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Bio:
Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89652
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
I just wanted to let you that I really enjoyed your story. I think that the personality changes that occurred in Bella were realistic. I also enjoyed the interaction and friendship between her Rose's character.
While I really enjoyed the Twilight Saga I always felt that Bella's character was done a disservice by never getting to fully expericne the anger and betrayal from the abandoment of the Cullen family and especially the parental figures Carlise and Esme.
Thanks again for a great story.
PS - Given the choice I know I would've dumped Edward in a minute (no make that a second!) for Jasper
Author's Response:
I totally agree...Jasper is the better pick ;) I'm really glad ya liked the story. Thank you! I was always upset that Bella just let the family back in and never said a word about how their leaving affected her. I'm honestly thinking they still don't know. LOL. Of course, I can also argue that she didn't need to go off her rocker for a boy either. ;) Now if it was Jasper well that would be different*giggles*
Glad you enjoyed it.If you go over to fanfiction.net there is an outtake I just realized I never posted over here. Same story title and author name.
Thanks again!
xoxoxoxoxo
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