Reviews by RedSoleSista
Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187879
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: RedSoleSista Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Binding Ceremony

This story is different and I like different. :>) You have written a very creative turn on Twilight. I just read all 14 chapters and looking forward to the next one. I am wondering how Tanya got pregnant, I mean I know how, but in chapter 6 the AN:

 "Planet Twilight fact – A male does not have to produce expulsion fluid when he orgasms during sex. The act will not be as fulfilling, but he does not have to worry about impregnating, binding, or scenting a female that is not his mate. In other words, he is having sex with someone he shouldn't.

Does he the male have to be conscious as to not produce expulsion fluid? I'm thinking it must be a conscious act; otherwise Tanya should have been gotten pregnant. Since Tanya is bonded to Edward, I know she won't give up trying to get him, which means she is a danger to Bella. Which means drama!

Looking forward the next chapter.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

He thought he was dreaming and didn't have to hold back anything.  It is more fulfilling for him to expel the expulsion fluid and since he thought he was dreaming, he did expel it.  Thanks so much for the review and I am glad you are enjoying the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171332
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: RedSoleSista Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I get that Bella is a teenager and is childish however she is a daughter of a member of the mafia. She is not the daughter of a auto worker or a farmer. There is no way she doesn't know how violent that world can be. Woman in that world essentially have no voice. There are serious consequences for your behavior. A slap from a person who deals with things like extortion, illegal gambling, arms dealing,prostitution, drug/human trafficking is nothing compared to what they could potentially do to you. If teenage a civilain has some idea of what can happen to you there is no way Bella wouldn't know. Self preservation is not exclusive to adults. Plus she is no saint. A "teenager" could have cared less that a man lost his life trying to help her. She sat in the back of the car sulking, having a pity party after she saw a man get his head blown off. 

Reviewer: RedSoleSista Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes Carlisle. He said what I have been looking for in this story. She knows the world she lives in and needs to act accordingly. No way the head of a crime family would let her keep on acting the way she has, because ultimately she only hurting herself. In that world respect is everything and she has shown she has no respect for herself, let alone the family she is now married into. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Cover up by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary:

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Betrayal and revenge are powerful motivators, and when two people who have been betrayed by the same coven come together under dire circumstances, revenge becomes all the more sweet. NM-A/U, N/C, OOC, all normal disclaimers apply

Banner by the wonderful TheDarkFallingStar

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62831 Read Count: 19898
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Dec 2017
Reviewer: RedSoleSista Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ooh this is good. I will be glad when Bella wakes up and catches a clue and some backbone. I get she is a naive teenage girl, but faced with everyone she has personally known being killed; that naivety would be out the window for most people. I can't wiat to see what Peter has in store for the Volturi and Cullen's. I not able to figure out why they would go to such lengths to get rid of Bella and frame Peter. Other than Peter knowing and eliminating their previous fuck ups. Aro would have to had known so why would he risk breaking his own laws and risk the Volturi's power base and standing with vampires, just on the word of Carlisle. Aro never seemed stupid to me and I believe he would always cover his own ass first.