Reviews by llh88
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Summary: Between deployments and deaths, will Bella and Edward find their happy place together? When they find their love, will it survive the war they're surrounded by? Tissue warnings are given, but a happy ending is promised. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26925 Read Count: 34733
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Mar 2015
Reviewer: llh88 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Boy, this is going to be a tear-jerker at times, isn't it!  Love it already!

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Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice set-up to what can be a beautiful story and friendship/romance. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love the comradderie between Bella, Rose & Alice.  Nice birthday surprise and sentiment in Edwards's card to Bella. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Naming the baby after Jasper was a great idea, it needed a tissue warning though!  I thnk joining a branch of the service is wonderful and Bella did it for all the right reasons (imho).  I'm guessing that Edward was going to announce his retirement from the military but it doesn't look like that will be happening now.

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh man, this is sad but I love it!  Rose really needs to get over it.  Bella needs her support now more than ever.  So happy that Bella realized Edward does love love her. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm, so they are together in a war zone but can't be together.  Looking forward to more!

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This was much too risky, I'd be shaking in boots worrying about getting caught in my commanders room.  But yes, they are getting closer & that's always a good thing.

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh no, this is horrible.  Am I going to have to start reading with one eye closed?  LOL 

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for not keeping them captive for very long, my heart couldn't take it!

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Nicely pulled together!  A lot did happen in this chapter and yet it doesn't feel rushed! Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved the chapter and the way things have unfolded.

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Perfect wedding celebration & night!  I have really enjoyed the military apect of this story.  

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story!  I will look for your groups on FB!