I really, really, fucking really hope that Edward does not get discouraged by this phone call.  Fuck can anything go right for them in this story...

Please update soon, I really and starting to stress that these two will never end up together, it is really heart breaking, fuck I hate Jacob he is really starting to piss me off to the point his is going to loose his balls soon and I dont just mean kick them I am ready to cut the fuckers off. 

Thank you for the update.

Loved the last chapter and this one.  They were both perfect insight into what everyone was thinking.  Esme had me realing with laughter... what is that woman putting in her cookies.

Thank you for the update

Fiorella

Loved it, I love how they lectured Bella's parents.

I also loved that they did not call every 5 minutes as well. 

Ohh I love long chapter, 20 pages is nothing!!!

Cant wait for the update.  I am glad that Edward got rid of Seth, that was just down right wrong.

thanks you for the update.

Yeah I knew that was coming!

All I have to say is that Edward was stupid for listening to Emmett, and now he is the one that is going to pay dearly for what Emmett told him to do.

Say good bye to happy weekend and the end of their relationship again...

If it works out any other way I shall be amazed.

I really do hope that someone pulls Edwards aside before he fucks up royally and we know it is going to happen, Bella is going to find out about Tanya and World War 3 will break out.

I just hope he tells her before all they did was kiss and then he found out about his dad and she wanted to keep going but he did not... see not hard, why create trouble when it is not needed... I understand that we all need a bit of angst in our stories but really unnessary fighting is not needed...

Anyway that is my opinion... I can see it now, she will kick him out and it will be the whole trust thing come up again... do it to many times and it gets boaring to read, when they fight make up, fight make up and then the pattern keeps repeating.  It as ruined so many stories for people... please dont let it happen to yours.  They are just getting on their feet again, she is only starting to trust him againa and it is Christmas!!!

I love this chapter and I love the ending so much.  Cant wait of the next one, I am wondering what Tanya is up too.

Wonderful chapter as always, brought a tear to my eye with the dance.  Loved it and you out did yourself.

Wonderful chapter as always, it was nice to see Bella and Esme make up even under the circumstance.  Thank you for the update.

Fiorella

Wow, i actually feel sorry for Bella.  Why is she so different that she does not deserve and good night kiss from her father?

If I had a sister like Rose I would have put her in her place a long time ago.  Do your own stinking washing.

Not for nothing, I am glad you got this chapter out of the way, I was looking forward to what was going to happen in the playroom...  Then I got crap about Jacob. 

I know it it is all part of the story but I personally would have just given us a quick run down on what a dush Jacob was...

But your story and I am waiting with antispation to see where you take this.

Fiorella

Well Krazi I have to say that I am grateful you update.  I am so piming your story this with People Like Us.

I would be happy to be either a beta or pre reader if you would like I am Michele non beta, if you have every read People Like Us.  I would be happy to help in any way shape or form.

Let me know.

I love this chapter, the revenge on Jacob was excellent.  Good to see the twat get it in the end.

Cant wait for the next chapter, you are dong a fantastic job.

Fiorella

I have to say I love this chapter, it was wonderful to see Ang step up and bow out.

I loved how Bella and Edward reconnected.  Wonderful.

Hmm, I understand Edward being an ass to Angela, but why would she want to work on this relationship when his heart is not in it.  I know he is now giving her false hope, but he was not before.

I have a bad feeling about this, I really feel that it is going to blow up in his face big time and maybe loose both of these girls.

I cant believe Bella fell for Eric crap, he could not give to fats rats about her until she found someone else.  Same with Angela, as soon as he found kitten she was threatened.  I feel sorry for these two, maybe they are good for each other, they can have their boring sex and crazy life. 

Interesting to see where your characters take this. 

Fiorella

Fuck I love this story, I always love what you guys write. 

I have to say that I have a feeling that the phone calls are either coming from Lorrie and James or Eric...  This is getting very interesting.

Man I would be okay with the cliffy, if I did not have to wait a month for the next chapter... I don't know how I am going to make it.

Man stop breaking up the chapters, this is killing me.

Thanks you for the update.

Fiorella

Ohh, so much has happened, maybe Edward should just go the whole hog and fly kitten, Emmett and Rose down for New Years in stead and that will really piss the Esme off. 

Hmm I have a feeling that I am missing something and I am going to have to go back to the beginning and re read about forks...

See this is where sometimes non completed stories should be left until they are, you don't have to re-read to figure shit out... ohhh well would not give this story up for the world.

Ari, Get better soon, I hope you are healing wonderfully.

DLIR, thank you for sending my story to your sister, she has started reading it and I have sent her the rest of the chapters, I am sure you can bribe her for them.

Thank you for the snippet of this chapter also. 

I have to say I loved it and I cant wait to see what is going to happen with Bella and Eric.  I have a sneaky feeling it was not Bella who was shot but Eric... bit I will have to wait and see.  I really hope Laurent gets hurt as well.'

Loving the story.

Fiorella

Actually, I personally do not feel Edward had his head up his ass, so I resent you last comment!

That being said, I am glad that he has let go of the anger.  

I just hope Bella does a bit of grovelling as well, because she should have gone to him and not Ange, he had no one and Esme was a bitch to her and him and I cant say much more about Angela as well, instead of letting Edward go, she cause more shit than she even realises and Bella goes and comforts her... please give me strength.

Love the chapter, brought a tear to my eye.

Wow, it was good cathcing up with these guys again.  Wonderfl chapters!

Wonderful Chapter

I have a feeling it is going to take Edward a while to get used to Bella freaking out everytime he does something that triggers a bad feeling.  I do feel very sorry for people that have or are living this sort of life.  I would never understand how they could stay.  But reading stories like this where they feel helpless and are battered down by the shear will from someone telling them how they should feel and be.

