Reviews by Angelik
I OWN YOU by ALewis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 166]
Summary:

Set a year and a half after Edward left Bella in the woods. She has moved on with her life but all hell breaks loose when Angela turns up missing. Everyone thinks it's a runaway story but Bella knows different. She was kidnapped and by both a human and a vampire. Bella plans to search for Angela with Jessica's help but finds herself in the same fate. In an underground auction house being sold as a play thing to the highest bidding vampire.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 81956 Read Count: 36491
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Carlisle Cullen, submissive?

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Sisters

I'm crazy for more updates Lol.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Justice, vampire style

Seth is being manipulated by Edward? or he's just naive?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thank you to everyone that voted for my Jackson and my Emmett!!!! petersgirl loves ya!!!


THIS AWESOME BANNER WAS CREATED BY ELLIE WOLF. SHE IS SO TALENTED AND A SWEEHEART!!!! A HUGE THANK YOU TO YOU DOLL!!!


A really good friend of mine and a talented artist Megs (Mmismpy09) made this for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Love ya Doll!!!!

 


 

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After Edward leaves Bella is sent to live with her Mom. Phil signed on to another baseball team and they end up in Charming, Ca. Bella learns that it's not only vampires that are dangerous when she meets Jackson Teller, Sons of Anarchy, SAMCRO. Jaxs teaches her a lot about real life. The Cullens want back in her life, but Jaxs is a part of that now and things get complicated. They will be in their true forms of bikers and vampires.

 

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Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159233 Read Count: 29995
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 May 2018
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hi Flor.

Hot and sexy, having sex on a motorcycle ride.

I liked the attitude of Piney get the bike to give JT and Jaxs.

Attitude Jaxs give considerable amounts of dollars to the Quileutes, showed the gratitude of him somehow.

Charlie interfere in the way they did, seemed to be responsible and avoided confrontation when they are at a disadvantage.

Emmett loved little affectionate with Abel, he really likes children. I was sorry for him.

How is Charlie's reaction when he realizes Bella or tell like this really your heart with Jaxs and Emmett. Charlie will realize the good person is Emmett? he truly loves Bella and he does not resemble anything to Edward? and so does Jaxs, that Jaxs is a wonderful person who also loves Bella really? will Charlie give an opinion?

I believe Jaxs is starting to like Emmett, beginning to see how Emmett is excellent person, Emmett must also see how Jaxs is a wonderful person. Do they come to a common denominator, a definitive agreement between the three? I have high hopes, though some are against. Well after all you can not please everyone, "you can not please Greeks and Trojans" haha.

  XOXO I love flower.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow stress. Clay will try to kill her daughter Bella?? This animal has no feelings? I understand that he did not create more ..... urgh is his daughter, blood of his blood. Son of a ....

I support that Jaxs be transformed, to discover that Emmett saved his life several times ..... and learn to share with

Emmett the Bella and live loving the three forever hehe, of course, that Bella is transformed too. And when Jaxs vampire is that he knows the father's murder by the killer Clay and suck it to death hehehe, I'll enjoy sitting in the chairs in the front row hehe.

 

You wanted to know my opinions of the chapter, this is it hehe.

Love them both, for me she gets with both. I can not choose one. That is, YES to Carlisle.

 

Please update fast I look forward to more, His story every day is more addictive and want more and more and more ....

hehe

 

PS. Emmett was damn hot    

^. ^

 

PS. In your profile right next to your name is written (contact) is there that we write to you to get you in writing in our own. It is the MP from here.




Author's Response:

Clay will become a huge problems for Jaxs and Bella. But keep in mind with Bella being blood the gavel is rightfuly hers.............................!!!!!!! It is not only Clay though; you have the vampires coming, Rosalie wanting Emmett back and wanting to kill Bella, going back to Fork with the wolves, oops did I let that slip out (hehe)!!!!!!!   Of course do not forget the biggest pain in ass, Edward.

Clay has many secrects that may surprise you ****wink**** .


It seems that almost everyone feels the same way, both of them should be with Bella. There could be some serious Emmett, Jackson and Bella interaction coming to this story ******wink******wink*******


This has never been my most popular story,MY JOURNEY is. You cannot help but to fall in love with my Peter LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


But I sooooo love writing it. I get lost in it when I do. I many chapters already done. My stories were deleted from FanFiction because the highest rating they have is M (16 years and younger). I was heart broken when they did and I lost my Mojo for a little while. LOL! But I am back now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will keep posting as long as someone wants to read me!!!!!!!!!!!! I just all school girl giddy when I know that it is enjoyed.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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PS Thank you I think Emmett is just a fine piece of vampire.


PSS You can contact me anytime. I love reader interaction and would love to hear from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you sooooooo much for reading me and sending me coffe cups!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved him very much to get your update now full of novelty and flattery to myself lolll. Thanks to the two.

I noticed two jealous (even Emmett). They want it, and the two think it leaves too. The situation is quite controversial. Thankfully, there's no more to add Jacob, hehe. Oh I forgot, is that Edward should be plotting what will make.

Now it is tight with Jacob and Bella Jaxs two vampires. Does Emmett will now appear suddenly or the package?There is Jaxs imagination to discover the secrets smart huh wow.

Now comes the second most important thing after reading giving my opinion ..... when is it expected new update, I'm crazy here, as these three will get out of this??

Kisses and update soon, please.

XOXO




Author's Response:

I just love you!! You make my day.

Emmett and Jackson are fight with each other for Bella. But they are  fighting with themselves too about who is better for her.

There always could be a few more surprise vistors in this story!!!!   Jackson is going to start doing a lot of discoveries over the next couple of chapters. It will get complicated!

I am going to send the next update in a couple of days!

