Reviews by Bobbysgirl
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254893
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

WITH HINTING THAT THE END IS NEAR WOULD YOU CONSIDER A SEQUEL WITH 100 PLUS CHAPTERS OF THERE LIFE AFTER THE "BIG CLIMAX" WITH MAYBE THE PLANNING AND STRESS OF A WEDDING AND MAYBE FINDING OUT THE UNEXPECTED JOY OF AN UNPLANNED PREGNANCY AND HOW LIVING A BDSM LIFE IS DURING PREGNANCY...... JUST A FEW IDEAS TO THINK ABOUT. I JUST HATE TO NOT HAVE THESE CHARACTERS AS PART OF MY LIFE ANYMORE AND YOU BRING THEM TO LIFE SO VIVIDLY. PLEASE CONSIDER KEEPING THIS MAGIC OF YOURS GOING  AND GOING YEAH!!! YEAH!!!!! JUST LIKE THE ENERGISER BUNNY.(hahaha) 



Author's Response:

Awe, that is the best complement I could get, and yes there is a sequel planned. It will contain their life after the climax of DitR, their, hopes, dreams, struggles and heart aches...plus of course the rest of Bella's decent into the world of submitting to her Dom...it's going to be entitled "Polished to Perfection" ....so I hope you stick around to read it, I don't know if it will contain 100 chapter...lol...but I have about 45 or 50 planned ... So that should take me about 10 years ...LOLOLOLOL...only kidding ...lol..

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME. THIS CHAPTER WAS A LITTLE SHORT BUT I'M NOT GOONA COMPLAIN I'M JUST GREATFULL YOUR STILL SHARING YOUR MAGIC WITH US' TIL NEXT TIME.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Training Day...

HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IS ANYONE THERE????? WE MISS YOU HURRY BACK SOOOOOOON !!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I DON'T UNDERSTAND????? THIS CHAPTER AND A FEW MORE WERE PRE-WRITTEN. YOU POSTED THESE CHAPTERS YEARS AGO. HMMMMMM!!!!!!!! OH WELL STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO NEW CHAPTERS.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I AM SO GLAD THAT AFTER A FEW YEARS OF NEGLECTING THIS STORY YOU HAVE FINALLY DECIDED TO COME BACK AND HOPEFULLY FINISH IT THIS TIME. IT REALLY IS A GOOD STORY. THANK YOU FOR COMMING BACK AND I LOOK FORWARD TO FOLLOWING TO THE END.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Provocations

please don't make us wait too long update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Delectable initiation

YOU ARE....... A M A Z I N G! PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE.



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

5) bella leaves pregnant only to come back later to show him what he could have had and make him cry for a change. that's what he DESERVES!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

If I were Bella I'd be worried about getting an STD from Edward...

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Swinging cocktail

IT WAS BOTH DISAPPOINTING AND PLEASURABLE AND TOO SHORT SORT OF........... ANYWAYS STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Trapped

WHO WANTS TO THANK JAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU FOR REAL!!!! SHE'S A GROWN WOMAN JAKE IS'NT HER FATHER! ARE YOU TRYING TO PORTRAY BELLA AS WEAK?  BECAUSE THAT'S HOW  YOUR MAKING HER OUT TO BE.  WOW!!! I HOPE SHE FINALLY FINDS HER BALLS TO DEFEND HERSELF IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. TIL NEXT TIME.

Ties that Bind by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen crime family has been a problem for the law officers of Chicago for over fifty years. After dozens of failed attempts to infiltrate the family, the FBI decides it's time to send in more undercover agents, Edwards and Whitlock. However, the Feds do not realize that Edwards has an agenda all of her own, which doesn't necessarily include putting a stop to the family's business.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 44259
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

CONGRATULATION!!!!!!! A BABY IS SUCH A BLESSING.  UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN IT'S ALWAYS WORTH THE WAIT. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324431
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS BUT PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US WAITING TOO LONG. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE I'VE BEEN GOING CRAZY WAITING FOR IT. I'M GLAD EDWARD AND BELLA ARE BACK TOGETHER AND MAYBE GOING TO THE OSCARS WILL BE THERE COMING OUT TO THE WORLD. MAYBE THIS IS WHAT SHE NEEDS TO FEEL SHE MADE THE RIGHT CHOICE BY GIVING THEM ANOTHER CHANCE. I HOPE YOUR HOLIDAYS WERE GOOD AND MAY THIS NEW YEAR BRING YOU MUCH JOY AND HAPPINESS AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR SURGERY AND A SPEEDY RECOVERY.  UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Confidant

i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

I'M SO SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS. TIME HEALS ALL PAIN AND REMEMBERING TO LIVE WILL MAKE THE TIME GO FASTER. UPDATE SOON WE'LL BE WAITING

