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Outside In by MrsR2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 59]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella had grown up watching the English upper-classes enjoy themselves.  She knew she didn’t belong in their world but then she didn’t seem to belong anywhere.  That is, until she met posh, handsome Edward Cullen.  But had her need to fit in led to a night she might regret for the rest of her life?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101451 Read Count: 24609
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 Dec 2012
Reviewer: sweet_lp_girl Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I don't really leave reviews normally but I'm intrigued by this story.  I really hate the way he's treating Bella and it kinda rubs me the wrong way that she's just letting him but I remember being a teen. 

 

Update soon :)



Author's Response:

Hi Thanks for reviewing.  It is really helpful.  I think she's besotted.  He is, after all, absolutely gorgeous and that's hard to resist when you're a teenager.  I also think the fact that he's so much above her in social status makes her feel at a disadvantage.  The attack on her is going to have a big impact on the way he behaves towards her but he still has a lot to learn.

I usually update on Sundays - sorry about the wait but I write really slowly and don't want to catch up on myself and keep people waiting for longer than a week.