Reviews by FlSunshine
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

wow amazing update !!!!  tissue warning woudl have been nice.  Poor Edward !!!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the tears, but I really wanted to show that Bella has made her own decision in this; in choosing to stay with Carlisle.  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

great update,  I think learning to control her sexual appetite woudl be cute. you know emmett saying he needs bleach for his brain after walking in on Bella and Carlise something like that. or even Rose and Emmett accidently catching them.



Author's Response:

{Giggles}  I think that would be hilarious for Emmett to be the one calling for the brain bleach for a change.  Thanks for the ideas and the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a bestselling author who lives in seclusion.  Edward is a has-been actor with no penny on his name.  When Bella picked up a homeless Edward on the beach, she is determined to get him back into acting.  Edward is doing his best not to get into Bella's pants... and also help her get out of her shell.

 

All things Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer.  The rest of the story belongs to me.

Thanks, TKegl for the awesome banner!  

 

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Thank you, SoapyMayhem for this awesome banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67093 Read Count: 19867
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

wow, very tough chapter, Tanya hit rock bottom, does she get saved intime, what does this do to Bella if she realizes what tanya had been doing, and that she commited succide 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment.  It is a tough chapter to write, but we are nearing the end.  Next chapter is Bella and Edward finding Tanya.  That's as far as I would go.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
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Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

wow,  so sweet, glad he answered soem of her questions even if she still does nto have 100% understandig it was alot better than no answers.   Love the proposal, and the back and forth before the  yes

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

so sorry to here about your loss.  Loved the update !!!  god that was a very hot lemon !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so far sogood, nothing to take offense at

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

very interesting story, so i assuming that it was charlie? 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

are you kidding me, someone needs balls and a backbone or deos he call carlise daddy????

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

merry christmas indeed

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

good chapter, wish carlise woudl like loose his voice that would be great.  Glad Edward is as good as we all know he is.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

aww poor edward has a cold. typical man behavior thou !!!!!

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wow who would have thought Carlise liked Christmas

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

hmm wonderwhat edward will  do with hisknowledge of the wedding colors  great update

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

so liek holy shit is she pregnant??  He will flip.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Sugar Daddy Needed

wow...... guess i was right baout her bing pregnant.

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Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

no doubts, and i have no idea how he could suck up for not believing her.  interested in what you have thought of. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

glad he finally said sorry face to face. 

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

super super update, have a safe and happy fourth !!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

wow i was laughing and then crying, and even got mad at charlie too.  Although I woudl be under the covers with Edward, because i can't resist !!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

great update !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

great story, thank you so much for sharing !!!!!!

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

So how many daughters/soliders does he have now?  And is he still looking for someone to carry a son, and is that where Bella comes in???

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Throne

very interesting mindset of this Edward. I was glad to see he had the children put into safety.  Wonder what will happen to Mania that she disobeyed

Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

so far so good, wondering how this will play out.  Hope Bella remembered the phone.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm posting chapter 3 now. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hoyl crap, Jacob needs to be put down, given a distemper shot or something !!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol, yeah. Jacob is NOT nice in this fic. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i hope she tells edward right away and does nnot keep this quiet if it is going to be kept quiet i will not read



Author's Response:

Oh, Edward will find out pretty soon, don't worry. Not immediately, but very soon in terms of the timeline of the story (within a couple of days after he returns from his hunting trip). 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ok like i said , if the rape is goign to remain secret i will not read, hope next chapter is her telling edward

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i'm not upset about Edward not figuring itout yet, and Iunderstand also about Bella f eelign ashamed.  Been thre, had it happen and i know also, although my expereince was nto as violent.  I just dont' want to go chapters and chapters without Edwar dknowing.  I'm just glad she has someone who can comfort her in my case there was no Edward tog o to.



Author's Response:

Glad you understand, but I'm very sorry to hear you have been through it. It happens WAY too often. And yes, Bella is very lucky to have Edward. Unfortunately most victims aren't as lucky. Thank you very much for reading. I know it's not always easy and I truly appreciate it.  

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow,  this is worse than goign to the dentist,  you just keep drawing i tout longer and longer

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

good update

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

whew,   that was nice, i love when you end with lemons !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

omg, so Carlise has seen the goods, like up close, too funny.  That will make for an akward family dinner.   loved this chapter

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

hmmm, wonder if tanya and jacob are up to something,  is Tanya all good in this story?   Great update !!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: I Want My Daughter Back!

they need to call the police that is sexual abuse. 

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: A brand new world of kink

i always tell my son, that mommy knows everything !!!!!!!  I love it !!!

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surprise! Or not.

well there goes the honesty out the window.   I love Edward to death , but can not thinkof one good reason for this blantant omission/lie/betrayal.     Really enjoy your story thou

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

loved it, great update.  I was worried when she found out about Claire.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

tough talk with Charlie,  can't believe Carlise telling Edward he was  ashitty dom,  and Aro gave Edward the club huh??   Wish the wedding night had been a llittle hotter

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

good update , glad you straightened up this tanya in the story.  i almost left because she came in last chapter.  I think Edward shoudl notice the bruises, and apologize, she shouldn't have bruises. I mean if Jake saw them then Edward shoudl too

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

have nto tried angry birds, butmy son has lol.   great update.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

huh, didn't see that one coming, very surprised !!!!

