big balls there.  I do love getting Edwards pov on these things, can't wait till we get tot he belly dance.



Author's Response:

you and me both!  he actually falls on the floor during that...should be fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool

just wanted to say thanks for writing lrm.  it is nice to have companion pieces that go together !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It makes the effort worthwhile when I get positive reviews..I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

love the talk with Charlie,  I felt you did a geta job.  !!!!   :)  

Enjoy some Fl Sunshine from me !!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I need some warm weather!!  Glad you liked the chap!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

:)   can't wait for the belly danicing



Author's Response:

coming up next actually!  THanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

so well written, love your story and style of writing!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  just in case you didn't get the link for the sneak peek of the next V&V here it is again:  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

love the story  :)   my favorite part !!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it.  more to come...  thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Prelude To A Proposal

ohhh evil woman...........   lea ving us as he drops down on one knee.     :)



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!  Here's the link for the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy!  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

looking foward to this part on lrm !!!  Good chapter, love edwards talk with Alec.

 

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.

http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050

any probs, let me know.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Sage Advice For The Overworked

once again , ilove getting edwards pov.   Love  having johnny in there.



Author's Response:

me too.  I just posted a sneak peek of the next V&V on the blog.  new chap soon!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

great update !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

oh crap, i wish you had gone just a little farther and then broke off for the next chapter.  oh well love EPOV as always !!!!!



Author's Response:

i broke off at the same point as in V&V...keeps me from getting confused.  Believe me, I need all the help I can get! Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Male Bonding for the Contrite

lol and yes you evil woman......   it is on repeat inmy head now as i type



Author's Response:

lol..i admit to being evil.   I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

lol, too funny with leno,  and then the phone with jasper,  thank god it was't alec



Author's Response:

Letterman is in the next chap.  I enjoyed writing that one also.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 44: The Stuff of Nightmares...

omg my heart isin my stomach,   or my stomach is in my throat,  my head is pounding and i am googling to get your address to find out what happens!!!!!!  update v & V asap !!!!!



Author's Response:

next chapter of LRM is posted now.  THanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

poor Edward, and yes there are those very few asshole cops out there.  My father was a caop and  I take absolutely no offense.  You wrote a wonderful chapter !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! glad you liked it.  new V&V is posted.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

shoot i was hoping for an insight to what Bella said about oprah



Author's Response:

I am very far behind responding to reviews.  I thank you so much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Empire Builder to the Windy City

great update !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 55: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed

great update !!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Six Weeks by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22357
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 18 Weeks

wow, really love your story !!!! can't wait to see where it leads too.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 24 Weeks

so sweet, great chapter update

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review glad your enjoying my little story

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 36 Weeks

great update, feel cheated out of shower sex with Edward thou.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 48 weeks Part 1

love a man that helps !!!!!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

so far so good !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Laterzzz:P

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Wow, found your story.  I have enjoyed it so far.  Glad to see he is getting rid of Tanya, will there be flashbacks to Edward and Bellas first meetings and how they fell in love with each other?  Maybe she comes with Alice this weekend huh?   Do you update every 2 weeks normally?   Thanks for sharing your story.



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

soooo i think Edward did, because honestly who woudl really want to touch her ass.....    REally love your story !!!!



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

SNeaky,    Have a happy thanksgiving, eagerly await next update .   oh yea and Tanya is physco ............Holy Shit !!!!



Author's Response:

I know right. I was hoping you guys liked that, add a bit of spice to life. lol! i´m in the basement trying conjure up something. I hope I can keep the momentum going. lol Yeah, Tanya is a few eggs short of a dozen. We´ll see what happens.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving!!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

wow, loved your chapter, i was giggling my ass off abotu BElla and R ose's tits.  hmmm, rose, alice jasper and emmett will all know that Edward and Bella will be doina test scene, has trouble written all over  i t.



