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Bio:
I am a 43 yr old mother of 2 daughters and 1 son. Also I am a very proud Nana of 1 grandson and twin granddaughters. All are the loves of my life. My daughter got me "hooked" on THE TWILIGHT SERIES!!! I love to read and garden. I drive my husband crazy with how many hours I spend reading!! I am Team Edward, but Major Jasper is a close second!!
Bella is a senior in college looking for a realtionship. Edward is a firefighter who wants someone to care for. They are set up together by none other than Alice. See where the road of life takes them and why you have to 'Just Have Faith'. AH
Epilogue was been reposted after many questions
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112119 Read Count: 48069
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Just Have Faith
I really do not have words for this story, but one comes to mind...BEAUTIFUL!!!! Thank you for such a GREAT story, full of love, romance, tears, and of course, sexy time too!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.
Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.
A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89225
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Post Traumatic Stalker Disorder
EDWARD DEFINETLY NEEDS TO TALK TO A THERAPIST. WOW SO MUCH GOOD BUT SO MUCH BAD!!! I HOPE THINGS ARE LOOKIN UP FROM NOW ON!!!! GREAT UPDATE!!!
Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
my heart is breaking for Lilly, please tell us Tanya "disappears" and Bella gets her act together, marries Edward, has more babies and Lilly has a mom. But if you did we wouldn't have a story anymore huh!!! LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
HAHA! Yeah I can't exactly tell you what happens, but I will give you this - Tanya does disappear, eventually. Not yet but she will go away. That's all you're getting though! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh boy, i should've known that girl would come back! Please tll me she doesn't cause trouble for them!!!I think while Edward and Bella begin a relationship she should get inseminated, hes got Lily with Tanya and Bella loves her so he could love her baby. It may take them too long to feel ready for a baby together so make one seperate??? I don't know, just ready for them to be together together,ya know???
Author's Response:
Without giving anything away - the next chapter will have some drama. As for the wole insemination for Bella - you'll have to read and find out! ;-) Thank you for reading and definitely reviewing!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Great chapter, as always!!! I really hope a miracle happens and Bella gets pregnant. They have both been thru so much they deserve happiness and miracles. Not to mention Lily would have a sibling to bring her happiness and Bella for a mother too. Just sayin.... I look forward to more updates!!! THIS IS A GREAT STORY PEOPLE, READ IT AND TELL YOUR FRIENDS!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! This review really made my day! :)
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
GREAT CHAPTER, IM SO EXCITED, A WEDDING AND A BABY. I HOPE SHE CARRY TO FULL TERM AND HAS TWIN BOYS!! WISHFUL THINKIN, I KNOW!!!I HOPE TANYA IS GONE FOREVER TOO!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE UPDATES!!! PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
WOW THAT WAS A QUICK 6 MONTHS!!!! LOVIN IT THOUGH!!!!! MIRACLE BABY!!!! WELL ALL ARE BUT ONE CONCEIVED IN THIS CIRCUMSTANCE REALLY IS!!!
After years away, Bella is returning to a place she thought she'd left behind and a man she thought never wanted to see her again. Love often comes when you least expect it. There are lies that need to be confessed and secrets to reveal.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146616 Read Count: 43647
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
No this chapter was perfect. Everything coming together, as it should be. Will Bella become pregnant from the "no condom" encounter??? Exciting!! A wedding in the near future?? I look forward to the next chapter(s)!!!
Author's Response:
We'l have to see about that. Thanks for the review.
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
Well, I love this story so how could I not love this chapter??? I love the fact that the divorce is final, they are engaged, finally!!! And a new baby, huh......maybe twins??? I hate the fact the stoy is coming to a close, I was thinking of reading all about thier marriage, the kids growing, Edward & Bella groweing old together, no one ever does that!!! SEQUEL!! Come on everyone, start a campaign for a SEQUEL!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I dont think I'm doind a sequel, but someone did mention a possible outtake that I'll consider- a Jake/Charlie confrontation...
The Epi will cover a lot of ground and tie up a lot of loose ends- it's mostly finished and over 7K words now.
"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic.
Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard
Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.
Beta'd by aeglow
Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2674071
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It
Well, once again....GREAT CHAPTER!!! I love gangster Edward and a strong Bella. I do feel bad about the baby situation. I have a feeling it will all work out. I hope, sincerely, Edward isn't held up long at the F.B.I. Headquarters!! Bella may not make it long with out her man!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.........
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Skip's Day Off
falling asleep during sex with edward???? that should be a crime....just sayin!!! cause we all know a capo edward is yummy!!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz
I think it is great Bella is giving Edward a small taste of his own medicine. Yes, Bella knew of Edwards job requirements, but part of being the boss is being able to make your own hours and he could be home a little more. By Bella not having sex with Edward is making him think about Jacob, and its likely with Jacob being around all the time when Bella needs someone will make her develope feelings for him. Edward hangin around Eclipse makes Bella insecure, especially pregnant. I hope Bella doesn't really cheat, but gives Edward a little dose of his own medicine, make him think twice so to speak. She really needs him right now, everyone whos been pregnant knows how emotional you are and feel fat. Him being around naked girls don't help, at all. He needs to do something special for her, soon. If he wants sex, maybe he needs to be home before 1 am,. He knows how Bella was insatiable a few months ago, so he wonders what changed...is she getting it somewhere else??? Maybe she wants him to think that. I really love this story and have re read several times and look forward to updates. I really want them to stay together. But I think Bella deserves time with Edward before the baby comes. When babies arrive, time disappears. I don't think Edward realizes that, I think he thinks they sleep all the time and he and Bella will have so much time just for themselves....WRONG!! Not to mention the 6 week no sex thing. Does he know that??? He will probably expect BJ's from Bella and that would be selfish, surely he wouldn't stray then????!!! I would love to read more about Edward as a teen and twentyish. Was he a manwhore?? I know he was "popular" but that bad??