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

oh wow,   what kind of screwed up thing is renee

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

omg, i can not believe Tanya, and Edward will explode when he finds out but i bet by that time Tanya and jacob will be long gone.  great update

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh you are evil........   so next update we get the sex of the babies !!!!!!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you! lol Yes, next chapter we find out sex and names.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

oh yes, a good fuck does come in handy..   Great update !!1 Loved Carlise precription for edward.  lol

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

loved the update !!!

Calving by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Volturi Dairy by fetish-fanfic fan piece. What happens the first time Bella gives birth.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2285 Read Count: 4667
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 24 Feb 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well done i'm really glad you wrote it !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my take on Bella's Hucow birthing experience. I was very excited when FF gave me permission to write it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow, hard story line.  Can't believe Jacob knows and does nothing, but then again i can.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  If you think this little Jacob snippet is upsetting, just wait till we see him again...

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Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow great update,     if it were that easy to get a kiss form Edward we would all do it right???  i hope they can convince her to stay safe with them

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow, so glad Edward went but i do understand Carlise side .  Poor Bella maybe she can feel safe, Charlie got off easy



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! So glad you can understand both Edward's and Carlisle's sides of things.  That kind of thinking will help later when the angst sets in.  For now, we'll let Bella have some peace.  I think she deserves it.

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great chapter,  surprised we haven't heard from charlie yet. But i am sure he is there trying to figure out what is going on, maybe he thinks edward is a pink elephant you  know that old fable of drunks seeing poink elephants.  eagerly awaiting your next update

Summary:

Bella finally tells best friend Edward how she feels about him. One-shot


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2172 Read Count: 215
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2011 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very good. 

A Higher Power by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Sister Swan is disappointed when she is forced to confiscate marijuana from her favorite student. What happens when she goes to Father Cullen to ask for his mercy? Priestward/Nunella Lemon/Drug Use. Entry for the High Times Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8946 Read Count: 3758
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 13 Mar 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Higher Power

oh Bella, you naughty little girl, and Edward tsk tsk tsk  ha ha ha

Summary:

Bella is a senior in college looking for a realtionship. Edward is a firefighter who wants someone to care for. They are set up together by none other than Alice. See where the road of life takes them and why you have to 'Just Have Faith'. AH

Epilogue was been reposted after many questions


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112119 Read Count: 48069
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Edward To the Rescue

ahhhh the magical first kiss



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

so far so good, have faith !!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I did have to fix this chapter a while ago as I noticed I stated Bella's job as working at the newspaper with Jasper and then ended up changing it in later chapters. That was my original idea, then I changed it too where she edits books.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

really enjoying it so far !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad your enjoying it. Next chapter we get more into Bella's background. I kind of kept it close to the book for theses first few chapters untill I found my nich and then explored my mind.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Forks

like it !!!!   very sweet to tell her he wsa ok



Author's Response:

Thank you fo rthe review.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: A Sad Edward

awww that is tough, sad, but part of the job i guess. wish the chapter was a little longer



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. As far as chapter length, this chapter and chapter 11 aren't my favorites for writting them chapter 12 is like tripple of the first few chapters.

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Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner

aww so sweet, and i imagine we will be needing tissues for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Yes you may want the tissues. I'm planning on putting a warning at the begining of the chapter.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Halloween

:) GLAD CHARLIE AND EDWARD GET ALONG SO WELL



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: It Was Perfect

well written, could have been maybe a little longer



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I'm not sure which chapter your talking about as far as length. If it's the first few. Yes they could have been longer, but I had never written a story before so I was just going by what felt right for me. I'm sorry to say that chapters 12 and 18 are of the longer chapters in this story. Chapter 19, which will be up on Sunday, will be shorter.

Read My Mind by Jay Beena Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A series of Edward's POV's throughout the saga.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20878 Read Count: 2602
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 30 Mar 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Breaking Dawn Part 3 POV

very welll written !!!



Author's Response:

thank you

Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187900
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

great update, getting a look into alec head and Aro plans.  but why the fascination with bella?   I relaly love the attentive way Edward takes care of her.



Author's Response:

Aro is not interested in Bella yet, he doesn't have a clue about her powers.  Irina wants to get rid of Bella, so that Edward will be available for Tanya.  Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch

aww no new photos?   just kididng you do an awesome job with the photos.  very nice touch !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy

:)  Question 7 kids from forks.  Mike, Eric, Tyler I wonder who else ???? and who were they peeping on???



