Reviews by forever1901
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130 Don't be mad!

I really liked this one. Hearing Masen POV was great. Cannot wait for more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136 Content

Thanks ofr the update it was great. We have missed you. Happy Holidays

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97 Burned

so will Masen help with Edward's arm. He cannot stay that way he prefect and we love them that way. When will we hear from the wicked bitch of the north (Tanya)? I can only believe she will be acting as crazy as ever!! By the way this story is sooooo good! Keep writing we will keep reading



Author's Response:

We do need to keep Edward perfect, don't we!

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111 Delusions

I think Friday's are good as well as Tuesday and Wednesday. Three a week should be okay



Author's Response:

thanks for giving me an opinion!  if nobody insisted that they wee waiting for chapters and commented, I would have no reason to post chapters! 

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Insurance

i have to tell you i love this story. do you know how many chp. yyou are planning on writing since we really have not seen Tanya or aro yet. keep going we will keep ready. it has been great. please do not let Vic get to Bella



Author's Response:

There are lota of chapters, but if I tell you how many there are at the present time, it might give away too  much!  Hope you like long stories and keep reading!

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions

Just have to say I love this story. Love the girl talk to. Keep it going girl never want it to end



Author's Response:

Keep encouraging me!  I love Edward's life, so I love writing it - just need to know that people want to read it and I'm not just writing to no one! 

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135 Marital Assets

I have missed you. but the update was so worth it. hope to hear more soon

Master to you by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 188]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After Isabella's transformation into a vampire, her life changed as well. Edward changed and her whole world changed. Sweet Edward is no more and Bella has a potty mouth. Sit back and enjoy the ride between Bella and Edward. This is a BDSM story, if that offends you, don't read it. You have been warned, there are also a lot of lemons. E & B will have a HEA.

 

new banna with bella

wonderful banners both are made by:  soapymayhem

 

Beta'd by RAH07890

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43263 Read Count: 84213
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 16 May 2013
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 " The Talk "

Thank youave  for given her a backbone. I think she should send him away. So it is okay that he is fucking some guy but she can't. I would really like if you have Jesse and Zed leave and have Bella do some switch on Edward. I really love your writing but I still can not stand him hurting her so. Does he think it is okay that she is hurting because he was off getting his happy time.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much !!

If it wasn't for my Beta

I doubt  you would say that

Thumbs up to her "RAH07890"

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

After talking to my Twilight partner in crime she suggested something that i hope could be where you are going with this. Does Zed have some hinding power like binding where he can make Edward do things that he should not have. Please tell me if I can hope for this since I really do not want to believe he would do this to Bella. drop a hint if you can. I will keep reading if you say there is a HEA for Edward and Bella together. I do love the pictures they are great.



Author's Response:

I can't share my secrets that would ruin it

but I do swear there is a HEA

they are ment to be and it will happen

thats all the hint you get love !!

thanks for reading !

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 "The Table's Have Turned"

thank you! I am so glad she took control. i still think he needs to pay for what he did. Great chp. Cannot wait for the next one 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it !

enjoy !

 

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I just don't understand

I am sorry but I do not like the way the story is going. I can see Edward doing things before Bella but to have him be screwed by someone else and wanting him to stay hurts. I hope you make Bella strong enough to refuse the boys. I was soo mad this morning when I read the last chapter that I almost did not read on but you have promise a HEA for Edward and Bella that I had to read this chapter. If you are taking suggestion please make Zed go away and have Edward beg for forgiveness. They are mates and mates do not hurt eachother the way Edward is hurting Bella right now. Or give Bella her day and let her F**k Jesse because he wants to protect Bella which is more than i see Edward doing. Please give our girl some balls to kick him in his. He spent months not missing her but being F**ked some guy. How can you do that when you are in love. maybe you should think about it and help edward learn that you can't have it all. Let me know if this summary is wrong.

 



Author's Response:

Yes I did promise a happy every after, I will keep my word but every one has a past no matter how bad. Some even do keep it from there mates even in real life if they think it will hurt them to no the truth. Edward were going to start a d/s relationship were total honesty is important. I do not agree that he handled it right but again everyone makes mistakes. Now don't get me wrong I love Stephanie's, Edward and Bella but that is not real life even if they were human. I choose to make my Edward and bella a bit more real life I hope I have not affended you at all. I really hope you follow my story you may not like how it goes right now but as I said it is a HEA .....

 

          Vamp_luvor

Summary:

Bella never gave up hope that one day Edward would return, even though everyone told her it wasn't going to happen. Find out that in that sometimes when there's nothing left to hold onto except for Hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4751 Read Count: 639
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2011 Updated: 29 Nov 2011
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

thank you for this short story it was great

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story! Edward is so demanding which makes his sexy as duck! Keep it going and I will continue to review 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok i just finish reading the last update and I am having a hard time with Edward. How could a man who wanted to do nothing but care for his son end up being complete fool. He has  no balls at all. Why would Bella want anything to do with a man that would leave his sick child to go off just for sex. I hope that she leaves while her daughter does not get so attached to him. Elizabeth needs a real father who puts his children first which we can all tell Edward does not. If Bella had any brains she would report both to CPS and adopted Charlie. I know that will not happen because we all want them to have a HEA. I really hope Alice or a nurse calls the reporters so they can see Bella leaving the hospital with Charlie the same time ball-less wonder and shanky leave the hotel room together. that will really help their careers. I really hope from the current reviews you get Edward to grow a set soon.

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

So it appears Edward is really as stupid as we hoped he wasn't. I am having a hard time believing that he would leave his son and Bella without even calling her. I am so disappointed right now. This Edward is a wuss 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135034
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I love y'all but karma needs to come and kick Emmett's ass like now. I cannot wait to see what happens on Friday!

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50966
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was really hoping to hear Edward's side but I guest I will have to wait to see what is happening in his twisted mind. I cannot believe Carilse.

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64411
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: forever1901 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Heart is racing so ready for Carlisle to die