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

I WAS A LITTLE SAD ABOUT THE NEGATIVE PREGNANCY TEST BUT HOPEFULY SOON THEY CAN BE BLESSED WITH A LOVING BUNDLE OF JOY.......HMMMMMMMMMM

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

PLEASE DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

thank god!!!!!!!!!!!!! but.....please let there be smooth sailing from here on in. ok   maybe a slight bump here and there because otherwise it's not an edward and bella story. besides they deserve some happiness and maybe a baby surprise hmmmmmm! don't you think?????????? update soon!!!

Summary:

Bella, a girl with sardonic wit and a freshly printed Masters degree, finds work with the Cullen Group, being, what she deems, an overpaid secretary who finds inventors and designers worthy of some funding.

Work should be dull, and would be had she not made one of her trademark, clearly well thought out decisions: she started sleeping with her employeer's son, who is one of her bosses himself, days after meeting him.

Classy Bella, really classy.

She deems him an odd and spoiled rich kid [he is on an insane liquid diet, he has two penthouse apartments for the reason of "just because," as far as she can tell, his sweat tastes like magic (okay she concedes that here, she might be the weird one,)and he comes in to work in suits worth more than her car that are ruined from his runs in Central Park.]

Weirder than all of this, he seems to want a actual relationship with her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10160 Read Count: 3970
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like

please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon.  i'm waiting impatiently 

A Mother´s Advice by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

Bella met Edward. Then, after a few dates, she got pregnant and married him. But now they re fighting against their family and more people who just don't want them together. Bella feels she's repeating her parents story. Would a package from the past be the help she needs?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116319 Read Count: 38380
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

HMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INTERESTING



Author's Response:

I really hope so ;). Thanks for reading and reviewing

Summary:

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Driven to Desire Entry: I had the perfect life in New York. Money, a nice house, loving husband. But still, I craved him. He was a man so close yet so forbidden. My own personal demon. My torture. My step-brother; Edward Cullen.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22278 Read Count: 13857
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think i felt that orgasm too. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

if this was a one shot WOW!!! thank god your your continuing, it's great!!!!!!!!!! i'm so looking forward to reading.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're looking forward to it, thanks very much :)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

can't wait..... update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419207
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i was a little disappointed.....i've read your first times before and this time it wasn't as discriptive, that's not to say i'm disappointed overall absolutly not i know in the end this story like all the others will be great!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

(HA HA HA HA )OH YEAH YOU LEFT US HOT AND HORNY AND SCREAMING!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T STOP LAUGHING SEE YOU NEXT TIME.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

YOU!!! ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. I HAVE ENJOYED READING AND RE-READING ALL YOUR STORIES WHEN LIFE GET'S CRAZY SO DON'T EVER LET ANYONE EVER TELL YOU OTHERWISE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

this chapter left me feeling, angry, frustrated, annoyed, but..... mostly sad i know we have to be patient but hopfuly next chapter will bring some happiness or lemony goodnes.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i'm glad this chapter had less angst, it's good to see them progressing and i'm guessing the new doctor is gonna be none other than jacob black. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!!!!!! F I N A L L Y !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW WE ALL HAVE THE PLEASURE OF LOOKING FORWARD TO THE WAY YOU SO ELOQUENTLY TURN YOUR WORDS  INTO BEAUTIFLUL LOVING MAGIC. TRULY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i'd like to think that jasper will eventually come around. thanks for another great chapter...... update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

looikng forward to the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'M GLAD TO HEAR YOUR FEELING BETTER I HPOE YOUR CHRISTMAS WAS FILLED WITH LOVE AND FAMILY AND MAY THE NEW YEAR BE EVEN BETTER FOR YOU. AS ALWAYS ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER AND LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OH MOST DEFFINATELT NOTHING BUT LOVIN FOR YOU! WITHOUT A DOUBT ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

UPDATE SOON!!!! 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH GRRRREAT!!!!! YOU LEFT ME HANGING!!! THE IDEA OF GIVING EDWARD A PROMISE WAS REALLY SWEET, I THINK WE DID THAT KIND OF STUFF IN OUR TEENS OR AT LEAST THAT'S HOW I REMEMBER IT DON'T YOU??  YOU REMEMBER YOUR GUY WOULD WEAR YOUR BRACELET OR CHAIN OR EVEN A RING..... NO! NOT YOU!!! OH WELL  ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

AS ALWAYS ANOTHER CHAPTER VERY WELL WRITTEN.  HMMM!!!! WELL IT DOES SADDENS ME THAT THE END IS FAST APROACHING. THIS STORY OBVIOUSLY HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A SEQUEL WITH THE NEW DIRECTION THERE LIVES ARE HEADED FOR BUT YOU ARE THE MAGIC MAKER AND ONE CAN ONLY HOPE.

