Reviews by bellskindagirl
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

oh my gosh first this is a good story not that thas out of the way i want to kidnapp bella and esme and mb rose and keep them safe i want Embry Call to come back from Hong Kong and save bella AHHHH ok got that out of the way EDWARD is an IDIOT!!!! and a DOLT!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story so far. I hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

wow that was epic good job!

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

dang i prefer Jacob the jerk to Jacob the dead how sad 

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84834
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

My BEST friend moved to Florida this past September. I know how Bella feels only i didn't have an Edward shoulder to cry on. Sometimes I'm like I want to go see a movie or i come up with one of my crazy plans and i have no one to call my other friends are married wiith children or have "real' jobs and don;t have a lot of free time to hang out with me. This was a very hard chapter to get thru for me. But i think that your doing an amazing job with this story thanks 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ok is ESMERALDA, ESME or a seprate character

 

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

ok im like on chapter 27 and im lovein it but i have a question why does Emmett call Edward baby brother i thought ED was older than EM?



Author's Response:

*scratches head* Yeah, I guess that wasn't too clear, sorry. Even though Edward's older, Emmett has always been bigger. So, in this instance, little brother is a size reference, not age.

 

=)

Shel

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Premonitions

so mature!



Author's Response:

edward's a teenage boy... i had to make him think about boobies.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Agent J

awww jake i was expecting Jasper darn!



Author's Response:

most of the readers thought the same thing.  but i won't leave alice hanging!!!  thanks for reading and reviewing!!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Triggers

yeay Jazz is comin



Author's Response:

yep, alice will finally get her man!  thanks for all the reviews!!!  ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected

i Knew that riley kid was a creeper. i wonder if he's working with james? btw this i GOOD!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

riley is definitely a creep.  i'm so glad you like my story.  i never get tired of hearing that!  thanks for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Escaped

oh no jake? are you ok.



Author's Response:

jake's a strong guy... i'm sure he'll pull through.  thanks for the review!!! ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Unbelievable

hey i really am liking this one it's great can't wait to meet rose! i was just wondering seince i'm new to your story how often do u update i ask cuz ill check a week from now and they'll be like four new chapters and me having no clue that the authers updated so if i have a tentitaive schdule it would be cool if you don't have one thats cool too I;ll just keep checking!!!!!



Author's Response:

i can't wait to meet rose either!!!  i think she gets a bad rep in most stories, but i plan to make her likeable.  my RL is pretty hectic right now, but i try to update every 1 to 2 weeks, give or take a few days.  but you can get an email sent to you immediately when i update by putting my story or me in your favorite list.  at the end of any of the chapters there is a drop down box that allows you to click and add me to your favorite's list.  this automatically puts you in the server and will send you an email alert whenever i post.  that way you don't have to keep checking the site constantly.  you can do that with any stories you read.  hope this helps!!  thanks so much for all the reviews!!!  ;)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Shocked

you can't leave me here omgosh rose? plz she has to be all right.



Author's Response:

next chapter is in the works.  hang in there.  next chapter will let us know what happened to rose and if she'll pull through.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

No don't hid bease this is the type of things that makes a good story, the types of things that move your readers to tears 

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes! very much!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it... I hope you have continued to like it. Thank you for all of the reviews!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awww eddiekines is sooo sweet

 



Author's Response:

Yes he is. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ALICE!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review... You already know that it wasn't Alice.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

dumdumdum

ok i was wrong not alice all well.



Author's Response:

Nope, not Alice. :) Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

that was a very girly luagh creepy but girly



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

why would any one skip to the bottom?



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I missed this review when I replied to all of your other ones, so thank you! :)

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh no 

can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh i don't word sorry but you do have me hooked!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

glad the talk went good now we just have to get emmett on the team belward

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

good good glad ed finally talked to em

Summary:

Neurologist/Knight in shining armor Edward Cullen is called upon by a tiny fairy to save a damsel in distress. Disney makes it look so easy. Entry for the 'Who Doesn't Love a Fairy Tale? Contes on FFn.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26057 Read Count: 4886
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Slumbering Swan

wo this was very good i very much liked it i loved Fariy prencess alice wish i could here more to the story but its a one shot so highest kudos for it!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Though I do not plan to continue it anytime soon, there are a few extras coming. So look out for those!

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184466
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here

OK so this story has been in my Favorites for a while... Im finally readinging it.

 

One od my favorite twilight charaters is Charlie both in the books and the movie I HATE when he dies i cried. a sure sign that your story is worth reading. 

I understand that it's important for character development.

but so far so good! on to the next chaper

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by ChildOfSummer!!  THANK YOU!!!

If someone gave you three wishes, would you use them? That's the question Bella Swan, practical psychology major, has to decide when her grandmother presents her with a story that she can't believe, and a blue sapphire ring that she's always coveted. If you could go to any time in your future would you make the wish?