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day
One word.....WOW!!! I HAVE TO SAY I GOT A LITTLE BIT NERVOUS EARLIER IN THIS CHAPTER.....I THOUGHT SHE MAY LEAVE. THANK GOD SHE DIDN'T. THESE TWO JUST HAVE THAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP, THEY FIGHT HARD AND LOVE HARDER!! GLAD THEY HAD THIS SESSION OF SEX, PROBABLY WILL BE THE LAST TILL THE BABY, WAIT SEX BRINGS ON BABIES....
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life
EXCELLENT!! I LOVE THIS STORY, KEEPS YOU "ON YOUR TOES" I ALWAYS KNEW JACOB WAS GONNA GET IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE BABY. WILL BELLA TELL EDWARD ABOUT THE BABIES R US WHERE NICOLE GAVE JACOB HER NUMBER? AND THE SEQUEL....GREAT NEWS!!! THANK YOU!!!
Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.
After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible?
(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
EXCELLENT STORY, I LOVE THE FACT THEY ARE MOVING TO THE COUNTRY. I THINK EDWARD WILL FIND PEACE THERE AND MAYBE THE WOLF FAMILY CAN VISIT CLOSE BY. BELLA NEEDS TO EXPLAIN TO ROSE AND EMMETT HOW SHE CAME BY EDWARD, HIS STORY AND HOW SHES TEACHING HIM. THEY MIGHT FIND IT STRANGE TO ONE DAY LOOK OUT THE WINDOW AND SEE EDWARD RUNNING AROUND ON ALL FOURS, OR EVEN NAKED, LOL!!!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate you reviewing.
Here is your teaser
Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs. He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.
When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.
“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”
Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
OH EDWARD, DID YOU GET IN THE CHICKEN COOP??? BELLA NEEDS TO EXPLAIN TO ROSE AND EMMETT ABOUT EDWARD, LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL
I really appreciate your review!
Here is your teaser
With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”
Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.
And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Oh no!!! I knew it!!! My only fear is that someone willtry to take Edward away, rule him incompetent or something to make his own choices. That would kill not only Bella, but Edward as well. Please don't let that happen. Edward depends on Bella, and needs her.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your support of my story.
Here is a teaser for the next chapter
She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark. In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.
The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.
“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”
---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding
AAAWWW!! Absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read!!! The base is so different, funny but lots of love. Even from the beginning. She loved him enough to be pateint with him and teach him even thou she thought she may have to give him up. Thank God Rose and Emmett came along with their job offer, that was just what they needed. Edward will probably never be refined and all that, but he doesn't need to be cauase Bella loves him just the way he is. GREAT STORY GREAT JOB THANK YOU!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed.
Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?
(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)
- Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
- Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184537
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
ABSOLUTELY GREAT, ALL OF IT!!!!! AS ALWAYS, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! SUCH A PERFECT STORY!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Hello Renee
It just keeps getting better and better, hotter and hotter. is it just me or is everyone ready for the "big day" of Bella turning in her v-card??? I can't wait for more updates!!! GREAT WORK!!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Goodbye Renee
I hope Bella doesn't lesve Renee in the condo /loft by herself and it looks like thats exactly what she is gonna do!! OH NO!! I hope she doesn't think shes not getting Bella's money so she is gonna steal her expensive shoes and dresses to sell!! Maybe I am just a suspicious person. And lets not forget the money in the bottom drawer!!! Christ I hope Renee disappears and never returns!!! I can't wait for the ball and the Forks trip to the cabin!!! I LOVE this story, can't wait for more!!!
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Taken
OH MY GOD, PLEASE LET IT BE RENEE! BELLA MUST HAVE BEEN THROWN FROM THE TRUCK??? CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE...SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT.....
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Epilogue
Well, thank you for a wonderful story that had just the right amount of both drama and love. All the characters were great and it was a exciting and yet sexy read!!!! Thanks again and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.
When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
I have nEVER and I mean NEVER been so touched by a story as I have this one. This is a story about real life people. A GREAT story. It has Smiles, laughyes, tears, tragedy,anger and hope. I personally will tell everyone I know to read this. I know edward and Bella will fix this problem I really think the main problem is Bella insecurities, but wouldn't all women feel that way??? I hope Jane becomes part of the family and Carlie is born healthy and Bella and Edward fall back in love not just love eachother. I can't wait for more. Thank you for updating so quick, I have been on cloud 9 today!!!
Bella and Edward meet on a cruise. Both are attracted to each to other. We'll see what happens after some fun- loving on a cruise, when they encounter each other again.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88437 Read Count: 41415
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Great story, I haven't decided if Im wanting Anthony to be Edwards or if I hope he is not and they adopt him. I think with what's happened if Anthony is Edward's Bella will feel even more insecure since she lost the baby. They have had so many obstacles, it's time for happiness.
Author's Response:
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Why do I get the feeling something is about to happen. By Edwards last few sentences, things seem to be going to good!! I hope Im wrong. Great update!!
Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339537
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: The Honeymoon
Just wanted to say.....LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for MORE!! I love the pregnancy, maybe twins, lots of love for Edward & Bella to give to make up for such a hard life?? A boy and a girl??? Just sayin...
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 44: The Bean
This story over in a few chapters??? Say it isn't so!!! I love this story, it has everything a good story needs, laughs, drama, tears, and yes, lemony goodness!!! Maybe a sequel, with Edward and Bellas trials and mishaps of raising triplets.... come on....lets start a petition!!! I love the way you write, I can relate so much more with your story than other ones. Thank you for shareing-sp? your talent!!
Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?
Warning: at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Epilogue
Great story!! Love the earthquake, lol!!! Love the fact that Bella's giving Esme a baby, Rose too. The worlds greatest gift. Thank you for such a great story. It had everything, laughs, tear, suprises!!!
