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Hi all, Thanks for taking the time to visit this page, and coming to find out a bit more about me. I live in Australia. I am over the age of 35, and a divorcee. I don't have any children but I do have three nieces, that I adore, and occasionally look after. I have two dogs Sunny and Ava. Sunny is a spoilt Pomeranian and Ava is a Siberian Husky, and you could say they are my children. I love to read and now giving writing a go. My favourite genre are Crime and Romance. Some of my favourite authors are Kathy Reichs, Janet Evanovich, Jane Austin, Matthew Reilly, James Patterson, Patricial Cormwell, John Grisham, Charlaine Harris, Ruth Rendell, Lynda La Plante, Harlan Coben, John Grisham, J. R. Ward, Michael Connelly, Dan Brown, Kyle Mills, Sara Gruen, and Ian Rakin. You can also find me on FFnet. http://www.fanfiction.net/~floramile Thanks
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Ohh the last part of this chapter is amazing, I love watching Bella grow. It is a beautiful thing.
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Love this chapter, it about time some did like the Judge said and I hope they throw the book at them and they both see the inside of a jail cell. It might make them think twice, I just hope that Charile gets a big burlie guy called Bubba for a cell mate and he like to play a little with Charlie... You know what I mean.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and I'm glad you got to a point where you could enjoy the story. I knew from the beginning that it would irk some readers that my characters made mistakes and bad choices and weren't perfect. But that's the story I wanted to tell, because unfortunately life isn't perfect.
Bella and Edward have a history - one which Bella wishes she could forget. Edward re-enters her life but is not the boy she once knew. Will Bella be able to keep their relationship strictly professional? Does Edward want it to stay professional? What are they hiding from each other?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118692 Read Count: 64803
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Wonderful Story, I cant wait for more
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Excellent CHAPTER, I dont understand why Bella wont consider a surrogate to carry her's and Edwards child. It will be their chile, she just wont carry it!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
So did not see that one coming. I really hope that there is a HEA after this, I dont think I could handle her loosing the baby.
Author's Response:
I surprised someone! Most people either expected this or wanted it. I like that someone was caught off guard with it! I will not say what will happen in the future but I will say that I think it's time that these two got their HEA. ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Wonderful chapter, I am amazed they did not spill the beans accidentally.
Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?
(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)
- Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
- Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184507
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Decisions and Surprises
Man, I love this story but I just wish you would move on and get the great mystery already!
I feel it has something to do with someone in or from Forks. I was heading for Jess and I still am.
All this waiting is sort of turning me off the story, it is brought up in nearly every chapter now and I understand it is a monumental part of the story, but if you are not going to tell us for another couple of chapters then move the story along and get Aro's party out of the way so we can find out who it is!!!
Okay I am being a skirt, I understand but is driving me nuts... I think I might leave a few chapter go and then read a whole heap at once, then I might get there and be happy to find out and know...
I am loving this story don't get angry with me... I think it is a good sign that you are frustrating me. OKAY honest truth... I want all the story now, I want to keep reading till I find out what is going on and I cant wait... I am impatient ... there I said it.
Keep up the excellent work, I know I will tune in next chapter!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Taken
Hmmm my only question for you is when is the next update... you left us hanging on to our seats again!!!
Wonderful chapter, I would love to see the other side of it and she what Bella sees when she is in front of the restaurant till Billy ending up in the hospital.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Forks
I have to say that it has taken me nearly 4 days to read this story and I have to say I love it. I rec'ed it on my friends story so I hope that is okay. People like us was the story.
Thank you I cant wait for the update.
Author's Response:
Awesome! Thanks so much :)
Peps
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Hot Sex, Cold Sex, Chair Sex, Car Sex
Wonderful chapter, I wonder what Edward was going to say before BIG mouth Alice stepped as usual!
Thank you for the update keep them coming.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Rolling Boil
I have to say that I have a feeling it is something similar as staying away from the white light.
Something bad is going to happen to Bella where she will be ending up fighting for her life and everyone is going to be sitting around waiting to see if she makes it.
I have had this feeling for a while now but I feel this chapter confirms it. I just want you to hurry up and get to it! Yes I am impatient.
Wonderful chapter as always, I think I will put money on my prediction. I can see it being anything else.
Kepp up the excellent work, loving the story as always.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
No! I did not like Edwards proposal!
The reason I am saying that is you left it there and you are not going to update for 3 weeks, so how the hell do you think we feel about that! Actually that is a silly question on your behalf.
The least you could have done is told us what she had said... we all know she is going to say yes! There is not reason for her not to, unless she wants to be a heartless shrewed and embarrass herself and Edward infront of a room full of people.
Anyway looks like we are waiting. You are getting a low score for the crappy ending.
Author's Response:
What makes you think I'm not updating for three weeks?
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Mise en Place
Wonderful chapter, once again, too short, just want to know what is going to happen, I know they are at the cabbin!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase
About time!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught
OMG I was going to go nuts if you had of stopped it where you were.
I am sure you would have had a lot of hate review.
I cant beleive that it is nearly over... always the way.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter.
Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out
Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Family Affair
Wonderful chapter, never enough as always. Loved it, loved it, loved it.
I have a crystal ball and lets see what it says is going to happen in Vegas... hmmm, it is telling me a bit of dancing on and off the floor, in and out of sheets and a whole lot of fun!
I shall have to wait and see if the ball is correct!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Party Like it's 1950
OMG I have to say, it has been a while since a story like this has drawn me in to the point of staying up till 2am to finish it.
I really so hope that Bella goes to Vegas and I hope a compromise can be met. Even if Esme and Carlisle go with them.
I was wondering when Jasper will make an appearance??? It seems that Alice is the only one with out anyone at the moment.
Keep up the wonderful work and I can not wait to read more... also I am pimping you ass out with all the stories I edit for.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
aww Thank you! The next chapter will probably be up soon. I'm aiming for mid week. I'm actually a chapter behind my FF page so i'm playing catch up over here. Surprisingly you're the only one to ask about Jasper and Alice's suspisious single status. I have plans for Mr. Jasper that have been in the works since chapter one, you'll see what I mean soon and hopefully it won't disapoint. And by all means pimp away! any and all is greatly appriciated. Glad you're liking it.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Pillow Talk
I have to say that I am sure that Bella will get though this with the help of the Cullens and Edward in particular.
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Maybe....*looks around innocently* Thank you for reading and reviewing the next chapter is coming tonight. I hope you enjoy day one of their Las Vegas weekend. :-) I hope to see you next chapter.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Passionate Dance
Wow, its been a year since you have posted for this story, so I am guessing it has been year since I had last read the last chapter. I have to say its a bit sad that you have not finished it. I really do hope that you do. I love these two beautiful characters.
Take care and I really do hope you have not abandoned this beautiful story.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The unknown pov (outtake)
Katiecav, I would be more than happy to help you beta, if your has forgotten all about you. I am sure if you email him/her, he or she would be more than happy to take it up again.
if not pm me, and I will be more than willing to help out. A good fill in chapter, it gets us in the head of Tanya... she is one crazy lady... well that is my guess of who it is.
