Reviews by furiousstrength
Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

" I really like not knowing what's going to come out of my head until it falls onto the screen."

 

I have a musician friend who is similar.  He often goes to open mic nights and just gets on stage to experiement with his songs. I remember after one set he says into the mic, "Well, that song just fell out of my ass".

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324451
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Our First Night

"So, there went my first V lemon. I never thought I would write a story with a virgin..."

You did it well! And more importantly, to me anyway, realistically. It always annoys me when Bella loses her v-card to Edward and it only hurts for a fraction of a second and then they have wild, perfect, orgasmic sex. Also, I think you are the first author I've read who actually knows where the hymen is actually located. Most seem to think it's actually up in the vagina. lol

I think it was a perfect experience. Sweet, tender and real. (Not to mention hot. I don't think I'll ever get tired of the idea of Edward growling 'Mine!')

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

He really needs to grovel and appologize about telling her she wasn't allowed to come see him at work. I don't know why but that one sticks in my craw above all the others. He gave her an open invitation and then acted like she was a burden. If I were her, I'd never come to visit him at work again.

Lullaby by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Under duress, the Cullens agree to foster Chief Swan's teenage daughter while he battles her deadbeat mother for custody. But Bella has a dark past that will follow her to Forks, forcing her to fight for the new life she has been given.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29905 Read Count: 2473
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh holy fuck I remember Lady Lovely Locks! That's part of what I love about your stories, you're my age so I get a HUGE dose of nostalgia with some of the things you talk about.

 

Do you think you'll ever come back to this story? I'm all caught up with Wisp so I decided to start this and am now addicted. I think it's fantastic and I enjoy how you don't have Edward and Bella falling into bed in chapter 2 and him curing all her woes with his honey scent and cinnamon breath.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419231
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"Yeah, again, reminder...not a doctor. Yes, the best place for someone who has lost consciousness is a hospital. If that happens to you, do not pass go. Do not collect two hundred dollars. Go to the hospital!"

 

Fuck that, if that ever happens to me Edward can take me home and keep me!

Summary:

This is an outtake from my story Wisp, in her POV. Set around chapter 24-ish. Dedicated to Ooza and luvrofink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2404 Read Count: 2005
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2012 Updated: 03 Sep 2012
Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. It's nice to get a look inside her mind. Another good story with a POV like this is Feral by Opal..something. It's about Bella finding Edward living in a cave. He was lost ala Tarzan very young and doesn't speak but has memories of speech like Wisp. She did really well conveying what his throughts were with one or two words as well as images. If you are looking for some inspiration for WPOV I certainly recommend it. If you can't find it with the title and a partial author name I can find the story for you if you want it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113788
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"Edward shook his head, "No, but I've left you alone for so long...""

I'm a bit cofused on how long exactly.  Has it been 4 years or just this last year?

And I know they are working through things and maybe I'm a bitch but I kinda want to see Edward drug through the mud a bit more. He feels like shit and well he should. He's been an a total, inexcusable asshole. I guess I just want him to know even more clearly exactly how much she's been hurting all this time and what exactly he did to her.