Please? by Kallipap Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Bella and Edward have been friends since they were children. Now she wants him to help her with a rather delicate situation. How will Bella's request affect them? Will anything be the same again?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46834 Read Count: 10760
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OK.... FIRST; I JUST CAME ACROSS THIS STORY AND I'M REALLY ENJOYING IT SO FAR. SECOND; IT'S DISAPPIONTING TO SEE THAT YOU HAVE A HABIT OF BEING MIA FOR LONG PERIODS OF TIME. THAT'S REALLY SAD BECAUSE YOUR DOING REALLY GOOD SO FAR WITH THE STORY LINE BUT UPDATES SHOULD AT THE VERY LEAST BE CONSISTANT. THEY CAN BE MONTHLY IF NEED BE BUT LET YOUR READERS KNOW AN APPROXIMATE TIME LINE. IT'S A SHAME IF YOU LOSE READERS DUE TO LACK OF UPDATING. PLEASE BE KIND AND UPDATE SOON. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response: Hi! Sorry for taking so long to reply. I had a hard time writing, and I didn't know what to say to the people who actually took the time to write and tell me what they thought about the story. I know that stopping the updates did not work in my favor, but there was a time when there was just nothing I could do about it. I had very little time, a lot of anxiety, and whatever little I tried writing was complete crap. I am trying to make up for it now, but I understand if the readers don't want to keep waiting for something that may never come. In my defense, there is a story for my absence. I just don't know how interested the readers would be in hearing it. Anyway, making up for lost time. I hope to hear from you again. Love, Kallie

Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 55212
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

MORE!!! MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OFF TO A GREAT START!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, It gets better I promise!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

GOOD FOR HER!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

SWEET!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OH SO CLOSE!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

POOR EDWARD.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I TOTALLY ENJOYED THAT CHAPTER AND I'M HAPPY FOR THEM.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

WOW!!! I HAVE TO GO HUNT DOWN MY HUSBAND RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!! THANKS.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T END THIS BEFORE YOU TAKE US THROUGH ALL THERE HAPPY TIMES LIKE YOU DID WITH THE SAD. EVEN AMOUNTS OF CHAPTERS WOULD VERY MUCH WELCOMED!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I THINK THIS WAS MY LEAST FAVORITE CHAPTER ALTHOUGH OVERALL I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY. I ALSO THINK A SEQUEL WOULD BE VERY MUCH WELCOMED.



Author's Response:

I don't think I will do a sequel because it would be all fluff and family.  I am working on an epilogue now.  Thanks for the honest review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The Dominatrix and Ms. O'

 

AH - B/E and other characters from the Twilight Series become involved with a 60 year old woman who owns a BDSM club. This became a collection of stories about the club.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83835 Read Count: 29881
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (re-edit)

IT'S GOOD TO RE-READ THIS STORY IT ALWAYS WAS A FAVORITE. I JUST WISH IT HAD A SEQUEL.

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806530
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Talk is Cheap

thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

as always another great chapter update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

NEXT WEDNESDAY!!! SOONER WOULD BE BETTER (HA HA) GREAT CHAPTER LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT WEEK.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

i'm sorry if others get offended but let's be real we all understand mental illness is a big deal but c'mon we all in some way, shape, or form poke fun of everything including mental illness it's what keeps us sane so to speak. you are an amazing writer never doubt that reguardless of what some may say. update soon!!!! your loyal readers  are waiting.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

can't wait. update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

again as always another great chapter but....really stop worrying about any negative feedback YOU! are an amazing writer NEVER!!!  EVER!!!!! doubt yourself you made it very clear right at the beginning the type of format this story was going to be if readers don't understand the concept of varying pov's(POINT'S OF VIEWS) then they have issues with following directions and that has nothing to do with you. looking forward to the next update. DO YOUR MAGIC.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

really good but........ i think maggie should come back.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