I take my hat off to anyone that has left an abusive spouce and I hope and pray the one that are not strong enough (yet) to leave that they one day find the courage to do so.

Love the story.

Fiorella

Another wonderful chapter, I am glad that Edward is helping Bella to be open and remember the good time.

I just hope it keeps getting better and better.

I have a question for you, when Mick killed himself, all of his possessions would have passed to Bella?  Would this not be the same with his parents stuff.  In this case why does Bella not use this money to build Charlie the house he wants?  

This way she can repay him for everything.

Thanks you for the update

Fiorella

Now she want to show up...  She has had plenty of time to figure out what she wanted.

Update soon.

I have to say that I am so impressed with all your stories at the moment.

I am so pimping you ass this week on People Like Us, in my rec's

Thank you

Fiorella

What a wonderful chapter, I knew that there had to be a problem and thank god it was not to bad.  I am glad that Everyone was okay.  

Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

Fiorella

Wonderful chapter as always

OHHH BEAUTIFUL

Wow, it has taken me about 6 hours to read this story and I have to say that I love it.  I am pimping your ass out baby.

The emotion you have put into this story is breathtaking.  I really do feel sorry for Bella and as everyone was tearing her apart, I had tears come to my eyes.

I really can not wait for the update.  I love it.

Fiorella

I can see where the boys are coming from but Bella is right she needs to know who she is.

Every now and then you need a chapter like this, it is an emotional story.

I really would like to see Bella get the answers she needs to move on.

Fiorella

WOW, will her torment ever end!  I find it amazing that she is really making no progress in her thinking, she really is stuck in limbo.

I hope soon she will see the light and all the pieces will fall into place for her.

Thank you for the update.

Fiorella

Loved the story, quick and easy read with a little bit extra. 

Thank you for writing it. 

Fiorella

Please dont leave the update to long.

I am going to be sitting on pins and needles till I know what Renee and Michelle are up to.  Grandparent rights... she just called the child a spawn... PLEASE Renee, grow up and act like and adult and not a 2 year old.

Right to do what, see the chile, if Bella chose to keep it, she could decided to tell them to fuck off... I like that one better.

I love that Bella thought her water broke and how she walked in on NAKED Edward!

I can understand people sleeping though the water breaking, it is the pain that I can not fathom. 

I have a offer for you, i am not sure if you have a beta but I would be happy to proof read your story before you post if you would like.  I live in Australia so I am not sure if the time differece would be a problem for you, my turn around is excellent just ask Michele that writes People Like Us. and Missie that writes For The Love of Domination.  I think the latest I have every been for either of them was 1 day.  

I would be happy to help if you would like.

ohhh, how beautiful what a wonderful birth.  I really hope it goes well now, it is going to be hard for Bella and Edward to trust each other again, I hope it does not take too long.  They have a bridge to mend and I hope it goes swimmingly!

I understand why she is upset with everything, but I dont understand why she is denying herself.  If she wants to be with him, I am all up for making him beg and grovel, but if she has the intention of doing this alone and allowing him access when he wants, she cant let him hold out for hope when she not going give him what he wants.  Bella has had a taste of freedom, a sense of independence and whats to find her own way with out Edward by her side, so she has no right when someone flirts with him, makes a pass at him or anything of that nature.  She gave all of that up to find her... she cant have her cake and eat it as well, so she has no right to be pissed if he does find someone else, and I really hope he does. 

Bella was a spoiled brat at the beginning of this story and still is now, the only difference is she is learning to stand on her own two feet.  I really dont see how they are going to get back together after this chapter!

ohh i did not see that one coming! 

I feel Carlisle has a control issue, and Edward better be careful, I have a feeling that hif he ever touched Bella she would either do two things.

Firstly hit back (If it was me I would punch the fucker)

Secondly she would leave.

I hope none of this happens.

Wonderful chapter, it is good to see Bella understand why Edward spanks her.

Hmm, well that will make Edward shit or get of the pot!  I cant believe that she actually stood up to him.

It will be interesting to see how long it takes Edward to grow some balls now.

Ohh Carlisle test them to get them to stand on their own two feet.

Well well. 

Ohhh, next week, I cant wait that long!!!

I will be on holidays as well and wont have internet access...this is going to suck!

Wonderful chapter, I love how they are connecting all over again.  It is nice to see.

Sorry to hear about your grandfather, I hope he did not suffer and I hope your family come to terms with a loss so great.  I hope you are all able to find the peace you need with in each other.

Take care.

Fiorella

wonderful ending! 

I have to say I let this story go, so I could enjoy more of it... I should have let it go longer, I just want more of these two.  I really hope that Bella and the babies are okay till the end of her term.  It really would be a shame for anything to happen.

I really hope that Jacob is not doing anything deciving by hooking up with Tanya, and I am really curious how they met.  

I hope all works out for this family.

Ohhh the fun of feeding, changing nappies, and being up at odd hours is what is yet to come.

Good luck Edward and Bella.

Really, Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass and take her home, there is no if, buts or mayby's on this.  If I was Bella I would have walked out of that house and kept walking to the police station.

I need a chapter that is not over the top with Edward drama, I want them to be back in America and them finding out if anything is going to happen to Charlie. This is draging on and on and on.

At the beginning of this chatper I really thought you would have Rose shoving down the fact that Bella was not ready for this baby, which she is not, and I am glad that by the end you had Rose realise that in the end it is Bella's decision and it was one that she was able to make out of her own free will.

Something she has never been able to do. I was a little frighten of reading how Rose was going to take the fact that Bella was not sure she was doing the right thing, and have this baby at the moment for Edward.  I am sure by the time the baby comes Bella will be in love with him or her.