Thank you for wanting to read me and making my day!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love you too sister very much and a little more than that, lol. Thanks for the reminder and praise at the end of the chapter, I rubra * - * I missed you so .....

I hit one of the true hypothesis, the package saved the confrontation, one left ..... more Jaxs Curiouser.

Beautiful bike Jaxs remake of Jacob as a gift.

Jaxs Bella is in love with the sand was hot, haha, more ...... where's Emmett, he did not appear in this chapter, I was feeling in him, snick.

Now that was Jaxs a surprise to discover Clay is the father of Bella was right?

Bella's love and knowing that the two have to choose one, making her want to escape this choice is finding it unworthy of the two right? Now I ask, if each of them to stay without it they will like? like, they have to think of it this way, since they last go thinking too much about it right I believe that none of them want to be without it, then they have to see each of your side. And there may come to a common denominator for both stay with it, eh. Like the idea?

Now changing the subject ... as the blonde knew he wanted to Emmett's bike? Edward has already arrived and told her what he wanted? And if Edward has returned may find this a chance to get rid of Jaxs once to get closer to Bella. I'm going crazy here both burn my neurons with assumptions, Lol KKK

PS. Please update soon soon, but without delay. XOXO

PS2. I loved the heap and a little more, the picture of the beautiful Jaxs, the answer to my last review. Sister you live in my heart, XOXO




Author's Response:

Yes Jackson is going to very surprised that Clay is Bellas father. But Bella is going to have to deal with the aftermath of that.

The blond is Rosalie and we will see why in the next chapter that she knew. Of course that wasnt what she was supposed to have done!

Our boy Emmett will be back in this next chapter and the hate that he and Jaxs have will come out!

The time is coming closer for Bella to have to decide which man to walk beside and who is more in her heart. You cannot do justis to two men at the same time no matter how hard you try!!!!

I will update as soon as I can. But I must give my Peter, Jasper  and Paul some love too LOL!

 

P.S. I love ya sister and peace til next ttime.  I hope that you enjoy this one just as much!!!!!

 

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow that was red again ^. ^ (Laughs). I am very shy with his flattery. I am very grateful for making me this affection, loved, really, you're a sweetheart. You know I'm here every day looking for their atualizaão and when I find I'm laughing happily, this latest update caught me off guard, was a huge surprise that the most pleasant, grateful.

As for the update, I understand how it feels to find Jaxs Bella biological daughter of Clay and a police officer legally because she should have told him. The more he got to hear her side, not condemning out without hearing the other party and that goes for Jacob too.

Now if I have to choose one the hard way (difficult, I still think you could twist the story a little and leave it with them, whatever the three live together, still could work, laughs * - *), I have nescessáriamente do an analysis without involving many feelings, or just involve feelings, messed?

It's like, Jaxs is beautiful, blonde, caring, biker (men love blondes, bikers, bike until I've had some time ago to run them love, laughter), half-macho and possessive, over the life he leads might make him die sooner sooner, perhaps she'll die early in life, or become a widow with children to leave the club without power, as once inside you can not get out. You still have the fact that Charles could not see and still be at risk of life without knowing just by being a cop.

On the other hand we have a vampire in love, very loving, friend, protector, playful, with a body that our hot even (oh that ABS), which would do anything for her without charge, (he never charged, he was upset because she relations with Jaxs because she said she would stay with him and they would leave together, but never was jealous sexist) Okay there problems if she does not intend to be transformed, the more she thinks about becoming a vampire, I think that he Emmett my choice. He is the best option, I'm with him and do not open.

Voi send something to your email if you let me direct my e-mail, please read and then answer me if you like it or not.

Again, I am happy and grateful for the very pleasant surprise for another update this week, you made my weekend lol. I love you sister, you know who lives in my heart. XOXO




Author's Response:

I posted the last chapter with you in mind and I am the next one as well is for you Darlin!!!!

I wanted to post it before I respond to your email (I did'nt want to give any secrects away ***wink***wink***)

I plan it being on here tonight or in the morning!!!

It is hard to decide between Emmett and Jackson. They both love her so much and would give their life for her. But they each have a bad side too!! Pluses and minues, but then again we all have them!

You brought up an excellent point with Charlie! Bella is putting her father at risk by being with Jaxs as an outlaw because he is a cop and they will come after him!! Emmett and the vampires are putting Charlie at risk because they will come for him anytime that they come after Bella.

I get just as excited when you read me and thank you soooooo much for making my day!!

Jackson is such a bad boy that he is sooo hot. Emmett is such a cooool piece of vampire!

This is one of my favorite pictures of Emmett, so I hope you enjoy it!

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hi dear sister. If the last update had been a surprise and this most welcome and pleasant driving me in ecstasy, then the third, and surprising me in the "Parthenon of Mount Olympus" way up high in the clouds (laughs). I confess that I melted by his praise again >.< (I think I look like a tomato ~.~ Lol). You're a love and I love you very much.

Glad you liked the e-mail, was a little insecure u.u

I think Gemma should get Jaxs complete contempt and perhaps isolation '-'

Already Clay .... I have some ideas I had better not expose to be very black. ô.-

I liked the brothers for supporting Jaxs, plus they can not download the quarda. So is the querra. What to do about the Cullens as it has more than one querra to blow in their face .... I'm excited here lol, I'll burst with curiosity to know more oh my god me calm lol.

And what's the story of Billy say that Bella goes with Jaxs, he turned witch or shaman now, he that falls so yes. Ô.o

PS. Honey I forgot to tell each chapter has indicated that this story the best Super Natural History / Fantasy, voted again and again, if you depend on me has deservedly won * - *

Again loved their surprises and lots of affection, you know you're tattooed on my heart sister love. XOXO




Author's Response:

I have been on vaction this week and I am going to respond to your email.