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back
I am falling in love with this story, I will say I love that Bella ad Edward are getting back together slowly. I think it is time to reveal about the Volturi. It is good that they are getting to know eachother again, Bella still wants forever, I hope Edward gives it to her this time!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back
Well, fierst, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Second, I love the direction this story is taking. Maybe, Edward and Bella can marry, they can have a second baby, she proven it can be done. Third, since its likely Mason will stop ageing, at what 17 like his dad did??? Edward can change Bella so she can be around forvever like all of them, not waiting too long so she wont look that much older. And then there is the Cullens, I guess it will come out soon why they left....will Bella be mad that Edward didn't tell her sooner??? Wow, so much to think about!!! LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 144022
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: One Month Ago
I really love how Edward and Bellas relationship is slowly developing. They will be good for eachother it seems, but James will rear his ugly head im afraid and I bet nobody but Edward will be able to piece Bella back together. I still want a HEA!!!!
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Five Months Ago, Still
Well, I for one really like this story. i can 't wait for Bella & Edward to realize they need eachother to get thru the pain they have went thru. The only problem is Emmett, does Rose happen along in this story? I can't wait for more!!!!!
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Three Months Ago
I love the way this story is developing!!! WQith shared pasts that are somewhat similar Bel and Edward seem good for eachother, support for eachother, I just hope James doesn't break Bella. Its hard to keep rising above and back down to back up again. Edward I have a feeling will be there thru it all though. Great story, I can't wait for the updates!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: They Tried To Make Me Go To Rehab
Great story, although tragic, glad its fiction. I know things like this happen in the world, but I so don't want to think about that! I love HEA for Edward and Bella, an I do believe they are headed for one. I hope they, Emmett, Jasper and Edward find James! I can't wait for more updates!!!
Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done. The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her. Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I like the "new" Edward and glad the Emmett is on his side. I can't wait for more!!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I am so glad Edward is realizes his true feelings. Things are about to get interesting. I wonder if Carlisle wants Bella for himself on the side???? Hmmm....
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I have so much more respect for Edward now!!! Now I wonder who made the orders to have Bella attacked in the first place?? I think Bella will be ready sooner rather than later!!!
After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...
Rated NC-17 for language and lemons
*SM owns Twilight
AH/canon pairings
My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Well, I love this story let me just say.....Anyone for LUSTYVILLE?????
Author's Response:
So glad you like it! Thank you so much, and if I can say...just wait....thanks for reading!
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Oh, what has Edward got himself into....Bella needs to chill and remember edward was just lookin out for her!! I hope they getr a HEA!! I love a tatted Edward, only better would to add piercings!! Something tells me that real life is going to be a challenge for them with their bust schedules once Bella starts interning. I love the story, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Tattward is pretty hot, isnt he? I almost gave him a nipple ring...but my friend was writing her story at the same time and I didn't want to do the same thing. RL is going to get difficult.....Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
IT'S THAT DAMN RENEE, GOTTA BE. OR MAYBE JACOB BLACK WANTING BELLA. IDK!!
Author's Response:
Could be...could be not! LOL Thank you for reading/reviewing!! :)
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Oh!!! More!!!! I know you won't let James kill Bella, right???? I think James has a screw loose, somehow in his mind he's ratonalized all this to being Edwards fault when really he just wanted a family, to feel wanted. That is my opinion. I can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: I don't think that I could ever kill off a main character... James has many screws loose! I have to agree with you about his motivation, though. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
Excellent!!! Sad that it's done, but great story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I've written an outtake, and will post it after I get caught up with my reviews ;)
What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob? Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi? canon
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2
Well, I think Bella just may continue going to the spa, till shes turned anyway!!! I love the last paragraph....you can picture it so visably well!!!! Edward sleeping with his mouth slightly open, with milk in his cheek....so sweet. But raw vampire sex rawks too!!!
Author's Response:
I really can picture him falling asleep that way - my husband used to (uhoh - too much information!) - - - but so did all five babies of mine!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Rockingham
WELL MY HEART NEARLY STOPPED WHEN I WAS READING ABOUT THAT WRECK, MY GOD IF IT WERE BELLA. I WON'T EVEN GO THERE!!! I HAVE SAID THIS A MILLION TIMES, BUT ONCE AGAIN GREAT CHAPTER. THIS STORY HAS ME SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR WONDERING WHATS NEXT, IS IT REALLY VICTORIA??? WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN ROSE RIDES THE NEW BIKE HOME??? WILL BELLA GET PREGNANT?? WILL THEY STAY ON ISLE ESMW FOR BELLAS SAFETY?? I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT THE ANSWERS!! PEOPLE YOU NEED TO READ THIS STORY, IT IS GREAT!!!! I LOVE HOW EDWARD LOVES HIS BELLA!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for that review! I have dozens more chapters of this story so, brace yourself for the ride!
I love hearing your thoughts and questions about what's happening!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs
GREAT chapter!!! VERY FUNNY!! I laughed somuch reading the taste test!! I am so glad your back "in service", I love this story and I missed it!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed Bella's sense of humor! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol! More to come!
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123 Simple Question
No, No and no!!! Bella should not let Edward off the hook!!!!! NO!!! He should be taught a valuable lesson. Silent treatment for days...Leave with Masen for a few days then catch up with them,. She can't let him keep doing this. Assuming, makes a ass out of you and me. Hard lesson. Let him come back, tell him the truth about who waxed her then teach him a lesson. He is more scared of her leaving. Do it. Make him sit is his own mind for a while. He needs this to grow up so to speak. Bella is stupid just to let him come back and grovel and her forgive.