AU-Human. Cannon Couples. OOC. Not angsty, but a few tissue moments in places. Language, Lemons (of course...you know me). It's different than anything else I've written. Interested in a little magic?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've read
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72920 Read Count: 15590
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Finally a story worth reading!!!!

beside the origanl 

you had me a bit confused at first but i get it now 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LIke i said i love this Beep Beep ha ha lol so good so good 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ok so this part withthe spit beer all over him is funny cuz this morning my prof said something funny and i did all i could do not to spit my water all over the adorable guy who sits in front of me that would have stunk.!

 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i Wanna do that not tell any one i have a boyfriend and just send out invites to my wedding that would be so funny "What Sai is getting married!"lol

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I would have punched him for tricking me then i would decare us even and be happy and pergnut 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OK so like i said this was a story worth reading thank you so much for sharing it i loved it wish, that we could "hear" read Izzy's story

 

Strawberry Wine by Isis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 255]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Seventeen year old Alli Wilson falls hard and fast for the cowboy next door. She lies about her age, and has the most magical summer of her life. Things get down right awkward once school starts and she stumbles in to her AP English class to find the cowboy next door is her new teacher.

First assignment? An Essay: How I spent my summer vacation.

Lemons.

 

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54159 Read Count: 21171
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2012
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh so much drama!

I but i'm glad mary knows about them. 

Alli has her sister. He deserves to have someone in his corner!

Can't wait for more I love it!



Author's Response:

I love his mom. She's very supportive and understanding.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ok I'm sad  i Hate it when Babies die

But i understand that it was not at the best possible time.

I hope that things aren't to rough with Alli's dad.

I'm very glad that Alli is ok.



Author's Response:

Babies dying is never cause for celebration. It was a really hard decision to make plot-wise. My sister and I agonized over it. (I'm always calling her to run by plot lines. This was a tough one!)

Alli's dad is a very hot headed, angry papa bear. He wants blood.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH your killing me please write MORE SOON!



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm doing it right.

So glad you are hooked on the story!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OH it's good to be back i missed my dear Alli and Jason I'm glad that they are on more than speaking trems 

lol

I dislike Gossipy women wish the vamps would get them too

;)



Author's Response:

I remembered you would be gone for 3 days, and thought of you when I posted. Isn't it nice to have extra chapters to come home to? (Even if they are sad chapters...)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Strawberry Wine

HI i was just wondering if your book/story had been released i began reading it an hour ago and fell in love i want to read the rest of the story so if you could let me know if it's been published yet and under what name and aurther PLEASE 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok glad she was smart and did not except the date to homecoming with her school mate. 

Can't wait till Jason is rating will it be because of Alli's choice of homecoming date or because mama Taylor finds out about them?

Egarly awaiting next chapter.



Author's Response:

Homecoming is going to be a glorious mess!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I had no clue you had started posting again but I'm Loving it. Can't wait til the next chapter. 

 

I'm glad that he is not MAD but the next 11 months have to feel like a life time to both Allie and Jason>



Author's Response:

Hi *is* mad - but being mad isn't going to change the situation. He's a very level-headed guy.

The next 11 months are quite a roller coaster for our friends.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

whoa dang i just read the last 5 chapter and even though i was perpared for this i was no wat ready for this!



Author's Response:

It's gonna get worse before it gets better!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

No they won;t make a cute couple.

I'm glad he apologized to Alli!

Can;t wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

No, they wouldn't make a cute couple - but perhaps cute partners in crime? I hope you like how they team up at dinner!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oooohhh Gran knowed something! (lol)

I like that Margot is such a wonderful sister she could have been a man stealer not that Jason would have gone along with it.

Oh and in case i did not say anything last time i like the way Jason apologized to Alli.

Can;t wait for the HOLY REPERCUSSIANS!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I was rather proud of Jason's clever apology.

Gran and Margot seem to be firmly team Jaslie!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ok I love the purple ans silver decorations!

Loved the almost kiss.

I find you very cruel for leaving us with such a massive cliffhanger!

I want more- i wail



Author's Response:

Hahaha - those were my school colors, I couldn't resist.

More has been posted! (But I'm not promising I'm not leaving you with another cruel cliffy!)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

First remined me not to get pregnant those test cost a lot 11 doallars are you out of your mind.

My Honest opion I don't think she's preggo.

but who knows?

and for the first time in this story i wish there were VAmps so that they can take out Yvette. 

Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Yvette sucks. You'll hate her more in the coming chapters. I promise.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ok to say that i was shocked that she was prego. well it knocked me on my rear.

I have fallen in Love with Jason.

I'm upset because Weds morn i leave to a place where the internet is but a roumer and i don't come back until friday after noon thats almost 3 days with out my JASIE fix boo hoo

Maybe you can put in a few more chapters between now and then?

can;t wait for more 



Author's Response:

I dropped a few subtle hints - Alli thinking the chicken meat had gone bad, mentioning that she was "glowing", her being tired and missing class, but I didn't want to give it away, so I'm glad you were surprised.

