Reviews by benna
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

Just found this story, and I am totally hooked! Sounds like it is really going to be a good one and I am looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Great chapter, I totally love this story and can't wait for Edward.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Whoa that was crazy. So is Edward going to be as demented as "The Father"? Or is he going to help him and Bella escape that place.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Wow I am so glad I found you. Everyone is leaving FF. For good reason of course. Great chapter, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Great chapter. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Yes he is finally getting his. Sad to hear it is almost over, I have truely enjoyed this story. Hope you write another.

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83467
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was a great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I think your doing just fine as is. I love this story, and I love how Edward is so dominant. The last two chapters were awsome, keep it up I'll be looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter, really love both Edward and Emmett in this story.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. One of these days she is going to push Mr. Edward to far I have a feeling.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Uh oh! She is going to get it from him one of these days. Great chapter.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well I am hoping that she is not pregnant, and wondering who pulled up to her at the end there. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OMG I can't believe you left it like that. Dieing for next chapter over here.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ok so They might as well get married I mean they love eachother so whats the problem. It's not like they are being forced to love eachother they already do. I guess I would be mad if it was a requirment given to me but I figured they would be thinking that way any how. Anyways great chapter.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171538
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: benna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow I just found this story, and I soo love it. I am really looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. I love this story, and was so happy to see an update. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't believe you did that. I am going to be waiting for an update.......That will hopefully come sooner than later.:) Oh great chapter by the way. I just want more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this story and I get so excited to get updates from you. This was a great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh man Why does that B**** aways have to show up. Loved the chapter, Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awsome chapter. I loved all your updates and I always look forward to seeing you in my inbox. 

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

AAAHHH! You just left it like that OMG! I want to see the kiss. How sweet if he is about to actually kiss her. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter, was so happy to see an update. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yes! So happy. I hope there is more. I love this story.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh come on! I need the next chapter like now!!! Love this chapter, keep it comming. :)

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ahhh I really loved this chapter. It was soo sweet and I love how they are getting closer. All though I must say that it is not Victorias fault that Rose and Emmett aren't together. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chaptet. I loved it. Can't wait for Rose to come back into the picture.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I wa so glad to see an update from you this was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next to see what is going on with Rosalie.......I so want them back together. I also can't wait to see how the whole thing with Edward and Bella goes with the therapy talk.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WOW!! That was so intense. Great chapter and I love that Edward and Bella are officially together now. He is so sweet to her and I love that. I of course can't blame Emmett on how he is feeling but I do hope he can forgive her and maybe they can get back together. I also hope that maybe Emmett will tell Bella everything and maybe she can be his shoulder to cry on. How sweet would that be. Thanks for the update, Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved the whole Bella and Charlie bonding. I wish Emmett would talk to Rosalie though. Great chapter.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

He defenitly need to go and talk to Rose. I also think the outtake should just be labled posted in the stories as outtake 1, that would just be easier. Great chapter loved it thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ahhh why couldn't we have different drama. I thought this whole Renee thing was behind us. I love this story I just feel like the whole Renee thing is being dragged out now. Anyways thanks for the update. Haven't been able to read or review in like forever cause my computer was down. It's good to be back. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Loved this chapter it was so sweet and I am so glad we got to read about thier Christmas. I was so glad to see an update from you I really enjoy this story. I can't wait to see how Charlie is going to handle "the talk". Thanks for the update, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OMFG.....Yes I want to kill you but I also really really want to know what happens in the next chapter. Sooner than later I hope. Thanks for the update. I'll be waiting!

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awwww I loved that chapter. Thanks for the quick update. Can't wait for more....keep it commin! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

Just found this story and it is really good. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you like it.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Wow that was intense. Amazing chapter. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I know it was intense but I had to do it.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

Thanks for the update. Loved this chapter.



Author's Response:

Anytime ;)  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

Yes, so now that they both realize they have feelings for each other, maybe they can get together now. I love this story, Thanks for all the amazing updates. I can't wit for more.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry to say that I think Edward and Bella still have a long road ahead of them and sometimes in the end love isn't enough.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Alice is up next.....

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

Great chapter, thanks for the update.I'll be waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Bella's up next.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

I like the chapters the way they are...longer because when you update you know your going to get a good chapter with plenty of info to hold you over til the next chapter. I hate short chapters. This chapter by the way was great and I really hope he tells her how he feels soon so that she can give in to how she feels about him.



Author's Response:

I agree longer is better, this way none of the small details get missed. But I would of made mini chapters if people wanted it. I'm happy to say that almost everyone agrees with you so I will do my best to post as soon as possib;e.