Author's Response:
Oh Edward will learn all right - Bella will see to it and Alice is letting them flounder till they do!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99 Restored
I THINK IT WAS BELLAS MILK THAT HEALED EDWARD AND EDWARDS SEMEN THAT HEALED BELLA, OBVIOUSLY. PERFECT REASONING. GREAT CHAPTER!!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132 Back Home
Go Charlie!!!! I see Emily's point, but you have to forgive, not forget. With a baby on the way.....move forward!!! The council delt with Sam and his punishment fit the crime ans was more painful that Emily realized I believe. And Bella's move on the driving of the cars...hilarious!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Spa
I love ALL the chapters!!! Literally!!! I am so glad Bella had the waxing and can't wait to hear Edwards reaction to it!! He may be the one to faint!!! And just so you know....this faithfull reader, loves all your work and appreciiates it and I can't wait till next time!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for that, some times it's just nice to hear! I would hate to spend hours writing chapters for my amusement alone! lol
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110 Plans
Continue or sequel, either one for me, I am just excited that there is at least 50 chapters more!!!!! I love this story!!!!
Author's Response:
Ahhhh! Thank you so much! We are about to catch up with whee I am writing, so the chapters will cease to be everyday, but change to twice a week! SORRY! They will continue, though!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen
GREAT CHAPTER....AS ALWAYS. CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT EMILY DOES TO SAM!!!! AND HOW WILL EDWARD RESIST BELLA'S BLOOD....HIS COLD TONGUE WILL HELP EASE THE PAIN....WE ALL KNOW EVERYONE WHO HAS READ THIS IS THINKIN THE SAME THING!!! lol!!!
Author's Response:
Good idea with the tongue . . .
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108 Moms
I love your saying!!! Great chapter, i'm glad the others are leaving, but Renee arriving.....yea....we haven't heard from the Denalis and Tanya she probably is going to be T-R-O-U-B-L-E, in the form of jealously! They are in for a BIG surprise!!! I personally can't wait.
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133 Surprises
AThe Cullens don't need that trouble!greed, interesting chapter, I hope Aro stays where he is and never finds out about Masen, Bella the wolves, Jacob or the new babies to be.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?
NO CIRC., MASEN IS MORE ADVANCED THAN MOST INFANTS, PROVN FACT. IT WILL HURT HIM, AS LONG AS ITS NOT MEDICALLY NECESSARY, THEN NO!!!! I WANT AND HOPE EDWARDS ARM/HAND HEALS!!! SOMETHING THEY ARE NOT THINKING OF HAS GOT TO FIX IT!! FEEDING MORE?? A CARNIVORE, MOUNTAIN LION MAYBE???
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving
WOW, ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER....SO I GUESS THEY ARE GOING BACK TO HIGHLANDS?? VICTORIA BETTER WATCH IT OR SHE WILL BE ASH!
Author's Response:
Let's hopw they make ash of Victoria! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 Trees
WELL I FOR ONE LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND THE LAST ONE TOO!!! VICKI IS WATCHIN, MAYBE THEY CAN THINK OF A WAY FOR JACOB TO GO TO TOWN OR SOMETHING SO ALICE CAN "SEE"???? HOW FAR DOES JACOB NEED TO BE AWAY FOR ALICE TO SEE AROUND HIM??? I WONDER IF VICKI ATTACKS WHILE JAKE IS THERE WLL HE PHASE??? INTERESTING....SINCE THE BABY IS DUE IN THE NEXT FEW MONTHS, BELLA WILL JUST GET BIG ALL OF THE S UDDEN AFTER CHRISTMAS??? EDWARD SHOULD PLAN SOMETHING EXCITING FOR NEW YEARS....MAYBE GO TO NEW YORK??? TIMES SQUARE??? CAN'T WAIT FOR TOMORROW FOR NEXT CHAPTER, WILL EDWARD FIND OUT ABOUT ALICE'S THEORY ABOUT JACOB AND SEEING AND VICKI BEING AROUND?
Author's Response:
I love the idea of New York! I actually hadn't thought of it! Thank you for reviewing and leaving suggestions!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94 Arrival
WOW, NOW THAT REALLY WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!! I HOPE EMILY RIPS SAM A NEW ONE!!! I GET SAM RUNS HOME TO TRY TO CONVINCE THE ELDERS TO ATTACK THE CULLENS BEFORE SUE AND JACOB GIVE THEM THE REAL STORY?? HOW CAN EMILY STAY WITH SAM AFTER HE DID WHAT HE DID, IMPRINT OR NOT??!! NOW, WHAT WILL CHARLIE DECIDE....WHEN WILL BELLA BE CHANGED...QUESTIONS...QUESTIONS...I CAN'T WAIT!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you're still interested!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109 Alone
Great chapter...as always. Still can't wait to meet Tanya!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Confessions
I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA WHY YOU ARE NOT GETTING TONS AND TONS OF REVIEWS. I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE ALL HEAS FOR EDWARD AND BELLA, AND SEXY TIME MIXED IN IS GREAT!!! AGAIN, I LOVE THE STORY, I HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT TO INCLUDE BELLAS CHANGE AND THEIR LIFE AFTER THAT SOME! I WONDER IF HUMAN BELLA WILL GET PREGNANT BEFORE THE CHANGE WITH ALL THAT LOVE MAKIN. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, LOVE IT. I PERSONALLY WILL TELL ALL MY FRIENDS ABOUT THIS ONE!!!
Author's Response:
Not giving it away! There is much to this story, and it will go on for dozens of chapters if you are interested in reading it! I really love exploring the Edward Bella relationship and I think it;s fun!
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
IM INTERESTED, IM INTERESTED!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!! iT WOULD BE EASIER IF BELLA "DISOWNED" CHARLIE, WITH THE CHANGE COMING....BUT WHY IS BELLA SO UPSET??? MAYBE ALICE TOLD HER CHARLIES PLAN??? I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for being so escited about the storyline! It is really wondeful to get this type of encouragement! Thanjk you for taking the time to review!