I love reader interaction and you never need to be insecure about talking to me.

Jackson is going to go to his dark place because of Clay. I am a little nervious myself about writing that.

Billy is wise beyond his years. A lot of things have to play out with Jackson, Bella and Emmett.

Thank you for voting for this story. I feel like it belongs to all of us and you guys are just as much a part of it as I am.

SEND YOU SOOOO MUCH LOVE BACK!!!!!!

 

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hi dear it was hot, sweet messy and erotic with Emmett hmm (laughs). Abel is too small to injure, he forgets that age if she Bella  go. Head Jaxs works best with Bella. As I said (laughs), she gets both.

I'll be honest, whatever you decide I sign below as the two are a delight (laughs), I read and enjoy the same.

PS. Dear need not answer the e-mail if you're out of time, I'm fine with that. 

PS2. As for Clay and his coterie, Jaxs can send them to greet the devil that is of good size. Just let live Jaxs please.

XOXO



Author's Response:

I think you and I are thinking the same way sister BOTH!!!!!

Jaxs is getting ready to do some bad things to Clay!!!

Your such a sweet heart and I love you bunches!!!!! HUGE HUGS AND KISSES!!!!!

 

P.S.   LOVED THE PICTURES THAT YOU SENT ME!!!..................................YUMMY!!!!!

 

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

As I thought, Jaxs need it, hit a shot lol.

Rose and Edward (Is difficult love that your Edward, is a bastard, bastard, and other adjectives that are not listed now), you deserve a lesson all over Cullen Peter and women. Perhaps merit depending on the course of history are being destroyed by Voltures to be involved directly or indirectly in the creation of an army of vampires "newly created". Well you've finished the chapter of Bella Emmett chasing after learning that Rose made r03;r03;ready for Bella, so I assume that he is invading the land of the Wolves since they believe that Bella is there and if so it will break the treaty? Another thing, when Rose is there with Edward she thinks about killing Bella finding Edward cheating, the more it is mind reader, he must have heard of her head right??

And now we wonder "Children of Anarchy," Lol fantastic idea. I hope that Clay is Good bad guy who deserves it urght. Already thought the "couple King and Queen ... Wow, (laughs).

Girl I'm here doing much more than guesswork and anxiety for this trio. Sister update soon please.

PS. I loved the photo with Abel and Jaxs sister.

XOXO




Author's Response:

HEY DOLL!!!!

You have already read this chapter on FanFic. But I have a new chapter that I will be posting today just for you!!!!! I can never send you enough love, hell from all of us Emmett, Jackson and petersgirl XOXOXOXOXOX

You never know the childern of Anarchy may just happen ***wink***

LOVES YA BUNCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love your story, very loved little agreement made r03;r03;between the two men of Bella, the beautiful they undress egos to be with Bella without losing it, very beautiful, CONGRATULATIONS. I thought the scene of the trio very well written, good size, very warm without being vulgar, PERFECT hehe.

Clay is asking to die with me that Clay and I will not be waiting long to be served.

PS: I had to leave my message here too, hehe.

Have you voted for your story to confirm the winner, hehe.

XOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

HeyDoll,

Thank you sweets for coming by here and leaving me a review too. I think I am as much of a fan of Angelik as you are of Hot Harley. I am glad that you liked the trio because I was a little neverous. That is the first on that I have written and I didn't want it to come across dirty. That is not how I see Bella, Jackson and Emmett together.

 

XOXOXOXOXOXO

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Charlie put Bella loved above all as a true father should be. I was surprised and happy with his attitude.

Hmm, Jasper studying feelings Jaxs to know the true level of discomfort with Bella Emmett?

Waiting anxiously for more updates on this breaking point of the story hahaha. XOXO

PS: I had to move here too (laughs).



Author's Response:

Hey Doll,

I love you sooooo much. Charlie is a bad ass in his own way and a loving father too!! You are too good to me girl!!

LOVE YA!!!

XOXOXOXOXO

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Cast Off's by Sassymami Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 163]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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It’s been ten years since them. Her parents are dead because of their loose end, but she has moved on with her life. Still dealing with the supernatural in a daily basis but she never thought she would hear from them again so soon. Now two of the Cullen men need her assistant but only one wants more. Will she let them in her life again or cast them off like they did her. Hum/Vamp—Jas/Belle

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Read & Enjoyed, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56116 Read Count: 47263
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved your story. The poor thing Carlisle, horn and did not even know

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The surprise was for both, hehe


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

More surprises. I mean Bella is the companion Jasper, wow. I think it will give the talk eh. More and woe, Edward does not feel anything for Bella? in its history Edwrad only distracted with Bella and not to love?


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well over a cuckolded .... just that this was to hide who the true companion. Well over Alice loves Jasper although not a true companion. He did not think about it right. And by the way Jasper had no love for Alice, only lived with her distracted right? because he wants to part with hate it without even looking back without even knowing if Bella is alive or not ...... and all this in the face of Edward. Edward has nothing to say about Jasper to be the companion, like, he has some feelings for Bella?

Bella did not realize that  Jasper Whitlock, Jasper Cullen and even Alice.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I like to be the family of Peter Bella, also liked that she has more living relatives than Peter.

I think Carlisle found her mate in Bella's friend and business partner.

Alice has secrets to hide the truth because they do not want to miss Jasper. I think Alice is not bad if it were I think Carlisle would not tell the phone to the lawyer knew he would find Bella. Even if she had not seen Bella there she told Carlisle that omitted the Jasper Bella was his companion and told the Jasper too. I think only his love for Jasper who was blinded her to be honest.




Author's Response:

If i understood your review corretly... Alice did not know where Bella was when she gave Carlisle the phone number to Jenks. She gave him the number because it was a new number not the old one that Jasper had, also it had something to do with Cassie. Alice knew that something would have happend once Carlisle called but nothing related to Bella, she didnt even know that Jenks was dead or had a new partnership.

Thanks for reading and reviwing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Finally fed up Bella snaps from her Zombie State, she goes to the Volturi in seek of help to kill Victoria and to protect all those she loves... But she finds love in an unlikely person, a grandfather she has never met, littered with scars and a life with Immortality. Caius/Bella, Ra: M

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Unyielding Series, Cruel King and Clumsy Human
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 24029
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think for her it he will recover and be a vampire better than has been hitherto.

Now that I'm very much and it is curious to know who this woman is old store in Florence. Yes, because it does not look human at all, is that she is a witch?

There's one more question, if Marcus told Bella to be his descendant, then it is what Peter, he or she is a descendant of the mother's side and not the father, if so .... looks alone would be a descendant of two vampires, Marcus by Peter and his mother by her father's side. You could answer me, or explain in a moment in the history of the line of descent Bella arising Marcus?

I'll be awaiting your answers to my questions. Please update real quick I'm super mega curious (laughs). XOXO


Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hehe I loved his explanation, but ....... it is very healing. Could put more words?




Author's Response:

I'm doing 90 to 110 words per chapter, though a few have hit 125. Maybe if it bugs u, you could wait a few days and then read like 10 or so all at once.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow loved hehe, I want more, more ..... you give us very little, the story is great but you give us a few words lol




Author's Response:

thats a drabble for u!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

I take that back, I loved your story ......... after discovering he was a vampire who is a Sun .... hmmm I am more than passionate about his story (of course, unfortunate that few words in each chapter is a more short Drabble, and very short anyway, so will have to take what they do anyway, hehe). XOXO




Author's Response:

yes, but u'll get about 300 words a day :)

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131971
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Anyway the first kiss, kiss (laughs). Does Emmett managed to break the ice queen Winter Rose (laughs).

Jasper is inconvenient ufff.

Too bad we only update on Fridays.

 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

He's even being a father to her.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Surely her sister is fighting for Bella to be too young to marry him (sister very pre-conceituosa).


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Esme is 14 years difference from Carlisle to get it right, right? so what is the problem of hiding the fact that Edward is married to a teenager of 18 years apart? I'm 12 years younger than my husband and give. As "Jacob" age is just a number.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Cats rocked the structures of Edward (laughs) ^. ^


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward has to relax and stop being biased ages. He feels an old

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He is trying (laughs).


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Who knew Charlotte lead singer with the voice better than Annette hummmm (laughs). But Edward will continue giving this order as if it were her father, he has to start acting like husband and stop this thing from age difference between them. You're a sweetheart. XOXO


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm curious what will be what happened with the parents he does not like talking??


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She is doing very well and it is proving very mature for her age, does he see it that way? The Tanya by the way that pre-see, it will still create many problems for her. And because Rosalie not like Bella's grace, I do not understand.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This Edward is looking older than his age AFFF


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

She is embarrassing him? he's too shy? this difficult as well (laughs).


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved, agree on the anniversary so it is nice to win a car and then .... this is to be more than happy.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Frosty is framing Bella. I think it took up.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That bitch, she wants to kill Bella is to be with a man she does not know ... it is what ...... psychopath?

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I did not think this day would never come, the Rose of acknowledging his mistakes. Even though Edward is well and that Tania is behind bars, uff, this was a little that they did not die. I wonder, will he heard her declare that she loved him?

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This chapter was kind of nostalgic and sleeping pills, lol. I hope the next, only pen that will take a week aff do something to distract me there. kisses


Reviewer: Angelik Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

After the storm comes the calm. I liked them decide to get married in church, now would be the true marriage that they both want to be married. Before it was to save her from a cruel fate. Beautiful :)


Voices by coloradoperson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Emotional abuse scars the heart and damages the soul.  The wounds to the spirit are not visible.  No woman walking down the aisle believes she will wake up next to an abusive husband one day.  Bella didn’t.  Jake was everything she wanted, everything she needed. He offered her that perfect love she had been looking for.  She thought she knew him.  She thought he adored her.  She was wrong.  

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12662 Read Count: 10627
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Perfectly content and clueless...

You know, I thought that it was just waiting for it to arrive. I liked it, I think both this story has everything to go right, but I have a feeling that beyond going through all that this relationship will represent it, that Jacob will still appear in their lives, either in the form of illusions and then later it personally .... I think.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: I take it all back...

"I smiled and winked at him and wiped that smirk right off of his face." Nemesis, but I think that seven years from now we will have a revenge of Jacob.


 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: I remember now...

Que bom que ela conseguiu apóio, tem muitas pessoas que infelizmente não alcançam esse apóio.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: He adores me...

His story seems very good and sheds some light on what happens in many homes. Congratulations on your focus.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: I meet my husband...

She should listen more to her inner voice and your friends that friends are those who truly gostão us.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Lost...

I think she needs medical treatment, will any friend or friend of hers, like Angela, do not talk to her that she needs medical help ....


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: It isn't easy being free...

She needs psychological treatment


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Please open the door....

I've never experienced that but I've read about and learned from reading people like her who have experienced this difficulty believing in people to a loving relationship again, have to give it time. Although in her case it was who saved her, so she trusts may be faster.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Whispers...

