Well at least they both listened to him. Snr seemed ok with Edward, I hope they are not playing him.

I hope she isn't hiding anything from Edward, protecting the asswipe Jacob. Glad they were mostly honest with each other and talked

Love this fic, read it all last night/ this morning and thought I should go back and send you some love

Well at least they all hit it off and jasper is who he says he is. Dimples definately has a thing for Bella

The dancing and barstool scene was hot. At least Edward knows she's not a ho. Bella is right Alice should wait until she is sober before giving it up to jasper

Oh possessive Edward came out to play. I hope emmett backs off now he knows she's not interested, he should have known she was only trippin last night. So glad that Edward looked for her her

I knew Edward would show up, I just hope he doesn't do anything stupid with Phil. I have a feeling that possessive Edward is gonna come out and play. He obviously doesn't like to share if he has banned her from kissing rose and Alice and if he thinks that Phil has been peepin on his girl he is not gonna be happy. I so love this fic, Debbie

Their session was hot. Seth did well not to blurt out what was on the tip of his tongue.

Wow that was hot, I loved your Dr feel good jasper and Edwards reactions whilst trying to maintain his lines.

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Hi Misty

I'll bet that was a shock for Edward to learn that she had a baby.

Oh dear, that's a dangerous game they are playing at the moment.

God I feel really sorry for Roe. Edward was dreaming of making love to Bella and Roe thought he was making love to her. She is gonna flip her shit when she finds out about Bella. And Tanya..I'll bet loads of whores used to go missing in that era

Oh Bella, I suppose if everyone calls you a slut and treats you like one as well as an outcast then you might as well act like one. Her life is horrible at the moment anyway.

At least Bella got her baby with her, I just hope she doesn't get bored of her own company when Edward is too busy to come over.

Oh Bella she sure is playing a dangerous game that could get people killed

I hope Bella does in fact read the notes, it might make her understand she is making a big mistake.

I wish she would just read the notes, I'm sure that would help clear up some of the issues. Her mum is gonna go mad when she finds out she is pregnant again and with Edwards child no less. I hope her dad doesn't try to kill him.

That was very daring for their era, sex alfresco ..or near enough anyway. Glad they had a good time though, they need it. Also glad that Edward told her about her dad, a warning of sorts of what could happen in the future.

Aww, the notes were sweet, especially coming from a guy who didn't show any emotion or weaknesses. I hope he got away with the robbery and they don't have to do another one.

Oh dear, poor Bella, I hope she isn't too badly injured. But I hope this gets his head out of his ass. I'm sorry that FF pulled this fic, I don't know why. That site just gets worse and worse.

Aww about time he got his head out and told her. Let's just hope he explains what was going through his head...other than being a douche. And that he tells her she is pregnant and he is so happy about it. She deserves a full explanation for his behaviour. Debbie

Aww, it's about time he told her what was going on in his head instead of running away. So glad she agreed to marry him. Debbie

So glad she didn't have to stand up in court and the baby was fine, 10lb...wow for your first ...ouch.

Mmm, not sure what the tie in is...maybe she's the egg donor. Maybe stark killed her dad and she is out for revenge. She obviously wants to stay low key without anyone knowing her real identity..a bit like Edward. Will she become their new nanny? Love this so far, the intrigue, a plot that begs for so many questions. Lol. Debbie

The kids certainly have Edward around their little pinkies. They may be behaving for the nanny but they are still gonna say they don't like her. I thought Bella may have put up a bigger fight at the club than she did, even though she didn't like the uniform. I guess this is in her master plan, but falling in love with the kids won't be. Debbie

Aww, I loved this ending. So glad everyone got their HEA and are still very much in love. Poor Charlie, being gifted his fathers good looks..such a chore. Lol. Debbie

Aww that was a sweet ending to the chapter. I'm so happy that the people involved with Tanya were punished properly. I liked the twist about her being wanted in Russia, no wonder she paled, lol.

Trust Bella to go into labour during the service, lol. At least everything went well in the end and Alice wasn't upset. They are a great family, and have a wonderful bond between them all. Debbie

Omg, thank god non of them succumbed fully to his powers. Although it was a close call for Angela and prob emmett. Debbie

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Glad you're continuing with the story.  I hope you're enjoying it too.  

All caught up now. Hopefully, Angela will feel better that Sam is not alone and things will go better for them. Debbie

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I can tell you that Angela will feel some better as time goes on.

So glad that they managed to destroy that thing and get Bella and the twins away from it. Debbie

Let the battle commence. It seems like the twins have found their own way to annoy him. Bella seems oblivious as to what is going on, which is probably for the best at this point. Debbie

Omg, poor Edward and his family. I'm not sure personal anguish covers this. I hope he can connect with Bella and the twins and get them back. He really needs all the help he can with this and quickly before he loses his mind. Debbie

Author's Response:

Thank you Debbie!  I know I'm putting Edward through hell, but every story needs a little something to make the blood rush!  I promise an HEA always, but it just might take some angst to get there.  Edward has Michael on his side, and we know that Michael can do anything possible to help - but he can't do it himself.

Sounds like Michael plays a very important role in sorting out this entity. That was a very clear warning to them from the apparition. I really hope Michael can stop them from getting hurt? Debbie

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Thank you Debbie!  Yes Michael is a very powerful sorce for Good and the Light.  Shows how special Edward is that he has his own Guardian Angel.  Sam and Edward understand what they are up against.  They will be as protected from the Dark to the fullest extent, trust me.  :)

Wow, this seems like it is going to be scorching, the chemistry on the dance floor is something else. Debbie

Lol, she always gets a reaction out of him in some way. I'm surprised she didn't pull a move on him when he had a knife to her throat. Let's hope she calls her crew about where she is or someone is likely to flip. Debbie

Oh my, what is he getting himself into. She will be the death of him or severe injury at least. The swans have big plans and I dare say that Edward would be daft to turn his back on them at this point, his family needs to know how they tick and try to judge the scale of their plans. Debbie

It looks like these two will play cat and mouse for a while. They may want each other but I don't think they will succumb until some trust between them has been built. Is the guy who is captured one of her security or an ex lover? I'm sure we will find out soon. Debbie

Who'd have thought he was a jealous SOB. Any male who gets close to Bella he either wants to put a bullet in them or beat the shit out of them. Poor guy is going to be so wound up during any of the field ops. Debbie