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!
FYI...Still lovin the story. You never know what to expect!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Adjusting
I want to apologize for not reviewing each chapter, im just lazy....but I think this story ios GREAT, UNIQUE, AND HAS WEONDERFUL SEXY TIME AS WELL!!!! I love a careing loving Edward, and a Bella that is shy, but not overly so. I am glad Edward and Charlie made up so to speak, and Bella got to see Renee before she is changed! From the banner, im to believe Bella gets pregnant??? That would be great. I love this story, love the speedy updates, nothing is worse than reading a story, getting involved in it and no updates for weeks!!! Maybe Bella can race after she is turned??? Read this story people, you will love it!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
I guess the banner is a give away! I forgot about that, honestly! Yes, there is a baby (s) involved, but it is completely unlike breaking dawn!
Hope you enjoy it and continue to let me know what you think! I know reviewing is a bother, but I do so love reading them!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Flight
I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR UPDATES DAILY!!! THIS STORY IS EVERYTHING YOU LOOK FOR IN READING. IT HAS LAUGHS, TEARS, DRAMA, AND SEXY TIMES. I RECCOMMEND THIS STORY TO EVERYONE WHO LOVES EDWARD AND BELLA HEAS!!! THANK YOU FOR SUCH A GREAT STORY!!! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT TO INCLUDE THEIR MARRIAGE AND BABIES, ALL THOUGH I THINK I HAVE TOLD YOU THAT ALREADY, SORRY!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! Please never wory about repeating yourself, I love reviews of each chapter at the end of each day I read them. If there aren't any. I wonder what I did wrong with that chapter! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Mending
I knew you would not have them stop making love!!!! Crazy that's what that would be!! great chapter, once again!! You consistent updates are wonderful and refreshing. I look forward to them every day!! I love where this story is headed!!! Maybe Alice will get her wish to plan a BIG wedding???
Author's Response:
Did you like the game they played? I haven't had a coment on it yet! Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114 Change in Plans
Thank you for updating even though you really don't have time it seems. I have become "attached" to this story and I so look forward to updates. Now, it seems Renee threw a curve ball! Ha! The vacation will be interesting, can't wait. Now, I wonder when Jacob will tell the tribe leaders, or council, that he will be leaving??
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
I THINK EDWARD WILL PANIC AND INSIST CARLISLE FLY THERE IMMEDIATELY. NOT GO HOME CAUSE OF VICTORIA. I THINK ISLE ESME WILL BE TURNED INTO A MINI HOSPITAL. THE ONLY QUESTION IS...BOY OR GIRL??? SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING, I READ THOUGH!!! ALL GREAT CHAPTERS!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE AS USUAL!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you SO SO much for taking the time to review! I know it's something of an annoyanbce, but it really makes a diffeence in incentive to add chapters and continue writing! I love hearing what the story means to people, and what they get out of it!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
EXCELLENT AS ALWAYS!!! THINGS ARE REALLY GETTING INTERESTING AND EXCITING NOW!! TILL TOMORROW...
Author's Response:
I love exciting as well! the two of them have some fun times ahead before going to Thanksgiving at Renee's house! Thank you for taking the time to review and let me hear your thoughts!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY, IVE SAID THAT MANY TIMES. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT. I HARDLY CHECK MY EMAILS CAUSE I CAN'T STOP READING LONG ENOUGH, CRAZY RIGHT?? BUT YOU HAAVE NO IDEA HOW COMFORTING IT IS TO "GET HOOKED" ON A STORY AND KNOW BASICALLY EVERY DAY A UPDATE WILL B POSTED!! YOU ARE GREAT!!! THANK YOU!!! i AM LOOKING FORWARD TO EDWARD READING ALICES MIND WHERE SHE SAW HIM PLAYING WITH THE CHILD. SINCE THE MOVIE AND MOST STORIES HAVE BELLA HAVE A GIRL, I HOPE THIS STORY HAS THEM HAVE A BOY, ANOTHER EDWARD!!! THE WORLD CANT HAVE TOO MANY EDWARDS IN MY MIND!!!
Author's Response:
You are so sweet to say that you look forward each day to an update! i try to have it eveyday, but this moving houses and the internet being down really stopped things for a few days. Internet is all better now, though! lol Please comment on the story whenever you have the time, i look forward to seeing the reviews in my email box almost as much as you may look forward to seeing new chapters!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
YES, ITS A BOY!!! IS ALICE BLOCKING EDWARD FROM SEEING BELLA IN FUTURE WITH HER VISIONS? ALICE SEEING HIM IN THE BACK YARD WITH A BOY TODDLER BUT NO BELLA, WONDER IF ITS BECAUSE SHE IS A SHIELD?? HOW LONG DO THEY PLAN ON STAYING ON ISLE ESME, TILL THE BABY? OBVIOUSLY THEY WILL INVESTIGATE THE LEGENDS OF RIO...
Author's Response:
Yep, it's a boy! This baby (and pregnancy) will be completely diffeent from the book! Edward LOVES the idea of being a dad!
