Reviews by raro
Summary:

ONE SHOT Bella Swan is forced to return to Forks where her father abuses her. The Cullens have been waiting for her to complete their family. She is mate to Carlisle and bond mother to Edward. How will they save Bella? Read to find out.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2281 Read Count: 791
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2010
Reviewer: raro Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this one shot has amazing story potential and it would be great if you did continue it.

 

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268895
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: raro Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think this is story is interesting and i like the idea of it.

I have a comment for you though.
                     I think you need to reconsider Edward's alleriges. If he is really allergic to corn he most certainly would not be eating popcorn. Popcorn is made from dried corn that has been heated until it 'pops'.

Keep up the writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: raro Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really good. 

When I was pregnant with my baby girl I went through phases. At one time I craved KFC zinger burgers, and they had to be spicy which was really good when they had the extra spicy sauce. I think in a couple of weeks I ate there about three times a week. At the same time I had anything else spicy I could get my hands on. 

After that I went through a cheeseburger phase. Maccas became my best friend for about two weeks. 

Another thing I craved was bacon. BLT's with cheese and mayo in particular. The bacon had to be cooked just right too. Not too crispy but still had to be a little crispy. In a month I think I went through about a kilo and a half of short cut bacon. (Eye pieces)

My girlfriend who was pregnant at nearly the sametime had no morning sickness and never craved anything. But I was the complete opposite sick the whole nine months and went through a few different cravings. Drove my husband nuts.

Another craving I have witnessed is ice cream. But particular and weird flavours. Not easy ones to come across and not something you can get at the local supermarket. A friend of mine always wanted ice cream. But it was one that you had to get from a baskin and Robbins, or some other speciality ice cream shop.

Another friend of mine is normally allergic to strawberries and while she was pregnant all she wanted was strawberries. She had them anyway she could get them, fresh, frozen, in ice cream, in smoothies. And funnily enough while she was pregnant she never once got sick from them or had an allergic reaction but as soon as she gave birth she was right back to being allergic. She thought she'd try them after she gave birth as they came with cream and champagne to celebrate the birth of her baby and no sooner had she finished eating the first before they made her sick and she had a minor allergic reaction. Never had them again after that. 

Hope some of these ideas help.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: raro Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm glad you caved. I really quite enjoy this story.