Reviews by Rita01tx
Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84442
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 ~ Not as it Seems

There's not a hot enough corner in Hell to accommodate people like Aro! And snakes like him always manage to cover their tracks! Charlie's right! The bastard ain't dead!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Life Changing

Damn! Now Edward will never be rid of Psycho Jessica! Maybe not physically but mentally, poor guy!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Confessions

I would imagine it's a huge relief to Jasper for his brothers to accept his lifestyle and even become part of it! That bein' said, he might need to rethink Alice's punishment now that she has a second strike against her for outtin' him to his own brother!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Glimpse into the Future

Oh, boy! Bella just ran into her future Dominant and didn't know it, nor was Edward aware he'd just met his future submissive! Instant chemistry with so few words? Hell to the yeah!!!

Gorgeous Edward manip, Clo darlin'! *sexy beast!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins

Dang! Looks like Edward and Bella won't be crossin' paths for a while! Garrett wouldn't be allowed if he was a bad guy so I'm hopeful he and Bella will make a good team for as long as it lasts!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 ~ Lost and Found

Mike's not gonna have that job very long once the complaints start rollin' in...asshole!

While Edward's lucky to be alive, I don't think he's gonna agree for a looong time!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Damn on two counts: Edward losin' his leg and Bella losin' her parents! It never seems to end well for people who get caught in the snare of a crazy ass cult!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Obviously, there's a difference in knowin' ahead of time you're gonna love a limb, usually for medical reasons, and wakin' up missin' a valuable part of your body!  Yeah, I'd freak the fuck out, too! Edward might not think so right this minute but he's very lucky to have such an extensive and dedicated support system!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

It is appallin' how gullible people are! Worst to date is Scientology because it still exists and even flourishes! The more people who speak out, the better!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, I just want to cry for him! On top of losin' his leg, he's gonna live with the nightmare of that accident for the rest of his life *sigh!*



Author's Response:

He is going to have a hard time, but a beutiful submissive is going to make it easier for him. Bella is his saving grace. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

It's so touchin' for Bella to carry her parents with her through their weddin' rings hangin' from her gold chain *sniff!* Really hopin' they find Aro and plant him six feet under in an unmarked grave, preferably on a landfill/garbage dump...no point wastin' taxpayer dollars on a trial, right?

Edward has a lot of good people pullin' for him and helpin' him deal with his mental as well as physical crisis but it's still gonna take months of hard work on his part to get where he needs to be. I have faith in him, as does Bella!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Well, everyone was havin' a grand ol' time, what with Carmen and Max's engagement, Edward's positive attitude adjustment and Bella's dress shoppin' for their date now that she's no longer his nurse. Evil bein' harder to kill than crab grass, I suspect Aro has risen from the ashes, so to speak!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

I'm so glad Charlie and Renee were able to hide from Aro but it's a damn shame they were unable to warn the others...not that they would have listened, probably *sigh!*

Very much lookin' forward to followin' Testing Limits as I'm nowhere near ready to least Edward and Bella!

Summary:

Banner

 

Doctor Edward Cullen has never really enjoyed Christmas holidays.  His entire life is wrapped around his job and nothing else.  Walking out of hospital one snowy December night, he is drawn to the large decorated tree with tags with a number and gifts that are required.  What happens when he allows his heart to open back up and give this family a Christmas to remember?  Or will he get a surprise gift that will tear down all the walls around his heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9129 Read Count: 2834
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2017 Updated: 12 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

So, I was double checkin' my TBR to make sure I had all your stories and realized I hadn't read this little Christmas gem and what a gem it is *sniff!*

Miscommunication is the very devil, ain't it?

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

So, I was double checkin' my TBR to make sure I had all your stories and realized I hadn't read this little Christmas gem and what a gem it is *sniff!*

Miscommunication is the very devil, ain't it?