It is I who thank you for this beautiful story that shows the struggle, perseverance and hope to women who were crushed by unscrupulous men, real monsters, but unfortunately in our society. I'll be keeping an eye on his new story. XOXO

Under Glass by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Edward was facing financial ruin, when he received a call from his reclusive Uncle Aro who he hadn’t seen since childhood. His uncle is dying and wants to leave his only nephew his fortune, but is the price tag too high?  Rated  M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7303 Read Count: 1883
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 22 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, wonderful even. And the ego, passion is not returned, jealousy, greed, the same sense of ownership, a new pisicopata. Yes we have a new lover in Edward's beautiful dancer who still dreams of returning home and her fiance. Just a lover of this difference to the previous one, it will want more than just watch, which only enjoy her dance for him, this will also want the woman behind the perfect dancer. And with the guarantee that was already recognized pisicopata hired, jailer, plus the gunman Demetrius such doctor and servant to continue to take care of the artwork in the tower.

I can not wait for more, I know there's plenty of time in your busy life to pass on a bit of your imagination in the form of chapters, you have a mind as dark and twisted the way I like to read hehe, you will not get be sure not to write (laughs). XOXO

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on Bella's pov. Dark and twisted is what I do best.

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

3up

A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222337
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

Wow is an interesting bar hmmm

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

still like

You own me, master by wendy1969 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 47]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Beautiful Banner moved to chapter 1 comply with Google requirements

 

"Oh B, He may be a Dom, but he is of Southern blood bred. he has had manners bred in to him. he clearly has a sense of respect, love, politeness. and clearly a sense of understanding and patience as well, B."

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46828 Read Count: 19377
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked its beginning, is welcome.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

I am a nervous wreck at times because the one person who is involved in that lifestyle or whatever it is called. she is a wonderful person, but has been sick and busy so therefore i do not have the assist i need with knowledge of this world. So i am trying my best and only hope you all understand and enjoy it

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jasper is a kind of awe for Don (laughs). But I think that approving its Sub.



Author's Response:

Umm, I wasn't too sure how to take the review. NO OFFENCE MEANT TO YOU AT ALL. TOTALLY NONE MEANT.

But i could not understand it. With the name Don, did you mean Dom as in dominant? and coudl you possibly explain the review. Yeah, i know. I sound daft as plain flour. It has been one of those weeks so far. so sorry darl

 

BUT i am glad you are enjoying the story and that is all that counts.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi sorry for disappearing, I forgot to put the story to your favorites, then I have not received the e-mail to read, and I suspected I was searching and found today.

As for the chapter, the fact that she spoke to answer what Emmett on the driver shows that it is not as submissive as well hehe, I believe that Jasper will end up picking up where she was living with him and will not like. Other than that, I want to see how it will do to take your v-card hehe. XOXO

 



Author's Response:

Well, lets see...

He said the driver is to help and she is in charge until he either pick them up or they drive home to him. So she was within her limits set by her master. Also, she rang him to make sure of it and report the incident. Don't worry, i hear Vegas in the city for all things to happen

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well peaceful change. She works out and it paid?




Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing this. I very much appreciate it.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have no idea how to help you. But I think we start with punishment without explaining or debating point by point each item of the rules in which the two agree. For someone who is lay on the subject (only concepts) and virgin as Bella is supposed to be traumatic., I think.




Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Angelik Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm confused ...... she'll be in a BDSM relationship and remain a virgin??




Author's Response:

No, as the story goes along he slowly and surely introduces her to that part of it. But she also doesnt stay a virgin. Master Jasper believes as a man and a Southern man at that he is going to make sure it is not done in a play room and she will decide if she wants to do it while away or not. Keep reading, it will get better.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well now she is legally his.




Author's Response:

Yes, she is. She is damn lucky too, many of us wish for it. lol

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I thought he is a gentleman with her. In the hotel of the trip is for the sofa bed and the other one in bed??




Author's Response:

 

In the hotel of the trip is for the sofa bed and the other one in bed??

I am not sure i understand what you are asking me. It is somewhat... unclear, for lack of a better descriptive.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Is it deserves its own chapter. But is the jet? I noticed that since the last chapter and this chapter here, he speaks and thinks he will be the first and only to have her, he is showing the possessive side of the southern man he is.

Please update soon.




Author's Response:

If your sub wants to play with whats in the bag and the plane has a sleeping area, then why not. it is only a game they are playing after all.

 

god bless and goodbye

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmmm this game tune (laughs).




Author's Response:

Umm, this will sound dumb, but what did thatmean. 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The Master is falling fast for your Sub (laughs). Glad it went well in the V-card goodbye. Now the Master will stop suffering in the bathroom (laughs).




Author's Response:

Yes. The poor mn was suffering somewhat. But i do hoep it reads right for everyone. It isnt easy and i am trying to do as much research as i can in to this. But spoken from a sub on what should or could be in the story would be preferred. Oh well, such is life. I do hope you do not hang me when i do the next chapter. her past comes back to haunt her after there meeting master Jasper has to attend.

Summary:

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Prologue

 

I can't remember a thing about my childhood-my mother, where we lived, or anything. Until this moment sitting here in the hospital watching my father wither away. All I know is that we were driving down the road in our car, that car that we spent most of my life in moving from place to place never staying more than a few months in any one place, sometimes even shorter. I never got any answers to my questions about this constant obsession with moving but something about it always made me wonder what my father was trying so hard to protect me from. But as he lies before me dying I knew that this would be the day I would finally leave the truth.

 

All I did was stare at him as he whispered hoarsely to me, "Remember all I have taught you Bella, many changes are coming."

 

With tears streaming down my face I had to draw in a deep breath before I could answer him, "I am not a child now; I don't need to be protected anymore."

 

As he took his last breath in this world his final words shocked me to the core..."Bella no this is to protect the world from you."


