The work of Edward is listening? Bella has to think like James attacks he will harm her while she is pregnant and he eventually had attacked his own son.

Alright I'm in favor of it and be happy but stay with Edward James is in the middle of the two and they have to be careful because if James suspects something she's dead.

Quickly update please.

Finally a break but this time without aggression think James should be brief.

I already believed that James had childhood problems by hitting her so much. Now I believe he is totally sick mind.

I think it will help.

They finally signed his bond mate lol ....... 

He bit! And now?? Bella becomes a vampire now? 

Update shortly before my nails cease to exist for both myself biting lol.

I'm very sorry for Bella ...

Self confidence Bella this down ....

I'm surprised Phil let Bella go on a date with a guy at all ...

This courtship seriously getting lol. They must look better to not catch Phil ....

Edward liked to put Tanya in her place ....

Carlisle thinks ahead ... lol

I understand the shame of Bella but she has to think of living in the moment and the only way out is this. She will end up being raped by Phil and Edward will want to kill him.

Wow, went straight to consummate the union requires that the mark without explaining anything to Bella. I do not get anything admired her having these thoughts that is a bitch. Edward has to sit with her and explain everything together with Dr. Cullen. 

And the powers of Bella because she see beyond the aureas she sure has a power of defense against Jacob because he used and threw away the wolf. What power is this? 

Wow, That the Power that Bella was defended herself?

I liked the bit you presented your story ..... I think I'll give you a chance and I'll read for a while , enjoying it I will follow to the end ( if there is one). I want to know the days of your upgrade and the chapters will be more extensive, because that has been presented is negligible small.

In the history understand that Bella found on the family of power an Alice, I wonder if it is the Black or a visiting family, because it predicts the future, has power and can not be a proper servant?

The Cullens know that Blacks mistreat girls? They should do away with these evils and slavery, denounce those responsible for this family who could take action to punish them ...... 

I wonder, will the Cullens take Bella this house, but do not take Nessie? And the other girls saw that for Blacks to be abused? 

Alice must find out fast how to get Bella this house legally. Bella did not really have any power? 

Cool, Edward feeling faint. Will Powers Bella is big and strong that he fainted Edward? Or was he feeling the mark of Bella? Or preceding two together? Thinking to myself, I believe has a part to be a huge brand and another portion that is too much under the power of Bella because he is who fainted and she just could not move!

I believe that he, or his family, is keeping her children. Yes, it has been a month since she does not see the children and was home this time to receive them. Thus children end up forgetting her and thinking she does not want to see them more and come to the father and the father's family, is not fair to the mother. I wonder how he will react when she tells him of pregnancy ......letting her talk to him, he may not want to hear it and be barred by his family or a girlfriend already .....

PS : What days of your upgrade ?

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Bella acted as an avenging her Bella, more Alice, Leah and all other women and girls taken against their will and forced the life of torture and rape. I confess I did not think Bella having stomach to kill his father's monster, I thought she spoke to Leah do this, but Leah was too weakened from mistreatment.

Bella still shared their resources helped Jasper, Leah and Seth because they were not many resources to go far. I wonder if she'll meet with Aro as planned or will follow other way alone, I barely can wait for its sequel, congratulations for the good work. X

Edward drooling haha very good. Well she invited him to dance is that he became dumb right hahaha. Looking forward, I see how long this control will last. 

Hmm Edward do not even know a good entry .... but what I really want is to see how he will react to notice this bunch of teenagers crawling your backyard and living room, even if he notice a high chemical Bella dancing in the middle the room with her sisters and I imagine with the boys watching her ** laughs **. 

Well, she has stored in her bottle of advil a huge cocktail of drugs to addicts would envy. I hope Edward take away it that path wandering. 

PS: What day update? 

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I loved the end of this first part and the second will only read and comment here.

Aro has to be stopped and while there, we will have in the sequel, lol. Thanks for the update. XO

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I kind of like of be Charlie horn dog, lol. Sam almost did Bella become a fright ghost, lol. So sweet couple who stay here thinking it will come some heavy charge against them. X

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Eu me pergunto se era ordens de Edward para desaparecer com Alice ..... tudo é possível.

Você descreveu o gênero da história como drama e romance, você vai virar a história como você virou "Malevolent"? Curious ..... lol. X

PS: Eu tenho o login neste site e em FF, onde você também está postando essa história, mas eu prefiro ler e comentar este site, porque sua história é escuro e trata de estupro e outro site tem trolls que gostam de criticar histórias onde não violência, conteúdo sexual ou escuro. Mas estou amando essa história desde que eu coloquei meus olhos sobre ele e esperamos para ler mais sobre, em breve. XO.

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Bella showed she came to stay when she gave shots and with Donna posture and is good nobody mess with her, lol.

The meeting with Alex was wonderful and will be good for the youngest with problems. The friend of Edward being the first to go to them to show their respects was important to support the couple and recognition of Bella as Donna of the Volturi family.

I hope Jasper grab Aro quickly not giving him the chance to join the James men who will now be his men, also failing to gather more men dissatisfied with the merger of the Volturi x Cullen family and to join the enemies of the Volturi because they feel easier end the family Volturi with Aro of Don than Edward and Bella together.

I loved the affection of Edward when he presented the house he bought for her, worried that she was crying for not liking and wanting to buy another to please your loved one.

Can not wait for more to read * wink *. XOXO

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Aro is hiding and planning, well that Edward is thinking beyond the enemy's strategies. Sweet honeymoon and rough, lol.

They are very focused on controlling the two families and woe to those who stand in their way. Actually it's not just the couple that is taking over the family who are heading in the lead, behind them two has a Michael and Carlisle and each with their right arms men. Aro will face four in direction and not two as he thinks, lol. Can not wait to see them all in action in looking of Aro, discovering the small strategy with Jessica and Mike Newton. To put in place the resistant controls of the new double Dons, lol.

I'm loving its sequel. XO

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I wonder who put Bella naucateada? Alice? Esward? Or was Danny? This friend Jasper talks would be Danny? And different is that Danny? And as well, Bella be the favorite person of Danny? Need very bad answer here .... I'm going with a real headache, lol. X

His story is amazing, but I wonder if Bella is anything but an ordinary human .... so I came after the written  "... I awoke in a cold sweat and swallowed hard the all of the different smells in the small room slammed into me. Blood. fear. Decay ..... " 

If Bella can smell mainly of fear, then it may be that she is more than a human, right? I wonder who is in that room or room scared and bleeding where she woke up hearing what looks like a saw ...... someone is cutting with a saw someone else? If so, that someone being cut is dead or alive? Because her smell fear, thought to be alive and seeing this happen to another that is already dead? Is she in the queue to be killed and cut too? Mal began to read the story and I'm full of questions thousand, lol.

Lovin 'your story :)

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Bella has Aro's gift? to see one's life with a touch?

Edward is right, the little game of Alice and Jasper did not tell Bella whom was her boyfriend, did she not have the right to choose whether she wanted to be a vampire, it seems is what Bella is now a vampire. He was disturbed boyfriend's head that bit?

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I believe that Bella is claustrophobic in the middle of human or vampire is likely males also be this way with wolves males. Carlisle has to enter the Doctor mode and try to understand what's going on with Bella for her to be so paranoid. And Rose should have realized it, she is nesvosa, uncomfortable and with the internal defense trying to attack everyone around her. XD

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Well, after putting the frustrations out, nothing is better than starting to smile. And Edward knows how to distract Bella, sex and juggling, lol.

He and a love, even though vampire and all :)

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Well, that Jacob had to swallow, lol

Bella the vampire drank from you that day and so after he said he was not thirsty, but now he is thirsty again, tahh: P

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She is beginning to disconnect from Jacob, just like Edward said he would, when he proposed to her (the first time) to stay with him XD

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Edward has a special fondness for Bella because her blood sings for him, or because she is his mate? I understood why he looked to Aro not put your hands on Bella because he suspects that Bella is a shield cuz he can not read her mind? :)

PS: I wish you update very soon, because I'm in love for history and love to read Hi

Edward has a special fondness for Bella because her blood sings for him, or because she is his mate? I understood why he looked to Aro not put your hands on Bella because he suspects that Bella is a shield cuz he can not read her mind? :)

PS: I wish you update very soon, because I'm in love for history and love to read more, each line is addictive :)  

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Hmm I am curious type, but now. That Edward is afraid that Bella knows about it? He said in one of the previous updates that he has killed much in the past that he now prefers donations, so what he afraid of? And he's running, I have the impression that he is running away from something or something.

Loved the description of his creation of the character Didyme, you created a beautiful vampire.

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I'm laughing so far hahaha :)

Congratulations, this story was very well crafted, thought to be a vampire all the time to find out to be a vile mosquitoes haha :D

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Bella can look back through the wine drunk because she must feel very bitter lack of maturity in the teenage years. She took what Kate said into account although the traitor pushed and induced to think like she was thinking when she happened to leave because Kate spoke what Bella wanted to hear because Bella was very sulky at the time so she felt comfortable with more someone think like her and can only blame itself and not fully in Kate.

Kate is a good gob, she pitched and betrayed all the time keeping an eye on Edward, as Bella blindly trusted the false friend inducing and putting worms on the head of Bella. 

I'm wondering why Alice decided to be friends with this traitor? If Alice saw it happening and got to be friends with someone like Kate? It makes me think that Alice was not as friendly as Bella thought ...

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Poor Bella, good that she made fast friends and ppde count on Rose and Em.

Well, I do not like exhibitionists that is what James and Vick are.

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Bella you will become more vulnerable, emotionally, to the dangers that are around as James and Emily, you do not have to punish thinking that is helping out away from those who already loves you.

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Well, she did not tell a lie to Edward's wife and him.

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Edward is bitter but he's who knows what has passed since she left. Believe it was betrayed by his love and must have gone through so many more problems obviously with Emily.

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I'm thinking that Emily should be the current wife of Edward and he suffers that marriage should be something that holds it, because if don't there  was it would have been separated, dare I say it should be a son or daughter that holds in marriage. It seems to me that Edward's anger and hurt for Bella increased the passing of 10 years and even now after all this time it is bitter for her.

I will wait anxiously to know how will this meeting between the two, so if there are any because Edward may have already turned around and gone. Wondering here if son of Edward clinging to Alice son of Bella and did not want more to let go, it would be interesting, lol.

start intriguing, I want more lol