Take care and good luck with the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the offer of help. I'm gonna take you up on it! It's not really that my beta's forgot about me really. They just all kinda left the fandom while i was on my little fandom vacation...*shrug* it happens :-) I'll send you a PM with my email address in it and we'll talk that way. :-)
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: three little words
Hmm, it is going to be interesting to see what is going to happen with Tanya... now that they have said the 'I love you's"... who am I kidding, who gives a shit what she thinks, crazy lady will just have to get over herself.
Thank you so much for the update... LOVED IT!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Club Hype
Hey Katie,
See I told you that your loyal reader would love you not matter what, I say post the chapter again and let them decide. These reviews are what you needed to hear, post it again after what you wrote make it chapter 27 and leave it to these lovely people. I will help you with the next chapter, and we will get it to where YOU want it. Take what these people have said and use it and write the next chapter for them, leaveing chatper 26 alone.
Love Ya Darl
Fiorella
'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
I have to say that I was not sure about this story when I started reading it and by the end I was still a little confused, but I have to say that I am enjoying it all the same... I will have to see what is going to happen.
Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done. The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her. Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I have to say that I love this little story and if I had to hazzard a guess that James, Aro and Edward Snr are all in this. I really do hope if I got that right that they go down in a blaze of glory and Edward is the one to put a bullet in all their brains.
I also hope that he is able to free his mother from the crap she has been handed over the years.
I also hope that we get to meet Carlisle soon and Esme. I have a feeling they might just come in handy.
Thank you for coming up with this story and I cant wait for the update... so please have it out soon.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Ohhh, these two are just too cute, I am glad they are both learning from each other.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I think he made here the happiest person on the earth...
I have been away for a month any only missed one chapter, you got to love that.
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
love it, update again soon.
After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...
Rated NC-17 for language and lemons
*SM owns Twilight
AH/canon pairings
My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Ohhh, so beautiful, I really feel that Edward needs to give himself a break after 5 years, I still have a feeling the message is for Edward's family...
Cant wait to see if I am right.
Author's Response:
Yes, he really does. Happy you liked the chapter. All will be revealed soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
Loving the story, you really have us on a roller coaster... I have a feeling that all this little things are going to add up to once big shit storm...
thank you for this fantastic story, I cant wait to read more.
fiorella
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope I haven't confused you too much! Thank you for reading/reviewing, I do appreciate it,
After years of saving herself for that one special guy only to have him turn her down, Bella is on a mission to lose her virginity. Can the lucky guy she chooses hang on to her, or will he lose everything in her game?
High School Drama
E/B
Banner by MDealsWithIt and Blinkie by Angedelaube
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37171 Read Count: 39753
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Revelations**
Ohhh poor james but I have a feeling it wont be the last of him.
I hope Bella can get over her fault finding.
Wonderful story, cant wait for the update.
BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!
Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!
Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason. Some violence, though not much. The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74927
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I have a feeling Mke is not the only one behind this...
I have to say I have enjoyed reading your story and I know i have come in a little late but I found it by chance.
cant wait for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Sorry, I am Auatralian can you please explain what 'Fat Tuesday' is.
Loved the story as usual, it just keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to see what Edward does for the his love on V'Day.
thanks you for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Lovely Wedding and I cant wait to see what they do on thier honeymoon!!!
New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
I love getting into new stories and I have to say I love this one, if it okay with you, I would like to pimp it out?
The only problem with reading new stories, is I have to wait to get to the next chapter... I cant wait for more.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Hi famaggiolo!
Please, by all means pimp me out! I'd love new readers. Thank you for reading FFSGSG, I'm glad you are loving it. I'll post another chapter today.
Thanks,
-bannerday
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Ohh sometimes people like Alice should keep their traps shut... it reminds me of my older sister, if you do something she does not like or thinks you should not do, she tittle tattals to my parents, and you would not beleive she is 38, childish I know.
For example my sister is going in for an emergency c-secton this weekend, so I thought it would be nice to send her flowers to let her know I am thinking of her.. my sister thought it would be best to wait till after the c-section, in the end I could not get the same day delivery in London so I never ordered them. So that night when she spoke to my mother she told her about it and then my mother rang me telling me that I was being insensitive and that not everything could be fixed with flowers. Yep I felt like an ass for something I thought would be nice, and got into a fight with my mother for something I did not do in the end.
Sometimes people should just mind their own business and this is one of them for Alice!
Cant wait to see what happens wit Dinner, bring it on!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Post Time
I agree a little repetitive, but it is easy to skim though that, I like the changes she made in the story as well. You have done a fantastic job.
Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fiorella
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Espect
I am going to say that Emmett is the reader that will end up telling Edward. Just by the review, I think I have figured that one out, but I am not sure, considering he thinks he is the mucho male.
Well, well, Edward at the school to see his sister. This is going to get interesting.
Author's Response:
I can't divulge who may or may not be any of Bella's reviewers...that would be betraying their trust as they read and review incognito. LOL
Hope you like the Edward/Alice conversation. I just posted the next chapter. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
ohh, you gave poor Bella a heart attack!
Hmm interesting chapter with the whole Alice perspective.
Great chapter and cant wait for more!
Fiorella
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Why cut it off there? Why not just finish the night off?
Thank you for a wonderful chapter in the dark with these two wonderful people.
Fiorella
How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56337
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Forever and Ever, Amen
wonderful chapter, I really hope you dont rush to the end now. You really could take this story anywhere.
Thank you for the update.
fiorella
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Can't Fight This Feeling
Ohh, it is good to see that these two lovers have crazy lives like the rest of us.
I really do Edwward see that Bella should move in with him soon, she is really keeping his house afloat.
Author's Response:
LOL It's hard to imagine having a life that busy - but residents seem to make it work.
Thanks so much for reading!
Sandra
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Only You
OMG, actually I did not see that one coming, I seriously thought after the wedding they would get engaged.
Love it!
Fiorella
Author's Response:
GOTCHA! :)
Thanks so much for reading. Glad you're enjoying it!
Sandra
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Where Are You Going
Wow, I cant beleive I put this story off and off, I wished I had not!
Loving it!
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Awww. Well, glad you decided to check it out. Good timing, too; I'll update toinght. :)
Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying the story.
Sandra
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Home Sweet Home
Hmmm, I am interested to see what job you have lined up for Bella.
Wonderful chapter and it is good to see these two actually get their act together.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Oh! I hope you like the job I came up with for her. :)
Thanks again for reading!
Sandra
Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: By Your Side
Wow as always wonderful chapters, cant wait to see what is going to happen, will it be Alice or Bella fisrt. I have a feeling it is going to be Alice... maybe a silly little feeling it might be Bella first with the baby.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! Glad you're enjoying it.
LOL My betas are rooting for B to be the first one pregnant. :) I'm not telling how it plays out.
Thanks again!
Sandra
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Cowboy
Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. Glad you're enjoying it!
Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner:
Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!
Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?
Rating for future content.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding
I actually feel a little sorry for Bella, I have a feeling she is going to be a very lonely lady and only used as she said to bare him a male.
I hope you prove me wrong, but i have a feeling I am not.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
There will be some more angst Bella will suffer through, but King Edward will fall in love with her and, hopefully, redeem himself in both Bella's and my readers' eyes. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing
I have to say I love reagle story like this, it bring out a part of histroy that I love dearly. You have done it justice.
