Reviews by Miamelly
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661146
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Miamelly Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 74: Edward

Aww love the phone sex, but I cant wait for the real thing and why doesnt edward text her naked pics. The boy needs to learn how to tease with naked pics

Reviewer: Miamelly Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 78: Edward

Omg I love it, i look forward to reading this everyday now, its one of my favorite things to read

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87332
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Miamelly Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am officially in love please update soon.. I love how easily they fell for each other and I hope that carlisle finds out soon. i cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away.  Thank you all so much for everything you say.  We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers.  There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward.  At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward.  I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella.  Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room.  Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay.  More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage.  Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant.  Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet.  As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.

“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”

“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”

“Presents!” I say excitedly.

“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.

“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.

“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.

“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.

“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.

I know we are EVIL for leaving it there.  It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)

Charlie's Daughter by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella has been in love with her best friends father for years. Now that she's turning 21 soon, will she finally be able to show him what he's been missing? Told in E&BPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10004 Read Count: 1527
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2012 Updated: 06 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Miamelly Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really awesome start to this, i cant wait to read more. it was great chap