Ok I am done. I like. I Like very much because 1-you actually had them talk and tell each other how they feel, two she isn't over the top I don't need anyone nor can I accept gifts because I am poor and money is evil LOL. And three I love making Phil creepy not many people use him in the plot he is just mentioned. I like making him a bad guy.  Oh Edward should've punched Emmett for the virgin comment Emmett is actually somewhat of a dousche and Rose is the better half in this story. I will be starting part duex tomorrow but I see you haven't started part Thrice. I want the pitter patter of little Cullen feet. Until the next story adios.

DUN DUN DUN DUN. I was waiting for Jacob to be a trained sub Damn. Are we going to get another view of Charlie & Renee? Oh yeah we need to know Aro's POV in all this. Whoohoo. The Italy boys should come over and take care of James & Laurent and Jacob should turn a blind eye. Know what I mean. Muwaha. This conversation is exactly how I wanted it to go down that she had Edward with her. Yeah. Ok Awaiting the next chapter(gleefully rubbing my hand together):)

Good Chapter but very very very short. Sorry I have to rate low because of the length. Until next chapter:)

I dont think the story needs a prelude of how Bella got where she is to me you already explained it really isnt needed. But I hope you are not letting Laurent's girl go, she was an accessory and needs to be handed over to Aro also. She kidnapped and didnt give a shit what happened to Bella & Victoria and if James hadnt turned on her she wouldve went on her merry way. She deserves the same as James not sympathy.

It's Jane. Didnt they have enough drama with Phil. OMG. I know everyone thinks it's Tanya but Jane is who you introduced as they psycho Bitch from hell so I am going with her.  We already ran into Carmen & Heidi.  Frankly I think Alice should get some shit she gave Bella lots of shit she deserves it. I also agree with Edward & Bella's parents that was a shitty thing they did especially since everyone went along with their speedy freelove wedding they could've waited an hour and at least completed the ceremony.  Sex was not more important than making your family happy for a little longer. Awaiting the next update.

I can't get chapter 19 either. I will try again tomorrow. I can't wait. And thanks for clearing up Edward's view or lack of feelings towards Angela which only means if a woman knows and still keeps wanting to get him alone she is hitting on him and that wont sit very well with Bella. Oh cat fight. LOL Hurry Hurry Hurry fix please:)

Let's see he has harrassed her since she was I think you said 12 and she is now 18 so he should get 5-6years. Pedophelia is a serious crime so double it and add three so 15years and a day, he cant be paroled unless he does the full 15yrs. MUWAHAHAHA. Rat Bastard. As for Angela yeah glad she is leaving and very impressed that Bella wouldnt accept her apology. I also feel she should never had felt bad about punching her because she hit 1st. If she didn't ok feel bad but if someone hits you what you are supposed to just walk away I don't think so. I know we are going back to Phil but are we having a chapter about Alice & Jasper and does their marriage get spilled before the wedding now that would be funny. LOL. Until next chapter:)

I am a litle worried about Royce King being in this story and the fact he has now been embarrased by a woman, Bella. Oh Boy are you setting us up again:)