Edward and Bella are both so messed up. I just hope they can get there.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

Holy crap your back... I can't believe it. I thought this story was over for sure. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for more. I love this story.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

Great chapter. I love these updates. Bella seems to be taking things very well. I thought the domestic dicipline would have her running for the hills but I guess since he is HOT!!! Then it is ok. ;) Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

Thanks for the update. I hope we get more.....soon :)

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

Loved this chapter. I was so excited to see an update for this story. I wish you updatnks for the update.ed more often.I really enjoy this story. Tha

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108595
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Uh oh! Great chapter, and great to see your back. Thanks for the update.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195593
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Wow I just found this story and it seems really good,intense and crazy but really good. looking forward to more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

Great chapter, really enjoyed it. Thanks for the update, looking forward to more.

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok just found this story and I love it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Seriously! No way. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well that was an awsome chapter and what a cliffy. I hope we see more from you soon. I hate waiting. This is really a good story. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter... Oh and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

YAY!!!! I loved it. Thanks for the update. Hope to get another soon.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Good thing he saw them. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

Great story. Just found it and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

So glad to hear you enjoyed!  Thanks for reading! 

More just as soon as RL permits me!!  :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: The last straw

I hope he gets there in time!!!! Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: There's something about Rosalie

Thanks for the update. Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

Wow That was an intense chapter. Really good chapter as well. I hope she doesn't let him leave her. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

I love this story and I am so glad he decided to stay with her. I can't wait for the next chapter. Have a great vacation and of course get plenty of writing done :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

Awsome chapter I loved it. Had no idea about Jake. That was crazy. Are we going to learn more about Bellas past soon?



Author's Response:

Yes, Jake is a little... crazy lol. Yes, you will learn everything about Bella... and soon ;) 

I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

Yes!!! I loved this chapter and haven't been able to read much or review at all because my computer was all messed up. That is until now though. Loved this chapter, so glad they are going to be staying with the Cullens, and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

So glad you like it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

Great chapter. thanks for the update.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

Awwww I love Edward he is so good to her. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

So glad you updated. This was an awsome chapter. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

So glad you are back. I can't wait for the next chapter. Loved the picnic, and I love that Edward and Carlisle seem to be bonding a bit.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

Thank you for this update. I have been waiting for one and now I can return to my happy place and wait for another update. Loved this chapter. I don't blame him for not wanting her to go there with him but that will just be pure torture for him to make her stay behind. Don't like it nope don't like it one bit, but you said not to freak out so I'm not going to. Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

I was so excited to see an update from you. Your updates might be far apart in time but they are definitley worth it. I loved this chapter. Thanks for the update and I am sooo excited for the next chapter of them in Portland.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

loved this chapter. Thanks for the update. I cant ubelieve Jake stabbed her and I wish Edward would just get Bella and leave.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255205
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I loved this chapter and I really do see Leah side but she also needs to start to trust Bella and get to know Edward so that she can feel good about her sisters situation. Thanks for the update. I always look forward to the new chapters. Oh and you just keep making me love Edward more and more every time.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter of course. Loved it! Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades. “I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs. “Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly. “What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me. “Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Just tuneing in and that was HOT!!! Love this story and am looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

Here's a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think it is not too mushy. I love how he can be her dom yet still show affection or comfort when needed. this is one of my favorite stories. I love it keep it coming.



Author's Response:

i think he should be like that, strong, yet tender and caring, the perfect man...Where do I get one of them?? lol

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. Thanks for the  update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you ...lml

            Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placinghis hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

"I like big butts and I cannot lie......" That would be funny. I loved that Bella attacked Emmett. That was unexpected and kind of cute. Thanks for the update I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awww! Poor Bella. They are so mean. Edward will make it all better I'm sure. :) Thanks for the update, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

He will try ...thaks for reading  and leaving a comment ...lml

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Well I think your right. The hit was so much sweeter coming from Bella. Jared seems to still have some feelings for her....maybe? A little creepy too....maybe? Loved this chapter and as usual I will be waiting for more. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and yes it was more imposrtant that Bella did the honors ....

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow I would have totally wanted a physical punishment instead of what he had to do. Not that I blame him but stuff like that can really cut a person. I would defenitly rather had a quicker punishment that wouldn't hurt so much on the inside.



