Reviews by mingaling
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG TOO GOOD!! I can't believe you left there!! I hope you can write soon!!! Loved it:)

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG I really LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN"T WAIT till next time!! Hope all is well!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'm hoping to get a chapter up by the end of next week.

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't believe you stopped there:( I can't wait for the next one!! You are doing such a amazing job!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the mating call. It's been very well received. At least this cliffy is full of yummy goodness and not another evil twist. LOL

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love this chapter!! I really hope everything goes ok and I really did knock on wood for you!! Take care:)


Erin

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84801
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

I loved it!! It was such a cute story that makes  me hopeful:) Thank you for all your hardwork! I hope to read another story by you soon!!

Erin



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Oh my that was intense!! I can't wait for more:) Love it as always!!

Erin

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OH I love it!! I can't wait for more!! So I know it is going to be a ExB but will there be any short lustie fun between JxB? haha



Author's Response:

I love lustie fun ;)  I have a lot of readers who absolutely hate Jacob just b/c it's Jacob - but he's a good guy in my story.  Bella needs a friend and he's going to be there for her.  Plus, I'm kind of glad he decked Edward - he deserved it lol.  I think it's obvious that Jacob likes Bella but I'm pretty sure it will be fairly one-sided.

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89165
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Rocking His World

I know I haven't gave a review in a while and I am sorry! I have been super busy but I am soooooooooo loving your story!! James is such a creeper!! I really hope that Bella making a complaint ends it!! I have a feeling it wont and I am sure Edward will go Ape Shit on his ass!! Can't wait for more:)

 

LOve,

Erin



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

Sorry I am so slow about getting a reply out to your review. I'm two chapters behind at the moment. Thank you so much for the Storylove! I'm so glad you are enjoying the read.

James IS a creep! At least Bella has her Biog Sis and Resident Advisor. ;) And Edward...just the sort of guy that would go complete Ape Shit on James' ass. lol

Hope you continue to enjoy!

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Inquiring Minds Want to Know

looooooooooooove it:)



Author's Response:

Hi mingaling!

Thanks for the looooooooooooooooove. ;)

and thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Dawn of the Dilemma

I LOVE THIS STORY!! I am a new reader and I can't wait for the chapter!! How often do you update?



Author's Response:

Hi mingaling!

Thank you for the Storylove!!! I'm so glad you are loving what you are reading. I am updating rather quickly. I'll post a new chapter every other day or maybe even every day. The story is written, I'm just editing it as I go before I post. So the chapters will go up quickly.

I hope you like chapter 16---it explains some stuff. Let me know what you think of it.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Putting The Move On

OMG I AM SOOOOOOO IN LOVE!!! I can't wait to see what happens with Jake. I can't believe Edward got in a fight with Jacob. I mean I can believe it but it was just...so good:) I also love how Rose is so caring!! I can't wait for you to post again. It puts a smile on my face every time you do!!

Waiting paitiently,

Erin



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

Thanks for the review of chapter 20. I can't imagine a more fun movie night than spending it on Edward's bed having a food fight/ticklefest that results in him lying on top of me, breathlessly restraining me, while laughing and breathing heavily. Yeah. I need a cold shower just thinking about that.

And so now you know the results of the fight between the boys. Poor bbs. I like Rose. I had a hard time deciding how to write her, but I think she's kind of mature and caring but still silly and wild.

Thanks for the review and for letting me know I make you smile. You made me smile telling me that. :) See?!

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Non-date? Nonsense!

I really Like the chapter with Jake!! I am glad it ended well. In this chpater I love how you put the part about the Tiger eyes and how a human couldn't have eyes like that..hehe love it! I can't wait for the next one!! I hope they Kiss in it...on the lips:)

 

Erin



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

Glad you liked the chapter with Jake. It had to end well because they have a shared history and it's a good history. I didn't want them to part as enemies holding grudges. Glad you liked the part with the stones, specifically the Tiger's eye not being the color of human eyes. teeheehee. I like to slip that stuff in there every now and then.

I'm running behind on review replies, but I hope to catch up soon.

thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wanted it to keep going!!! Love it as always but hope it is going to start getting juicy:) Hope all is well!!

 

Erin



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

Let the juicy begin!!! But don't forget...Bella doesn't want to be feeling like a hooooor...she's still reeling about Jake. Poor Baby...if she could just let go and snag the hot E in front of her. But this will start getting spicy.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Comparing Notes

OMG Those brakes are about the fly off I feel like:) I can't wait for the next one!!! Amazing as always<3

 

Erin



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

I don't think the brakes are going to hold out for very long, do you? The next one is up. Hope you enjoy! Let me know.