Summary:

Edward Cullen and Charlie Swan have been best friends all their lives.  However, that may all change when Edward starts having feelings for Charlie’s daughter, who is sixteen years younger than Edward.  Sometimes, age is only a number.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2842 Read Count: 3131
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2018 Updated: 26 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

16 years is quite a large gap but no one is promised a tomorrow so just carpe the fuck out of that diem!!!

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39740
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*SOB!* Damn near didn't survive this chapter, it was so sad! But at least Edward and Carlisle have come a long way toward mendin' their broken fences!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It would be cruel for Carlisle to tell Edward his choice was to help someone who could actually be helped as opposed to someone who was already gone and beyond his help! The fact that Edward accepted his love in the end means Edward understands, on some deep level, that someone's life was on the line. 

I wonder if Bella will recognize the beautiful woman with the red hair and green eyes if...well, when she sees a photograph of her!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Heartbreakin' on so many levels *sniff!* ps: love the manip!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay! STARS is back!  Anyway, I'm excited to have Edward and Bella, and Carlisle and Esme all in the same place! Let the love games begin!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Snotsobbin' here, Clo darlin'! Life can be so cruel *whimper!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Talk about red strings of fate! This is gonna get real complicated, real fast, when Carlisle realizes whose heart Bella's gettin'!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Precious little Ladybug could so easily get out of hand so it's good that the adults, especially Edward, don't tolerate her tantrums!

As for Bella's wicked observation, who could blame her for noticin' every delicious inch of that gorgeous man! Of course, it's good to see Edward notice her, as well!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So lovely to see Edward and Bella both struck by lightnin' at the same time...and for the same reason LOL! It was probably a good thing Elizabeth and Esme cock blocked them, even if they weren't aware that's what they were doin'! Well, maybe Esme had a clue LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How anybody gets through a tragedy of this magnitude is beyond me but I suspect divine intervention would be the only remedy *sigh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, what a lovely first date and what a declaration from them both so soon! They both deserve a second shot at life and if that's together, so much the better.

 

Happy New Year, Clo darlin'!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

My hope is that, the longer they have to bond, the better chance of weatherin' the storm ahead but I'm gonna be ravagin' my fingernails in the meantime *sigh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh, nooo! Well, I call miscommunication! Edward coulda taken 2 extra seconds to explain he needed to see Carlisle before stormin' out like he was rejectin' her!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, wow! It's a good thing Bella went to talk to Carlisle and Esme! She might have just given up and run away if Esme hadn't shown her that photo of Maggie!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Very glad Maggie was able to talk some sense into Edward although I'm pretty sure he would have come to the same conclusion eventually! Of course, with Bella followin' hot on the heels of his dream, it was a foregone conclusion that he wasn't gonna be allowed to wallow more than absolutely necessary to assuage any residual guilt he may have felt over the situation!

 

More than glad to see we get a sequel *squeee!*

Summary:

All Tied up in Love

You never know where you might find that person who is everything you need or desire.  E/B.  HEA

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3488 Read Count: 4909
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2018 Updated: 01 Jul 2018
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not sure how I missed this hot little number but thanks Joanne Scott at Twifanfictionrecs for the reminder today on FB!

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10159
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, Jacob was a nasty piece of work and good riddance! Glad Charlie finally got to see his true colors!  Lookin' forward to Edward's story!

 

(shudder, Clo darlin'...not shutter) (and poised...not posed)

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That people like James and Victoria actually exist is too depressin' to contemplate! Can't wait to see what Edward's family does to them...hopefully something wicked that ends in significant jail time!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That people like James and Victoria actually exist is too depressin' to contemplate! Can't wait to see what Edward's family does to them...hopefully something wicked that ends in significant jail time!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That people like James and Victoria actually exist is too depressin' to contemplate! Can't wait to see what Edward's family does to them...hopefully something wicked that ends in significant jail time!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! Edward's story is worse than Bella's...not by much, mind you! Can't wait to find out what his family does to James and Victoria! And the mornin' sun is gonna bring a BIG surprise for two complete strangers *heheheh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can't find my review for chapter 3 and, of course, we'd all love to see what happened to James and Victoria as well as what happens when Edward and Bella return to the "real" world LOL!