Thanks you
Fiorella
Author's Response:
*blushes* Thank you so much for the compliment. I truly love the 16th Century and I'm really enjoying setting my story in that period of history. I hope you continue to enjoy liking my story. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Crying
Wow a bumpy two chatpers, I really do hope that they start to build a life together where they trust each other and talk to each other.
I love this side of Edward.
Charlie is up to something... not sure what it is.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dying
Well you asked the question what I would call my baby girl, after my auntie Gabriella which means Woman of God. An Italian form of the Hebrew name Gabriel and the American way is Abrielle.
Love how Tanya come to the rescue, I really do hope that Edward changes a little, just softens when it comes to Bella.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing
loved it about time renee and charlie saw some action!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Living
Wow, I have loved this story from the moment I started reading it, and I am upset to hear that there is only one chapter left...
Make it a good one as I know you will.
Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!
Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia
Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM
Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!
Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427976
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**
I love this story and it was nice to catch up after the holiday.
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 **Encounters**
Man oh Man, I have to say I am loving this story... Once of the best builds up to BDSM i have read in a while.
Thank you for a wonderful story and I am pimping you out on a friends story. Keep the chapters coming.
Fiorella
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping
Wow, it is really starting to get hot and heavy for these two, I wonder how the family are going to take the news of Cullens much, much, much youger girlfriend.
Keep up the beautiful writing.
I never can wait for more of this story, I always wish the chapter were 10 times longer so I could read more and more about these two characters.
Thank you for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Experience
Making us hornier by the minute, I have to say this is one hell of a story, I am putting it up there with 'The Training'.
Loving it.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Panties
I really do love these two crazy kids, they know how to steam up the computer screan.
till the next update!
fiorella
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice
Wonderful chatper and I can never wait for the next chapter, but I do!
Cant wait to see if Bella will go through with it or get nervous at the last second.
Fiorella
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Declarations**
Ohhh, I am wondering if we get a double lot of lemons next week, when you finish them in the field and in the play room... ohhh dirty dirty chapter to come.
Thanks for the update.
Fiorella
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Discipline
I say that they eat dinner and when they get to desert he finds out for himself... at the table of course. I also feel he should see how good she is at keep quite and not drawing attention to the table while he does some very naughty things to her.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**
ohhh i hope bella does not blame herself
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
OHHH, I love this story, cant wait to see what Edward is going to do to Jacob. My guess is firstly he does not like threats, secondly, I am sure he is a force to be reckoned with.
Thanks for all these chapters as well... A lot to read after coming back from holidays.
A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100874
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Thunderstorm
I dont get what he is playing at. I say dump his ass to the curve, get a job, finish your studies and focus on your life. Let him play is pathetic game with someone else. He seems like a spoilt rich kid that is board.
Bella is so much better than that. Slap him one and move on.
Not sure if Edward deserves Bella, not matter what. Once a cheat always a cheat, and you can't tell me any different, I have had to many friends keep cheating boyfriends, or husbands and in the end they get caught out again.
Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.
Banner by Rochelle_0089.
-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A New Arrangement
I was sure I had read this story before, and left it till it was close to finished... once I started reading it, I realised that I had started it once but left it long ago, because I wanted more and the updates were taking a while, but now that I have found it again, I will follow till it is done.
Loved it to start with and loved even more the second time.
Fiorella
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Surprise!
Wonderful STORY!
Date: 04 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Truth and Time
This chapter makes me angry and upset, with all parties. if the boys just learnt to keep the fucking mouths shut for once in their lives none of this would happen. Why the hell would you bring it up, the bet was finished drop the fucking story, its dead and finished, why keep talking about it. It was like the writing on the wall, I knew someone would over hear the loud mouths.
Now not only have they wrecked their own relationship they have put Edwards and Bella's in jeopardy. This is what I don't get. We all know that Alice and Rose will forgive their men in the end and then Edward and Bella will suffer, because she cant trust him any more so they break up while the others move on with their relationship and watch their friends in pain. When all four could have kept their mouths shut.
I understand why the girls told Bella, I would want to know as well. But we know 99% of the time, it is Bella and Edward that suffer and Alice, Jasper, Rose and Emmett survive, when they are just as much to blame for opening their big mouths.
It a lose/lose situation... good luck doing something different then everyone else, but I have a feeling that it will be those two nor moving in, then breaking up, and then we will have about 5 chapter of cry, cry, feel sorry for me, and then one of their friends will find a way to get them talking and it will be all fixed but with the hurt still there.
Lets see if you prove me wrong. Not saying Edward should be let off the hook, but it would be nice to see them talk it out, yes a bit of grovelling but no break up and the move as planned.
Bella finds out some information before her wedding, she decides to run from her own wedding. What happens when she finds herself face to face with everything she wants, what will happen when things get mixed up. Not the best summary
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20729 Read Count: 4353
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I have a feeling life is about to come crashing around these two when Bella figures out she is preggers!
Author's Response:
Prince Edward of Forks and Princess Isabella of Voltura are forced to marry as the terms of a treaty signed by their fathers to end a war between the two neighboring countries. Edward is a spoiled, arrogant womanizer who is determined to have a marriage of convenience. Bella is a feisty young woman from a country where the women fight beside their men making her a warrior princess. Can Bella tame the wild Edward and make him into the man he should be or will the whole world lose out.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59923 Read Count: 51672
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
loving the story, i dont want it to end!
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Wow, you have added so much since I read last!
Loving it. I hope this not the end!
Fiorella
Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction
Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for. She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given. Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him. Can an uneducated Bella teach him something? What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: First Times
I cant wait for the next chapter, I love it. I hope Uncle harry gets a hot poker up his ass. Then he might know what is like to be F***ed there.
Love this story and I cant wait to read the new one.
Author's Response:
Well after this chapter how will we ever get better? I hope that you trust me when I say, it will! Many of you want Aro to get his hands on Uncle Harry before the police do. I will not say who gets to Uncle Harry first; because well that would just ruin the surprise, but I will say this... his capture is already written, so feel free to speculate. There are some seriously some great chapters coming up, but Nikky says I need to warn you all that some of them are rather drama and angst filled. There also may or may not be a few cliffhangers in the near future, oh heck who am I kidding the next two chapters are rather cliffy in nature. The next chapter has a big surprise within and MOST of you may be very shocked. Nikky, Jess, and a few others who have already read the chapter during BETA processing seem to think that the next chapter may generate a lot more reviews. We may even get some from people who have not reviewed before now, because it is quite a twist. There is your warning. Nikky and I have been called diabolical for the plot twist that is coming, so we sure hope you all like it. I will say this out of all the readers and reviewers we have, only one time has someone guessed a good portion of the plot and got it right. We of course didn’t tell them, because well then they would know it would ruin the story telling process. We had a few question about Sienna’s ability to place a phone call since she is deaf. Deaf people can make phone calls using a Telecommunication Device for the Deaf (TDD). Special telephone services have been developed to carry the TDD functionality even further. In certain countries there are systems in place so that a deaf person can communicate with a hearing person on an ordinary voice phone using a human relay operator. There are also "carry-over" services, enabling people who can hear but cannot speak ("hearing carry-over," a.k.a. "HCO"), or people who cannot hear but are able to speak ("voice carry-over," a.k.a. "VCO") to use the telephone. Couple of questions came about Charlotte’s nick-name of Chas, in our story Charlotte was the youngest raised by her father among her several brothers and she was quite the tomboy growing up. Char is a girlie name and therefore her brothers tagged her with Chas, because it is manlier. Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we are proud of it, and are grateful to our loyal readers. If you have more questions or want to discuss some of the story line, feel free to join the group on Facebook you can find us by searching for: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT FanFiction. Kasi (&Nikky)
PS….Enduring His Cimmerian View is now POSTED... Please go read and review.
