Membership status: Member
Bio:
Voldemort has won the war, and now it is time to collect his spoils
Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: Hermione/Tom Riddle
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7252 Read Count: 4677
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
very interesting! hope you get to update soon!
Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.
WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Bonjour Paris
I love it! But I'm French, so I wanted to point out some inconsistencies (there are no errors for the moment ;) ).
For the phrase : "Bonjour, vous êtes Mademoiselle Swan, oui?"
("Hello, you're Miss Swan, yes?")
I know in English at the end of a question you can say "yes". But in French you do not say "oui" ("yes") to the end of a question, rather you say "n'est ce pas?"
And uh ... Moira is not a name in French! XD and I've never met someone called like that. And Guy and Simone, they are very, very cheesy names here (in France)! So I don't think that even an adult called Guillaume ask to be called Guy. And if parents of a girl called Simone, oh I'm so sorry for her!!
So as I said if you're not French you can't know that! So it does not matter at all, but if you want to make your story realistic and modern do not hesitate if you research name used in France!
Bisous, bisous
Audrey!
Author's Response:
Hello,
First things first, next time ask me where I get the names, it was kind of rude of you to just simply tell me that my choices were outdate, cheesy and you will feel sorry for someone named Simone. Just so you know, ALL the characters that aren't in the Twilight books are named after close friends of mine, friends that have encouraged me to write and supported me throughout the years, and I really don't care if their names are outdated. I liked their names, so I used them, end of.
About the line: "Bonjour, vous êtes Mademoiselle Swan, oui?"
I will correct that, this chapter was written before I got a pre-reader who could help me out on all things French, and since she was kind enough to ask me first about the names, I think I will stick with her.
Thanks for the review.
Mina
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: The Girls
I still love! Just a small clarification, in France studies are not as expensive as the U.S.. For example, I am a third-year literature and I pay 500 euros for a year. Of all the students in my class, I'm the one who pays the most because my father is a doctor, my friend, both parents don't have jobs so it doesn't pay the university and she has a scholarship. In France when you're alone and penniless, administration helps you and you can have up to 1000 euros per month scholarships, and more if you work.
Bisous, bisous
Audrey
Author's Response:
Are you a foreign exchange student? I know foreign students pay a little bit more if they don't have an scholarship.
Arrogant, talented and young Edward Masen moves to a new town. He is in need of a tutor and he finds one in the form of Dr. Carlisle Cullen. Edward's talent is indisputable, but his attitude is unacceptable. Soon, the young pianist will discover he doesn't need to be in control all the time, and his tutor will show him how simple following orders can be. Written for the 2011 Christmas Wishes T4T Compilation.
Warnings:
SLASH/BDSM/LANGUAGE/NSFW/GRAPHIC LEMONS
Betas: MaverickWrit, Nails233 and ButterflyBetty.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Erotica, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21459 Read Count: 11340