I'm also happy that so many of you are in love with Jason. I know he's no Edward Cullen, but he is actually based on a RL man!

As to the next chapter - I'll see what I can do. A whore's gotta stick to her guns! She can't be giving it away for free!!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You were right i do have a strong dislike for Yvette grrr...

she should go jump in a puddle and drown.

 

Something tells me that while Mary will me upset she will continue being his stongest supporter.



Author's Response:

Mary is most definitely a supportive mother. (Thank God!)

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

What it's ending? no!!!

OH i love that Margot defended Jason.

i've so enjoyed this when you put the story on hold i thought it was because you were offically pupblishing the story like binding and the whole nine yards. 

any ways i thing this story definty is good enough for that

can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was going to publish it with TWCS, but they ended up passing (I'm not allowed to say more than that.) I have added 30,000 words to it and am submitting it to a few other publishers for consideration. I will of course let everyone know if/when it gets accepted. I really like the newer, longer story. It shows you different sides of Alli and Jason when they're a little older.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol so candestine

but please do let me know because i'll def. buy it. 

even if it's avalible for  the kindle 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll be sure to let everyone know!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm so sad because it's ending i plan on reading your other story also,

 

I think that it is a great idea for alli to go to another school.

 

I've really enjoyed this story thanks for writting it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all of your enthusiasm along the way! I hope you enjoy my other story as much as you enjoyed this one.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

OK the Birthday sirprize was cute from the blood bank to the wine.

I'm very sad that it's over boo hoo'

and please let me know about the longer version either way if it gets picked up or it you end up just posting it on here although i do belive that they would have to be notwits if they don't pick it up.  <just som positive reenforesment>



Author's Response:

Hahaha - Thanks Bellskindagirl. I promise to let you know about the longer version!

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I Had this theroy that he faked his death to get away from the responsability of being a dad now i feel bad 

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Outtake - Official Timeline

When will you be putting up ur sequl? <birth of a new moon> i loved this story and i want to know what will happen?

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Loss

i hate it when Charlie dies....

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: This is My Life Story

What Bella never minded when edward spyed on her in fact she swooned 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Flashbacks

so in the other "life" bella really did die huh interesting?

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Wish

ah it's all being reveld to me well except for david

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Enemies

you every here that celine dion song "it's all coming back to me" that must be how they feel!!!!!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Wolves

i wonder will we have a love triangle? what of Nessie? hey could she have been the dark eyed girl? a phantom of what could be you never said what color her hair was!!!!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Thirst

it's funny i was thinking that just a few years ago he was in the lap of luxery and now he has to be a human high school boy with rules and what not 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Doubts

who is david in the great sceam of things??

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: New Students

Oh my talk about having a major BLUSH!! i could not stop laughing i started school today i hvent done any work this is addicting!

 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Answers

who is our black eyed girl?

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Take Me Home

he's with his mama!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Hope

Come on, Bella! Dr. Cullen is a vampire? Next you'll be saying that Jacob is a werewolf and Angela's a witch! 

I love how you use lines from the movies/books 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Redemption, Acceptance, and Love

hummm it's getting closer!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Movie, Mono, and Myth

i love that triple "date" awkward! 

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Anne Tony

could these be esme and edward???

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Where Is Everybody?

 I blame that Volturie they changed the past.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Accident

What kind of spell is this???



Author's Response:

By the end of the story, I promise that everything will be explained :)

Thank you for reading,
Alley Cat.

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Family and Friends

it's like they are traped in an alternte timeline thingy

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Suspicion

Does carlise know about the wolves???

 

Summary:

new moon

 

Did you like Reborn In Twilight? Check this out. Book two of my final project/rewrite of the saga. Most of the same characters, with a new spin. Come with me on one final adventure. Read, Review and Enjoy. I don't own SM characters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Rewrite of the Saga
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51447 Read Count: 10035
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2011 Updated: 28 Mar 2012
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Keep It Up

Oh my gosh i Love This Bella! she is so funny "What to help me find my lost Puppy ittle boy" Classic 

 

Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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BANNER BY READERGOOF!  THANK YOU, LOVE!

“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime…mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed. –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: To Read, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125792 Read Count: 33644
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 May 2012
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ok i ment to leave a note sometime before 1st wonderful story i love it. 2nd the child that was in the picture with Edwards grandfather i have a theory that might just be out there so if im right when/if im proved right im going to smile be but if im wrong it will be a pout and a shrug. Maybe she's not even important maybe she's the final pieace of the puzzle that makes up Edward and Bella's life who knows well bcak to reading!!~!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

this was wonder ful!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263186
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In

one of the witches tring to get info about Bella OR Sue OR idk.....

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Something tell me that Charlie is the Key