Reviews by Kyrstank
LONG DISTANCE LOVE by naughtydreamz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Past Featured Story

From a redneck bar in Georgia to the bright lights of Los Angeles and New York. They were nobodies, but together they became America's Sweethearts. Will fame and temptation destroy them? Or will their love go the distance?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15491 Read Count: 15744
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 10 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Kyrstank Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I have just read this entire story and I don't mean to rude but this story is not very good. First off its not all Edwards fault and the fact that you have written Bella as to thinking she is innocent is a major turn off. And secondly the whole jake thing is just annoying. Out of the whole 13 chapters you have written Bella and Edward have only been together for 1. I am not at all impressed with this story no offense. 



Author's Response:

I know it's not for everyone, but I appreciate you reading it anyway.