Author's Response:

  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

wow, loved the chapter.  What will he do when he finds out it is Bella.  ??????? Love your story



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

hot and sweaty !!!!!   well done chapter.  I just hope they can admit their feelings, like Edward said be honest.  I hate the stories where it is so drawn out before they admit their feelings.   Love the sex !!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

you are so awsome !!!!!  Great lemons and test scene.  Loved Edward intensity.   :D) !!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

eveil evil woman,    thank god he didn't  just leave her there thou that woudl ahve been worse.  hoping for an update soon

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

I ythought back in the bginning it stated she was a virgin, like the first time Alcie was talking to Edward abou the sub that she was a virgin

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

WOW , very nice.  I love the pictures thru the chapters, don't listen to the other people.  my husband really liked one on this page alot.  Guess?   anyway, love the chapter and the i love you was the icing on th ecake



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the love!  Fixed the missing pics and added a couple more!  Check  em out!  And tell the hubby, I put a new one just for him! lol!


Krazi

xoxo

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

wow, loved the update and the lemons, were some of the best i think i have ever read !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

great update,  wonder who was a knocking on the window??????  Too fuckingfunny witht he dog in bella crotch as she is moaning edwards name !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

sois Tanya going to be a problem?????

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

1st.  hope all is well with the surgery.   2nd  well  fuck me . Ang is Esme's daughter.  3rd  please update soon



Author's Response:

1st...I think she ok.... 2. yup ang is esme daughter and doesnt even know it and 3 ....its with  the Beta xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

you girls are too funny!!!  Good for us thou !!!!  Lovin your story !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

hmmmm,  Have enjoyed it so far, this chpater Edward bothers me.  I woudl think the best way to show he wants Bella would be to get rid on Ang.  And don't even get me started on her.     time for Ang to go  bye bye, then eric !!!!!! 



Author's Response:

lol....yah ang and eric need to go....And Edward.....stupid stupid man....We will c what happens...xoxoxo...I hope to have the chapter up soon....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

W T F ???????



Author's Response:

:D..............u love us still right???? I hope so.......I promise it's worth it.....Im starting my part right............NOW

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

omg, under the bed???????   surely there was a better place he could have hidden.!!!!!    LOL   LOL   LOL



Author's Response:

LOL I'm sure there was, but that's the first place he thought to go! LOL Thanks for your review BB! Until next time.

 

 

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

wow, Edward got an earful under thebed,,    and an E, or a star.   oh well, not a visual i needed.  Merry Christmas !!!!



Author's Response:

hahahah... unfortunately that is what I do for a living...so I get the visual all the time....;and FYI.....I was asked to make a T one time and I said what Bella said....I dont get paid to make shapes.....MUAH merry xmas

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way

Oh shit, big mouth let it slip.  How in the  world will this pan out.....  I am waiting with baited breath for your update   You gals write so well

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

o wow , what  a biotch Ang is, glad Edward coudl put her in her place.  Good thing bella woke up when she did, and love Em and his crippled foot drag  LOL.



Author's Response:

hahahah I loved the Emmett part two....hahah wrong foot....hahah.....hope you enjoy part 2

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Oh yea loved it !!!!   a chapter of lemons,, you girls rock.  Loved the IHOP joke.  okso are Bella's  calls and Edward calls connected hmmm?  Or is Eric calling Bella, and is Ang really using a voice changer, i got one of those (well my kid does) anyway.  Or di d Ang set Ben up to call.  And Ang, really we need to get her out of the picture.  Maybe on the way to her parents she coudl be in a tragic car accident......  Gotta help Spartan get rid of her.



Author's Response:

LOL oh my God poor stupid Ang LOL :)

Not sure if they are connected or not. Can we borrow your voice change thingy? We wanna call Eric and Ang and tell them where to go :)      Thank you for your awesome review sweetie. We are working on the next chap now!

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Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

love this chapter, so Edward - columbus - emmett -  ro- Bella too funny !!!!!  Wodner who was on the phone thou?



Author's Response:

The next chapter has sooo much details and I cant wait for u to read it.....I love all of our characters....Ro and emmett are sooo fun to write...........xoxooxox the phone calls....still not sure.....lol