Thanks to Joanne at Twifanfictionrecs for the anniversary reminder for this story!

xox Rita

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 66003
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 31 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Didn't take long for James to fuck up...for the very last time LOL! Loved Ben's handlin' of the bishop's demise, too. What a sick bastard he was *shudder.* 

Here's to years and years of peace and prosperity for the entire Cullen/Cullenello clan!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 May 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two - A New Leader

First of all, not every hard hearted mob boss would buy a defunct bookstore just because he like the lady proprietor AND the books she provided him so Edward just rose another notch in my esteem...didn't think he could go any higher LOL!

Second, Ben's research certainly threw Charlie and Bella for a loop! I'm rather hopin' Renetta is alive so Bella doesn't have to step up after Aro (and James) are taken out of the equation!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 May 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three - Justice Finally Served

A fittin' end to a madman's megalomania! And James has not a drop of Volturi, either, although with plans for revenge runnin' around his head, Bella might wanna pinch his candle out, as well!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 July 18, 2017

*Phew!* Glad the issue with Alice has been cleared up as I hate to think badly of her! Plus, it just gave Edward another reason to believe Bella is his perfect mate!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

Jacob must be their inside man. He also must be a bad ass to be able to handle such a mission! Wouldn't mind hearin' about how that came about.

Now, let's hope Edward gets to Bella before Aro!!!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy mother of pearl, Clo darlin'! Please tell me there's more! This is way too good not to continue *squeee!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

Well, that's a can of worms Bella hasn't even known she'd opened...yet! Indeed, Jessica was unprofessional and deserved what she got. Unfortunately, the bitch blames everyone else for her failures instead of herself LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

Ah, the good Bishop accidently allowed Edward to see a weakness...one to be exploited! For a good cause, of course LOL! Edward certainly has everything under control, especially Bella's orgasms *swoon!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017

Edward mighta been too late to keep Bella from gettin' hurt but he did at least get confirmation that Aro was up to his old tricks!

Rose would already be dead if Caius had become aware of Rose witnissin' him kill Jordan who probably did NOT steal from the family...asshole!

Even knowin' that her parents had been murdered Rose still can't go to the police 'cause she has no idea if they are in bed with the Volturi...smart girl!

 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, at least Bella got one good shot in before Edward stepped in! With a Cullen (or more?) on the scene, she might start gettin' some answers!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

I'm so glad you're takin' up this story again and this update was well worth the wait...you are in glorious form *phew!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

(I seem to have missed reviewin' chapter 7...bad Rita!)

 

Bella is awesome, fittin' in instantly with everyone in Edward's Family but especially with him! He certainly won't be lettin' her go and I doubt she'd go anyway LOL!

So, it's off to Italy we go!

 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017

Hmmm, was it wise to check in as Mr. and Mrs. Cullen? Not that Edward wouldn't want to make it real eventually LOL! 

Alice turned out to be a deadly little thing and who could blame her? Let's hope Edward captures Aro alive so everyone can get theirs before the light leaves his eyes!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

Dang! That was so excitin'...my goosebumps have goosebumps LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

I'm worried contactin' the utilities companies and that contractor might alert Aro before Edward's ready to take him on *nail bite!*

And you are evil to leave us hangin' LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures

What a gorgeous ring as befits a Cullen wife!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - July 18, 2017

Yet another direct connection to the Cullenello family's past but what a beautiful story behind Maria's weddin' dress! Edward will be so surprised when he sees Bella in it! 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

Holy crap (literally)! Not only did that birth certificate provide material to blackmail the good bishop, it could well be Aro's undoin' should anyone find out he's not related in any way by blood to the Volturi!