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
GREAT CHAPTER!!! WITH ALL THOSE FANCY PHONES, I HOPE JACOB DOESNT CALL RENEE AND FIND OUT BELLAS BEEN IN FLORDIA AND IS PREGNANT AND VICTORIA HEARS!!!WHEN WILL EDWARD GO INTO EXPLAINING TO BELLA WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE TURNED, OR DOES SHE KNOW FROM WHEN THEY WERE TOGETHER BEFORE SHE RAN OFF WITH JACOB?? IM CURIOUS, YOU ARE ALWAYS TALKING ABOUT VAMPIRES AND WHEN THEY HAVE SEX AND HE FINISHES, HE HARDENS IMMEDIATELY, IS HIS ORGASMS STRONGER, LONGER THAN HUMAN ORGASMS? I TAKE IT AFTER READING THIS CHAPTER THAT HE RELEASES MORE FLUID THAN NORMAL??? I BET MORE READERS THAN ME WOULD LIKE TO KNOW!!! YOUR DETAIL IN ALL OF THIS FEELS "REAL", LIKE THIS IS REALLY HAPPENING AND YOU CAN PICTURE IT AS IF ITS REAL. YOU HAVE A RARE GIFT IN WRITING, EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER IS GREAT AND i CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF EDWARD AND BELLA AND THE BABY AND THE DELIVERY AND THE CHILD GROWING UP, ESPECIALLY AROUND EMMETT!! AND READING ABOUT HOW THEY HANDLE VICTORIA. I HOPE THIS IS A LONG LONG STORY, OR IT HAS A SEQUEL, IM HOOKED I TELL YA!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your questions and input! I really appreciate your taking the time to review!
Bella gets to tell Jacob she's pregnant, and you get a play by play of the delivery (something some readers didn't want to hear!) But iof I describe the sex, why not the delivery!
I don't know if his orgasms are stronger than a human male, but he feels them intensely because he has waited so many years. I imagine fluid release is the same as a human male, but his is mainly venom, as are all his fluids = tears, saqliva, etc. He just seems to still produce sperm. My understanding of these vampires is that they are frozen in time, exactly the way they were when tyhey were changed, minus any scars or problems with their bodies. Sperm are produced all the time, so that explains him having some. The sheer amount of times he comes seems to impoly lots of fluid released, however . . .
As for the length of the story, I have written dozens more chapters already and have enough for this to continue, one a day, through September at lest!
Thanks for loving the story . . .
Victoria
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Confidants
WELL I FOR ONE THOUGHT THIS CHAPTER WAS HILARIOUS!! AND A MINI EDWARD.....JUST WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS!!! HAHA. YOU DESERVE MORE REVIEWS!!! THIS IS S GREAT STORY. EMMETT BIS SO FUNNY, ROSALIE IS EASY TO TOLERATE, MUCH BETTER!!!! AND YOU CAN FEEL EDWARD AND BELLAS LOVE IN THIS STORY!!! WE READERS GET LAZY AND FORGET TO APPRECIATE THE WRITERS!!! DONT EVER FORGET ,YOUR WORK IS GREAT!!! THIS STORY IS GREAT! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WITH VICTORIA, HOW BELLA DELIVERS MASEN, DO THEY REALLY HAVE MORE KIDS? BELLAS TRANSFORMATION, SO MUCH TO LOOK FORWARD TO READING!!!!!
Author's Response:
Absolutely, lots to look forward to, and all will be answered . . . in time . . .
Enjoy the ride, and keep telling me what you think! PLEASE!
Date: 08 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
NOW THINGS ARE GETTING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING!!! THE BABY MOVING, HE WILL BE COMING BEFORE WE REALIZE IT! HOW ROMANTIC THAT THEY WERE TOGETHER WHEN HE MOVED.I STILL CAN;T BELIEVE THEY WENT 24 HOURS WITHOUT SEX. HA! THOSE 6 IN THE DISNEY PARKS, WISH I COULDVE BEEN THERE, FUNNY. GREAT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't you just love to be a fly on the wall and watch 6 such charactes take on the theme parks? I think it would be hilarious!
Thank you for leaving a review, i just love getting ideas and feelings from the readers!
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52 Cinderella
WOW!!! SUCH GENEROSITY, THIS CHAPTER TOUCHED MY HEART, I'M SURE LOTS OF US WISH WE COULD HELP LIKE THAT!! YEAH, WHERE IS TANYA???? I HAVE A FEELING THINGS ARE JUST "CRANKING UP" SO TO SPEAK!!!!
Author's Response:
Tanya will make her presence known, have no fear! And yes, things are JUST CRANKING UP! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 Arrivals
WOW, I JUST HOPE RENEE DOESNT VOLUNTEER TO STAY AT THEIR HOUSE WHEN IT GETS CLOSER FOR THE BABY TO BE BORN!!! I HOPE JACOB DOESNT GET UPSET AND PHASE WHILE HE IS THERE AND FREAKS OUT!! FUNNY!!
Author's Response:
Well, you know Jacob is going to have to phase at some point! He will need someone to help explain it to him! lol
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 Town
WONDER WHU THE CULLENS NEVER SMELLED VICTORIA WHILE SHE WAS WATCHING EDWARD AND BELLA HOUSE, OR WAS THAT THE SCENT THEY TRACKED?? I HOPE SHE DOESNT STEAL EDWARD BIKE WHILE ITS SITTING OUTSIDE THE DOOR!!! THINGS ARE GETTING VERY INTERESTING!!!
Author's Response:
Victoria has been very careful to stay at least a few miles from the house, though she had laid tracks all over town . . . purposefully . . .
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve
WOW, WHAT A WAY FOR JAKE TO FIND OUT! I HOPE SUE HURRIES! I ALSO HOPE JAKE WILL BE REASONABLE AND LISTEN NOT ASSUMME AND BE THERE TO HELP WITH VICTORIA FOR BELLA! VICTORIA WILL FREAK, HOPE SHES NOT LISTENING NOW AND OUT LOOKIN AT HOUSES. HOW WILL THEY EXPLAIN MASEN BEING BORN SO EARLY, CONCEIVED EARLIER THAN THOUGHT? HIS GROWTH RATE AFTER BEING BORN, THEY WILL HAVE TO TELL OR DISAPPEAR. I JUST CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY. I LOOK FORWARD TO LOGIN IN DAILY FOR UPDATES, THANKS FOR THAT!!! I HAVE SAID BEFORE AND I WILL SAY AGAIN, PLEASE CONSIDER CONTINUEING THIS STORY TO INCLUDE MASENS LIFE AND BELLAS CHANGE AND ALL AROUND LIFE WITH EDWARD, ITS TOO GOOD OF A STORY NOT TOO!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the commentary! There is lots more story to come!