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9137 Read Count: 2020
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really curious here lol. She cited a hunger to be strange. The man seems to be Edward'm not sure. If the man spoke it right inside her head? And as he knew she would be here with his father? They were following her and her father and was for this reason that they lived in cities running from cities?




Author's Response:

I really want to answer your questions BUT the answers will all reveal themselves in the next chapters.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It is equal to Rennesme hybrid, hmmm. Updates soon, I liked.


Author's Response:

This story is one I stared a while ago but I am up to where I left up but update soon I promise ;)

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He is afraid? I understand that she will be the new hybrid form, perhaps with thirst of blood out of the ordinary like a newborn. What this could affect their relationship two?

Please update quickly, I'm addicted to your story.



Author's Response:

Because they are both half-breeds technically there is still blood in both of their bodies, she could easily turn on him and being a newborn............update before end of week I promise!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward has to stay very concentrated not to yield to the call of Bella. It is your companion? They are only two or the rest of the Cullens entered the story? Let us know who is and who her father is the father of him? Flower I'm really addicted to your story lol. Please update soon.




Author's Response:

At this time, Bella and Edward are the only ones at the Cullen house but other characters will slowly start to appear.  Remember that Edward is being fiercely protective of her before, during and after her change.  Update coming tomorrow.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Having sexual relations is forgotten altogether or greatly reduce the pain, then it's worth as both belong to the same.




Author's Response:

IF that is what they decide to do.....

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hi I was missing you and your story.

I'm curious to know who is this vision that makes Alice and the others have returned ahead of time ....

Please pray that take less from your updates and your guilt is divinely writing that leaves readers wanting more hehe.

I ask please that take less time between your updates and your guilt is divinely writing that leaves readers wanting more hehe.




Author's Response:

I am glad to see you are still following and I am sorry.  Had a few issues come up and my writing suffered for it but I wont make you wait so long.  This story is my first and I cant wait to show you more and more.  The vision will be revealed in the new chapter.  I like to leave off each chapter with making you wonder and want more.  Its my thing, I do it with all my stories.

 

Thanks for the compliment, I love making you want more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

cc

 

In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248525
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

I loved your story. I put in favorites. Update more please.



Author's Response:

More to follow soon :D xxx

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before

Great start, sensational hehe, already put in well-deserved favorite.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One

Wow I love your story.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Year One, Day Two

Increasingly interested in history.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three

He wants to pave the way leaving her feeling and study more about what are all the toys before getting in her life?

A year without being able to communicate with it ......

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap

Lost its history.

They had a tough year away from each other.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Year Two; Day One

I like this story. I like the way you pass the lifestyle it for her. I like how he feels possessive unwittingly share it. I like how she begins to learn about it. I like how they have to learn how going forward will follow this for two or four. I especially like that you have returned to write this I love.

Loved his return xoxo

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked your story with Bella in various forms of cats. Update more soon.


Tainted by Daphodill Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Bella and Edward thought they were on their path to their perfect forever. Their new life has been fractured and forever marred at the whim of a madman. Aro wasn't the only one with his sights set on creating a super-race. So much for happily ever after... Lots more mutants in this story. Planning to update weekly.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, X-Men, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48156 Read Count: 3943
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2012 Updated: 03 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm loving your story.



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They are right in not liking Aro alive to plan mischief again. I hope you can bring Edward back without damage to this.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aro continues up to, Lol

Reviewer: Angelik Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aro failed. That someone could not deceive Edward. I cheer for Edward.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Mystique will be fooled again. She has to focus on what she wanted to give back and so on Azazel and she deceived him.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I liked the Gambit input to help Bella although much of what he said I could not understand, translate. Yes, because I'm not American and English is not my own language. Southern dialects I can not read, translate very well. I'm sorry.



Author's Response: I'm sorry about that. I went back and forth on using the dialect or not. I grew up in coastal South Carolina and spent many a summer on the Gulf Coast with relatives, so this kind of talk is like a second language to me. Here's a list of translations: Chapter 6: -Cher is a pet name like love, darling, or sweetheart. -Cap is a pet name like pal, chief, boss, buddy. -If not fer yeh, Rogue would still be wit' me,: If not for you, Rogue would still be with me. -Yeh dawtah, eh Wolverine? So, cher, who's yeh ma: Your daughter, hey Wolverine? So, darling, who is your mother. -Can we git outta dis here metal cave, cher? I'll tell yeh what I know. Got a feelin' dat yeh'll git at de information anyways: Can we get out of this here metal cave, darling. I'll tell you what I know. Got a feeling that you'll get at the information anyway. -Lead da way, Cap: Lead the way, pal. -Now, cher. 'splain ta ole Remy what's got yeh so vexed: Now, darling. Explain to old Remmy what has got you so upset. -Yeh husband, eh cher? How long yeh been hitched: Your husband, huh darling? How long have you been married? -What dem vamps want wit 'im anyways?: What do those vamps want with him anyway? -Well I'll be...I knew dey was tryin' fer breedin' but twernt none controlled enough. How yeh wit a vamp an' he not drain yeh, cher?: I knew they were trying for breeding but none were controlled enough. How are you with a vampire and he didn't drain you, darling. **twernt is "there were not" all mashed together** - Tis alright, cher. Calm down, I'll help yeh. I think I know where Rogue is. Tis just a matta of gettin' dere: It's all right, darling. Calm down. I'll help you. I think I know where Rogue is. It is just a matter of getting there. -Jaysus, cher, yeh's mighty strong, an' fast.: Jesus, darling, you are mightly strong, and fast. That's it for Chapter 6. Thank you so much for taking the journey with me. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I loved the escape of Gambit. Aro wants the impossible, vampires with the powers of mutants. Well some vampires have power similar to mutants like Edward, Alice, Jasper vampires and other types of the final film in the Twilight Saga. More Aro wants to be able to get the various mutants that are not few and turn everyone into vampires to live forever serving him like Jane and company Volterra.