Author's Response:

Yes, I know what you mean ...thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter. Loved the whole talk her and Jane had. Can't wait for her to get her tatoo. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

tattoo is next chapter ,,,thanks for the comments..lml

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Loved it!!! They are so darn perfect together. Thanks for the update, I'll be waiting for more.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awsome! Great chapter, thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading I have a teaser for you...lml

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That was awsome! Hot! Loved it. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Well first of all I hated her getting him dressed. It almost made him look weak. I don't know why but thats how I felt. Him calling her slut didn't bother me at all. I am sure it bothered some but that actually is quite common. Loved the dance floor orgasim. That was hot. What is with her sister. I mean really she was being so mean, and Stephan what was that supposed to mean? Now about the canning. Obviously that scared the crap out of her, but she seems ok with him spanking her. Is that correct? Just want to make sure I am understanding everything correctly. Love this story, Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yes Bella likes a good spanking it gets her body pumping ...lol  and Edward wanted her to see the caning because on her limits she indicated that she would like to try that,,did you see her limits on the extra's??? ...anyway ...he was not expecting that reaction from her, so it will be interesting to see why that happened...thanks for reading ..lml

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow well now we know why she freaked out ha! Loved this chapter. I will be waiting for more. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my uneasiness. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I agree the imagination is a beautiful thing. Thanks for the awsome update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Well one of her goals should definitley be to not get into trouble cause I think she is in some trouble this time.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow that was intense. Poor Bella. Loved this chapter. I'll be waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you...lml

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I always get the Borders special edition but this year they don't have the same as the previous two movies so I went with the Target special edition because it is in the same type of packaging as the last two borders editions, and they all must match you know. It's the nicest one this time in my opinion. Now on to th chapter. It was awsome as usual. I loved her punishment even though it really wasn't much of a punishment. I wonder...would Bella like spankings as much if he used it as punishment? I think that if she can take a spanking for pleasure than she can defenitly take one for punishment. Especially since she trust Edward so much. Just a thought. Thanks for the update,I always look forward to them.



Author's Response:

I was at Boarders at midnight for the release ...she loved her punishment too ...ummm as far as your question about the spanking, hand on to panties for a few more chapters and maybe you will be able to answer your own question...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Loved this chapter. I thimk her relationship with Jane is awsome and very important. Can't wait for the playroom! Thanks for the update. You rock.



Author's Response:

She needs Jane ... moree then she knows ,,,,

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

AWWW I loved that chapter. One of my favs I think. Thanks for the update. Just one question though. Was she just overwhelmed and coming down from a major high or was she freaking out a bit? Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Ummm...Bella was more then overwelmed and Edward will explain what happened to her in the next posting ,,,thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

WOW great chapter. Could have gone without the whole pinky mouse info, but loved the rest of the chapter. Poor Bella is right! That is going to be torture. Can't wait for the next chapter Thanks for the update and have a Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oh shit!!! That was so hot.



Author's Response:

Cold shower hot? Or where's my vibrator hot?...lol....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Well obviously someone from the bar right? I was still thinking it was Heather because of everything the girls said about her. Or maybe Thier is two of them working together. Just a thought. I hope she gets to be fed but it doesn't look like it's going to happen anytime soon. This was a great chapter ans as always I will be looking forward to more. Thanks for the update you are awsome!



Author's Response:

She hopes to be fed soon too... and I'm sure she will behave very well so that happens....Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Loved this chapter of course. I love all your chapters. I hope Irena is being honest. Maybe she will end up helping them. I actually loved the whole seen with her getting in trouble for kissing his peen. It shows how much they are growing in thier D/s relationship and he is getting more and more strict with her realizing she isn't as fragil anymore like in the beganing of thier relationship.Thanks for the update I'll be waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Did you notice she is not as fragile??? Thank you!!! Did you notice that not every little thing brings her to tears...she can suck it up ...I'm so pround of her ...lol....

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Ok so I must say that this chapter is defenitly one of my fav's. From begining to end it was great and I couldn't peel my eyes away for a second. Thanks for all the amazing work you do us readers really do appreciate it. I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

It was one of my fav's too....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Great chapter. I loved it. He is getting stricter with her........I love it!!



Author's Response:

He will get stricker, more demanding and as time goes on more rules will be added ...that's just a natural progression ...

Thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you...

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh shit!!! He wouldn't.....would he?

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

That was hot!! I think they should definitley go modified to forks.  Thanks for the update and I will b waiting for more :)

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

NO WAY!!! What r u doing to us??? That was one of my favorite  chapters. Thanks for the update. I'll defenitly be waiting for more.



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Reviewer: benna Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Ok I really think that this was one of my most favorite chapters of all. It was sweet, funny, sexy, cozy, and just awsome!! I loved it and I can't wait for more. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”