ps: After he's served his purpose, the fat perv should be...*ahem* retired with extreme prejudice LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

Holy crap (literally)! Not only did that birth certificate provide material to blackmail the good bishop, it could well be Aro's undoin' should anyone find out he's not related in any way by blood to the Volturi!

ps: After he's served his purpose, the fat perv should be...*ahem* retired with extreme prejudice LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Love is in the Air

Angela and Ben certainly deserve their own HEA and I'm bettin' they both forgot Edward has superior powers of observation LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Not so hidden

Yeah, Ben shoulda stated his intentions towards Angela sooner but it was a weight off his and Angela's shoulders for Edward to release them from feelin' like they had to hide their love. Of course, it helps that Edward can sympathize so well now that he's found his own soulmate LOL! Now to find out what all's in that envelope!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Who is Renee Dwyer?

Hmmm, wouldn't it be a hoot if Renee was the actual, legitimate child of Lorenzo and Elena Volturi! It happens more frequently than you might think that so-called childless couples have their own baby AFTER adoptin' first! I wouldn't put it past Aro to have committed fratricide to make sure he inherited the Volturi crown instead of her! Which bypasses the fact that Bella has Volturi blood!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Father of the Bride

So, Aro went after her for diggin' up the Cullen name he'd tried so hard to bury but I wonder if he has a clue who she really is and what'll his reaction be when he finds out? Can't wait for more twists and turns and, above all, Retribution with a capital R!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Time For a Wedding

Well, that was a stunnin' piece of information Bella got but the photo will only confirm what Edward already suspects thanks to Jenks! With Charlie showin' up to give Bella away, the weddin' was made even more wonderful!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty One ~ Oh What a Night

You know, it's a good thing Edward proposed to Bella BEFORE he realized she was the Volturi heir LOL! But Angela's right...the two families are now one and Aro won't be pleased to learn this. Of course, he'll be dead shortly thereafter if the Conclave do their job!

Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 57095
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 May 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I rather thought Bella might be the cake lady LOL! And it has only reinforced the bond she and Edward have created...well, along with the hot as fuck sexin' *swoon!*

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68354
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Somebody's princess is a spoiled, stinkin' brat who needs her ass handed to her and then locked up for life in the worst insane asylum imaginable...maybe in Russia LOL!

 

In the meantime, I sure hope the Cullens run regular deep checks on their personnel 'cause they're in trouble if it's true about the mole!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven ~ Blood Bonds

Eleazar and his bitch daughter are gonna be a real problem *grrrrr!* I look forward to seein' Edward handle them...with prejudice LOL! Now to get Edward on Bella's good side which might prove an even bigger problem *heheheh!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Ha! Royce and Irina were both thwarted but damn Irina is totally insane, as in Looney Tunes nuts!!!

Well, thanks to Mark's stubbornness, with beautiful weddin' went off without a hitch *woo hoo!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

Traitors like Royce always seem surprised to find themselves caught out and payin' for their treason with pain and death, a quick one if they are lucky...they really shouldn't be!

Irina and Eleazar can wait for their just desserts once Edward has dealt with Charlie and retrieved Bella and the babies!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

Lordamercy, Esme and Carlisle are freakin' awesome...very imaginative, as well *high five!*

Welcome to the world, Liam and Robbie! I bet they love Bella's new version of their lullaby! And don't be shy about postin' a future take or two or even a sequel featurin' those wild boys...well, with a father like Edward, I expect they will be LOL!

