Reviews by jadedmoments
Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: jadedmoments Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Shame

I love this story, truely.. But I have to say Bella frustrates me sometimes. She has all these guys protecting her, like the world revolves around her. All the guys have said it, and she expects it. She seems so spoiled in that way. I mean I get where they're all coming from, losing your father and brother and getting blamed for it by your mother? I can't even imagine what that must be like. But come on! In one of the past chapters she blames Edward for thinking the world revolves around him, when she herself has said that the world revolves around her.. 

I realize this maybe came off a bit harsh, but argh I got frustrated :p

I read some other reviews who didn't get Bella's assumption about Edward and Rose, but in this instance I completely get her. What was she supposed to think?

Anyway, I'm sticking with this story :) don't interpret my rant as me not liking your story 'cause I do :p

 

*if I left some spelling mistakes, sorry but autocorrect is killing me ;)

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104539
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: jadedmoments Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

I just found this story this morning and have already caught up :) I can't wait for more!

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Reviewer: jadedmoments Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

Wow! Awesome chapter!

It's heartbreaking knowing they both loved and still love each other so much, but were to afraid to say it in the past. That said, it makes this a story worth telling!

I really love this story :)
please update soon!

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Reviewer: jadedmoments Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

From the moment you mentioned blue eyes and blond hair I just know it would be James. Is he going to be the 'bad guy' as usual in fanfiction? Or are you trying to throw us off with the name? :)

Reviewer: jadedmoments Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Confused

Oh I'm loving this :D please, update soon!!!