Author's Response:

Hmmm, I bet you can guess who those girls were and you will find out in a few chapters.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here

ah ha so charlei meets sue,  clever girl, that caught me by surprise



Author's Response:

Yes, an elf and a faerie, what a pair...lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby

definitely still enjoying your story.  How many chapters do you think this will be?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and rating!  I have written 54, but I am combining some of them to put on this site.  There will be more after that.  But I am having to add to my new blog as I add chapters, so it is taking some time to add the chapters to this site.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males

so who was that Tyler?



Author's Response:

Yes, that was Tyler, the last of the human males to meet Bella.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Jasper Explains and Smores

lovin it.   you are better than McDonalds !!!



Author's Response:

LOL, first time anyone had told me that.  Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries

wow wonder what that was about......



Author's Response:

Edward isn't the only one that is going to be overprotective.  Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime

loved this chapter



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Rosalie, What are You Doing?

stupid rosalie



Author's Response:

Rosalie's one last attempt at freedom.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

so her daily dose, does thatr mean Edward got a BJ??????



Author's Response:

LOL, yes, it does.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: The Hunt is On!

poor emmett , he will need to have a long talk with Rosalie.



Author's Response:

Bella will get ahold of her and talk some sense into her.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting

hmmm so maybe angela came from forks?



Author's Response:

Yes, I wanted to have the human characters from Forks in my story and having them extracted at the same time was my solution.  I have been trying to use the original characters to the story, so it is similar to the original story, but on another planet.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: He Picked Me

very interesting !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you enjoy it and thanks for the review!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

sounds clinicial almost, does any emotion come out of the men?   they seem very cool right now



Author's Response:

Yes, I get better with the emotions.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Edward's POV of 1st Day

i love EPOV



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown

electric kisses form Edward yummy !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the smiley face and rating!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

what a slut (Tanya of course)  but i hope she is taken away from them before she hurts anyone.



Author's Response:

She will try, she is a desperate woman, unfortunately.

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya

new that crazy bitch woudl make a scene



Author's Response:

LOL, she tried, now she gets to go sit in a loony bin somewhere.

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Binding Ceremony

you have an amazing imagination



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hadn't used my imagination in years, but I thought I would give it a shot.  Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Reception Part Three

wow, what a delusion bitch



Author's Response:

Yep, I don't Tanya can be helped....she is way out there.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion

oh shit i lov ethat bed !!!!!!



Author's Response:

It is pretty.  I tried to find one that was similar to what was described in the books.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Morning Lovin'

never had an enema or anal sex either



Author's Response:

ummmm, ok...lol.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington

really enjoy your story !!!  Thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your reviews and ratings!  I really appreciate!

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Family Time and Emmett's POV

Thanks for updating so soon !!!



Author's Response:

Your welcome and thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center

those girls are too funny, and peter he didn't give Edward and Jasper very good warnings LOL



Author's Response:

No, Peter didn't.  Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'

wow that was a great chapter !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the smiley face and rating!

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past

good to have Esme's background on things, you may have touched onthis in the begginning but does the ageing slow down on twilight for the earthlings?



Author's Response:

They are given injections when they arrive on Twilight that increases their lifespan, causes them to produce enzymes, improves their senses some, and improves their health.  They might live as long as the Twilighters, but their lifespan has been increased quite a bit.  Bella doesn't have to get the injections anymore, because since she is faen, she became immortal.  Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower

aww so sweet !!!   Bella is a true angel !!! to many people it seems



Author's Response:

Yes, she is self-less and caring about other people in the books, this is just how I see her.  Thanks for the review and rating!

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Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'

:)   :)    :0)     !!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I think by all the symbols you enjoyed it...lol.  Thanks for my smiley faces and rating! I really appreciated them!

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Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town

watch out for bears !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lions and Tigers and Bears, Oh My!  Thanks again for the review and rating!

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

:)  it is english but sometimes mis-spelled.  hope that is ok..:)  love theupdate



Author's Response:

English is definitely ok! :)......blogspot keeps up with browsers that visit and I noticed a lot of people used Chrome, got to investigating, and found out it translates whole pages, easily.  I knew I was getting read by people from over 75 countries on fanfiction....have no clue on this site.  So even though the page is translated for them, they may not know how to respond to me in English.  So now I am using Chrome and found a great transation tool to answer them back.  Anyway more than you probably wanted to know.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review!  

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Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

I know before you said 54 chapters, hope there are more than that !!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, that is how many were on Fanfiction at the time, I put some of the chapters together when I uploaded them here.  So there is a difference in chapter numbers for the two sites, this site has less, because of the doubleing up of chapters.  I usually write a chapter and update every two to three days.  So in other words, both sites are getting the chapters as I write them.  Did you not like the chapter? I am asking because of the rating you gave me.

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Matching up Mates

:)  need a reminder on how far along bella is.  How is charlie doing?



Author's Response:

She is a little over 19 weeks, going to have to do a chart with all the pregnant ladies on it....I am not going to be able to keep up with them all...lol.  Charlie has been busy with his new job and his new mate and will be even busier with the Didyme situation.  I know I need to squeeze some Bella/Charlie/Addy time in there somewhere.  Thanks for the review!