Penname: darkest-terror [Real name: Jaclyn
Member Since: 12 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I write and I read. I'm not offended by much, I understand everyone handles things differently and believes differently, who am I to judge? I love getting reviews from people (what author doesn't?), I try to respond to all of them and I apologize if I miss you, because I refuse to send a simple "thank you for reviewing" reply, it's too overdone. Constructive criticism is my favorite kind of review, but downright rudeness/cruelty will not be treated with kindness. If all you do is complain in every chapter, STOP READING! I will not tolerate people who read my stories simply to complain about everything in it.


I know it's been a while since I posted anything new, I don't actually have anything at the moment so it will be a while. I have a multi-chapter Twilight fanfic that's a WOP, but I'm not sure if I'm still going anywhere with it. It's something I've been working on quite a while, and I actually lost the flashdrive it's on for over a year. I may keep it and work on bits and pieces as I go, but my writing style has somewhat changed since I started it so I can't make any promises.


 


I'm working on an original story that will be posted here when finished. It may be a while, because I plan on it being fairly long. We'll see where things go as I make progress on it. It is something I hope to try to publish at some point, even if it's self-published. As I said, we'll see how things go with it.


I have a second original story idea, but it needs research that I can't seem to find online anywhere. It is kind of odd, so it may be something I have to look into at another point in life.


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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625112
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Ohhhh, a novel? You'll have to tell us if it gets a major publisher!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I love happy endings! And congratulations on such large numbers! I hate ffn now, they're getting rid of almost every story with even the smallest hint of sex in it. All because they refuse to have the MA/NC-17 rating.

Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20819
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Actually, in the state of Illinois, you can get married at 17 without parental consent. I looked it up when my fiance and I thought I'd lose my health insurance at 18. My fiance is a few months younger than me, so we checked it out. We weren't sure if his dad would agree, but he did. All you need is someone 18 or older to sign the forms, they don't have to be your legal guardian. And your witness(es) have to be at least 18. Granted, that would also get rid of alot of the drama for the story.



Author's Response:

i tried to research those laws, but i didn't come across that. =/ 

thank you for telling me though. 

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Epilogue

-sniffles-



Author's Response:

<3

thank you for your reviews. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee

I didn't think people with severe cases of OCD actually realized what they were doing unless someone pointed it out? I've only known one person with an actual case of OCD, but I guess it was mild or something (I dunno, I've only done a little bit of research in Psychology) because they had him on medication and you really couldn't tell (although that may have been because we were never friends, he was my older brother's friend's younger brother. Wow, that's potentially confusing)

Summary:

Alice and Jasper have an idea for a night with Bella.  Will Bella agree?  Mature situations and themes throughout.  Please be warned.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7865 Read Count: 5223
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - In the Shower

Mmmm, Jackson. -sigh-

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

-sigh- Jackson... Yummy, naked Jackson... -sigh-



Author's Response:

I know, right?!?!  How much better can you get than that?  I'm sorry if I offend any person on Team Edward/Kellan/Jacob/whoever, but I am Team Jasper all the way to the end.  That's the main reason I wrote this story.  I couldn't find any fan-fic out there that satisfied my Jasper craving, so I took matters into my own hands.  I am assuming you enjoyed, so I thank you so much!!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

Lol, I have a couple Jasper stories you might be interested in. That's pretty mcuh all I write now.



Author's Response:

Oooh, Hale yeah!!  Are they posted on here or somewhere else?  You can email me the link(s) if you want -- twilightmom2009@yahoo.com.  I'd love to read them!!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awww, I was hoping for another chapter. Oh well, guess I can TRY to wait. :-p



Author's Response:

I should have the next chapter up by Wednesday evening. It's going to my beta today. Glad you like it enough to come back for more :0)

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love Neons. My fiance just bought my dad's off him. I'd love to get one, but they quit making them a few years ago. I think '05 or '06 is the last year they made them.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I was giggling all the way through Charlie's POV

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

For a minute, I couldn't figure out how they were going to see a Resident Evil movie, then I remembered that Em is 19. I think you said he's 19? I can't wait until the next one comes out in September, my fiance and I are gonna see it for his birthday.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

A horrible event can cause a panic attack if anything similar happens on TV or in real life. I have panic attacks when I feel trapped by people. (It's not claustrophobia, it's some kind of social anxiety disorder). My best friend displays OCD tendencies when she's nervous or anxious, and that can be considered a type of panic attack as well. They can manifest themselves in different ways, and sometimes it does seem random and apparently without cause. That's one of the fascinating things about psychology.



