Reviews by beccasmind
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I have just read through all the posted chapters and cannot wait for more.  I love the connenction those two have in this story. 

I also like the work dynamic you have created here.  It adds a dimension you don't usually see in FF.  It works well. 

 

 

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

see Jacob was not a threat, but a buddy. 

 

Those 2 are definitely in deep, and head over feet! 

 

The tryst in the offic was hot too!

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

see Jacob was not a threat, but a buddy. 

 

Those 2 are definitely in deep, and head over feet! 

 

The tryst in the offic was hot too!

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

How sad for that mother adn child.  That was heartwrenching to read.  Poor Edward would have really beat himself up more if it was not for the support of Bella.

That was not the proposal I expected at all, but in Edward fashion it was romantic and he proposed in the place he first fell in love with her.  

 

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I was thinking all along Bella was pregnant too.  Just because the chance was slim does not make it impossible just makes it more special.  Edward will be over the moon!  Bella will freak, as she will not be prepared for the possibility, but ultimately be thrilled.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OH that was great!  I bet they will bet so excited and Charlie and Jacob will be too. 

They will be amazing parents.  So much love to share.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Intense indeed.  Now let Bella and the baby be ok from the tramatic experience and I wiill be alright too.  Her and Edward can have thank heavens you are alright and I am so glad your alive sex and hold one another tight while professing their undying love to one another ;)

YEAH!  Victoria is finally free of that psyco woman beater.  She is finally free to feel safe to life a happy life with her son.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was a great chapter.  I went through so much from Jame's Death and the torment it cause Bella to the elation of hte upcoming wedding.

I am glad to see James is gone for good and Victoria has the right perspective on the situation.

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The property is a wonderful gift.  I cannot wait for the wedding and honeymoon.  I am sure it will not disappoint.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Sweet as always.  Jake and Victoria is too precious.  Wonder what the sad case will be.  Love that the abby kicked adn that they are so lovign with each other. can't wait for the next update.  

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh how sad and I agree how hard it must be to experience that from a professional POV. 

I had a friend lose her husband suddenly to an previously unknown medical condition right after she gave birth to her first child.  I was only a few weeks pregnant at the time with my first and it was terrifing to imagine losing my husband and raising my child alone.  Those fears can grip you and it can be hard to let go of them.  You have to but man it is hard to get past them.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Perfect and labor does happen that fast.  Onset to delivery with my 2nd was 3 1/2 hours of shear agony followed by prefection.

 

Well done glad to see baby Daniel here finally.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I swear that is true the  build up is always good especially after waiting a few weeks.  I know I never even make it to 6 weekes with either  of my kids.  LOL 

I like how you portrayed her as exhaused new mom too, so many times they write new moms as super moms and truth is we are all exhausted the first couple weeks.

 

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Awe another miracle for them, perfect. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

That was a lovely heartwarming chapter. Well done and glad to see you back. 

Sorry about your breakup.  Hearts are resiliant structures, the wounds you feel now will heal to small scars I promise. You are stronger than you know and braver than you think. here are some of my favorite quotes.

 


"Love is much like a wild rose, beautiful and calm, but willing to draw blood in its defense." - Mark Overby

"Women are like teabags; you never know how strong they are until they're put in hot water."— Eleanor Roosevelt

 

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Well done and thank you for that story.  I am always a sucker for a tatward ;) 

 

Look forward to your next one.  Keep your chin up and remember to smile :)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I would love to see a continuation of Etched that is JMO :-)  It was such a lovely story and I would love to see more of it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Awe much drama but some ease now.  Royals have always needed much protection and this is obviously why.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Well you could just go with Edward II or something like that I am not sure what version of Edward yours is in the story, I am sure she would not name him after her father but maybe her brother?    I have no idea on girl names.  I am drawing a blank there.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

That was a short but good chapter.  Glad Alice made it through with her baby and Edward adn Bella are moving along smoothly.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

I love the names you choose they are beautiful

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Beautiful

Summary: Past Featured Story

blood


Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Busted

Glad to see you back and I just knew her gank of misft family would find her as they should.  Now they need to kick some ass.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Finale

Sorry I missed a few reviews, I just got caught up with the story.  I am glad James and Renee are dead.  How could they not know Bella woudl react that way about a huge party for goodness sake.  and WTH Bree is her sister by blood from Renee or a nutjob or Victoria?



Author's Response: the only real explanation that I have for their forgetfulness is that they're only human and were eager to celebrate something happy after so many bad things happened

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The Cullens left Forks so Edward could persue his dream of being a NASCAR driver. Many years later when Bella unexpectidly shows up in his life, how will they both be affected when they are magnetically drawn to each other and she is only there for one week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9128 Read Count: 1339
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awe that was sweet!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, don't forget to come back on Saturday and vote for us!!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

Who is Tanya, now an old girlfriend, maybe a relative or good friend?   You left me hanging, UGH!!  Evil pure Evil ;)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

Wow Tanya sure added some spice to the mix for a moment there, and they ultimately professed their love thanks to her and got some good communication going.

Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

carriedAWAY

Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

Loved it!  The Tension was perfect



Author's Response:

im glad you liked the building tension.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella has lost both of her parents. She befriends Alice at college who demands she accompany her to Forks for Thanksgiving. Good times aplenty on Thanksgiving Eve. M for Mature content-language and lemons. ExB, OOC, AH

Written for the Ficawesome Gift Exchange!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6723 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Holiday Encounter

That was full of tension heat and great!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!!

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144833
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it and I cannot wait to read some more.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A filler chapter but a great one for sure.  It gives a great backround and explains the lack of communication all those years.  Of course he adores her too.  Silly girl. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am curious about psycho Jacob.  I am sure Edward will be her valiant protector now that he has her back he surely is not going to let anyone hurt her.   



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Psycho Jacob is on the hunt and determined.  No way any of them especially Edward will let him near Bella if he has anythign to say about it.  Yeah they are officially back together now :)  



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So Jacob is waiting to make is move or attack.  I am sure they will keep her protected and make sure she is ok.  They are not going ot let anythign happen to their girl Bella especially Bella. 

 

That was romantic how neither of them have been with anyone else since eachother in their teens too. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awe, now that was a nice introspective POV to read



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

All those doctors and tough guys Jacobs is bound to feel the wrath of Jasper and Emmett.  I hope that kill the psycho. 

Rose and Alice will save Edward I have faith.  



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: My Boys

He is definitely psycho, I am still desperately waiting to find out what happened to Bella and Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

How scary but at least there is some infor on what happened after they arrived.  It is nice to get some backstory on Rose too. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Man that has to be especially hard for a father to experience.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)_=

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

How hard it must be to wait and see.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

How hard to have such terror upon waking.  Oh, if her could just hold her again.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

They get to be home together now.  That is something.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Jacob sure is a crazy loon that is definite.  Wonder what tomorrow will bring.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Jacob has done nothign but prove he is a sane nutjob!  Hope he gets the full punishment and Bella and Edward can move on  swiftly.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Hope they don't have a nother psycho just a cluless twit that Bella can put in her place.  UGh let the couple be for heavens sake.  Jess is a sleaze to even bother him after he has made it clear he is not interested.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Love that Em relly got through to her and helped her find a way to vent.  Now I wish I had seen some of the altercation with Jessica too.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awe a little drama and insight from the others.  I see.



Author's Response: Yep, thanks:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awe poor Alice, Jasper and her family will take care of her as she grieves the loss of the only other person she ever let in.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Poor Alice to lose someone so vital to who you have become in your life is hard.  Jasper cares so much for her and will take good care of her.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Trippin' by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Trippin'

 

Nicknames, food fights, clumsiness and a crush. Could falling really bring a couple together? We'll see....

 SM owns the characters...I'm just putting them through a few new paces...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3637 Read Count: 230
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2010 Updated: 10 Jul 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was funny and sweet.  I cannot think of any really embarassing moments, honestly.  I wish I could. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you CAN'T think of anything embarrassing! That is good for YOU!~

Thanks for reading, beccasmind!

Kathie

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am hooked and love how snarky Bella is here.  I cannot wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

interesting backstory.  wonder what drew her there?  woohoo Edward has made his move....



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ooh she has mad vampire skills, wonder what might be potentially be going down...hummmm



Author's Response:

Yeah, she a badass ;)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awe so they can communicate through her shield...Interesting



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooooh, Edward just made his opinion known about what is feeling are for Bella.  LOL! 

 

OOOOOH she is powerful and do I see a standoff with Aro in the future???



Author's Response:

Yes, you do:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That is interesting, I am not sure if the mutts were just beign stupid or not but they are definitely going to be more cautious now.  THe interesting thing is Bella may not realize it but she has shown she has more control than she thinks even when rage is present.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well now we can learn more about htis prophecy and how thay plan to change pre-planned history.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well she is the prophecy but we know how future works, never as projected.  and yeah they love each other and are getting some action....hahaha big brother is a bit upset, too bad he will have to get over it as shes a big girl.



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

so true we control our own destiny



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She sure is powerful.  She has expoloded with power before and it did not hurt anyone before only cracked things lets that is the case again.  Maybe it was a shield explosion again...........

 

Bella is kickass



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awesome

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well done!  I lovedthe entire story and that was a perfect ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268906
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

how sad and sweet at the same time



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

The Car Wash by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Picture inspired one shot for now. But how knows. An early morning naked car wash could brighten anyones day but can it change your future? Mature theme. M for a reason. Picture inside.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9000 Read Count: 8656
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was great, humor and suprise.   lol  loved it and would enjoy more.

Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 8286
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That chapter was sweet and tragic all wrapped into one.  I know what it is like to have a mother like that.  So manipulative and cruel.  So much so I have not even had contact with her in close to a decade yet she lives just 25 minutes away.  I am glad Bella stayed strong and stood up to her while Edward let her fight her own battle yet stayed there to provide support and a shoulder for strength & love. 

 



Author's Response:

This chapter really did have a mix of alot of emotions. I am sorry to hear you have a mother like that. I am guessing that since you haven't had contact with her she's never apolagized or changed. It's really sad that neither her or Renee can see that they are only pushing the ones they love away.

 

Thanks so much for reading, I hope you had a very Merry Christmas. Chapter 5 will post on Friday. Until then here is a teaser to get ya by. EA

 

It had completely baffled and amazed me how fast Alice, Esme, Rose and I had been able to pull together all the details for my and Edward’s wedding. It had only taken us three weeks to pull it all together. 

Our first task had been to reserve the View Point Inn and the second had been to find my dress. Alice had said that once those two things were accomplished the rest would fall into place. Of course she had been right and after scouring several online sites, looking through every page of every Bride’s magazine Alice could get her hands on and spending a weekend in Seattle combing every bridal shop there was, we had done it. I had my dress and had known it was the one the instant I’d seen it.

There had been a few bittersweet moments along the way though. We had all gone to Seattle on the excursion to find my gown and the bridesmaid dresses. While Alice, Rose, Esme and me had gone shopping for the gowns, the men had gotten fitted for their tuxes and had gone to the college football game at U-Dub.  But when Alice and Esme talked about some of the experiences they’d had while shopping for Alice’s wedding gown, I couldn’t help wishing things were different between my mother and me. I couldn’t help thinking that she should be there with me, helping me choose my dress and taking part in all of the planning of my wedding.  And I couldn’t help but wish that I could at least know that she was happy for Edward and me.

For the most part I had not let what she’d done interfere at all in my life. I was so very, very happy with Edward and I loved him so much.

However there were just times like now, when I was contemplating on whether or not I should send her an invitation that I couldn’t deny how much it hurt. She was my mother and was supposed to be happy for me.

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

My favorite part was the end when she asked Carlisle to walk her down the isle.  My FIL gave me away and it is a cherished memory of mine.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, I am glad you liked the chapter. I was a little worried about how everyone would take Renee's changes, but I am happy to see that everyone was agreeable with it. I had toyed with the idea of not having them work out their differences, but then also thought about the fact that Renee is the only living parent Bella has and that if she truly changed that Bella would welcome her back into her life once she was certain that Renee was being sincere. I also thought about having Edward and Bella walk down the aisle together since Charlie isn't there or having her go alone, but neither of those ideas felt right and Carlisle doing it did since him and Esme had always been like a second set of parents to Bella.

 

Thanks so much for reading, chapter 6 will post tomorrow. Hope you are ready for some Bachelor and Bachelorette party fun.

 

EA

 

Here is a teaser for you to enjoy :)

 

Bella walked over to Jasper after we greeted my parents. She poked him in the chest and said, “You see that overgrown gorilla over there?” She removed her finger from his chest and pointed it at Emmett.

 

“Yes ma’am,” he replied.

 

“While completely cute and loveable—”

 

“That’s me,” my brother interjected proudly.

 

Bella shook her head and rolled her eyes at him and then continued, “He is trouble with a capital ‘T’. You are Edward’s best man correct?”

 

Jasper nodded not quite sure what my lovely fiancée was getting at, but certain he was probably much better off to agree with her than not to.

 

“That means you are responsible for him. To make sure he doesn’t get in any kind of trouble tonight because of that one over there.” She pointed at Emmett again while the rest of us struggled to keep from laughing at the surprised look on my brother’s face. Bella then looked back at Jasper and continued. “That also means I am holding you responsible for making sure Edward comes back to me with not a hair on his head injured. I’m putting my trust in you as his best friend and as his best man. I am holding you personally responsible for him tonight. Think you can handle that?”

 

Dazed and Confused by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Peter Whitlock/Bella Swan Twilight Alternate Universe Multi. Chapter story. No time to spend on something you all don't like. :-) So, if you like it, you gotta let me know. Pete's a vampire, Bella is a fallen angel. Mature content/language/lemons. Snarky, OOC Bella. She's kinda Badass in this.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6341 Read Count: 1526
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2014 Updated: 17 Sep 2014
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just came across this and world love to read more it you decide to continue the story.



Author's Response:

It will be continued and finished.  I'm trying to concentrate on finishing some of my stories that are further along at the moment, but I won't abandon any of them!  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Spudz

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192179
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: beccasmind Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Add me to the pdf list, love the story