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Weekend Plans

I loved the part about the brownies!!! Oh Emmett!!!I can't wait for the next one and for the wheels to come off!!

Erin

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

Glad you liked those Mediterranean Brownies! I like to add some chopped up sun dried tomatoes when I make them! :) Yuck! Emmett is so out of it sometimes, isn't he? I love him and his big goofiness.

Thanks for the review. I'll probably post the next chapter tonight or tomorrow.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

I love it!! I am not concerned I trust Bella!! I am sure Jacob will try something but she is one tuff cookie and will shoot him down:) Can't wait for the next one!!

Erin



Author's Response:

Hi Erin!

Sorry I'm so slow about responding. So, to chapter 35...Thanks for the chapterlove!

Edward should trust Bella and I'm glad you trust Bella. And Jacob...we;;, he's just a dog-boy...he can't be trusted. But you are right about our girl B...she's a tough cookie and she would shoot down any shenanigans Jake tries.

Thank you for the review.

-bannerday

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure

LOVE IT!!! Do you post weekly? I can't wait for me!!

Erin

Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Proposal

I Looooove your story! Thank you do much for writing it! I can't wait to read more of your work!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much hon!  Will hopefully be seeing you soon.

 

xoxo

Summary:

 

 

 

 

Late one night while house sitting for her dad's friend, Isabella gets caught

acting out one of her fantasies by none other then the star of them. Carlisle Cullen. OOC/ BxC

 

 

This story contains graphic sexual situations and is not suitable for those under the age of eighteen.

 

 

*UPDATE*story has be beta'd and I plan on writing another Chapter or two.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3384 Read Count: 6378
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2011 Updated: 10 May 2011
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes please that was wicked hot!!

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

OMG I am a new reader and just started reading your story yesterday, and i am in love!! I really like it, it is something different than what I have read before, I can't wait to see where it goes:) I can't wait for Sunday!!

Erin

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella’s long distance best friend shows up unexpectedly on her doorstep after being discharged from the Army under mysterious circumstances.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9126 Read Count: 974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this and I think it is a great first chapter...because there should be MORE:) I really hope you keep it going.

:),

Erin



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I've had a lot of positive feedback about continuing it and I already have an outline done.  I hope to start working on the expanded story in the near future.

 

So glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reading and reviewing!

Stellar by evilnat Rated: NC-17 starstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

One-shot inspired by the Incubus song Stellar. Edward makes a mistake and has to come to terms with it. E&B AH **Nominated for an Emerging Swan Award for Best Edward/Bella One-Shot**

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6431 Read Count: 719
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2011 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very good!!! I hope you write more stories:)

Erin

Anna Poppins by Jekkah Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Hotch hires an old friend as a new nanny for Jack, who has an interesting affect on the team. JJ/Hotch slow build romance and Morgan/OC not a strong focus. AU after 5X13 - Risky Business.

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Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134434 Read Count: 9014
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2014
Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Of Introductions and Picnics

I just found this story and I love it!! I am a huge Crimnal Minds fan too! I have to say this is my first time reading a Crimnal Minds fanfic and I absolutely love it!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! How often do you update? 

Erin



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  I try to get an update done every 4-6 weeks, depending on real life commitments and what else I'm working on.

Summary: Past Featured Story

After a shocking discovery, Bella is forced out of her rainy, northwestern home and takes up residence in sunny, Jacksonville, Florida. While she suspects her life with vampires is over, she is unknowingly moving deeper into supernatural waters. After all, there's always a bigger fish. AU-New Moon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202340 Read Count: 8581
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2013
Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Omg I loved the last chapter! It was so intense! But, please tell me Bella doesn't die?!?! Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks for the review! As for Bella's condition, you'll have to wait til the next chapter! 

Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

falling

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 55212
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

New reader here and I absolutely love your story!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks and welcome! 

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39579
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yea can't wait to read more! hope you update soon!!:)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it :-) I'll update next monday :-)

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it!! I can't wait for the next one! Could it be this week? A girl could hope ;)



Author's Response:

:-D *Considers it... Hmm, maybe, if the readers are nice and shows a lot of interest :-P

Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it!! I can't wait for the next one once again :) I can't wait to see where the story goes!



Author's Response:

:-D

Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved the newest chapter!! I picture bouncing on some other vampire!! Can't wait for next week:) any chance for another one this week?!;)



Author's Response:

Maybe :-P If you're kind enough and if I remember it :-P

Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is what I needed :) Loved every min of it!! I can' wait for the next one, you always keep me wanting more!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: mingaling Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love your story!!! I just want them to get together already:) can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: mingaling Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i love it....I can't wait for them to get to the benefit part of friends with benefits :)