Author's Response:

Yep :0) I personally suffer from panic attacks as well, so I know how random they can be. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Lol, I have two aunts named 'Cindy' except they're two different spellings. But because of getting married, they also have the same last name.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Personally, I prefer when outtakes are in a separate chapter, it's less confusing to me.

Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 20345
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What the Hell Happened to Bella?

These stories with Emmett being so close to Bella always make me think of my older brother. Except he wouldn't have let his "best friend" walk out of it like Emmett apparently did.



Author's Response:

Poor Emmett gets a lot of flack in this story for letting James get away with it.  He doesn't have much choice...if he could get his hands on James, he would destroy him in a heartbeat.

Emmett is a lot like my older brother, and I think that's why I love writing him so much.  Mind you,  my older brother isn't nearly as vulgar as Em can be.  ;)

Cheers to great brothers!!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Branded

It's understandable why she wouldn't want to tell Emmy, he'd probably go all Jason Vorhees on James' ass. That's what my brother would do, my fiance would too.



Author's Response:

You can factor in the fact that James also told her that Emmett would leave if he ever found out.  Bella was so vulnerable that she believed it.  :(

I had to laugh at the mental picture of Emmett wearing the Jason mask and running around with an axe or a chainsaw.  ;)

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Whispers

I'm glad Vicky and Rose are nice, it always makes me sad that they're either really evil or mean.



Author's Response:

I felt that Rose got a bum rap.  We were all so conditioned to hate her, and then when I heard her story...I figured there was something more to it, and I felt really guilty for not liking her.  I wanted to give her a chance to shine, and you'll see that in my stories, she's not really a bitch.

I love Rachelle Lefevre, so it's in honour of her that Victoria gets to be a good guy.  :)

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Gorecki

If I had a red beatle, I'd have to get black polka dots on it so I'd have a lady bug.



Author's Response:

That's freaking awesome, darkest-terror.  I never thought about that.  *snort*  too funny!

Summary:

In a world that is rapidly being overrun by zombies, a group people from different walks of life converge, while learning to live and love amongst the ruins of their old lives. AH. Language, gore, humor, lemons. Indie TwiFic Award Nominee! stories/1619/images/Love_and_Zombies_banner.jpg


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61045 Read Count: 8473
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer

Reminds me of Resident Evil, that where you get the idea? Also, could you go back through and edit the names/locations to show up in bold? It's slightly confusing when you miss them.



Author's Response:

Sorry, can't say that I got the idea anywhere except for my twisted brain...or my husband's equally demented self lol

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: THIS IS RIDICULOUS

That's why I hate ff.net now.



Author's Response:

I hate it too, but it's hard to leave when it's where I got my start

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Where There Is Smoke....................

It wouldn't be YOUR story if you changed it to make other people happy. That's what I like about this place, they won't dump your story just because enough people made complaints when it didn't even break the rules. If you don't like it, it's as simple as not reading it.



Author's Response:

exactly. thank you for the support *hugs*

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Flight

-hugs- Hope you're holding up. I'm not sure which would be worse, and expected death or a sudden one. My grandma passed away two years ago, but it was very sudden.



Author's Response:

I am doing better, though I agree that it's hard to tell which is worse.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: THIS IS RIDICULOUS

That's why I hate ff.net now.



Author's Response:

yeah, bunch of jerks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Abiding Friend or Soulless Monster

That's something I've wondered about. If their skin is already so hard, how does a hard-on not tear their undies or jeans?



Author's Response:

lol, well I admit, that is a good question,  I think it's rock like but still smooth so it wouldn't bust fabric I guess

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Being Away from Her

Could you recommend any more Jasper/Bella stories? That's my favorite pairing and I'm always on the look-out for a good one. And I've checked out a couple that you've recommended before and they were pretty good, so I thought I'd ask your opinion on others as well.



