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Bio:
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625472
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
hey
I love your story and have been following it for months and am glad that it has finally come to a happy ending, however i hop you take no offense but i think that the epilouge of the story didn't reach to potential it has compared to the story and the ending seems rushed, i was a bit dissapointed by the ending because of all the emotional up and downs through the story waiting for bella and edward to be happy and it seems that the ending was over far to quickly with hardly any detail about how the characters feel and maybe what will happen in their future, please let me know if you would consider adding another chapter onto the end of the story
thankyou
Author's Response:
The ending was left vague for a reason. I'm publishing the story later this year but didn't want to leave the ff version hanging or pull it all together. This was a compromise for the published version. Any writer that has published their ff story pulls the story completely before completing it to encourage readers to buy the book. I didn't want to do this since my readers have been so faithful to follow me thru all the crap that I wanted to give you an ending without giving away everything that will be in the book. So for those who want to purchase the book the gaps for this 5 year period will be filled in along with some new material that was never in the ff story. For those who don't want to purchase the book you at least have an ending to the story and know they got their happy ending.
I hope this helps.
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223973
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I really like your story...but enough angst, cant they just be happy for a little while I hope they do get back together SOON
Its an edward and bella story they should be together!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
ohhh i want you to post again this week if its going to have a bit happier outcome *hint* *hint*
BUt if its going to be more drama you can do it early next week so i dont have to wait so long for it to get happier and they get back together :)