Reviews by redbug
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625112
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I liked the story but am so glad that the ending was happy for all. Hope to read more from you.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Soon please :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: redbug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Hall of Fame Induction Outtake

Loved this story. It was a fun trip and loved the happy ending. I will be reading more of your writing. Thank You for the time you put into it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420868
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: My turkey leg

I love this story. The very last of this chapter was so funny. Can't wait to read more:)

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

This story was a trip. I really enjoyed every chapter. Hope to read more of your stories so keep writting:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I think this is my second time to read this story but it had been a long time ago. I just had to read it again. Thank you for writing it.

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148711
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

 I loved this story:)  I plan to put you on my favorite author list. Thanks for one of the best stories. I was up late many nights reading. Now on to read the outtakes:)

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

   I loved your story. It's the first story where Edward and Bella did not end up together that I have read and I really enjoyed it. I just like happy endings. Thanks for writing it. Your really very good and I will add you to my favorites list. Have a great day:)

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184488
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Adding Thickener

I love this story. I just want to read more. Please update soon:)

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase

The story is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter:)

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339523
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: The Interview

I am loving this story and cant't wait till the part where Mike gets his. I would like to see them have twins. One boy (Andy) and one girl (Abby). I hope for a very happy ending. It's been great to read your story. Thanks

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

  I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for the sequel:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

   Masen is so sweet and I can't wait to see what happens as he grows. Love this story. I hope it is a very long one:)



Author's Response:

It is a very long one, and reviews only serve to encourage me!

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

  I think Masen should be circumcised. I really do think Masen will be the key to healing Edward's burn. I thought the part where Rosalie teased Jacob   if he wanted color and polish with his pedicure was so funny:) This Rose I like. The story just gets better and I can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94 Arrival

  Love this story the more I read it. It keeps me on the edge and I watch for every chapter.   :)   Happy you love to write and I get to read. It's very good:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Lots more to come!

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110 Plans

Keep going with the story. I just can't wait for new chapters.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I enjoy writing it, and I'm glad someone thinks it worth reading!  lol

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions

 I love this story. This chapter was just what it needed to be:) I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Okay, I have to know . . . what did you feel  it 'needed to be'?  I would really love to know!!!!!!

Thank you for reviewing!  Have I seen a review from you before?

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 21 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.

Love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it going.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: redbug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love all your stories and watch for every chapter. Thank You for taking the time to write them.

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: redbug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!

Loved the story so much I stayed up all night reading. Now I am reading your other story. Can't wait for a update.



Author's Response: Thank yo so much! This story will always have a special place in my heart. And writing all the lemons was fun ;). I miss that a bit. See you over at TBL.

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: redbug Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank You for updating. I have checked every day. I understand its hard to find the time. I love this story so much. Happy he has found them safe. Can't wait for the bad guys to get caught. Hope you have a great day.

Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Happy he found her.  Can't wait till they get back and the bad guys get theirs. Love this story. Thank You for taking the time to write it. Looking for that next chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201961
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Urgent Calls

Really like it. Keep going. Can't wait for the next chapter's.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and for liking my story.

I should probably warn you though... it's going to be a slow burn.

The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

Love this story. Your very good and I like it so much l'm going to start reading your other story. Thank You for all your time put into your writing and keep it up.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I love writing it and sharing it with all of you. My other story, Puzzle of My Heart is a little different than this one, mostly because it's heavy on the lemons, lol. I hope you'll have fun reading it. See you next chapter with their Thanksgiving dinner.

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 41076
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: redbug Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story and can't wait to read more. What talent you have.