Reviews by CelticGlamazon
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever

Beautiful...I have really enjoyed this story and wish you all the luck with your writing in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for rating and reviewing! And thank you for the well wishes...I will take all the luck I can get.

All my best,

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

Omg what a great idea...truth or dare Cullen style! I also love the idea of Jasper teaching her Shibari way more than I should! /grin

Author's Response:

LMAO!  Yeah, the idea of Jasper and a little knot tying is hot!!!  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

Fantastic and utterly hawt!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review!  I'm glad you liked it!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

Love the gifts...barbies for Alice was a great idea! Congrats on all the nominations!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  LOL, I couldn't help but give Alice a Barbie.  It was too perfect an opportunity to pass up on.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

Vampire whack a mole...lol! Fun chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL, I'm glad you liked that part. ;)  Thanks for the review.

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Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop

Fantastic lemon...oh my my! The lollipops were amazing to! Great chap, bb!

Author's Response:

{Giggles}  It was pretty yummy, wasn't it?  Glad you liked it!  Thanks for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

I hope Carlisle rips her a new one! Fantastic chapter...I love where you are taking this.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the words of encouragement and the rating!  I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

I cried when rose prayed....fantastic chapter bb...very moving.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Fantastic as always darling!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review.  Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Wow just wow bb...I was wondering if he was going to assert dominance with her, and this was one hell of a way to do it.  I love that you allowed Alpha Carlisle to keep his compassion and respect for her during this process.  Him being so worried about crossing a line and truly breaking her kept him your Carlisle.  /Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rating and review.  I felt like I walked a very fine line with Carlisle, but I am glad that you felt he stayed true to who he is.

Thanks again.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Fantastic outfit...and Carlisle tearing through a wall in his ardor, grrr. This was just a very yummy chapter.

Author's Response:

Tee hee hee.  Yeah, I do love an animalistic Carlisle too.  Thanks for the R&R and for sticking with me.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- Reunited

Fantastic as always...the sun room was a great choice.  Though my absolute favorite part was Carlisle licking her palm.  /swoon

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah...I loved that part too.  So secret....so dirty.  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey