Awesome chapter

05/25/11

Holy Hannah~ That~ was hot!!  Looks like the fire is about to get turned up...

I absolutely love this story already!!! You are taking it to the next level and I cannot wait to see where you are going with this.  I have not seen this particular storyline before so in that it is original & unique. Should be fun...

KimiD

Well we all know the "vampire" at charlie's was Edward, trying to figure some things out. How does Jake not know it's him? Dream sequence, of their honeymoon that did not take place... but all through the original stories she is always dreaming things before they happen, like a clue of things to come... soooo future events, maybe?  Great writing love how you brought the dream it for her to ponder. KimiD

I totally loved this o/s... She came into her own with the help of a very loving Edward~! Ah yes, he's still got the swoon~!

And they're off and running! Yeah, vic isn't going to like Bella... At... All *snicker* who the hell cares... she has Eddie!

Yep, if you are doing things just because they are 'expected' you are really setting yourself up for a fall... especially if you cannot even stand the other person~

Oh, and good luck Edward getting rid of the pariah *snicker* me thinks this will be easier said than done...

And Yeah, tanya IS a bitch~!

Now we have a little more insight to Bella... another hs bitch vendetta... you heard the last words bitchfest said.  She is going to really go after Bella now, not to mention jessica... apparently bitchya is too stupid to notice her 'friend' bitchica trying to get her man right under nose...

Edward is gonna have to tread lightly to even get Bella to talk to him at this point~!

Love Jazz as the big brother protector, and Emmy too... lol at least they heard for themselves that he broke it off with the thang... in front of the whole cafateria. *snicker snort*

The boy gets kudos for how he handled both situations... but i do not think that will be a deturent as they are pretty thick-headed and dense even when you tell them plainly...

Don't know What mikey was thinking... and did tan really think Edward would care she was sitting ON eric yorkie lap, pahlease...

I think Charlie went pretty easy on him... I think he was scared a bit until Charlie told him he could call him by his name. LOL

Well Edward is not above name dropping that is for sure~ sticking up for his Bella is always sexy...

Quite a bit going on this chapter... seems things are escalating with the bimbo barbie and her banshee ways... Does n't she get it. Even if Bella was not around he was never going to get Edward back.  What part of I do not want to be with you, does she not understand.  Sheesh~!  Oh and go Rosie, Go Rosie~!

Nice that Edward is choosy... loved that he just left her standing there... did not take her to long to sidle up to a new one. Smart Man...

What  a trauma for Rose,,, glad they have the bastard on trial!  When does Bella tell her trauma?

Pretty good for a first try... I have to confess i have read the first 2 chapters of the sequel you put up and that made me want to come read the first story... so much has happeed since this story i had to come and read what went on before...

And so they meet. I cannot wait to read the rest of the story...

So she's his singer... love that part from the book too.

They already feel the connection from the first encounter and it is already getting  bigger... I love that song by Seether and the one I think is by Bon Jovi

Like I said trouble from the skanya persuasion...

As Always Dishie ~ you captivate the mind with your word pictures ~ Easily picturing the dance scene... and the train~ good for Bella not giving in and checking him out... but me thinks he is going to have fun with this...  I think he might be a bit smitten, sure made him forget about Aria~

He just can't help himself, she's a mystery and he wants to solve that.... but he's also already falling~ and his kids adore her and she them. I think he's the first place she has found where she had felt safe in a very long time... She trusts Miss Honey and Guido and I Kinda think maybe they are Harry and Sue.  Just guessing.  And Hawk ~ that one I am not sure of.  Felix is already with Edward so, maybe, Demitri... You shake up the characters a lot in your stories so he could be anyone of the regulars... just in a different role than usual. And protecting her before and after would seem to mean that he knew her father... I don't think it would be Billy but there are so many variables, I will just have to continue to guess until I have more clues.

Woo, mike is an arse~ he acted like he wanted her to be the one that hurt ursula, jerk.  That Edward knows him And laughs means he is not worth his time... now I wonder who beat up the old lady, Marmaduke?

Ahhh, seems Jasper sees the man Edward is now and has changed his tune... he is Nothing like his father...

AWESOME STORY~!

Oh Charlie~ no child should have to go through losing their parent so young... my heart aches for this little man...

In the past it has always been Royce King, so that is who I assumed it was.

You have such a gift for making me cry... lol and yeah, Charlie breaks me too~ love your stories ~ even when they make me cry...

I love that you named the youngster Charlie...

I love this... it is so playful~! And I think there is more to this "contest" than meets the eye~ and it seems Rose is a part of it...

Ah Ha~ your a/n pretty much confirmed what I thought... it had been a fleeting thought about her not even enetering a contest~ now I see I was right... the only one who seemed to know Anything was Rose his sister... Bella Knows his parents from when her mother was ill, so that would tend to make me think that maybe just maybe They had always thought Bella would be perfect for their son... and put a little matchmaking into play with the radio station~ Rose~! Emmy seemed to have a little more knowledge than anyone else, and he did say Rose loved Bella!! How does she know Bella~! Cannot wait to read the next chapter...

Edward is already crazy about the two of them... I think he fell in love with Lucy the night of the concert!! Right along with Bella!!

There was a small clue, when Edward said he lost both of his parents, 'she' Has to be his mother...

I think he handled all her friend quite well, he was quick on the ball with answers to all their questions as though that was what had really transpired between them... nicely done~!  I felt so badly for Bella when she said it's not real, but he begged to differ, i think it is very real to him... she has the kind of money it would take~ once she knows all the circumstances behind Why he stays with Esme~ to basically buy him out of the contract, so to speak~ cause i have a feeling once she falls in love with him she will do whatever it takes to keep him~!

Okay~ you know me, I usually r/r every chapter but this one has me enthralled and captured and I just want to get to the next chapter~ already my heart hurts for Edward and what ever his secret is... Wow, and talk about writing an Esme you want to beat with an ugly stick, yeah, you win!!

I think it will be very hard to tell where the pretending begins and ends with Edward when he is with Bella... his mind living in a fantasy where she could really love him... this is going to be Some ride!!

I love the charater twists... maje for great reading-! Yeah, he is a piece of work... I like your mean version of Emmett, great writing...

Did not know who the wobderful writers behind weekittyand tat were before! Now that I do ... must let you know I have read several of your stories and had already put you as afavorite on ff.net long ago... LOVE you ladies' writung!!! Congrats on you published book!!! KimiD

Great beginning! But your summary promises us a very posses off Bella... I think in your story she is going to give him the he'll he so richly deserves... look out Edward, you ate about to be schooled...