YOU ARE SO RIGHT. THAT WAS  H O T . GREAT CHAPTER CAN'T WAIT UPDATE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

    YOU BRING JOY TO MY DAY WITH EVERY NEW CHAPTER. UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

AS ALWAYS YOU ARE AMAZING.............SATURDAY CAN'T COME FAST ENOUGH.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

you can never go wrong with CARA NO hot chapter update soon!!!!! SOONER!!!!! even better!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

absolutely!!!!  totaly !!!!!!!!!! great!!!!!!!!  don't ever doubt your talent of being unable to write great chapters. YOU ARE A M A Z I N G !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

as always you never disappiont great chapter. yes we missed you but i'm glad to hear you survived the disaster. looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe

great!!!! CHAPTER I REALLY ENJOYED ARO'S POV AS ALWAYS YOU ARE GOOD AT WHAT YOU DO. THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

I'M GLAD DAMION IS FINDING HIS WAY TO A BETTER RELATIONSHIP GOOD FOR HIM. AS ALWAYS DO YOUR MAGIC AND UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES AS WELL. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATES THEY MAKE ME SMILE WHEN LIFE SUCKS SO THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART FOR THE JOY YOU SHARE WITH US THROUGH YOUR STORIES.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Crumbs

i get the feeling you want to kill off edward....i hope not that would be to painful. i was happy to find an update but now i'm a little worried. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

IT'S 2:30 IN THE FREAKING MORNING AND I'M LAUGHING MY ASS OFF. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE ACTUALLY...... I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING. THANKS I NEEDED THAT.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

OK...... THAT WAS FUNNY AND HEART WARMING.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight

I WAS WORRIED WHEN I STARTED READING YOUR WARNING BUT..... IT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS. IT WAS INSIGHTFUL AND OVERALL GREAT. GO DO YOUR MAGIC AND UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: OOC

THANK YOU FOR MY DOSE OF STORM TODAY I REALLY NEEDED IT. AS ALWAYS YOU MAKE ME HAPPY AND I APPRECIATE YOU BEING THE GREAT STORYTELLER YOU ARE. LOOKIG FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

a little short but to the point! besides somtimes kids need a good kick in the ass to get them back on track no matter what age they are.(am i not right mom's) 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

I HOPE YOUR HOLIDAYS WERE GOOD AND YOUR NEW YEAR EVEN BETTER THAN LAST YEAR.  AS ALWAYS YOU ARE AMAZING AT WHAT YOU DO. IT WAS GOOD TO SEE DAMION GET A LITTLE HAPPINESS FOR A CHANGE. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE AND THE SMILE. IT'S GOOD TO SEE EDWARD COMING AROUND BUT ....... PLEASE!!!!!! NOT TOO MUCH MORE ANGST IT'S REALLY TIME FO SOME SMILES MAYBE SOME LEMONS.....HMMMMMMM!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

FIRST: A LONG WAIT. SECOND: A SHORT CHAPTER. LAST: YOU LEAVE US HANGING!! OH YOU ARE EVIL!!! ( HE HE HE ) CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

SWEET!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I JUST STARTED READING AND SO FAR IT'S REALLY GREAT. I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THE NEXT 10 CHAPTERS AND I'LL LET YOU KNOW HOW IT'S GOING WHEN I REACH CHAPTER 14..... SEE YOU THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

NATURALLY I'D LIKE TO SEE BELLA'S FORGIVING NATURE OVER RIDE ALL OTHER NEGATIVE FEELINGS BUT... THAT!!!  WILL BE UP TO YOU. AS FAR AS CARMEN'S TRIP I'D LIKE TO SEE BELLA AND EDWARD UNITE AGAINST HER AND ANYONE ELSE CAUSING TROUBLE FOR THEM. BUT..... AGAIN IT'S ALL UP TO YOU. IT BE NICE TO SEE THEM RIDE THIS OUT IN TRUE EDWARD AND BELLA STYLE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

IT'S SAD TO THINK THERE ARE ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS BUT KNOWING THAT THERE IS A SEQUEL WELL THAT MAKES IT OK. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

READ YOU NEXT WEEK.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31 Part 2

CAN'T WAIT!!!! READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32

YES IT'S SAD TO LET GO BUT... LOOK FORWARD TO " NOT ALONE ANYMORE " YOU MENTIONED ANGST BUT I HOPE THERE'S NOT TOO MUCH THESE TWO DESERVE TO FINALLY BE HAPPY AND MARRIED!!!!! READ YOU SOON.