Watched's attention because Aro wants Edward. It is the only vampire who can have sex with humans without these suck dry. And Aro found that so they can have children with hybrid type mutant powers, like Rennesme the real story of Saga. Aro this smart, yet well worth it not good luck, haha.

His story is getting better, please update soon without delay.



Author's Response: Aro won't give up, that's for sure. He's crazy, but I love him! Aro wants Edward, more than just to impregnate mutant women. But, he has to learn how to get Edward to do his bidding. Edward is smart, but young and naive a lot of times. And, he's emotional. Sometimes he's easy to handle, other times he's not. Aro is looking for the right combination of talents needed to keep Edward under his control. You'll learn more in the next chapter. I'm almost finished with it and will post soon. Here are the translations for Chapter 7: -why dey ain't take yeh too?: why didn't they take you too? -Well shii, darlin'. Why yeh didna jus end it when y'all was dere befo? I 'ont git it. Ifin I had the chance again...I'd blow dat fuckin' castle sky high and char dose red-eyed bastards. Da whole lot of 'em: Well shit, darling. Why didn't you just end it when you all were there before? I don't get it. If I had the chance again...I'd blow that fucking castle sky high and burn those red-eyed bastards. All of them. -I was dere befo, in Volterra. I like to stay on da move, yeh know,” he shrugged. “I was lookin' fer sumtin. After Rogue come back heya...: I was there before, in Volterra. I like to stay on the move, you know. I was looking for something. After Rogue came back here... -Do yeh really need all da extre security,: Do you really need all the extra security -“Whaddaya wont wit meh: What do you want with me -What're yeh?: what are you? -A tin can...dey don know shii,: A tin can...they don't know shit, -Why? Whatchu wont wit meh?: Why? What do you want with me? -Dat's all well an' good, Cap, but what's da catch? What are yeh?: That's fine, pal, but what is the catch? What are you? Thanks for the consistent input. I really appreciate the feedback!

The Beast by AnImaginary Mann Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

beast

A story about corrupted innocence and the human monsters that surround us all.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6088 Read Count: 1636
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2012 Updated: 16 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Coveted Angel

Well, I see in his writings as a beast was coming up and taking a weak mind to undo what was left of humanity into being imperfect.

Although human beings are flawed and that being upset that lives under rules and dictates that he has created over the existence of mankind told in the history of the earth. And a mind that was born the faulty tendency is to bend until they completely wear.

This saw is in a completely twisted pleasure in destroying something pure and undefiled so sublime that you took what little sanity. Doubly the bestial being a blood brother and that only by being more twisted brother felt about.

You know, you're brilliant. I'm thinking here that the exercise was to see you in the mind of a twisted beast so .....

And I wonder how difficult it must have been after this beast exorcise his mind to finish the story.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Lost Angel

Well it looks like another monster came near the child. This time it strange that someone tricked her mother a wolf in sheep's clothing like the first one that has infiltrated probably with ulterior motives.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: An Angry Angel

Well he became the medium that he used both. Will he get any worse than his brother. A twisted monster?

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: A Broken Angel

Jasper all these years that pass not lose hope of having his brother! It gets a twisted greater as time passes.

Well an Edward already suffered, and seems disgusted becoming twisted ........ hopefully different from Jasper.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: A Corrupted Angel

Edward became a twisted equal Brother, that is sad.

I think the sad fact that he was raped by her brother, stepfather used by, used, raped beaten by colleagues, was retained by the institution in its aggressiveness in defending a world that insisted on hurting and hurting every step he took. An oasis of peace when in love with Mike and envy of those who were around her lost love. He tried to be like the dictates of society dictated that he himself raping a marriage that was doomed from the start.

And after going through all this, he had within it the seed of the monster as his brother predicted?

I think differently, who was his father? will this anomaly between these two brothers is genetic? may be by father or mother more external situations in life that ended the two shaping these twisted beings. I think just what his brother did to him in childhood would not be the answer if there was not already a predisposition in their minds. My opinion of course.


Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Beasts

I liked the end, he recognized the beast within himself and had the strength to make himself get locked up in jail but has killed the brother who in my opinion was not the only one guilty of

Your inner monster exist and agree. Although Jasper dead prevented him being released from jail and hurt another child as he wrote in the letter to Edward that he would seek another child: "You know it will be a long time before I get out of here ... A long time before I can find another boy to love ... "



Author's Response:

Thank you for all of your reviews.

Writing this story was a difficult and emotional journey. I didn't enjoy a single moment of it - rest assured of that. A considerable amount of child molesters were abused as children - I always wondered why that happens. That's the premise of this story - trying to imagine how someone who was hurt ends up doing the same to another child. That's the route of Edward's bestiality. I didn't want to write him as an irredimiable character, therefore I chose to give him a shred of decency - that's why he puts himself away from society and kills Jasper before he can hurt anyone else.

I know it's a difficult story and I appreciate how much thought you put in our opinions.

Destined Mates by jukie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella finds out that she is destined to be with Carlisle as his mate.  See what happens as she and Carlisle get together and their family.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 669 Read Count: 909
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2013 Updated: 18 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: How it Started

need more updates :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Stupid Jacob

Wow great start. I'm enjoying your story. If you have a certain day of the week to update please let me know so I do not miss. 



Author's Response:

I will try but I have two adolescents and a hubby so you can understand that family distractions might get in the way.  Thanks for the reviews you should try to write yourself.