Chapter 25 Teaser:
“Pajama day is when you stay in your pajamas all day and eat lots of bad stuff, watch movies, and play games all day long.” Seth and Leah nod their heads at me and Bella gives me a small half nod with her smile. “Okay then, pajama day it is in our house. I just need to make a few phone calls. Why don’t you all get your robes and slippers on, and I’ll meet you for breakfast as soon as I am done.” Seth and Leah hug me before walking out of the bathroom to get their slippers and robes.
After they leave the room, I look to see Bella biting her lip, and I know she’s worrying about something. “I’m sorry that she wet the bed. She’s never done that before.”
I walk to Bella, wrapping my arms around her. “Baby, its okay. She’s upset, and her body is reacting to that, so don’t worry about it.” I kiss her head and push her hair out of her face. I hiss as I see the large bruises that go all the way up one side of her face. “Baby, how are you feeling? Are you in pain?”
She shrugs her shoulders and tries to give me a smile. “I’m not sure. I...” She stops and rubs her head. “I feel like I failed them. He hurt Seth, and I should’ve been able to protect him better. I’m upset that it was Uncle Harry that broke into our apartment the other time. I don’t understand why he did that, or what he was looking for. How could he do that to Seth and Leah? I mean, I know that he doesn’t really like me much, but they’re his sister’s children. I thought he would love them.”
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Confessions
I would like to hear more about what happened with Bella, what sort of people her parents were. Were they part of a group, religion cult, or just down right asses.
Till next up date.
fiorella
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Each week I read the reviews for like the first 3-4 hours to see what kind of questions you all want answers to, and this time there are hardly any questions at all.
So I thought we could touch base on some comments. We have gotten a lot of Great chapter, sad ending, but it was needed...stuff (and it was needed). ‘Edward had to allow the pain to flow out instead if keeping it locked inside of him.’
We have had a few diabolical people suggest that Edward would maybe recognize Sue and Charlie Swan, or Harry Clearwater. ‘This is an interesting theory.’
A lot of you would love to lynch Sue. ‘But first she has to make an appearance.’
Some of you have noted that you for see Gina as being a problem. ‘Ummm…YEAH!’
A few have wondered if Tanya and little Edward are in fact dead and buried. ‘In the graves in Port Angeles are in fact the bodies of Tanya Denali, and her son known to all as Edward Anthony Masen Jr.’
The comments people have made on the complexity of our characters though is what I want to touch on the most. The fact that we have made the characters so out of character in most cases is what I am enjoying so much. I personally love Alice in the books, I think she is WAY underplayed in the movies. I love Alice she is one of my favorite characters, but to make her this unlikeable character is hard, yet I think it really gives so much to this storyline. Alice will learn some very valuable lessons in this story and that old saying a leopard can’t change his spots, does not apply to Ali-cats.
I like Rose and if I (Kasi) had to compare myself to a character from Twilight that I am most like it would be her. I am not a royal bi*ch, but I am pretty outspoken and tend to say exactly what is on my mind, and that is how I see Rose in the books and movies. The Rose in this story though goes above and beyond the snippy, and stuck in her ways bitchy Rose from the books or movies. Our Rose is a downright spoiled rotten mean girl, who will never grow up because she wants to remain that rich girl who has everyone surrounding themselves in her light to better their standings. Edward could have married the high class daughter of some billionaire tycoon, and Rose would have issue unless she bowed down to Rose.
Jasper in this story is one of the most in character, characters we have. Very smart and laid back, goes with the flow and yet is always there to help calm matters that need attention.
Emmett, God I love Emmett. He is so fun loving and wild, but he is so very smart and he can step up and show it when the time is called on him to do so. You will be seeing a lot more of this intellectual and loving Emmett as the story progresses.
I hope that you have enjoyed this little insight we have shared with you this week. Feel free to join us on Facebook, where there are tons of discussions and theories shared daily. Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will pop up. Thanks everyone for making us feel so great, we are proud to bring this story to you and so happy you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Nikky).
Chapter 20: Snow Storms Teaser...Subject to changes during beta process.
Emmett has filed papers with the court, getting Bella temporary custody for Seth and Leah. Angela, Ben’s wife, who is a social worker, is making case notes on Bella’s behalf. She is also talking to each of the kids, and doing a home study to make sure that they are having all of their needs met.
It was not an easy task to get Bella to agree to all of this, but when Emmett explained that if her stepmom came back, she could take Seth and Leah and Bella might never see them again. He also explained that because Bella was now of age, she could keep it from happening by letting us help her.
I didn’t like scaring her, but it worked. She thinks that if her mother gets them, she would not allow her to see them anymore. She is afraid that Sue would then leave them with someone else, and they would end up getting hurt. She said she would rather be there for them to keep them safe, so she finally agreed to sign the proper paperwork. We all told her there was no way that she would lose the kids.
Angela sat her down and explained to her that with her support system, it would be in Seth and Leah’s best interest to become their legal guardian. It took us all a while to convince her that, since she was now a legal adult, and she had been taking such great care of them, that the court would be on her side. Carlisle, Rev. Weber, Jasper, Peter, Marcus, Samantha - who is another worker at Jasper and Peter’s office, Chas, Esme, Aro, Zafrina, and myself, were finally able to convince her. So far, quite a few people from the church and Sunday school program have written out statements, all in Bella’s favor. Aro and Zafrina have documented files that they have kept; all of which have been copied and sent to Emmett. Aro has documentation of all of the work she has done over the years. With Aro’s help, and Bella’s social security number, I have paid all of her back Social Security taxes, so she has documented earned income. Bella is also now a real employee of the college. She is no longer paid under the table.
Because Bella has had no education, we have set up a verbal IQ test for her to take. Since she is so smart in mathematics alone, I know her scores will be quite high. Once she can fully read, we are going to have her take the GED test and get her a diploma. Angela said that because the kids are in school, her inability to read will not be held against her. Angela was also quick to point out, that with the substantial support system that Bella has, DCFS would recommend that the children be placed with her at this point anyway.
Emmett says that at this point, he is ninety-nine point nine percent certain that Bella will be granted full legal guardianship of Seth and Leah in court. Until the hearing, there is a temporary order of guardianship filed, and unless they take Bella to court, neither Sue nor Harry can come in and take the kids away from her. The case has been booked for the second week in February, which gives us eight weeks to prepare.
Date: 25 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In
I have to say that I have slept very little to get this story read and up to date, and every now and again, I would say to myself, stop reading it and wait till it is finished, you will kick yourself in the end and that is what I am doing. Now I want the whole story and it is not there. It is like reading a good murder mystery and someone has torn out the ending.
I would really like for Alice and Rose to have to spend 5 minutes in Bella's life to see what she has really gone though. I am interested in where Sue has gone and how Bella has not said fuck it and started sleeping in that room. It is not like she is coming back.
As for the break-in I have a feeling it is one of 3 people. Sue or one of the family, Paul or Alice's crazy friend. Apart from that I cant think of anyone else.
