Reviews by Lizzyliz
Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89144
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love that it's Edward dating Jasper.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

A great chapter. I can't wait to find out where Renee's been.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just read through the story. It's interesting and I can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159885
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That is so sad.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Another great chapter. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I can't believe you ended it there. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hope you bring out the next chapter soon. I love this story.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for another chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Another great chapter. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Update as soon as you can. I will be here to read it when you get a chance. I love the contrast between the future and the past. This is a great story. Good luck with all your writing in November.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank you for the update. I love this story and can't wait for Bella to wake up.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great chapter. I can't wait for Bella to wake up.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

A great chapter. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 May 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I love this story. I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long to get out. 

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Third chapter

Just started reading it. I love it. Can't wait for more.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I really like your story. I can't wait for my chapters and I love the inner struggle with both Edward and Bella. It's great.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like it and am looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great chapter. Please hurry with the next one.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I really liked the past two chapters. I can't wait for the darkness to go.

Behind the Velvet Rope by mcgt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Emmett McCarty is the newest bouncer at Fire & Ice night club. This is his firsthand account of all the shady, sexual, and lucrative happenings from behind the velvet rope.

Canon pairings eventually. This is not a story about Emmett so much as it is the story of the happenings around him. Give it a whirl, it's going to be a wild ride!

Banner made my the fantastic FrozenSoldier!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23298 Read Count: 2268
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I just started the story and can't wait to read the next few chapters. I don't understand why there aren't more reviews. It's really a great story. I'm intrigued to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I think perhaps because it\'s not directly about E/B or perhaps my banner doesn\'t have Rob or Kris on it?  IDK.  Either way, thanks so much for being the first to review this on TWCS.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Great story. Can't wait to see what happens.

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Declared (V)

Thanks for all the updates. Love the story.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427897
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings

Amazing chapter. I can't wait for next week.

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 37: It's Good To Talk, Isn't It?

I'm glad they didn't make up. It was very true to both of them and how you've written the characters.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Dates & Discussions

I just read the chapters thus far and its a really good story. I like where is it is going and I can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Hey Lizzyliz

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! There is soooo much more to come from these too. Thanks for the compliment (blushes). 

Hopefully won't be too long for an update, all depends on my lovely beta who is mega busy at the moment, so please do bear with me I have no plans to abandon this story.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: A Formal Outing

Poor Edward and Bella. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Yeah I feel sorry for both of them here, but then again I am biased ;-). 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Friends and Enemies

Poor Edward.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chasing Cars

Poor Edward. 



Author's Response:

I know! My heard bleeds for him totally and I am writing this! Go figure!

 

Preview

Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together.  Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.

Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.

Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.

“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: In & Out Of Conciousness

Poor Edward in the hospital. It was a great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and staying with me, he is in the hospital and in safe hands now. x

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Revisiting the Past

Glad you're back. I love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I had agentle nudge from a friend and reader she told me she missed him. I wanted to have this beta'd but decided I couldn't wait!

 

thanks for sticking with me x 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Moving On

This isn't going to be good.

Summary:

Edward writes a message and puts it in a bottle. While on vacation with his family, he drops it in the ocean. Hoping to find his soulmate the way his grandfather did. Will it end in love or in nothing? Sometimes you just have to believe in fate.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27091 Read Count: 5149
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can't wait until she gets to Chicago. Great story.

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Another great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you :o)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Really liking this story, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll try to do my best ;o)

Summary:

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Jasper Whitlock spent his high school years being tormented by Edward Cullen. When their paths cross again years later, could the boy he once hated become the man he loves? Slash, Mature themes.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 213326 Read Count: 24245
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I got caught up with your story. You are an amazing writer and this is a really great story. Keep up the hard work.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

THanks a lot! I'm working on another chapter. Hope you'll like!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is a hot story, can't wait to read more.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm working on it.

Ties that Bind by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen crime family has been a problem for the law officers of Chicago for over fifty years. After dozens of failed attempts to infiltrate the family, the FBI decides it's time to send in more undercover agents, Edwards and Whitlock. However, the Feds do not realize that Edwards has an agenda all of her own, which doesn't necessarily include putting a stop to the family's business.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 44259
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story can't wait for the rest of the story.

Taken by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward makes one mistake, and soon learns he must pay for it. Forced to lie to his family and Bella, will be manage to survive being Taken?

Rated M for lang & Lemons.

Banner by Ysar

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153918 Read Count: 28170
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Confrontations

I can't wait to hear about what happened to Edward. It's really good so far.

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Great chapter. I like hearing from the real world. I can't wait to hear more of what is going on with the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Love Shack

Finally they got together. Another great chapter. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for your review. E&B eventually got there.

