Reviews by emmeylou
You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Pursuing

I have to admit I really enjoyed your story, up until the last chapter and this one. I found everything to be great up until Jasper and Bella were changed. It seemed very anti-climatic and the whole tone of the story changed. Then you threw in the torture of Jessica (which I think was taking Bella's character way to ooc) and the return of Jacob and the story seemed to shift into something that was different and original, into something that is very typical of ff. I hope i am not coming across as harsh, I don't mean to be. I just wanted to let you know how your story came across to me. At this point I probably won't finish it.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

Green eyes! Bella's hair and Edwards eyes!

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238938
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I just want to say, please don't apologize for long chapters! I love them! Long chapters normally mean details and depth and that is never a bad thing. Love your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm happy that you are enjoying my story. And ok, I won't apologize for long chapters anymore. lol I do enjoy writing long chapters. Like you've said, lots of details and depth.

Thanks again for reading and commenting =)

Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You are super lucky that I love this story so much... I have sworn every single chapter that I am not going to read it again until it is "complete" because your cliff-hangers and super long waits between chapters kill me. But then you post a new chapter and I have to stop everything I am doing to read it. This is probably my number 1 fanfic story right.

Just please, could we not wait so long??



Author's Response:

LOL. I guess I am lucky. Thank you soo much. I totally appreciate that you read even if LAV is a wip. That means a lot to me. And I promise I would never give up on this story.

I'm sorry about the cliffies. They are bad aren't they? lol

My beta still has my chapter, but I'll be getting it back this week sometime and I promise I'll post the same day I get it back. Aaaaaaand you'd be happy to know that I'm really close to completing ch 16. Phew! Lots of work. lol

Thanks again, love hearing form you.

XxOo

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

stories/34076/images/TrueHeartsBanner.jpg      Banner By: Rachel MS

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28911
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is probably the most unique and interesting story i've read in a really long time. I love J/B and i love the way you have incorporated the vampire world with "alternate" worlds. It really works and i'm looking forward to reading the rest. Just please promise that you won't just randomly stop writing it... because as a reader that is the worst.



Author's Response:

I can promise you as a reader and now a writer I will never do that to you.

That is why most of the stories that I do read are completed stories. One of my favorite authors pulls that shit on me constantly. But she's such a talented writer that I can't keep myself from reading her newer stories. I can't promise two chapters a week like I have been doing, but I will do my best to keep up with what I've been doing. Which is Two Chapters a week. I can tell you that I am already writing Chapter 15, and I am more then half way throw it already.

I have my next two chapters waiting to be Beta'd. My new Beta, can only Beta on the weekends so hopefully I can get two chapters done a week and shipped to her by Friday nights. I'd like to Publish once on late Saturday nights, and again late on Tues nights. That seems to work out best for me.

Sorry I got carried away. Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

Just so you know, I have server dyslexia. When I read or write. I start at the right and memorize the letters going one way. Then read them going the other way. So you can imagine how difficult this is for me. That’s why I use so many commas in my story. They help me keep my place in a sentence. Just a little 411 for you so please know that I don’t add them to piss you off. They just help me as the writer.

 

Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Summary:

ONE SHOT Bella Swan is forced to return to Forks where her father abuses her. The Cullens have been waiting for her to complete their family. She is mate to Carlisle and bond mother to Edward. How will they save Bella? Read to find out.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2281 Read Count: 793
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2010
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this a lot! Wish it wasn't just a one-shot... the mother-bond thing between Edward and Bella is unique and it would be very interesting to see how it develops, as well as her relationship with Carlisle and the rest of the "children".

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I think its great! The only thing that I wasn't quite thrilled with was that Edward drank to calm his nerves, it just seems to me that mixing drinking with playing could be a bad idea. Obviously I realize he isn't anywhere near drunk, but still...



Author's Response:

Thanks.... and sorry about that... I know enough about BDSM that play should never occur when intoxicated, it was only one and a small one... most ppl have wine with dinner and after dinner they have playtime as well... but rest assure he would never endanger a submissive´s life... that´s why he´s such a well respected and sought after dom... and remember...Alice would never knowingly endanger Bella or her brother´s life... Thanks for reviewing....


Krazi

xoxo

Getting Warmer by eiluned price Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. AU. BxE. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159812 Read Count: 6189
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: GIG

Please update!! This is a great story!

Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187900
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: emmeylou Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

Hello! I just wanted to say that I love this story! It is so unique and original! I was wondering why the chapters are getting shorter? I guess I was getting spoiled with the super long chapters and daily updates lol. I also think I read somewhere that this a a re-work of the original? Do you have the original posted anywhere? I love watching writers progress and grow in their writing.

Looking forward to reading more!

-Emily



Author's Response:

I had added some chapters together and that is the reason some of the chapters were longer.  The reason I was so quick at posting at first was because I already had that part written.  It isn't a re-work, it is just posted on Fanfiction and Fanfiction was down.  I wanted a second place to have my story so that if the site went down again, there would be a place for my readers to go for my updates.  Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review!