I really cant wait for the up date.
Thank you for a wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Wow what else can Nikky or I say...once again the overwhelming response and the amount of story love we are receiving from so many people just makes us both feel so loved. I know that this story may have a few minor flaws, but we have tried all along to keep them to a minimum. So essentially thank you as always for reading and reviewing our story it makes us all giggly and excited to see all the reviews we are getting.
We asked you who you thought it might be that broke into Bella and the twins apartment, and I must say we were a little surprised that a lot of you have it figured out. With a wide range of evil or rude nasty characters, many of you said it was Uncle Harry...and you are right. There will not be resolution for a bit when it comes to Uncle Harry, so if you want to figure out what he was looking for all I can suggest is watch for clues. There are some very important and much asked for things coming soon.
We have been asked many times for Edward to stop using Aro’s girls for his pleasure. And where we understand why, we also knew it was very unrealistic for a man with so much anxiety, pressure, cynicism and tainted view to jump into a healthy relationship and give up the release and hidden pleasure he has surrounded himself in to get by for the past five plus years. He has slowly been weaning himself from the place, and very soon he will open up and tell Bella why he went there. We have been asked when you all get to know a lot more about Edward...well very soon actually, and by that I mean the next few chapters are chuck full of things from the past.
We have been asked if Renee will come back...(A LOT ACTUALLY)...Renee was Bella’s biological mother, who died when Bella was only three years old. At the age of three after her mother died, custody of Bella was given to Charlie Swan who was her biological father. Charlie was married to Sue Swan, who is the mom she talks about leaving all the time. Sue Swan is the person who left Bella to care for the twins. Since this story is not alternate universe, neither, Charlie or Renee will be making any grand entrance, unless via a dream. But don’t get too happy, because Sue Swan is still out there somewhere, and she has a few things to say.
We have been asked a lot if Alice, Rose, Siobhan, and Esme will make any redemption...Esme already has begun her turn around, and we think she is doing well. Siobhan, well she wore out her welcome quite completely at the ball, at this point there is not a real plan to drag her back into the storyline. Alice...well this is a hard one for me. I actually normally always LOVE Alice, but this Alice is a tough nut to crack. She is not going to bring in the roses and become a fan favorite anytime soon, but you will notice some changes. As for Rose, well...I just can’t wait to hear your opinions of her...and I am sure you’ll have plenty next week.
Updating...we had planned all along to only update every other week on Thursdays. However since posting the first chapter we have been on an every week posting schedule...and we have NO INTENTION of changing that at this time. Nikky and I have a comfortable cushion, and the next chapter to post is with the beta now. I got this weeks chapter back from the beta on Tuesday afternoon, so realistically we are posting around when they are ready. Nikky is working on her part of chapter 26 right now, and I am working on 24 so we are not looking at any lapses in time. We are both so excited you are choosing to come down this road with us.
Where the next chapter has some major info and angst, we promise that chapter seventeen will make up for it. Thanks again for always being so supportive and showing the story love HCV deserves.
Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 16 Teaser...subjected to changes during the BETA process...
Its Thanksgiving today, and I am on my way to pick up Bella and the kids. Bella and I decided that, after dinner with my family, they would all stay the night at my house tonight. I will run them home to get their things for the camping trip in the morning, and see them off to camp. Bella will make sure that Jake has enough food, and then she is coming to spend the weekend with me. I’m looking forward to this weekend, but I am worried about my growing feelings for her. I knock on the door before using my key to get in. Bella gave me a spare key so I could let myself in. The new door has a double lock on it, and is reinforced with steel; no one is breaking this one down.
I walk in, seeing Leah in a black, knee-length dress with a cream ribbon around the waist, and black shoes. Seth is wearing a pair of black pants and a cream colored button down shirt, with a black tie and shoes.
“Wow, look at you Leah! You’re very beautiful, and Seth, you look so handsome.” They both smile at me and look up as Bella walks in. She is in a cream colored dress, with a black ribbon around the waist. The dress goes to just above her knees; she looks fucking beautiful in it - so fucking beautiful.
“Wow, Bella! You look sensational...really beautiful. Are we all ready to go?” I look her up and down, I am so glad she allowed me to buy us all new outfits for today.
I got around her apprehension by telling her that I wanted to go to church with them this Sunday night. We are attending the evening service after Seth and Leah return from camp. Since I was buying something for myself, I wanted to get them something, as well. As usual, getting Bella to let me buy Seth and Leah something, was easy, but her...not so much. I was so fucking glad Seth and Leah helped me. I have on black pants and black shirt with a cream colored tie. I push my fucking guilty feelings down and smile at the three of them.
“Yes, we’re all ready.” Bella picks up their bags, and I quickly take them from her.
“Let’s go,” I say as I usher us all out the door together.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
I have to say I am happy with the way Bella put Rose in her place, but I really dont see her stopping any time soon. I actually think that she would need to loose this baby to see what Edward went though. I personally think she is a very spiteful selfish being.
I think I would have liked Bella to strike her back, but in a way that is not Bella. I think Alice needs to be put in her place a little as well.
I cant wait to see what is going to happen, I would like to hear Bella side soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. Nikky and I are both just so blown away by the response our story is garnering. Thanks to the many recommends and pimping we have been getting. Thanks for the response of our fans that make and send us banners and poems and mostly the kind words of love that give us the drive to keep HCV going strong.
There have been a lot of you all asking for the Bella point of view, and you are going to get it. The next chapter will have a lot of things going on and we hope you love it. The age reveal will be in chapter 17, along with a first kiss, the kids going off to camp, Edward and Bella together and meeting up with Sally...those are a few things you have to look forward to. We started a group on Facebook, you’re all invited to join. TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.
Now to the nitty gritty...
We both wondered how many of you would ask if Edward’s son was really dead or not, and if Tanya was dead or not. We want to be clear that Tanya Denali and the child she gave birth to are in fact deceased; they died in the fire.
We want to point out that Edward is not a Dom. He role-played and dabbled with the girls at the club, because it was his way of maintaining full control. He has no desire to tie Bella up and spank her, he is not looking at her as his next submissive or slave. Just want to be perfectly clear, he is not into the BDSM lifestyle, he is just a man who was seating his needs at a club the only way he saw fit to do so and protect his heart and soul.
Thank you again for all of the story love and wonderful things you say. You really have no idea what your words and kindness mean to us. Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 17 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
Right now, we’re back at Bella’s apartment getting Seth and Leah’s stuff ready for their trip.
“Okay, Seth, you have everything from your list in your bag, right?” I watch as he nods his head, and chuckle to myself since Bella had just checked over the list and the bag with him herself. “Leah, do you have everything from your list in your bag, too?”
“Yes, Bella. Edward and I just went through the list twice.” I turn my head to hide my chuckle.
“Okay. Well, we have to be at the church in forty minutes, and since Edward is taking us, we have time to double check.”
“Baby, Leah and Seth have everything they need. How about you go pack your bag now, and feed Jake? I will help Leah and Seth take their backpacks down to the car.”
“Okay, I will hurry,” she says, leaving to go to her box.
I can tell that Bella is trying to put on a strong front for them, but I know this is killing her to let them go on this trip. It will be good for them, though, and good for her, too. I have planned out this weekend so that she gets a chance to be a twenty-four year old for a change. After we have everything packed and ready, we head out.
