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Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41563
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: evilAngel Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have to ask what is a painted line and why did it cause her to fall when she stepped on it?



Author's Response:

A painted line is the lines that they paint on streets and in parking lots that tell people where to park, or when they can pass. When dew falls at night or it rains because the lines are paint water collects on them. Bella was wearing flip flops that the tread has been worn out on so when she stepped on the line with her shoes having no tread and the combintion of a little water it created a slick surface which caused her to slip and fall. I have done this more times than I can count. Though usually I do not fall... but... I have been known to fall. I hope this clears this up. Thanks for reviewing!