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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: cc cullen Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Loved the chapter. Why won't Bella consider moving to Edward?  Wouldn't that be easier and Jack would be closer to the rest of his family.  Love the story. Hate James and cannot wait for E to finally see him for what he is.

Thank you for sharing a great story with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: cc cullen Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

So perfect!!!  I loved the chapter; loved the story from the first posting. Thanks for another great chapter.  How about Charlie?  Love him.  Cannot wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, in the process realizing everything isn't always as it seems. Canon couples, E&B Eventually, NO Cheating

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152943 Read Count: 29067
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: cc cullen Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Esme is certifiable!    I did not understand the time line.  Nathan was staying with Jasper but it sounds like Jasper came back to help clean up after the party. If he did, where was Nathan? Glad to see they are talking to each other.  I look forward to the next chapter.  



Author's Response:

WOW! All I can say is WOW! Thank you all so much for taking the time to read and review! Truly, every review means the world to me and it’s because of you that I love our fandom! I take all of your words to heart and do my best to keep you happy with every update.

This will be long, so my apologies and it’ll be in standard form!

First, thank you to whoever thought to nominate me for a Shimmer Award! That is absolutely amazing, whenever voting starts I’ll put it out there.

Second, I wrote a Blind Intentions Outtake for The Fandom Against Domestic Violence. The outtake is of Edward & Bella at the cafe three days after their one-night stand. The compilation is available from Feb 1st-28th. Please visit http://fandomagainstdomesticviolence(dot)blogspot(dot)com/ for details!

Teaser for the FADV Outtake:
“Hey,” he spoke first. “I’m Edward Cullen.” He put his hand out, as if we’ve never met before, and I raised an eyebrow as I followed his lead.

“I’m Bella Swan,” I replied as our hands dropped.

I shifted nervously as he laughed.

“I’m sorry, I’ve been thinking up ideas to make this less awkward, but I’ve failed. So, how about we just get to know each other. Sound okay?” he asked. His words sounded genuine, and he seemed like a nice guy, so I nodded.


Next, as promised, here is the BPOV for part of Chapter 20. This is from the time Esme leaves until Edward comes to her room!
“Bella?” I heard Edward’s voice, but it sounded distant.

Beautiful

Amazing

Caring

Not a gold-digger

Did he just say all of that? About me? I thought he felt that way...but to stand up to his mom? Did he just...

When I turned my face towards his, I could see the hesitancy behind his eyes as he held his hands up. He did...did he mean this?

I heard myself sob before I recognized the moisture on my cheeks.

I didn’t know what to do, so I ran.

The only room Edward had never invaded was my room. This was my safe haven when I couldn’t handle him anymore.

Over the past nine years, I had seen Edward be a lot of things, but I had never seen him be the man I saw today. When I saw him walk into the room, I expected him to snap at me for hitting his precious mother, but then he didn’t...and then he said...

I started to sob harder. My heart felt like it was ripped to shreds.

I was lying to myself if I didn’t see a family with Edward, but I couldn’t do it. I had never thought I wanted it before, but now that he was here, everyday, I wanted it. I wanted to trust him, but I didn’t know how because memories of her always loomed in my head, but now...now...God, I was so confused.

“Bella?” I heard him before I saw him. I looked up and was captivated by his eyes so I quickly glanced down. I couldn’t let him see his effect on me, not until I knew what it meant.

Could I move past this?

Could we move past this?

I wasn’t sure...but I was willing to try.


Last, is the outtake for Blind Intentions Chapter 21! Sorry it’s un-beta’d!
“So, what is going on with you two?” Emmett asked quietly in the kitchen. I followed the train of his sight to Bella, who was currently sitting under a pile or gifts bags and tissue paper.

“We’re going to try,” I answered. Try as I might I couldn’t help the smile that took over my face.

I heard Emmett talking, but was too busy looking over at Bella to listen. Her head turned and our eyes met. She returned my smile, before looking down and blushing lightly.

Alice hit her knee and she immediately went back to focusing on the thank you notes the women were currently working on.

WOO HOO! If you’ve made it to the end, you’re pretty awesome! Until next week, lots of love!!!!!
Kelly (SLM)

 

PS. Only Emmett came back to clean up.

Summary:

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It was perfect, almost too perfect, to believe that their young, intense love would continue on forever, as most young lovers do. What happened between Edward and Bella that broke their genuine and beautiful relationship?

Prequel to "Anhelo Amarte".

Bella's POV.

Lemons and some angst because breaking up is hard to do.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Charlie (non sexual)
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72871 Read Count: 6237
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2011 Updated: 30 Aug 2012
Reviewer: cc cullen Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Adios. Que te vaya bien.

Thank you for the shout out.  My heart is broken!  If I did not know that they find their way back together again, I would not be able to stop my sobbing.  As it is, it kills me that they wasted so much time apart.  I cannot wait for their future. 

I would love to see your tumblr page.  so let me know how to access. If you need a beta, I would be happy to do it.  Let me know.  I cannot wait for more!

!feliz compleanos! I hope you enjoy your very special day.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sticking through it with me. I really appreciate it. This is the tumblr address: http://saraimcullen.tumblr.com/ And thank you for the birthday wishes!

And thank you for volunteering to be beta. I'm still trying to get my ducks in a row, but I'll let you know what happens with that. Thank you, thank you, thank you!