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After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage. Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice. She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814520
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149
Is it getting hot in here?
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 167
You are doing a wonderful job with this story. I can't wait for my updates to appear in my inbox and yes, that includes the so called "crap" chapters. I love EPOV. I actually prefer stories from EPOV. EPOV is a very valuable piece to this story and thank you for taking the time to share it with us.
Let whomever do the math and pick back up with the story when it's "back on track". Don't get discouraged. You can't please them all but I guarantee you're pleasing the majority.
I couldn't believe I was doing this. But I had stayed quiet for too long. There was no one in the world for me except for him. It's time to stop a wedding. AH/Edward&Bella
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59051 Read Count: 37693
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World
You are so right, I didn't like this chapter. I mean, come on. Why can't Bella be happy too? Why is she still being punished for her mistake three years later? It's obvious that Edward isn't dwelling on things. I'm beginning to question if he ever really loved Bella as much as he claimed he did. I mean, he moved on and never looked back but then again he was taken in by the big boobs and blond hair. The only person that seems to be 'surviving' is Bella cause Edward is living his life to the fullest, the asshole that he is.
Okay, rant over. You're doing a great job with this story or else you wouldn't get these kind of rants out of people. I believe we'll get our HEA just I hate going through the angst to get there. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more (and maybe some happiness for Bella, please)!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review :). Thank you for your compliments also. Don't fret, there will be HEA. I promise!
P.S. Not everything is as it seems. For your questions on Edward, review his POV of Chapter 12 :)
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted
So...Not...Fair! I really thought Bella was going to get some happiness but noooooo! I realize that Bella is doing this all to herself but come on, give the girl a break. He doesn't give a shit about her, let her move on.
Still holding to the belief that Edward never truly loved Bella. This with Tanya has been all too easy for him.
Okay, with all that being said, I will trust there is an HEA. I'm very interested to see how you weave that one. Now, if I can just get past psyching myself up for two days before I can read an update. I think the angst is giving me an ulcer.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Speak Now
Forgot to say that I went back and read EPOV in chap 12. It still doesn't change my mind. He says he's not over her but yet he's so wrapped up in the differences between Bella and Tanya. The feeling I got from his descriptions of these differences is that he's relieved and sees Tanya as an improvement to waht he had before. He says that he wouldn't have let her pass him by which tells me that he had already moved on before he ever asked her out. He talks of his and Bellas relationship as passionate and all consuming like it was a job.
Bottom line, he held his stance. He never even considered that maybe their words were spoken foolishly. It's like he just said, well, that's done and just concentrated on the big boobs and blond hair.
Maybe it's because you've been a lot more descriptive with Bella and her feelings and anguish. We get to feel her regret and broken heartedness. With Edward, not so much. So no. I think he has glorified their relationship in his mind to justify his anger and leaving her but I doubt his heart was ever truly that involved.
Keep up the good work. The angst is killing me but I can't not read.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
Gah!! I hate that Bella is hurt and in the hospital but I'm crossing my fingers that she meets a HOT ASS Dr. to get her all better and so she can have a little HAPPINESS!
Edward is pathetic! He is a patheic, balless asshole. Oh and he's selfish. Personally I think you should just let him marry the hag and be a pathetic, balless, selfish Puppet for the rest of his life. I have all respect for him.
Okay rant over. I am not a fan of Edwards at all right now but I love where you're going with the story right now. Keep up the good work!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! Hope you like how to story unfolds :)
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty: Love Story
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a few chapters but RL sucks!
Glad that Bella got to say her piece but I really wished she had kicked him in the balls too. He deserved it.
Chapter 20: Love the progress that they have made. They truly seem to be on their way to true happiness.
Caution...Rant Ahead: What the Fuck? Where the hell does Edward get off being angry about a drunken one night stand that Bella had a couple of years ago? He's been fuckin and saying I love you to the same skank for the past tree years. He was going to marry the bitch. Again he needs a good swift and hard kick in the balls. Oh, wait, I earlier declared that he was a pathetic, Balless asshole so maybe she should just shove a pineapple up his ass. Rant over.
In all seriousness, I liked the way you brought them back together. Bella definitely deserves to be happy.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
hahahahahaha Sorry you see Edward in such a bad light, but I'm glad you're still reading :) Thanks for your review