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 First Christmas
BELLA SAID THAT ABOUT EDWARD IN FRONT OF HER DAD, MOM AND PHIL??? OR JUST SO ESME AND CARLISLE COULD HEAR?? I LOVE THE SENTIMENT OF FAMIY PRAYER BEFORE A MEAL, VERY REFRESHING!!! WOW 2 CHAPTERS, ONE DAY.....YOU ROCK!!!!
Author's Response:
SOOO Sorry! iposted chapter 61 insatead of 60! Please reread and it will make better sense!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 Plans
ONCE AGAIN, WONDERFUL AND EXCITING!! I HOPE VICTORIA DOESN'T GET HER CHANCE TO TAKE BELLA, MAYBE VICTORIA DOESN'T KNOW ABOUT ALICE AND HER SEEING ABILITY?? EDWARD WILL LOOSE IT IF VICTORIA ACTUALLY GETS HER CHANCE!
Author's Response:
Wll, Victoria is pretty persistant!
Let's just hope the cullen's cover all their bases!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 Purring
OK, I HAVE TO SAY THIS , THIS STORY TALKS ALOT ABOUT BELLAS HUMANITY, HER EATING, SLEEPING, BEING FRAGIL, NOW HER PREGNANCY, AND EVEN HER HUMAN MOMENTS, WHICH REFER TO BATHROOM MOMENTS. IF VAMPS HEAR AND SMELL, IS IT TABOO TO REFER TO SMELL. BELLA NEVER ASKS EDWARD IF HE SMELLS HER AND WHAT ABOUT PASSING GAS?? YES YOU CAN KINDS CONTROL IT BUT IT DOES HAPPEN AND MAYBE EVEN WHILE SHE SLEEPS??? AM I GROSS TO BRING IT UP. EDWARD EATING HER OUT WHILE SHE HAS HER PERIOD IS KINDA EQUAL IN GROSSNESS.....I WAS JUST WONDERING....
Author's Response:
Love it! i guess I never really thought about it . . . I'm sure his acute sense of smell is not to his advantage sometimes - humand are disgusting with all their bad breath and gas and bathroom smells! Guess he's just too polite to say anything about it? i don't know, I have to think about it! Good point!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Genes
HILARIOUS!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW THE CULLENS LURE SUE TO THE WOODS TO TALK TO JAKE WITHOUT CHARLIE!!! I HOPE THERE IS MORE TALK WITH EDWARD AND MASEN. BELLA ON THE FLOOR SCREAMING, WAS SHE PREGNANT IN THIS VISION??EVEN THOUGH I DON'T KNOW HOW THEY COULD POSSIBLY EXPLAIN MASENS BIRTH SO EARLY TO BEGIN WITH BUT WHAT IN THE NEXT WEEK OR SO HES READY?? AND HE WILL PROBABLY GROW FAST, VERY FAST ONCE BORN, CAN'T WAIT TO READ HOW THEY HANDLE THAT! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY. YOU ARE VERY GOOD. THE DETAILS, THE HUMOR, THE LEMONS....JUST ALL GREAT!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you find the conversations between Edward, Sam and Jacob funny, I tried to find humor in the situation! Drama occurs later, and all humor is lost! Glad you continue to review, i look forward to reading your thoughts!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Ingrained
WOW! I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THANK YOU FOR GIVING US 2 CHAPTER UPDATES IN ONE DAY!!!! YOU ALWAYS UPDATE DAILY, WHICH IS RARE BUT IM THANKFUL CAUSE IM ADDICTED TO THIS STOREY!!! BUT 2, YEAH!!! LOVIN SUE'S MIND CHANGIN, FEELIN A LITTLE SORRY FOR JACOB, TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WOLF THINGS AND PHASING BACK. I HOPE EMMETT DOESN'T TEASE EDWARD ABOUT THE ORGASMS (PREVIOUS CHAPTER) THAT WOULDN'T BE COOL. BABY TIME GETTIN CLOSER!!! HEY EVERYONE...VOTE FOR A SEQUEL OR A EXTREMELY LONNGGGGG STORY!!!! IM JUST LOVIN IT TOO MUCH!!!
Author's Response:
Well, I hope you continue to enjoy the banter between them, as well as the story line. Things will get kind of anxious soon, so enjoy the fun while it is still there!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
i have to say a heartfelt thank you!!! this is my favorite story i have reviewed many times, but you deserve kudos for all the update, is this 4 in 2 days??? anyway, thank you and all your readers need to appreciate the fact you update regular and keep us all entertained and sitting on the edge of our seats wanting to know whats going to happen next...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! So glad you keep enjoying the story! I worry about geting boring!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Games
JACOB MESSING WITH THEM IS PRICELESS, WONDER HOW SAM WILL TAKE ALL THIS. IM GLAD SUE N CHARLIE ARE TOGETHER AND CHARLIE WILL KNOW THE LEGENDS. AT LEAST WHEN BELLA IS TURNED SHE CAN STILL SEE CHARLIE!! I HOPE THEY GET VICTORIA SOON, IM READY FOR THAT TO BE OVER AND BABY TIME TO BEGIN AND SEEE IF BELLAS TURNED OR WANTING MORE BABIES!!