*HUGS!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River

Insanity was no excuse for what Charlie did and shame on Renee for helpin' him do it! Edward gave them better than they deserved *spit!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Bloody hell, this doesn't look good for Bella and the babies! I can't watch *eeeek!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody

That Carmen and Irina were stupid enough to discuss Bella's kidnappin' in public...the dumbasses! Now that Edward has found light at the end of the tunnel, thanks to his mother, that light is about to glow red and I can't wait for Royce and Irina to beg for mercy and get none!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire

Glad to see Bella's saw the light about bein' with Edward. Of course, his magic dick might have helped with that decision...lucky girl LOL! Alice and Rose will just have to accept their relationship and, besides, they're only one floor away!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises

Now that Bella gave Edward a chance to explain himself, he's free to spoil her and those precious babies as much as he can get past her and, if he can't get anything past her, he's already discovered how much she'll cave for the sake of said babies LOL! Can't wait to meet them!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine ~ Normal Blood Pressure

Bless his heart, his commitment is so obvious, even to Bella and, you know, she was already completely smitten before he was forced to leave her to see to Carlisle so it shouldn't be too difficult to pick back up...we hope LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight ~ High Blood Pressure

Edward's lucky he got off with Alice's nut punch 'cause, if Emmett hadn't grabbed Rosalie, he would have fared much worse! As it is, the list of people who's like to have their turn is growin' LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

If Edward wasn't the Captain, he'd be in for an epic ass-whoopin'...worse than he just got from Esme LOL!  Still, this is something for Edward and Bella to sort out for themselves.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Ouch! Not exactly the reunion either of them was hopin' for but I'm waitin' for the fireworks from Esme, and the rest of his family and her friends...gonna need a big bucket of popcorn for that LOL!

 

Oh, and might I suggest a slight change so that slap in the face & slapped him in the face don't slap us in the face?

The reality of the situation drove the breath from her body with a heaving gasp of shock.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

It's insane of Irina and her family to believe Edward would ever marry her even if, by some miracle, they took out Bella and the babies...perish the thought *shudder!* I guess that means they are nuthouse level insane!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

I'm so curious how Esme's gonna retrieve Bella's box! Either it will entail a confrontation with her parents or a thief in the night will spirit it away. I'm kinda partial to a real sit down talkin' to LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Hahahah! Looks like Esme has gained two more daughters in Alice and Rose! It's a damn shame there's a fox in the henhouse they don't know about...yet! 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Ugh! Royce sure snatched up the opportunity to get his hands on that key and the code! This cannot end well *eeek!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

Holy hawtness! After a night like that, a bad news phone call from his mother shook him up so bad he forget to get Bella's phone number...nor did he leave her his in his note! Well, at least they each know where the other goes to school, although I'd be surprised if "Tony" goes back.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 May 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Somehow managed to miss chapter 2 - Charlie sounds like someone to avoid at all costs and Bella's doin' a good job in that department. Rose's dad is a peach and, with Garrett livin' in the same buildin' and workin' for the Cullens, I wouldn't be surprised to find out the Cullens own it LOL! Now to find out how long it takes for Edward and Bella to reconnect 'cause he needs to know he's gonna be a daddy *woot woot!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 04 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

Wait...if Carlisle was shot in the back, who was behind him? Hoodie dude was in front of them and took out their 2 bodyguards who were BEHIND them, which I found unusual. In any case, looks like Edward's ass is in the saddle from now on, not that he won't make use of Carlisle fine mind once he recovers! Bella's on the back burner for now but not for too long, hopefully!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 14 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

Oooh, I can't wait for the gala! If Esme and Carlisle are gonna be there, so will Edward...SURPRISE!!!

Summary:

double crossed


 


Edward Cullen was ruthless, deadly, a man whore and was damn proud of each title.  The only child of the West Coast Mob Boss, Carlise “The Lion” Cullen. From the age of thirteen, he had been groomed to take over for his father when he retired. The day before his twenty-five birthday, his father sat him down and informed him that he was ready to hand over the reins to him, that was after he performed two more acts of loyalty to the family. Edward grinned, knowing that there was nothing his father could throw his way that he wouldn’t do or could do.