I drive them to the church, seeing a bus and a bunch of children. I also see Sally there, and I frown as I pull into a parking space. “Sally works in the Sunday school. She’s the main reason they are going. She is taking her cell with her, and said that I could call her anytime. She is also going to have them call me before bed, and when they get up in the morning. You can stay here if you want. You don’t need to come with me. I won’t tell her who you are.” I turn to look at her, and smirk because she answered my internal question.
I shake my head. “No, I am fine, Baby. Thank you.”
The night of the break in, I explained to Bella that I went by a different name at Aro’s, and the girls I was with, had never seen my face because they were blindfolded. I was very glad that she just nodded her head, and didn’t ask any other questions. I hate the fact that I’ve been with them. I don’t want my sins to show in her eyes when I look at her each time I remember that she saw me there. When the time comes, and she finds out what I did and what happens there with me and the girls, I hope and pray to God that I don’t lose her friendship.
We get out of the car and start walking over. As we do, Sally waves, making her way over to us. Her eyes hit me for only a few seconds before she looks back at Bella.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises
I hold off leaveing it a few chapter at a time to read and as always you have left me wanting more.
I always leave after reading this story just wanting it to keep going, and the day this story ends will be very sad day for me.
Loved what happened to Gina, could not have happened to a nicer person... not. She really is the bitch from the west, and I am glad that her punishment was to loose everything her parents gave her.
As for Edwards little family, I am wondering when he will get to the point of needing them to be around all the time and move them in, my guess it wont be long. I cant wait for Christmas day to see the twin's face when they see their rooms.
Thanks you for a wonderful 3 chapters, til next time.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View and being such a wonderful part of our success in writing this story. We both put a lot of time into this story and we are very grateful to have the following that we have gathered. Because of the upheaval going on in Fan Fiction we are both concerned that HCV will or could fall victim to the haters and be removed – should this happen be assured that this story can be found on TWCS under the same name and it updates on the same schedule. We are also going to be posting a blogspot for this story and all of our stories, therefore we will always be able to be found. So rest assured that HCV will go on, no matter what. A lot of you are asking about Sue and when her return will come. We have made no secret that she will make an appearance, but before she does there are a few other things that will happen. At this point her return will not be for a few chapters yet. There are a lot of comments about Rose and there isn’t much about her in the next chapter, but after that there will be some things coming up. As we have said other times there are approximately 30-35 chapters within this story, and there will be around 6-8 Out-Takes posting...The Out-Takes will post under the name ‘Enduring His Cimmerian View’. There were not a lot of questions, and we have covered most of the comments concerns or worries, but if you have more questions you can always find us on Facebook under TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. There are always people leaving comments and their theories there, come join the conversations. Kasi &(Nikky)
Chapter 22 Teaser...subject to changes during BETA process.
We spent most of our day watching Christmas movies, and for supper we had a huge spread of really fattening foods. I had Eric prepare for me several wonderful dishes. I had wanted something easy for today - something that wouldn’t take away from our family day. The dishes he made only needed to be warmed up before serving. The kids loved it, but then again, we had some great things to choose from. Bella really loved the extra cheesy enchiladas and the lobster bisque. There were so many things to choose from that we had enough leftovers to last us for the next few days. After we ate, we cleaned up the kitchen together.
We all settled down in the living room after the clean-up was done for our new tradition. After we were all settled in, I passed out a few gifts to each person in the room. “Okay, here are a few gifts that you get to open before we go to mass tonight.” I made sure to pass out the gift bags that held our new matching clothing that Esme had chosen for our first Christmas mass together. I had asked Esme to help, and she did, but then refused to let me pay her back for the gifts. Esme said that the new outfits were from her, and that she was happy that I and my new family were going to attend services together.
“Edward, we can wait and open these gifts tomorrow, can’t we?” Bella asks.
“No, Baby; these gifts are for tonight for our church service together. This is our first Christmas mass we get to spend together and these gifts will help make it more special. They are from Esme, who wanted to help make this special. There are gift bags for each of us. Okay everyone, open them up and let’s see what we have.”
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights
Love the chapter, what a christmas. Good to see,
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 22 of His Cimmerian View. There aren’t a lot of questions about things going on, other than the arrival of Uncle Harry and of course Sue’s return. The story only has roughly 10 to 12 chapters left and through 26 are written and 27 is more than half way completed. BPOV out-take is coming along nicely but man alive is it HUGE over 22K word count right now and it is for sure a tissue warning. As for the few questions we have gotten, we have answers... We want to be clear that Emmett filed a paper that is giving Bella custody until the court hearing so right now no one can take the twins away from her, without first going to court. We also had someone ask about the title of the story over at TWCS, it is the same as it is at FFN... however at TWCS I have found it is easier to look up the author and then find the story, the story search is not super simple like it is at FFN. We are the same names both author name and story name at all sites we post at. On a side and personal note, I am very sorry for the delay of this... after I posted the last chapters on Thursday morning, my mother passed away. Unless something gets in the way the only thing that will be delayed is this review reply. The next chapter is ready to go... minus mine and Nikky’s final read through anyway. I want to thank you all for the kind words shared on Facebook already and thank you for the prayers and well wishes. If you haven’t joined us on Facebook, please do so there are lots of fun discussions and of course sometimes extra teasers and info too. Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us. Thanks everyone have a great week. Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 23: teaser subject to changes during beta process…
It’s New Year Eve and the twin’s eighth birthday. Seth and Leah shared a party yesterday at Chuck E. Cheese and they loved it. Esme, Chas, and Angela all took the day off and came to help out at the party. Aro brought Sulpicia and their son, Sammy, who is ten. Sammy seemed to have taken a liking to Leah, as he stayed mainly with her the entire time. Esme and Zafrina both said it was cute and sweet, but all I wanted to do was kill the kid. Bella even laughed at me and gave me a look when I let out a growl at little Sammy when he pulled Leah away while she was talking to us. I looked back at Bella and shrugged my shoulders, because I wasn’t really sure where the over-protectiveness came from.
Then there were the moms or whores as I call them. I got hit on a lot. Almost every mother of a child that had been invited was dressed like they were having a night out on the town, not taking their child to a classmate’s birthday party. Some even said that I was really nice to help Bella and her kids out like I have been. I felt like I was going to lose it as they made her sound so beneath them and that she was simply a charity case. Thankfully, Bella kept me calm and stopped me from screaming at them. As soon as school is back in session, I’ll be making it very clear to everyone what Bella and I are to each other. The fact that this was a place for children, and that it was Seth and Leah’s first real birthday party, stopped me from performing a very hot, public display of affection with Bella. I know for a fact I would have enjoyed it, and I’m sure I would have made Bella enjoy it, too.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors
wonderful chapter, I would like to be nasty and say I would like to see Rose go down in a big way, to the point of loosing everything... love, respect of her family, her sanity, but I cant. I just would like a really big lesson to be learnt, may be have some complications during the birth of her child, and no one be there for her. Emmett be their for his childs birth, but he be more worried about the child than her and she see what it is like to be alone and scared.
Alice, I think woke up this time around, I feel she need to give Bella more of a formal appology, or a better one. She was nasty and crule but not to the point of Rose.