Jukie

New Found Desires by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Bella comes out of an abusive arranged marriage to James with the help of her Neighbor Edward who gives her a place to stay, she soon feels more than friendship towards him and when she finds out that him and his family live a BDSM/ Gorean lifestyle she starts to have more and more desires she didn't know she could have as she learns more about this lifestyle, But will it work and can she get over her past to embrace her feelings? find out in New Found Desires!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41875 Read Count: 13988
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2013 Updated: 22 Feb 2023
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: New Found Desires

The research that made r03;r03;this lifestyle, they say that these things are conversadas allergies and illnesses before they commit to D /s if they did not have this conversation.

The detail of Edward being blackmailed for money for some adventurous he can solve with a contract of secrecy within the relationship so that whoever could not blackmail about being trapped by the contract sitado.

Please upgrade but soon without delay.




Author's Response:

I no he could have solved it, that's way he didn't lose anything, but he was also young and foolish back in his youth. And that are sort of bumbling along on this on and my bells is used to not taking about herself very much and seeing as they never had anything that she needed to say anything before the subject never came up like in the real world, important things just sometimes never come up. Plus my world of D/s relationships is based on the fact that it's so much more than what one learns simply by reading books or the Internet and can only find out if they themselves live this lifestyle or have friends who are in it. My friends have no contract and they are more than casual or permanent play partners as they are engaged to be married and this is something that even within this lifestyle isn't common. Hope this answers that for at least my story, in RL everyone has his or her own perceptions of this lifestyle.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: How it starts

Honey I'm addicted to the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I was a little nervous about posting this, but I am glad I did now. Wasn't expecting so many to like and read it so quick.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Edwards Return home

What love. Edward is so dominant and loving.

D / s, slave? 'm learning haha.



Author's Response:

Yeah I have always been wanting to write this story as I have had an interest in that kind of lifestyle and coming from what I have in my life there is a lot of the different aspects that intrigue me, a few of my friends live this kind of lifestyle and it is nothing like what most people think at all. There is a lot of trust involved. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: New Found Desires

Hi I understand your answer. When I left the last review was with good intention, was thinking of giving the idea of helping secrecy agreement (when the Dom and rich, successful or famous) and normal use in relation to D/s but the contract between the limits a Dom and a sub. I apologize if I offended you for having me meddling in its history had no intention of editing for you.

Regarding the spelling errors cited by two reviewers, I believe it should not be that much. I'm from another country, who speaks Portuguese and use the google translator to translate everything that I read in English by thoroughly enjoy reading fanfic and not knowing how to read well in English. And I'm not having trouble translating anything I read your chapters. When there is no error translates the word, it keeps the way it was written without being able to be translated. So believe are making a storm which has not.

Well, what I want you to understand that writing here with all that and not want to be without your story because of selfish people who think that pixarem stories of others can do it, that the writer stop writing or worse, ask that if someone knows a Beta (which may even be herself). Do not believe them and if you choose to go without Beta, can upgrade anyway, as my translator continues to translate his writings very well. XOXO




Author's Response:

I know about contracts and such, but I like the side that it is up to the Dom as to whether they want one or not and also you'll find out why the blackmailing didn't work and not because of a contract as such but rather something else that is similar. From what I have learned (and in some cases live myself now) it's about the trust and only if your into things like pain play and such things that I will not got near nor have my characters go through need a contract. 

Just to let you in on a semi secret but this story is some what based on true events of my life in parts and as such this one story is very personal for me, this in a way is my way of showing my partner how much he has meant to me as I cannot always say or do things to let him know of this in real life and I know he reads my stories.

It really is mostly computer issues that have made it full of grammar and spelling mistakes, and google needs a better translator as I have tried to change things into English before and nothing made sense :)

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

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My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112988
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Can I do this?

Promise!

I want more ......

Haha update more in the short term was too short, please enjoy this Lol.

Chameleon by ALewis Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

“But Carlisle we want to meet her now.” Alice whined.
“Does she have to smell like strawberries? It’s almost syrupy sweet.” Rosalie hissed.
“Strawberries and chocolate, and it’s absolutely perfect!!!!!” Edward called out while Emmett and Jasper both nodded their heads.
“Oh she is so adorable my love, is she staying permanently? Please Carlisle?” Esme pleaded.
“I know you want to meet her but like I said on the phone she wanted to meet everyone individually so that she could get a feel for the atmosphere of conflicting personalities. Now I asked that Esme meet her first then Rose and Alice, then the boys. So will you please stop crowding her your behavior could be damaging to her psyche.” Carlisle gently commanded.
They were all in range of my ability and the conflict was weighing on me drastically. They argued for a bit longer and I couldn’t take it any longer. I let a scream escape my mouth then latched on to militant personality of Jasper.
“Freeze all of you. You, you, you and you go away now!” I shouted at the women and Carlisle. “I apologize for my rudeness but I can’t take the conflict right now. I will meet you all later and apologize thoroughly then.” I was seething and needed to eliminate the stress. I felt one of the boys step forward and I raised a hand before speaking. “Don’t move a muscle. I’ll get to you one at a time.” I commanded.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23512 Read Count: 3835
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2013 Updated: 26 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sensational much loved your story and if that line that you are presenting here will be very good to her end and I confess that I am anxious to read more. XOXO

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So we understand the name of the story, brilliant. If I understood Aro thinks Bella is a singer, is that right? then we have three vampires who will want to mate? I think that comes a lot of confusion along the way.

My Savior by caligirl1014 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

Bella lives a hard life with her abusive husband, James. The couple moves to a small town in Texas. There, Bella finds that her green-eyed neighbor saves her in more ways than one. Rated NC-17 for abuse, rape, language, mature themes. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9043 Read Count: 12627
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2013 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Our hero is presented. I said that the attacks would return soon.