Chapter 19 is nearly finished, so will hopefully be posted tonight.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Moving House

Another great chapter. I love the banner! I can't wait for them to get settled with island life.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz, a bit of hunting and gathering is up next.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

I was excited to see another chapter up. It didn't disappoint. I can't wait for next chapter with hopefully some romance.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32 - glad you enjoyed it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Ghosts or Goats

I can't wait for the next chapter. Everyone is getting hurt.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Yeah, everyone is getting hurt, but hey, I've gotta write something to give Dr C something to do!

Seriously though, injuries in the environment they're living in; catching their own livestock and building a house as well as exploring the island is bound to result in boo boos.

I'm writing chapter 22, so stay tuned sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

Great chapter! I love having Aro there.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40.

Aro will stick around for at least one more chapter, perhaps 2 - not sure yet, it depends on how long chapter 41 gets.

I'm working on chapter 41 now, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Temple

Take all the time you need for real life. I was excited for another chapter and I'll be excited in a few weeks. It would be exciting if Rosalie was pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Yeah, RL's a drag.

Do you want Rose to be pregnant?

Edward is about to make a move on Bella, so look out for it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Ship Wrecked

Just found the story. It's really good and enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Making Camp

Thanks for another great chapter. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz, thanks for reading and reviewing. Another chapter will be up by the weekend. Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Working Together

It was a great chapter. I was excited to see another one. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz, thanks for the compliment. I am painting by bedroom at the moment, but I will try to post another chapter tonight or tomorrow sometime. Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Making Plans

Thumbs up. You do such great research for these chapters.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz, thanks for the compliment. Research is a bitch if it's a topic you know little about, but I love writing, so research is a part of that. I'm working on chapter 7 now, so look out for it tonight or tomorrow. What did you think of the banner?

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

My internet has been down so I just read both chapters. They are amazing as always. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lizzyliz. I'm sorry for the delay in posting chapter 10, but RL has been getting in the way. I've just posted chapter 10. Enjoy.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Making a Move

*clapping* Thank you for Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

No problem - it was time for E&B to come together. Thanks for the applause.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Lava Tube

Great chapter. I hear an 'I told you so.'



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Esme probably will say or imply 'I told you so' at some point, because she's a Mom, but will it make any difference in the long run?

I don't know if fear of the unknown would stop me from taking risks to try and improve my circumstances or know more about my environment if I was in their position. I think I'd be insatiable with curiosity. It makes for an interesting story anyway ... I hope!

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Getting Help

I love that it was in Jasper's perspective. I wish we could have had the rescue too. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

We don't hear enough from Jasper in fanfiction, so I thought it was important to give him a voice. Part of chapter 14 includes Js POV as well.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2

Great and funny chapter. I love what happened to Alice, very funny.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Yeah ... a serving of bat shit will teach Alice not to go off on her own.

Stay tuned for chapter 15 which I hope to post soon.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

I love the sassy Esme.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

I love sassy Esme as well.

I hate that Esme always fades into the background in the books, as well as a lot of fanfics.

My Esme is no wallflower!

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - House Calls

Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - We meet again, Red

Another great chapter. It's intense with the pirates. 



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for the review. The pirates aren't gone forever - they're going to cause some trouble. Look out for chapter 24 this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Thanksgiving Games

That's a crazy chapter. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey there, Lizzyliz

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing chapter 25.

Yeah, a lot happened in this chapter - it was the longest yet at around 15,000 words.

The next couple of chapters will be full of suspense. Look out for the first one in about a week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - DEFCON ONE

Noo! I can't wait for another week to find out what happens. 



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 26.

Sorry about the cliffie, but at least I didn't keep you waiting. lol.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

Thank you for a teaser! I really can't wait for the whole chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing the chapter 27 teaser.

I hope you enjoyed chapter 28 just as much.

Look out for chapter 29 sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Bullet

A very intense couple of chapters.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and for reviewing chapter 29.

We'll take a break from the angst for a while, but Vivi will be back to cause trouble ... sometime.

Chapter 30 will be posted this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Question and Answer

Thanks for the update. It was another great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Hi lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 30 - glad you enjoyed it.

Lifes been pretty full on for me lately, but I hope that things will settle down in a couple of weeks.

Look out for a marriage proposal in the next chapter. I'm getting ready to launch a ring poll on my blog so that readers can choose their favorite rings. More news on that in the next chapter AN.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

I love how it ended.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad you liked it.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Date

I loved this chapter, it was so romantic.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Very sweet, I like the break that they have right now with the different celebrations and not a lot of stress.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35 - glad you enjoyed it. Christmas is next, and the wedding will be up in a couple of chapters time, as something extraordinary is happening to Esme.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

How funny, another two pregnancies?