Thank you for the wonderful chapter and I cant wait for the next.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. The next chapter will be a great one for sure, but as a loyal reader and reviewer pointed out so far most of the chapters have been just that... a great one. I know many of you are sick of Rose, and we assure you that there will be closure there soon. There is not much redemption for a character like Rose, however there are things happening that will at least show that Emmett is not in fact an idiot who allows Rose to be poisonous to all. Many of you are worried that the introduction of Mr. James Hunter will be a dangerous situation for Bella. James Hunter has been in the story all along, and he is a very volatile person, and there will be more to come that involves him in the near future. Alice is showing a bit of a change, but I think she knows she has made her final stand alongside of Rosalie. Keep in mind within days of chapter 24 posting that Enduring His Cimmerian View will post and the first out-take to post will be Bella’s POV up to and through chapter 24. We waited to give you Bella’s POV until Chapter 24 posted for a very good reason... sex. Yep get out your big girl panties and prepare yourselves for that, because it is going to be posting on Thursday, the BPOV will post hopefully next Saturday. There weren’t a lot of questions, but there is still some confusion. Rose and Jasper are Esme’s niece and nephew, whom Esme and Carlisle were given guardianship of when they were around 10/12 respectfully. Rose is older. Edward’s mother is MIA, but for all accounts and purposes he believes she is still alive. Bella’s birth mother was Renee who died of Cancer when Bella was 3. Charlie is Bella’s birth father and he is dead. Sue Swan was Charlie’s wife and Bella’s Step mother. Harry Clearwater is Sue Swans brother, and tormentor of Bella. We are excited to see your reviews from the next chapter as well as the BPOV that will post. Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 24 teaser... subject to changes in the beta process.
I’m in the middle of teaching when my phone rings. “Excuse me. Tia, please carry on for me.” Tia gives me a smile and takes over from where I left off. “Hello, Caius. I was just going to step into my office. How can I help you?”
I hear some chatter in the background. “Edward, I’m sorry for bothering you. Everything here is a big clusterfuck right now. I was just calling to give you an update on the Bree Tanner situation. We’ve had three more ex-students come forward with allegations claiming that Mr. Hunter did similar things to them, so the state police have taken over the case. I was one of the people they called in to assist, as they’re planning to speak to all of his ex-students. The officers got here yesterday and worked through last night and this morning. They need to speak to you, as well.” I sigh, rubbing my face, even though I had already expected this information. “This looks really fucking big, Edward. From what I’ve gathered, he targets a student in their junior year, mostly just degrading them at first. Then, when they enter their senior year, he starts to get physical with them at the same time he begins the process with another student. The three girls that came forward were manipulated into sleeping with him. Due to the fact they were all over eighteen at the time, they can’t get him for statutory rape, but are charging him with aggravated rape and extortion.”
I pull at my hair, hoping that James gets a shitty lawyer. A good one could use this to their advantage. “What’s the bond amount he’s being held on?”
There is a loud sigh and a chill travels down my spine. “Nothing. He was released pending charges after questioning. The charges were just filed, so now the officers are on their way to pick him up again.” We talk a little more about some other things before saying our goodbyes.
The rest of the day passes in a blur. The State Police being here is making life more stressful than it already is. Marcus sent in extra counselors and staff to help out with the backlash of shit that’s going on in Forks.
By the end of the week another three ex-students have come forward claiming that Mr. Hunter forced them into physical relationships with him. A current student has also come forward to say he had just recently started verbally abusing her.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise
The last sentence is confusing. I don't understand what he needs to tell them, you have lost me.
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews! We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do. I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View. I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking. But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go. Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records. Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow. Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s. Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle. Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see. Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well. In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting! I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are. I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29. At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week. No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting. If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted. We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV. Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all. Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm. I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can. I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again.
Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head. Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane.
“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us. That fucking bitch slapped me!
“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it? Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry. I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it. “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!” Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.
“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright. I nod and the three of them release me.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation
Wow a lot happened in this chapter that I did not see coming, I had a feeling something like this would but you floored me with some of the actual outcomes. I really hope that Edward will be able to get though to Bella and that she dose not feel threatened.
I understand where Edward is coming from with the kids and he already see them as one big happy family, I would be more worried about what Sue/Tanya has done to Bella... sold her!!! that is BIG.
Thanks for the update.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers. It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks. Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process. I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30. After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters. Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for. I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist. (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL. Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali. I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried. I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to. Neither of those statements was untrue. I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s. You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information. Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk. Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see. Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming. She is quite sly, like a fox. We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking. I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities. I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline. We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it. We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers. Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us! Kasi (&Nikky)
Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process
I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor. Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying. I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.
“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do? This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know. Why…why would she lie about that? I did everything they ever asked. I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them. Why? I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it.
“Bella, please calm down. I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”
As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too. She looks broken and scared.
“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.
“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know. I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know. If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear. Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you. If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged. I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved. I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last. “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.
Date: 09 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Loved this story from beginning to end,
President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?
Banner by the lovely vbfb1
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
Date: 18 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Close Encounters
I found your story by crusing around TwCS. I have to say I love it and probably should have left it...now I am going to be like all your other readers and get frustrated when I need more.
Thanks for a writing a wonderful story and keep these two at each other for as long as you have, when most people would have had them in bed about 5 chapters ago.
Regards
Fiorella
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Kick ass story, loved every chapter of it.
A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever happened to them. ExB AH
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue
Loved your story, perfect in every way.
Banner made by the talented chistagbanners.
Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.
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Banner by FallingSnow
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Seems FallingSnow ripped off my picture for my story. The only reason I comment on it and say it is my picture is because the original is colour and I created that one she used for yours. I wanted something that no one had used and this was original... looks like this is not anymore.
I can honestly say I am not impressed, and I know it is the one I used as some of Bella's head has been cut off, from where FallingSnow has cut off Tangled Hearts, which is my story, and she has even used the same font... how original.
Author's Response:
I just wanted to let you know that I did not request the banner, or the image, or anything. I received it as a posting on my facebook page a while ago and have just now put it up on here. Sorry for any issues it might have caused, but if the image was easily found online, then it will probably be used often by others. I know it has happened to others before when they put up a manip for others to see, and then their manip is thrown into a google image search and others take it and use it.
After guest hosting on a morning show, Isabella becomes the new co-cost for the show. Her husband James leaves her out of spite and jealousy and Bella swears off men to focus on her new career change. Edward Cullen was known for being a portentous, arrogant, SOB while running a branch of Masen Enterprises. After the death of his grandfather, Edward becomes the new CEO. His soul focus is on the expansion of the company, and to find out who has been stealing from and framing his grandfather. When Edward visits the morning show to defend the honor of his grandfather's legacy, he finds his self extremely attracted to the beautiful co-host Isabella. In the occurrence of unexpected events the pair cannot seem to stay away from each other. How long can they resist the inevitable? Reviews for this story on fanfic 1,672
Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the lemonade stand
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, The Inevitable, Shena's Storys to Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306607 Read Count: 206634
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: An ending is just another beginning
hmm not sure about there being a sequel, but lets see what u got!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: My Relationship under a microscope
i am noy sure Jane is the person bhind it but i noticed the throw in with the cig's.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Stormy with a ray of Hope
Ohhh i was hopeing for boys!