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Let's Get it On

AS ALWAYS WORTH WAITING FOR. THANK YOU!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Moving on Up

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE CAN'T WAIT!!! TIL NEXT TIME 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen

you always put a smile on my day. it seemed short because you always leave us wanting more. looking forward to the citrus but dying for the lemon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Tales of a Manwhore

thanks for something a little lighter as always this like all your other stories are worth following. update soon!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chicken and Confessions

as always another great chapter update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Relational Shift

VERY WELL DONE. NOT TO MUCH ANGST PLEASE! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie

Very satisfying chapter. Nothing you write is ever mundane soooooo never think that way. S ince you asked fo suggestions I was thinking with Bella's culinary savy maybe she'll find moving to the island to be both therapeutic and satisfying in her love life butt..... you!!!! are the brains behind the story. Til next time do your magic.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Letters to my Beloved

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT. IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Confrontations

IT WAS A LITTLE TOO SHORT FOR THE LONG WAIT BUT I JUST CAN'T GET ENOUGH. I ALWAYS HOPE YOUR STORIES SURPASS THE 100 PLUS CHAPTERS OF  "LA CANTANTE" IN FACT IF I REMEMBER CORRECTLY A SEQUEL TO "LA CANTANTE" WAS MENTIONED. ANYWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT CHAPTER DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. OH HELL ANYTHING YOU UPDATE IS ALWAYS A WELCOMED TREAT. 

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Isle of Craziness

i just re-read all 31 chapters and instead of an epi i think a sequel would be a better idea maybe???? read you soon.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Newsroom Awards

WILL THERE BE A SEQUEL OF THERE NEW LIFE ON THE ISLAND???????



Author's Response:

I don't think so...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94873
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Entryway

can't wait for the next update. you are an amazing writer thank you for your time.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am glad you are enjoying it.  Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - Delta Park

HMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Well, hopefully that was a good 'hmmmm'!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - The Marketing Department

I THINK MAGGIE'S REACTION WAS A NORMAL TEENAGE REACTION. THE FACT THAT SHE CAUGHT HERSELF  AND FELT BAD ENOUGH TO APOLOGISE TO BELLA SHOWS HOW MUCH SHE'S MATURED. AS FAR AS GOSSIP AT WORK THAT TOO WILL NEVER CHANGE, NOSY BUSYBODDIES WILL ALWAYS BE JUST THAT. HEIDI IS ONLY LOOKING FOR SOMEONE TO BLAME OTHER THAN HERSELF AND BELLA IS AN EASY TARGET.  SHE WONT STOP UNTIL EDWARD AND BELLA STAND STRONG AND UNITED AGAINST HER.



Author's Response:

Great thoughts on Maggie's reaction.  You're absolutely right that she's matured.  And yes, sadly there will always be gossipy, rude people.  Love hearing the theories on how Heidi might react.  I am so pleased you liked the chapter and thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Washington Square Mall

THE SLEEPOVER WENT WELL BUT..... YEAH ONCE HEIDI IS BACK IN THE PICTURE THINGS WILL CHANGE AND I HOPE BELLA REMAINS STRONG. AS FOR ALICE HMMMMM! WE'LL SEE WONT WE.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the sleepover.  Bella and Edward are prepared that things might get rougher once Heidi is back in the picture.  Bella is strong though, she'll handle it.  And I promise, Alice is coming around, and she'll be meeting Edward in person, soon!  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The Dining Room

i'm glad you wrote this situation in a positive way. looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.  The next one will post tomorrow!  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Conference Room

THAT WAS  CONSIDERATE OF HIM TO PUT HER NEEDS FIRST, ONLY ONE'S TRUE LOVE WOULD REALISE HIS MISTAKE AND RECTIFY IT. LOOKING FORWARD TO FACING "CHARLIE"  CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward could see that Bella really needed to feel like her needs were the most important thing to him right then, and it went a long way in making her feel better.  Edward will meet Charlie in the chapter after next! 

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Thirst Wine Bar

IS IT POSSIBLE THAT EDWARD'S EX WILL BE BELLA'S NEW BOSS HMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh yikes, that would be terrible!  No, Heidi is in a totally different department.  She works in the hospital fundraising department, and Bella is going into Marketing.  The departments would certainly work together from time to time, especially for big hospital galas and such, but no, Heidi wouldn't be her boss in any way.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - The Silverton Inn

GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - Silverton, Oregon

IT WENT VERY WELL BECAUSE HER DAD TOOK HIS HEAD OUT OF HIS ASS.... FINALLY!!! 



Author's Response:

LOL, yes, Charlie taking his head out of his ass made a huge difference.  Thanks for the review, I love getting feedback on the story.