Author's Response:
Turned or wanting more babies? think the birth will come off without a hitch, or c section, or will there be suffering involved? It could go so very many ways here!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Fishing
GREAT CHAPTER, AS USUAL!!! COUNTING DOWN TILL BABY TIME, SURELY MASEN CAN HANG ANOTHER WEEK?? I HOPE VICTORIA DOESN'T OVERHEAR ABOUT MASEN BEING BORN IN POSSIBLY A WEEK, WITH THE LATEST RIB BREAK, THE CULLENS MAY BE A LITTLE PREOCCUPIED AND VIC MAY DECIDE TO MAKE HER MOVE????
Author's Response:
Well, that's alot! this coming week will provice lots of answers for you!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Fireworks
GETTING VERY INTERESTING, AS USUAL!!!
Author's Response:
It's about top get REALLY interesting, angsty and tense!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 Encounter
GREAT AS ALWAYS, POOR JACOB.....I KINDA FEEL SORRY FOR VICTORIA AND WHAT SHE HAS COMING FOR HER, NOT!!! LOL!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for always reviewing and telling me the parts of the chapter you liked. It's okay to let me know if you hate some of it as well, I really want to know how each and every thing I write comes across!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Insurance
WOW, I HOPE SAM DOESN'T CAUSE TO MUCH TROUBLE....MAYBE EMILY WILL PUT HIM IN HIS PLACE. IF SHE WON'T BELLA WILL!!!!
Author's Response:
Sam is a brat and he is going to cause LOTS of trouble, in spite of Emily!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
WOW, I THINK EVERYONE READING THIS NEEDS A COLD SHOWER NOW!!! LOL!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! I JUST HOPE JACOB , EMILY AN D SUE AS WELL AS BELLA CAN CONVINCE SAM OF EDWARDS LOVE FOR BELLA. OF COURSE, NOW THAT JACOBS PHASED HE CAN MAKE THE DECISION TO ALLOW HER CHANGE, RIGHT?? NO PROBLEMS THERE, JUST ENDING VICTORIA!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad it came off as HOT! Edward is just so insecure still!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE!!!!
Author's Response:
Your escitement is contageous! I can hardly resist putting another chapter up today!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
ABSOLUTELY, SAM NEEDS TO GET WITH THE PROGRAM. MAYBE SAM AND JACOB COULD HELP "KEEP WATCH" WIT EMMETT AND JASPER WHILE CARLISLE AND EDWARD DELIVER MASEN. THAT WAY SAM AND SUE CAN SEE THAT MASEN WON'T BE A PROBLEM. AND MAYBE EVEN SAM CAN HELP GET RILEY AND VICTORIA, TOO PERFECT HUH???
Author's Response:
Great idea! We have yet to see how Masen will be born . . . there is also Victoria to consider!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85 Queries
STILL WITH YOU...JUST ANXIOUS AS HELL!!!!!
Author's Response:
The roller coaster is just getting going! Raise your hands . . .
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96 Breastfed
great idea...with the stem cell treatment!!! i hope it works!!! masen seems beautiful, like his parents and something tells me bella will want more children..twins maybe??? edward will have a heart attack!! sam....hmmmm, what to do??? great story....great update, what are our chances for two today???? greedy arent we!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 Fire
come on.....that is really mean to leave us like that!!!!
Author's Response:
It's Not!
you know the bad vampires are dead, Edward is alive . . . and someone is seeing a baby!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100 Morning
SAM.....MAYBE KICKING HIM OUT OF THE PACK, GIVING THE ALFA ORDER FOR HIM NOT TO PHASE??? SUE WILL HAVE TO "TESTIFY" TO THE CLUNCIL TO WHAT SHE OBSERVED, SO ITS NOT ALL JAKES DECISION. GLAD ALL IS WELL WITH EDWARDS ARM AND BELLA'S HOOHAH!! CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR SOME OF MASEN'S ANTICS!! AND BELLA'S CHANGE AND IF THERE WILL BE MORE BABIES BEFORE HER CHANGE! LOVIN IT!!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101 Sam
WELL, JAKE AND BREE, NEVER THOUGHT THAT ONE!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS AT THE MEETING!!!! I GUESS BREE WILL KNOIW ABOUT VAMPOS AND WOLVES NOW, AND WITH JAKE SET UP BLACK/SWAN RACING, ALL WILL BE WELL....WON'T IT??
Author's Response:
Black Swan Racing will live! Let's just hope that Emily does!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102 Consequences
SAM....BAN HIM FROM EVER CHANGING TO WOLF FORM!!! TWICE NOW HE HAS NEARLY KILLED EMILY...IF SHE SURVIVES THIS THAT IS. WHAT IF SHE DOESN'T AND SAM ASKS CARLISLE TO CHANGE HER TO SAVE HER!!! THE IRONY..SAM WITH A VAMPIRE!! WILL BELLA'S CHANGE BE SOON..OR WILL THERE BE MORE BABIES???
Author's Response:
Good idea about Sam. Do you REALLY want to know in advance about the other babies?
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103 Reunions
EXCELLENT.....SHE PROBABLY WILL BE PREGNANT AFTER THAT SEZ-A-THON THETY JUST HAD!!! HAS BELLA FORGOT VAMP SPERM, BREASTFEEDING STOPPING THAT??? AND RENEE....OH BOY!!!
Author's Response:
I don't know, Masen is only a little over three weeks old, after all!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106 Realizations
I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT THE PLAN FOR RENEE IS. AND JACOB AND BREE , SHE SHOULD BE LEAVIN, AND ANOTHER BABY, WOW SO MUCH TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!!!
Author's Response:
We will have some Bree and Jacob mixed in with some Sam updates and Charlie and Sue - right now, I'm just excited about an up coming trip they will be taking!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116 Flight
Well, I want a flight like that too!!! Bella needs to be told about once you are changed, waxing once would be it for eternity! Can't wait for the Tanya side of the story to see how she is portrayed!!
Author's Response:
Tanya will be along, but first we are visiting some exciting places and having adventures. Fun before more angst . . . and there will be angst, fair warning!