 


Isabella Swan the daughter of Charlie “The Books” Swan, the accountant for the Cullen crime family for all of his adult life, as well as friend and confidant to his Boss.  Knowing from a young age what her father did for a living, she decided she wanted to develop her skills in weapons and combat so that one day she could find a place in the family. Called to a meeting with her father and Carlisle, she thought that her dreams were coming true.


 


What happens when they are Double Crossed? 


 


 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5939 Read Count: 2137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2020 Updated: 03 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's always so much more fun when Edward and Bella start out "at odds" with each other, which is puttin' it mildly in this case LOL!

Summary:

 

What if the whole story of Santa Claus was wrong? A tale of Father Christmas and his debate on whether or not humans still truly believe or should he stop delivering presents. Maybe it only takes one pure true believer to save Christmas. HEA E/B


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2254 Read Count: 910
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2020 Updated: 20 Dec 2020
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Getting the Story Right

Oh, I do love this wholly different take on Santa Claus! Hope you and your family are okay and had a great Christmas...well, as great as Christmas can be, nowadays *sigh!*

Happy New Year (it's gotta be better than 2020, right?)

 

xox

Rita

Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119464
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

Far as I'm concerned, whatever agreement Bella made is null and void by virtue of "his" actions! May he rot in hell soon...whoever he is!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

I doubt Esme and Maggie or anyone else, for that matter, will be mad for long that Edward and Bella got married without them. However, they WILL be miffed that Aro and Gina knew before them LOL!

The photo of Jacob threw me off before I read the chapter. He just looked to innocent to be such a heineous bastard LOL! Plus, I always enjoy gay Jacobs *wink!*

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 29 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

*Gasp!* What a rotten thing for that so-called Dom to have done to Bella! Boy, is she gonna be surprised when she finds out about Edward...hopefully in a good way *woo hoo!*



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie. This is going to be one hot story with of course a storyline that will leave you wondering what is going to happen next. Thank you

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

Rose and Emmett are both wonderful people who would never feel that Edward and Bella did this to upstage their own wedding! Even so, their news was quite the bombshell LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Epic smackdown by Esme *high five!* If anyone's been mooching off of anybody, it's those two bitches mooching off their daddy LOL! Wonder if/when the scales are lifted from Rose's eyes about her so-called besties *snort!*

And who ever said the missionary position was boring never experienced it with Edward...dayum!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Oh, I wish Rose could have seen their dresses...the sluts! It's not always easy to spot the fake friends, especially when they are such great actors. Okay, only around Rose, apparently. Wonder what Esme does to them LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

Beautifully crafted revenge *high five!* Just goes to show how important it is not to underestimate ANYONE, especially not Edward THE MAN Cullen LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Gorgeous ring!!! And why wait when you know it's right...can I get an Amen LOL! So, the bad guy isn't James? No clue who it might be, at this stage. Wait, I don't recall Jasper and Alice bein' in the story, so far, so it could be Jasper!?!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Dayum! That was almost too hot...oh, who am I kiddin' LOL! Thanks for the sizzlin' hot extra visuals, Clo darlin'! (Why, yes, I do believe I'll just have to read this chapter again due to the *ahem* distractions LOL!)

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Step 1 of Billy's comeuppance...busted nose LOL! Clearly, if Bella's scars were so hideous, she'd get zero attention from every man who crosses her path. As it is, not a one of them can keep their eyes to themselves, includin' married men with children LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Dayum! That was almost too hot...oh, who am I kiddin' LOL! Thanks for the sizzlin' hot extra visuals, Clo darlin'! (Why, yes, I do believe I'll just have to read this chapter again due to the *ahem* distractions LOL!)

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Wow! On the bright side, Maggie and Esme are in 7th heaven LOL! However, Billy has no idea who he's dealin' with and I don't mean his new client! They shall both reap what they sow 10 times over!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

And the truth shall set you free! I am so lookin' forward to Billy's downfall LOL! And it would be criminal to let Bella go on her runs without someone with her until this is all sorted!