Reviews by pianogirl05
When In Romania by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the proprietor of Bran Castle in the heart of Romania. He carries a heavy burden which torments him. When Bella crosses paths with him will she be the one to help shoulder his grief, or will her presence only make it worse? NC-17 for mature situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25599 Read Count: 26450
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Control Yourself

Ah, the meeting.

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Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

Nothing like simply laying your cards on the table.

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Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Epilogue

Loved it!!!!

Fear of Touch by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Due to a tragedy in his past, Edward is now an OCD headcase. He fears germs, he fears the outside, he fears contact. His hardest obstacle to overcome? Loneliness. This is where Izzy Swan comes in...as a hired companion. But will she be too dirty for him?

 

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8430 Read Count: 75862
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Loved it!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

xoxo

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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419235
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is such a great story!

Surprises by EmziBob Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Jessica comes home after a 3 year trip expecting Edward to be waiting to marry her, but she is in for one hell of a surprise. Told from Jessica's POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3430 Read Count: 5753
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was awesome!!!!!!!!!

Summary:

A cheesy romance set amongst the rubble of Apocalyptia.

July entry for Drabble Wars

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18476 Read Count: 23951
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, I think I'm hooked.

Author's Response:

Well I'm glad to have you... I will try to be better with updating here tomorrow.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well, I guess that takes care of the Jacob thing. I'm not a fan of his.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm not his fan either.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor Bella.

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That is a long way to walk.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella. I was so happy to see all of the updates.

Author's Response:

I forget to update here, but i'm trying to remember to. I will try harder tomorrow. 20 or more chapters up tomorrow. :D

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Creepy.

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That poor girl.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter.

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

It's a wonder she doesn't fall over from exhaustion. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Riight, It would be so much easier to give up but she has the will to continue on.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

It’s been twelve long years since the hell that was high school. How will Edward and Bella, barely recognizable as the awkward teenagers they were then, handle the unexpected and unwelcome reminder of a time they’d rather forget?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8991 Read Count: 2425
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 Jul 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a great story! Very well done.

Author's Response: THanks very much! glad you liked it.

Sparks fly by may of rose 2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: Isabella Swan is a witch; in fact she comes from a long line of witch’s. Her dad Charlie is also witch. They are a different species from humans. Her mom Renee is a human and does not know anything about the magical world, or the magical powers, this makes Bella half witch, which is also known as a Halfling.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19758 Read Count: 8857
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2012 Updated: 17 Jan 2013
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love a good vampire witch mating.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm glad he didn't have the same reaction to Bella as he did in the books.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love how he is instantly attached to her.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was an awesome spell for Rosalie. I guess she will have to learn to keep her opinions to herself from now on.

400 kids....wow!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love it! I notice you are somewhat following twilight. I hope Edward doesn't leave her though. That was incredibly heart breaking.

Author's Response:

No he will not :P

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She's has some really cool powers.

Author's Response:

Yes she does. :)

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it!!!! Update soon.

Summary:

Bella’s entire life has been a lie built to keep her safe. But as the people her family had been after for her entire life become desperate, she becomes the pawn. Edward is the FBI agent trusted to keep her alive, but as the lines blur only one thing is certain. He’d stop at nothing to protect her.  Originally an entry into the Pick a Pic Contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9174 Read Count: 2217
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Oct 2012
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love a happy ending!

Summary: Past Featured Story

They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

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Thanks to Evilnat for the amazing banner! You are the bomb, girl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 89554
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Parties and Working Stiffs

That girl definitely needs to get in touch with reality. I think it's good they are making her get a job and having her pay her way. Where does she think the money comes from anyway? If she is on her own she wouldn't have any money because it belongs to her parents.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113815
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the first story and this one I'm sure will be great too. But, this first chapter has my heart breaking for her. She has reached out and he just pushes her away and he leaves her with all of those kids. I'm disappointed with him. Update soon. I'll be anxiously waiting.

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102289
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting story so far. I always like Edward in the mafia. As a head of the mafia he should be more feared though. I really feel Tanya has greatly overstepped her bounds and in the real mafia world she would be dead. Having Tanya behave that way makes him look wimpy. I love Edward's instant attraction to Bella.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

My favorite line so far is about Esme smelling the baby powder. That was brilliant! I was glad to see a more dominate Edward in this chapter.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This chapter did a much better job convincing me that Edward is the leader of the mafia.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstar
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like the story, but when people speak to Edward that way I have a difficult time picturing him as a mafia leader. The girls coming around throwing themselves at him is believable to a certain extent, but having Tanya hit Bella should of made Edward put a bullet through her head. He just doesn't come across tough enough and feared enough. I think I'm going to like having Aro as Bella's grandfather.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Izzy's a successful woman in her own right. She's also a Hollywood heiress whose life gets flipped upside down as a result of an unfortunate event. Tired of the paparazzi, she flees from the limelight in search of who she is on her own. Sometimes you have to leave the world of make believe behind to find a snowmobiling prince you never knew you needed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79271 Read Count: 44106
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Happy Endings

Great story!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334740
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That woman is a psychotic b*******!!!!!!! I hope Bella tells her mom to stick it where the sun doesn't shine. You are doing a fabulous job with this story.

Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

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“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is just awesome!!! I really look forward to the updates.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Running for Love by Sarge's Girls

Bella is the daughter of the vice president of the United States.
Edward is a new member of her Secret Service detail.
Will they be able to fight their attraction,
or will her eighteenth birthday mean a green light?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19150 Read Count: 12439
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You two write the best stories!!!