One night of passion leads to big changes for Bella as she faces the consequences. But will she fess up to their actions or keep the forbidden romance going? Is he hers to have and to hold or will he be another's before its all over? AH, BxE
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131665 Read Count: 41457
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I dont understand my more people are not reading your story. I have fallen in love with these two. Even if I don't condone what they are doing, but the way Rose treats Bella and Edward would push anyone away. I have a feeling she is cheating on Edward with Emmett and I am sure he is not the first one.
I am sure that will come out soon as well.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
OH MY FUCKING GOD!
I don't think I have cried like this for a while in a story that I have read, you have killed me with this chapter. I tell you what, if you ended the story there it would be poetic.
Star crossed lovers, only ever to be seen in the star, never on this earth were they bound to be.
What a chapter, when I started reading the last 4 chapters did I see this one coming. You have made my Friday night depressing, I don't think I could even find another update that could pick me up from this.
You are a cruel woman, but I tell you I can not wait to read what is going to happen. I think it is going to come out that it is not Edwards baby and I really thought Bella had it when they were at lunch with Rose in the last chapter, I was screaming at the screen, Bella wake up out of your stupor...
Ohh well I can't wait for the next up date I really hope it is soon, thank you soooooo much for this story.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
ohhh he woke up and grew up all in one chapter!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Wow, I did not realise that this would be the end, I thought there might have been a couple of more chapters, you know Edwards explaining to his parents, a bit of back lash from Rose, but no, just cut off and there you go the end.
Ohh well. I really did enjoy this stroy, even if the ending was a little abrupt. But just as fitting in the end.
Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491650
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
It has taken me a week to read ninety-six chapters for starters...
Firstly I love the story line and I love the story. So please, with what I have to say next... dont say that this story might not be for you, I am making this comment to help you as a writer, you can take it on board or you can ignore it. The choice is yours.
Secondly, I am all up for a sex scene here and there and even one ever chapter, but seriously 3 - 4 times a chapter or chapter after chapter, after chapter... it gets a bit much. You are loosing the original story line.
Thirdly after ninety-six chapter, I am sure by now Renee and Billy could have planned what they are going to do ten times over... lets get to the crux of the story already, and you would be there if you were not to focused on them humping each other, we get they love each other, we get they cant keep their hands off each other. Give me depth of character not sex for the sake of filling a chapter.
Lastly, enough with the repeating, I think you have said that every one fears of the Cullens about 50 times... I get it they are a fearful family, you only had to tell me once, I have memory. We know that Edward is unhappy with how the other families live their life, you say every time you write Ciaus or his daughter into it... Once is enough. You are treating your readers as if they are forgetful nitwits... they aren't, they love your story or they would not be reading it, they will remember the facts.
I hope you take my comment for help, not putting your story down. As I said if I did not love it I would not have read 96 chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you like the plot to this story. As for all the sex scence in the story. They are newly wed's, they are suppose not to be able to keep there hands off each other. The reason it has taken so long for Renee and Billy to get there scheme together is because its a well thought out plan. The Cullens are a well respected family and feared. As a reader myself sometimes I forget what has been said at the beginning for the story specailly if they are a really long story chapter wise. I really do value your thought and opionion's and I really hope that you will contiue to read this story after everything is said is over and done with. Thank you for your review.
The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?
Banner by Amandac3
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Really Edward, Please get up out of bed, get on a plane and go talk to her face to face, she is acting like a 3 year old that cant tell the difference between a set up. She knew what Leah had told her...
Once again drama when there should not be, Bella should have done to Leah what she did to Jacob, but instead acted like a pansy and took off running. Now Edward has to go chasing like a girl.
Author's Response:
Again, thank you. I am happy that you feel so passionate about the characters.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Can you say drama Queen!
Ohh another one... Counting your chickens before the hatch. He was sitting at a table talking to Leah and he held her hand, he could have picked it up for a second and congraulated her and then let it go.
Get off you high horse Bella, you made an idiot of yourself and your acting like a my neice and she is 3 year old.
No wonder your relationships dont work your a runner. At the slightest bit of trouble you pack a bag and run, instead of standing there and fighting for what you want.
I have to say I really like this story until this chapter, it show just how immature your Bella is and I thought she was stronger than that, after all she had be through with Jacob, you then change her to be this weakling, that is so not the Bella I have been reading up till now.
You did wrong by your Bella in this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I loved this chapter, I really hope the next one is not Edward re-telling this chapter, I don't think I can handle it, well unless there is new information, I don't need the party retold or the sex.
Love this story.
Author's Response:
There's a little more.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Yeah, Edward!
I hope he really does not take you back so quick. You should be on your knees begging him to take you back. Anything less would be unrealistic.
I have to say that her friends were too lenient on her as well; I am amazed the way Edward family reacted to Bella. It only took one time for my brother’s wife to walk out on him, for me to not like her anymore. I treated her like another sister and she wanted to go any play happy families with another guy, which only lasted 3 months and she was back at my brother to forgive her. When they got back together, my whole family let her know how we felt, there was, no ring and apologising for the words we spoke to her. She broke my brother’s heart and took his child away from him.
Bella did the same to Edward, broke his heart, his brother should not have been that nice to her, they betrayed Edward and so did his parents. Yes be pleasant to her, but invite her to Carlisle Birthday, was taking it a step to far.
Author's Response:
Again, thanks for your passionate review, famaggiolo. It's sad this is hitting close to home for you.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I did not mind this chapter until the last lines. Really if I was Edward, I would make her chase me, I would have tuned on my heals and walked away. She made herself quite clear on what she wanted in life. I understand him wanting to take her back, I am all for it. But making it this easy for her, I am not sure any man would.
Firstly she assumed someone touching his hand meant something without her confirming it before running away like a child.
Then she would not stop and listen to reason, when everyone was telling her what she saw, was not what she saw, again talking to everyone like they were idiots and she was correct.
Then she ran away like a petulant teenager thinking she knows everything, and everything she knows is correct.
Then after all of this she sits in her rooms, closes herself off from the world for a month… feeling lonely calls her friends and still chooses to not believe what they are saying even though they have only repeated what they told her a month ago.
Then goes home and mopes there like the petulant teenager she is still acting like and in the process she want to know what is happening with Edward, but acts all nonchalant about it.
Then goes to his parents’ house even though she does not want to, and think he won’t turn up. Who does not turn up for his father’s birthday when you are as close as this family… really Bella pull you head out of behind!
After all of this he still hugs her… I don’t think so!
There cannot be a happy ever after for the next chapter. There really has to be some realistic word said to Bella for her to realise what she did. I am all up for the make-up sex, but I am sorry it would not happen within a few hours.
Maybe a few weeks or a month, but a few hours or days… that is not real, ordinary people would have to jump through hoops like a poodle. I understand this is fiction, but at least make it seem real. Not everything is all rainbow and sunshine all the time, with soft kittens.
What I am say is I would like to see Edward just get angry and tell Bella what she really did to him.
Author's Response:
Wow, famaggiolo, you are one passtionate reader. Thanks for your review and your insight.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
hmmm, I have mixed emotions about this chapter and how they are both acting. I am not happy but then again I am not angry either.
I think I will wait to pass judgement until I see the next couple of chapter. I want to see what Edward is really thinking and if he will forgive her that easily.
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint you but he does forgive her easily. You might want to skip the next couple chapters.