Reviews by madyson222
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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Behind Closed Doors

just found this story and i am not ashamed to say that i am addicted

love the 'wedding date' twist that youve put on this

you are phenominally talented

love the quirks that youve added to my favs

ive been waiting for this chap not just for the smexing but for the convo w angela that was long overdue

again well done!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

wow

had no idea how this story was going to evolve but glad i gave it a shot

 

extremely intrigued



Author's Response: I've realized that my summery doesn't quite fit the story so I'm contemplating re-writing it ... what do you think?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23451
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow

words just do not convey my glee at this story

loving the originality

ok maybe it rminds me of a lifetime or jackie collins novel w cheryl ladd

opps just dated myself but who cares

this really good

hope your update schedule is at least once a week

 

smooches

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok

thouroughly confused and intrigued at the same time

is alice and esme supernatural or just amazingly perceptive

and wait

does isadora have a superpower too?

loving this twisty take

please please continue

i need to see how they both get a happy second chance

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love that shes a witch

this is my first witch story, love the twist of something new

reminds me of the old 'bewitched' tv show with a lil of the nick cage movie 'family man' thrown in

 

youre doing a great job

i am completely invested and cant wait for new updates

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

loving the banter between them but need more background or at least another conversation between her and esme or alice

 

love it

im looking forward to much more

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54714
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

whoa ho

love the excellerated posting schedule

im dying to figure out his back story

xox



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and with the next chapter you'll at least be about to formulate guesses on who he might have been!

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

oh man

wheres the hope for poor edward?

thsi chappy was way more intense then i was ready for

are we going to find out who the girl was?

 

im convinced he wasnt a dealer or an addict but some sort of undercover agent

 

whens the next update???



Author's Response:

Okay, calm down.  :)  Yes, there is hope for Edward.  No matter who he is, Bella cares about him, and that means there's hope.  Yes, we will find out who the girl was...eventually.  We've still got 13 chapters to go.  Things are going to be tense for a bit yet, but I promise they WILL get better.  Next update is Saturday, then Wednesday.  Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

yeah

but will he remeber and how will he handle it

 

as for his memories returning or the guys who did it

still feeling like that shoe will drop at a bad time

so invested, cant wait til tues

xox



Author's Response:

LOL!!  I love all the psychoanalysis of this story!  It's awesome!  You ask two very good questions, and you'll have your answers on Tuesday!  And yes, those are both shoes with the potential to drop at bad times, either separate or together.  ;)  So glad you've enjoying the story!

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

happy birthday

even though this seems more like a gift for us

 

i was terrified that he was going to leave w out a word or some chicken sh*t goodbye 

thx for renewing my faith in him

xox



Author's Response:

Heheh, it was a gift for you!  But lots of nice reviews were the gifts for me!

Yes, everyone thought he was going to pull a New Moon.  I'm not a fan of that whole deal, so I would never let Edward do that.  I'm so glad you have faith in my Edward!

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

blissfully amazing

thank you



Author's Response:

Oh, thank YOU so much!

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

yeah

dang it 

lifetime member of 'other shoe' club

i hate that i cant enjoy the 'ah' moments because i keep waiting for someone to recognize him or some college application to trigger something evil

i keep hearing the jaws music is the distance.........

 

dont care

i love this story and im along for the ride

xox



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're in good company!  Yes, unforunately with this kind of story, you know that something is lurking around the bend, but I did promise them a little happiness before fate comes calling.  So glad you're in for the long haul!  :)

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

dont be scared

im still with ya

love that his memories came flooding back- nice touch



Author's Response:

Heh.  I'm glad you're still here!  Yup, Bella's scream echoing Tanya's was a big ol' trigger.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

but but its monday

youre seriously going to torture me until after turkey?! seriously?!

thats just seven different kinds of wrong

 

great transitional chapter



Author's Response:

No, I'm not!  I didn't realize the reaction to this chapter would be so strong!  I'm going to post Wednesday, because I had no intention of being mean to everyone!  Glad you thought the chapter was good, even though it was a difficult one!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983473
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

urgh

ive known girls like her all my life

have a great guy at their beck and call and dont see it whilst the rest of us would give a vital organ to be in their shoes

wonderfully written

smooches

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Ah

What is with these two?

Loving the journey

Between this and picking up the pieces

I cannot sing your praises enough

Xoxo

 

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

yeah intrigue

alice didnt forget she was delayed

hope its not a bad delay

 

loving the cadence and your consistency w the updates

mwah

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

great storyline

im so hooked

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

pride is a bitch

glad he convinced her to get over herself

 

nicely done

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

agreed

love a drunk no filtered esme

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

love the role reversal

and appreciate a strong female who doesnt let feelings get in the way

but then again absolutly adore an oblivious Edward

 

thx for the consisent updates

smooches

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

nicely done

honestly

i wanna scream pull your head out

chemistry comes along once in a lifetime

once its gone youre just left w regret

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

loving these two and their progress

this is such fiction

guys like this only exist in my imagination

thanks for contributing to my guilty pleasure

 

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

take your time

no rush

and seriously who said there should be a cap on the number of chapters?

xox

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Drama is an understatement

I don't see this ending well

Love the angst

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101887
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

how do u do it?

between this story and friends w bene

do u sleep ;)

big,huge fan-please keep it up

smooches

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

really look forward to this story

its unique and tender

dont get me wrong- love me some lemons

but need heartwarming as well

all about the balance

xox

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

 Love this chapter  very sweet without being mushy

Very well done

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082171
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Was wondering how you'd weave the fires together.....  Look forward to your update . Xox

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

It will take some time but they will get there she just needs to see that he's evolved and he needs to talk to her about irina to share that he's matured

Love your work big fan

Please keep it up

Xox

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Honestly keep waiting for James or/Renee to make an appearance. .....

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Please don't let real life get to you

We live for your updates

Reality is soo overrated