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - sorry I took so long to respond, but I was busy writing chapter 37.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

I think it's great. 



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing; and for your support for Esme's pregnancy.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

I can't wait for Alice's story. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38. Alice's story plus the wedding an honey will be the topic of chapter 39. After that, I think it's time for some more adventure and pirate drama.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Great chapter. I loved the wedding and loved the ending. I can't wait for the next chapter. Have a great holiday.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the wedding.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted the first week of January.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

I'm so glad for this chapter and that they are moved along in the pregnancies. Please don't be so long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Welcome back, I've missed the story. I can't wait for the last few chapters.

 

Sinful by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

As the end times approach the battle for souls on earth begins, so many people have yet to choose sides.

 Heaven and Hell have opened the gates and let loose the best they have to offer, the gates closed and

nothing may re-enter until the battle is won, unless, that is, you perish.

Amazing banner by; My husband

Fantastic beta's js18 and RAH07890- who also Americanises this story

This story will contain lemons...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25453 Read Count: 12625
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: In Hell

Hot story! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

I just found the story. I hope you write more. I really thought it is hot and can't wait to see where you go.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I do like to write most of the story before I start posting it, so I'm currently at 9 chapters and counting, the rest is planned and I will finish it, nothing worse than unfinished stories, arrgghhh!  I do hope you enjoy the rest. xx

Blood In The Snow by shewoolf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Author Edward Cullen finds a man buried in the snow, nearly beaten to death. Love grows as he cares for the man, but will his attackers find him? Slashstories/35461/images/BloodInTheSnowBannertwcs.jpg

Thank you  to Slash Kitten Mina for the wonderful banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83463 Read Count: 15001
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2012 Updated: 11 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I wish it was longer. Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Sorry.... sometimes it just won't go any farther....  but I try!  Thanks!

Catherine

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I liked hearing Jaspers story. Can't wait for some Edward and Jasper getting to know each other.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your comments!  They really brightewn up my day!  More Edward and Jasper interaction coming up soon.

 

Catherine

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is really great so far. I don't mind it getting dark.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Thank you for taking the time to send your comments... brightens my day!

 

Catherine

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really great first chapter. I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I should be able to update weekly...I hope!

Catherine

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love seeing them bond. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate your comments.  Hope you keep on enjoying the story!

 

Catherine

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ended up with a little steam. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment!  Yup, got a little relationship budding here.

Catherine

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by the talented chistagbanners.

 

Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.     

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella a lonely married woman. Sigh.

Wild Flower by Alley Cat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Wild Flower

Bella found the field of wildflowers purely by accident when she went riding one day. She did not expect to meet a certain blue-green-eyed man there, nor did she expect to fall in love with him. He broke her heart in that field, but he had also mended it.

This story was written for CharTwilightMom using her specifications (and throwing in some of my imagination) in the Easter Bunny Twilight Fic Swap Event. It was changed to Jasper/Bella pairing with her permission as I thought it would work better this way. Thank you for the prompt, hon, and I hope that you like this final version of the story!

WINNER Best Cullen Lovin' in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17687 Read Count: 2751
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2012 Updated: 10 May 2012
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Wild Flower - Part I

I really liked this chapter. Please do more, can't wait to find out more about the characters.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Wild Flower - Part III

Another really good couple of chapters. Its sad they have to part for awhile.

Summary:

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One night at a club when two people meet and their attraction is instant. No names, no numbers, no regrets. But what happens when their paths cross again and there are consequences to face.

Nominated for Best Kiss in Fandom Choice Awards.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19462 Read Count: 5668
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2012 Updated: 02 May 2013
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this story. I can't wait for another chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! The next chapter will be up soon x

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923138
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great chapter. I love the Edward and Bella when they are together.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Involuntary Rapture

Hot chapter. I like that his grandfather kidnapped him. I wonder what he wants.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Moving another chapter asap.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Thank you for the early post. It was so sweet and I'm glad they have a small space to call their own.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 63: The Second Elizabeth Part 1

I love the start of this back story.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Just found the story. It's really great. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Oh sorry, I'll make sure to put out a chapter a day for the next 25 days. Then it will have to be one a week cause u'll be all caught up. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait for more.

 



Author's Response:

glad ur loving it :)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Creepy chapter. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Super hot!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

A great chapter. I can't wait for the wedding.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

It was a nice break in tone of the story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

It will be a long week waiting. I'm so glad James didn't do anything. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Great chapter! Hot!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Another great chapter. I loved the girl talk with Alice and Bella.