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Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

I wasn't sure if he would end up with Tanya.  Thank god he Didnt like her, have to laugh about the braces:-) Can't wait to see how the night goes over at the girls apartment.  They keep commenting on ages, so how old is everyone?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

Wow, I'm not sure what to say. I guess everyone has skeletons in there closets.  Edward seems closed off and like he said she has no verbal filter where he is concerned.  Maybe he'll eventually trust her and open up.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Disorderly

Hummmm, I'm sensing a little JealousWard......   I'm sure Bella was only looking for Edward when Jake decided to give her his number.   Bella does have a little catching up to do with Alice.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Edward Part One

Wow, that explains some of Edwards issues.  Hopefully he goes to Bells's.  is he moving in with jasper? 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717534
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Awwwww, at least he called.  She's on his mind and she heard go from him. I put myself on your tribute email blog site but haven't gotten notifications. Thank god you update here!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

So what is up with next week? Bella is gonna make an awesome mafia wife.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Oh, is CJ in trouble? 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

So will he give her a ring at dinner? When is the wedding? I love the are talking......it's nice to see tem on the same page. I don't think Edward gives Bella enough credit though, I don't think she's not bright I think it's just inmuturity and confusion.  They both were playing games not knowing it. Can't wait until the next chapter.

 

so tell us more about your new story.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I think CJ is truly honest with watching over Bela and his loyalty to Edward. Emmett's attitude shocked me......I think him and Edward will end up having some issues.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Oh, CJ put the marriage idea in his head. I think Bella will jump at the idea!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

At least they are talking and Edward is supportive of Bella. They just need to make some decisions.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Oh, is he happy or scared about the baby. I know he's happy he has Bella back.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Edward definitely made the right choice. Home to his Bella now, can't wait to see what he decides to do there.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Oh, Edward....... You can be sweet but you two really gotta talk.  You're walking around each other.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what happens next. What Edward thinks of Bella, and is Jasper not with Alice?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella and Alice wanting Edward........think Bella needs to dump Jake. Hope he doesn't go with Alice. How's Jasper fit into this. 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So Edward playing matchmaker? You had me scared there for a minute with Alice........and those two together are tooo weird for me. Meeting Carlisle? When Bella giving jake the boot?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So Edward wants to be in the mafia, guess that's he  gets Bella. He would be higher up then Jake. Does jasper want in?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Why does Jasper avoid Carlisle? So who is Edward gonna hook up with? How are Alice and Bella gonna get with Jaser and Edward?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yep! We are on a roll now!


Oh, and I have faith in you.........but you all ready have her with Jake ........yuck!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh boy.......what is Edward gonna do? Or should I say who or who is he not gonna do. Seems he has one Bella on his mind a lot and she keeps being brought up a lot. 


What is Jasper's issue with these guys?  Are we going to get Bella's POV?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ut oh, they better move fast.   Especially if they are in the hallway.......on the stairs? I don't think it's going to be able to go back to the way it was before. I also think Jasper is going to figure things out pretty quickly.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Who thought Bella was a virgin? That's funny..........no virgin I know acts like she does. I'm thinking Bella's been abused.....how badly and to what extent is yet to be seen in the up coming chapters.  Edward and Bela are under each others skin and Edward is protective of her and I'm sure hell figure out what's going on. He's quite and observative, Jake doesn't realize that Edward has a ame to him.....he's just coming back.


So we are on the right path with Alice and Jasper....... A date huh?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What exactly happened to her and by who? 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So at least they have come to an understanding........they are sorta together. Edward has to talk to Jasper and Bella needs to work on him also.  Can't wait to see how the time away affects him.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Sooo lines are drawn and loyalties laid. Told ya Jake was a dead man.   Not really a Jake fan and he honesty gets everything Edward dishes out then some.  Glad Edward staked his claim to Bella. 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Glad Jasper at least is open to the idea of Bella and Edward together. I'm sure jasper is gonna be upset, hurt and anger when he sees what has happened to Bella. 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Let's see how smug he is when he sees who sent for him and what he has to look forward to, I don't see Edward making it quick.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oh, Jasper has a lot of guilt. How will Bella deal with Edward needing to go away? Will he tell her the truth about Jake to put her at ease?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

At least she is talking and not shutting down. It is going to take a lot of time to heal for all of them.

