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Forbidden Desire by RosaBella75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

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In an alternate all human universe, where society reached modern times with the equivalent to an Ancient Roman appearance and level of technology, sexual pleasure is paramount; the Cullens are a breed apart: sexual vegetarians, if you will. 

Bella is an "Innocent" and so off limits for deeper sexual gratification, a role she gladly embraces, taking pleasure only in giving to those around her. 

That is until she meets Edward.  Suddenly her Father's insistence on her remaining an Innocent and Aro's desires to keep her for himself have become an unwelcome burden to her life.  How will Bella and Edward survive their desire to be together when it is forbidden?

This story is a thinly disguised excuse for steamy lemons in the vein of a Roman orgy, yet there is also a deeper story about selfless giving and how love might just be worth waiting for...and fighting for.

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*WARNING*  This story starts out with intense woman/woman imagery, and will depict graphic multi-partner pairings in future chapters.  DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY GRAPHIC SEXUAL CONTENT OR IF YOU ARE NOT OF LEGAL AGE TO DO SO!!!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42320 Read Count: 12032
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Oct 2010
Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tantalizing

holy wow. thanks for not going tamer! going to hook all my friends up with your story - best wishes for quick writing!!! love it!



Author's Response:

Well, thank-you so very much!  You have me grinning form ear to ear.  (You're most welcome, btw.)  :D

Just put more up now.

Thanks for reading (and rec'ing -- WOW!)!!

 

Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Introduction to Desire

holy hell girl, you sure know how to crank up the intensity! the UST is killing me here :) absolutely love this story, cant wait for more.

thanks for making my friday morning at work exponentially more tolerable than i thought it would be ;)



Author's Response:

LOL  Sorry to be killin' ya (even as it makes me giggle)   ;)   but I'm very pleased to hear you're enjoying the story! 

So glad to help out! ;D  There should be more up today.

Thanks for the delightful review and for reading!!!

Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tantalizing

oh my god, more today!? i think i'm falling in love with you lol!

kill away, honey, i always love being slayed by a terrific story. i just finished giving my best friend the low down so she should be heading your way soon too :)



Author's Response:

LOL  Glad to help out!   The fast updates will only last so long and then it will be my typical update time, so enjoy!

Thanks for the rec!!!

Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Awakening to Desire

for the love of all that is holy, please remind me not to read this at work. lmao thank GOD i only have an hour left here! that was... stimulating to say the least! holy hell woman, you can seriously write. have you written anything else!? christ i have to find it if you did, b/c this stuff is incredible!



Author's Response:

I typically invest in Cost-co quantities of panty liners myself.  LOL   And yeah, perhaps should include a NSFW warning! :D

Now you have me blushing to beat Bella and I didn't think I blushes!!  I've written a o/s that I have posted here and there's some birthday round-robins I participated in listed on my profile. 

Okay, you said earlier that you were falling in love with me, well the feeling is suddenly quite mutual!!  ;D  Thanks, bb!!!

Diane

Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: It's Not Just A River In Egypt

another crotchsploding chapter, lovey :) fabulous job! i sent my friend Cat over here, hopefully she's leaving you reviews. I'll make sure she does! love this story so much, its so different and original and sexy as fuck lol

cant wait for another chapter! i'll be so sad once the updates slow down.



Author's Response:

You really are winning my heart as my favorite reviewer!  :D  Still lmao at the word crotchsploting!  Very nice!  *waggles eyebrows*  Glad to hear you continue to enjoy, and that you've rec'd my little Lemon Ball.

Thanks for reading, rec'ing, and making my day with your lovely words of encouragement!!! 

I'll do my best not to keep you waiting too tortuously long.  ;D

Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: When Worlds Collide, part I

awesome update as always honey :) sorry to hear about your loss and being sick! what an awful combination. i know exactly what you mean about it being next to impossible to write sexytimes while in that mind frame - its freaking horrible.

cant wait for the next half! i want to see bella's reaction to being plowed over by that damn green eyed mindfucker!



Author's Response:

I'm on the mend, now if I can just replace my employee who just quit with no notice soon, I'll be doing tons better! *crosses fingers* Sorry to hear you have personal experience with the block grief brings with it!  We got our first entry for the Cougar Revolution today.  And it has helped perk me up a bit.  I know it will be a process.  It gets a bit better every day, even on the bad days. 

Glad you liked it!  I had a lot of fun writing it.  I thought of the chariot as the perfect way to have them meet, touch, and be seperated again, as well as tie in canon when i was driving out to feed my horse.  I giggled the whole way! :D

Ill have the next half out soon.  Can't wait to see what you think of her reaction too. ;D

Thanks for the love and for the awesome response as always, bb!!!

Reviewer: fragile human Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Collision of Worlds: Part II

yaayyyyy you're back!! i've missed you :) i could just picture you sitting at your desk, laptop screen blank, finger tapping your lower lip as you imagine these obscene games for this story. that sexual "three legged race" (lol) just about killed me. tell jasper i'd love to help him win that one ;) awesome chapter honey, cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yeah! I missed you too!  Sorry it was so long. :S

I got the idea for the the Stick Riding Game from Lady Gaga's "Love Game" one day when I was driving out to feed our horse.  I was giggling up a storm!  I thought about having one of them be a "wheelbarrow race" but if it were me the sensation would make my arms too weak. ;D  I have no idea if it's even possible to pull off, but a friend whose hubs is storng enough and they're adventurous enough, says they'll give it a try some time and let me know! *mwaaha*  (lucky girl!)

Your comment certainly captured Jas's notice. ;)

One more game next chap and we get to meet Aro at last.

Thanks for reading!!  I adore your reviews!!!