Broken Immortal by Sephrenia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Edward leaves Bella she gets changed when she visits the meadow. when she wakes she hides in the Cullen mansion. Will she be reunited with her mate? 1st story ... constructive criticism welcome

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Featured Story September 2013


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55208 Read Count: 60747
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This just gets better and better!!!!

Author's Response:

thanks so much I'm glad you like it

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Evil Aro! Thinks he is sneaky doesn't he. Jacob's situation is reminding me of the song 'The Farmer in the Dell': the cheese stands alone, the cheeses stands alone, hi ho the derio the cheese stands alone. LOL!!!! I bet that puppy ain't so tough now!

Author's Response:

ROTFLMAO ..... I haven't thought of the Farmer in the Dell in ages ..... but yeah you're right .... new chapter is up ....

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Sounds like Rosalie and Carlisle might have a fling going on??? Something's up. The gifts for Edward and Bella are so cool. I'm really glad to see you take such a unique approach to things. I'm so excited that Alice won't be able to order Edward and Bella around anymore. She really isnt my favorite character. I find her pushy and selfish. I'll be looking forward to future chapters.

Author's Response:

I agree with you about Alice ... just too damn bossy   thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I like this story. The powers you have given Bella are very unique. I'm not quite sure about the Cullen family. I thought I understood Carlisle also pushed Edward towards Tanya as well as the other family members. I can understand Esme and Emmet being in the dark about the Tanya issue, but not the others because of the talents or in the case of Rosalie her rudeness and Carlisle his simple need for control. Should we expect some drama from that? If I were Edward and Bella I would have zero tolerance for that behavior.

Author's Response:

Carlisle has his own thing going on .. he wants his "perfect" family  we haven't heard the last of Tanya  thanks for taking the time to review

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Interesting turn of events. So Sam was partaking in a threesome with the "leeches". I wonder how they took care of the wolf stench and why Emmet's vamp senses didn't pick up the semen sent from another male??? I'm not sure i trust Alice. She already encouraged Edward in Alaska, then she conveniently didn't see any vamps in the mall, and now she is encouraging them to meet Aro.....hmm.....coincidence???......or does someone have her hand in the cookie jar???? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Author's Response:

I have always thought the wolves to be arrogant assholes and hypocrites .... Protectors my ass I wonder how protected Emily's face feels. Don't hate Alice just yet .. she isn't my favorite but there were other factors at play....

Thanks so much for taking the time to review the story

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hi-Mal cocktails......hahahahs!!!!! That's so funny. I'm so eager for more.

Author's Response:

thanks ... just wait for the bloody - rita .... thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Creative as always. You were right. I loved the drink names you came up with. I hope everything goes well with your surgery tomorrow.

Author's Response:

LOL  I thought you would ....  Thanks for the review and the good wishes .... the next chapter will be up as soon as I can ...

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Love the story and the way you continue to surprise me with your ideas.

Author's Response:

yay ...  I am glad I am keeping you on your toes .... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great as always!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Glad the rescue went well.

Author's Response:

yes very quick ... in and out ..  thank you for your review sorry it took so long to respond

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Great story!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it.  thanks for taking the time to read and review ....

Seph

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23451
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Definitely different but you've got me eager to read the next chapter. You truly are amazing.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can't wait for more!! Awesome story!!!

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281133
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love this story!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is great.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Confessions of a Billionaire's W***e

That's sad. I like this story. I will follow you on whatever site you write on. You are so talented. You should look into FictionPad. I know a LOT of writers are using them now. Fanfiction may say it's okay, but it will only be a matter of time before they delete the story ( I hope not). They seem to be good at that.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Fantastic chapter! Very emotionally moving.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Oooh, the "evil princess" needs to go down. I'm not an Alice fan to begin with. I find her very manipulative , but this Alice has thorns. Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Edward takes her down.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Wow! Alice has been very bad!!! Wouldn't it serve her right to be left with no money for her expensive lifestyle and for her to be forced to shop from Target!!! LOL!!! Can't wait to see what you have in store for the little she-devil.

Summary: Past Featured Story

panther

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After almost a century a panther shifter turned vampire finally finds his mate/imprint. Will his past come back to destroy his happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28108 Read Count: 29457
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2013 Updated: 16 Apr 2014
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great story!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great story with an interesting twist.

Summary:

Head over Heels

 

Can a broken boot heel mend a broken heart and lead to a HEA?

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 2973
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 15 Sep 2015
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice one-shot. Perhaps you might expand it in the future?

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177887
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Can't wait to see Jacob taken down. Bella's daddy won't be pleased with her either, but me and Edward? We are going to love it!!!!!

Wrigley's by heartfortwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Wrigleys

 

A love story told on tiny sketches on gum wrappers.  E/B. HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6232 Read Count: 1670
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Jun 2016
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

After Nightfall

 

In an alternate universe, in which Bella's birthday party incident never happened and Edward never left, the two get married soon after the events of "Twilight". Edward agrees to change her and they plan a trip to Alaska for this. Upon returning, things go terribly wrong. Soon enough, they realize they have to leave their safe haven behind and venture into a nomadic existence.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 180517 Read Count: 10503
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2020 Updated: 08 Feb 2021
Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Crashing

I love it so far. The storyline you have is very unique. I’m looking forward to future updates!

Author's Response:

Ohhh, thank you so much for making my day with your review! 

I am extremely happy that you love my story! I love writing it, so it means a lot.

Next update will be out next week, stay tuned!