 Sucks your story was taken down........ FF is pulling a lot of stories.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Oh, this is gonna be one crazy ride. The proposal is out there, and they have actually talked......about damn time! Can't wait for the wedding, the gossip and surrounding drama. I'm sure Tanya and the skanks will be showing back up.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

They need to talk, she's thinking she needs to change because of why Emmett said and Edward WANs her just the same. They they to decide what they are. 

 

Glad you're back.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Oh, can't wait to see what she's thinks since she's driving him nuts. They still seem to have a lack of communication going on.  Thank god it's only driven him to wanting her more.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Oh, she just needs to tell him. They need to just talk and get on the same page.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

 Oh, this isn't good. Alice must of told Jasper. Bold Bella!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Finally he know, not how he should have found out. Oh.......jasper hit him! He's gonna have one hell of a headache. What is Bella gonna do?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

At least they are finally talking and kissing:-) so now we can hopefully move past this Bella gonna move in with Edward? They keeping the baby? getting married? Hopefully there won't be to much drama over it.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Chauffeur Riley, bet he gets a chuckle out of this. Glad Alice and Bella made up. Now Jasper and Edward just have to mend fences.  Update soon......was worried something was wrong. Not like you to not update regularly

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Well thank you for Alice's intervention. What's going on with CJ?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Awwww, Edward is so damn cute. About damn time.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Can't wait for the wedding and to find out what is happening with CJ.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

So did big daddy set up CJ? Can't wait to see what happens next.

School Of Mischief by mkystich Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

 

 

 

Having to maintain the family tradition, Bella starts her two year requirement at the prestigious CV Academy. To the outside world CVA seemed like a socialite high school where students ended up becoming governors, senators, CEOs, lawyers, and doctors, but the students knew there was more to the school then that.

 

::this is a drabble::


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9009 Read Count: 27191
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2014
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think I'd be a little freaked. I'm guessing she's a virgin? Do the guys get a box and what's in it?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So I'm guessing we know who Bella will be paired with and I'm sure he is very experience.......

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Why did he think she was lying? Will we get an EPOV?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hummmmm, they they get new partners each year? I think there are going to be a lot of jealous and catty ex partners and a lot of jealousy. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Best friends since she was ten and he was twelve.  She had a hard home life, his family love and accepted her as their own.  She accepted him and his family for who they were, mafia royalty.  As they grow up, she becomes a dancer, and he gets groomed to take over for his father.  Follow Edward and Bella as they fall in love and take on the world together.  Violence and Lemony goodness.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177484 Read Count: 221218
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What a wonderful tribute to Carlisle. I think the whole family was beyond speechless and I especially loved her artistic expression.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when dysfunction meets dysfunction? Neither Edward nor Bella are prepared when fate brings them together. Will they be able to overcome the odds and find happiness? Or will the ghosts of their past keep them apart? Canon coupling, but non-canon families. Dark themes, high emotion, and standing tissue alert. AH

 

silent wishes


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed, to read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142814 Read Count: 100274
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2015
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, things are clearing up. But who is the teacher mr. Swan........an uncle? And who did Edward lose who was/is Carlisle married to?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow........thats a lot to handle and all kinds of messed up. And carlisle is ghe new doctor? Well this will make things interesting:-)

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What a mess of emotions and trauma and we still really don't know what happened.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad Rose has opened her heart to them, maybe Edward will take her up on the offer. Poor Carlisle even as a doctor whatever he went through has been overwhelming and he definitely doesn't know how to deal with it.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well they seem to be getting closer. Did Esme tell them what happened in the grocery store,since rose cant say anything?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, such tragedy and guilt.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, what a story. Will he tell Alice? Will Alice maybe see the notebook and read it?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

 Butterflies are good:-)

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Untainted

I'm definitely hooked and can't wait to see what happens. So why was she stealing from them and who does she owe money to?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

What was the bet about? What is Bella gonna do? What will Edward do next?

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109450
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You're killin me, attacked! Amnesia! Six years lost! What the heck??????

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

can't wait for for the next chapter and to see what Lady Swan thinks of her riding partner. Can he keep up?

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94758
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh dishie, screw the guest reviewer! I love your stories always have and look forward to your updates. If they don't like your story don't read it and don't comment!

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35377
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awwww and they were just on their way to to their real first kiss! I'm sure Carsile had something to do with Angela showing back up and having drugs with her especially after his little speech. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward deal with her. Especially since Edward got rid of her befor he married Bella. Don't leave us hanging for long!