Reviews by the writer biter
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

hey i love the new chapter. you havent lost me luckily but i dont blame you for not updating. i've been having RL drama and havent updated in months. cant wait for another chapter.

 

10/10

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

i love this new chapter! i was waiting for the new chapter for a while and i think it was worth the wait. Whens the next chapter out??

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35963
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

to me edwards intentions are great but he's going about it all wrong, he's doing it all backwards and pushing bella in the deep end when he should have asked her on a date not finger fucked her five minutes after meeting her :) hope he realises that

Summary:

"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…”  I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."

 

 

 

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"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"

 

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This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11221
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2014
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: A Change of Heart

aww the flashback was so sweet i felt like crying! i loved it! glad you had an insparation attack. :) more soon?

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Not a moment of peace

i love this story but is Jacob still going to imprint on Nessie? i didn't really like the whole imprint thing in Breaking Dawn really it was kind of creepy to me but whatever. I hope you update soon. Cant wait for some more Ness/Edward moments they are so cute!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love the sound of this Edward already!



Author's Response:

Hello. I just wanted to officially welcome you to my little story of love and lust ...I hope you like it ...lml

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i want to be bella so bad in that chapter! gosh Dom Edward is so hot! it was so funny when leah and jake came in! and also when rose was telling bella about Thumb boy



Author's Response:

that was Bella's first step into trusting Edward...thumb boy actually excist ...the poor little thing ...lol...thanks for reading and the comments...lml

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i think the rules in this are fairly...good for a better word, but are they the ones used in the real life story? or did you come up with them from research? anyway thanks i love the chapter



Author's Response:

...i believe that these are basic rules, intended to provide structure and a sense of stability. There are D/s relationships that have no daily rules to follow. The Dom or the sub finds rules to be sufficating and there fore they back away from them...My Edward likes structure and has expectations of his submissive, so he has rules that he expects her to follow,,,if she does not, she will be punished....now as for your question. Research comes in many forms, however I would like to say that this story is a reflection of a true story...so I will leave it at that.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

L-O-V-E it!! lol i was luaghing my ass of at edwards sparkling "peen" as you put it lol you should have made it something like pen15 because it looks like the proper word for it haha lol

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

love it! i wanna read more of it! i love it!! cant wait for more!!!!! there were a few mistakes but nothing to worry about :)

lots of love!! xxx

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27174
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

aww leah at two is adorable and Ant at six months is so cute! most authors would have dived in with the kiss and i like that you didn't. cant wait for a new chapter.

10/10!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you agree with my decision to wait for them to kiss. Your teaser will be sent through PM. Enjoy :-)

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

when you asked for a name for Bella because you had Daddyward i started thinking and one name came to me- Momella?

Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

thank you, I like that name :-)

Sent From Heaven by Alice1290 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

After her brother’s death Andria DeAngelo is leaving Lake Tahoe, California in search of a new start. The tragic death of Bella Cullen had torn the Cullens apart and left Edward in a constant state of depression. He only lives because of Renesmee.  When Edward and Andria meet Edward must control his desire to kill her. Can Andria get away from the memory of her brother’s tragic accident? Will the Cullens be torn apart forever? Or can Andria save Edward and the Cullens and show them happiness and love again?

Lemons in later chapters!

 Thanks to Frozen Soldier for the AWESOME banner!

 

Thanks again to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner!

 

made by Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com! Thanks!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218274 Read Count: 7840
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2013
Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: A Night Out

i loved it! the end at the club was good and i liked how you made Peter kill Travis! more soon?

Reviewer: the writer biter Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Flashback

i love the chapter! the end was good. and the chat between Jasper and andria was sweet and great! i love the relationship between them