Author's Response:

hhhmmmmm,  Right now I have one I havent' started but I really want to over on FFN, it's called Bourbon and Tea by Zigster.

If I find others I will try to remember to pass them on to you!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?

Is it sharing if the pixie is involved? I'm not really into that, but if it meant a private session with Jasper, she could be there, I suppose. If it means I get some Jasper. I suppose. Although it's not really private if the pixie is there. Well, close enough. I guess.



Author's Response:

LMFAO!!!!   uuummmmm  I will have to see what the Pixie says to that!  too funny!!!!

Summary:

These are the out takes of other Cullen's POV during the story,

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18212 Read Count: 1986
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 May 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - A Day with Bella and Emmett

Lol, Em kinda reminds me of my older brother.



Author's Response:

Emmett reminds you of your older brother!!  I don't know if I should be jealous or scared for you!!!!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Interview with Edward after Chapter 28

Lmao. I love the Jasper/Alice part, I've never really been a fan of mostly in character Edward, he's so uptight and controlling. Anyway, it's going to really suck for Bella when she and Edward "do the deed" (whether that occurs in the story or not) because he'll be lucky if he lasts 5 minutes since he's never, you know.



Author's Response:

aawwww I think Edward's a hoot!!! so virginal and repressed.  He's fun to toy with!!  You're right he made need to do some kind of practicing if he wants to geet through eternity not being known as a 3 push chump!!!!

Summary:

Bella's kept a secret that's eaten away at her. After a self-inflicted injury, she's put into a hospital that tests her strength. She'll find out who she can trust, and who she needs to stay away from. A darker fic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64339 Read Count: 1933
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ha! I knew he was talking about his mom. Poor Edward.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ha! I knew he was talking about his mom. Poor Edward.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I was gonna finish reading this, but I wasn't expecting to find Vampires in the All Human category instead of the Alternate Universe.

Summary:

One thing in exchange for another takes on a literal meaning when a relationship and social opinions are put at their breaking point. How can a couple defying those social opinions survive? ExB lemons, angst, romance


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25859 Read Count: 1793
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

My dad would know how it was. Working full time, going to school full time, but my dad also had a wife and 2 kids to take care of.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I got into a fight at school once, I was lucky though, the teacher that saw it just walked away. Didn't say a word. My friends ended up having to pull me off him, but I HAD to hit him, he was saying mean things about my best frend and i knew she wouldn't do anything about it, she's too nice. He was nice to me after that, and he quit making fun of my friends.

The Affair by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Thanks to M81170 for the great banner.

Bella is married to her favorite Cullen but what happens when his past changes her future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57358 Read Count: 17053
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah, someone outside the house wouldn't know that her husband's son is her age.



Author's Response:

No, I never even thought about that. HA HA, that makes it even funnier in my head!!

 

Thanks for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

HBTY

Jake lied to Bella the day she visited him after the newborn attack, changing her decision & the lives of everyone involved. 4 years later, everything has changed again & Bella begins a journey to try & recapture a future that was lost to her.Jake-OOC/AU/LEMONS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41676 Read Count: 8887
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Every Light in the House

That pictures is gorgeous!



Author's Response:

Thanks...when I fould it I knew it was exactly what I had pictured.

Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Nightmares and Sleepwalking

Ambien can cause severe hallucinations, as well as minor short-term memory loss. Read the label on the side if you ever happen across a bottle. I had an allergic reaction, it caused severe visual and audio hallucinations, they were frightening.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The end or the beginning

If Jas had asked me if I wanted to go for a ride, I wouldn't have been able to resist: "I'd love to, saddle up cowboy"

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The trials and tribulations of a newborn vampire

As long as he has pants (for everyone else's sake), does it really matter if Jasper has shirts?

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

lol2

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Ooooh, I bet your dress was gorgeous. I'm gonna get to wear my grandma's wedding dress. God rest her soul, I just wish she would be here to see me.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

It's nice to get outside POV's every once in a while, but I (personally, I can't speak for anyone else) don't always like to know what someone else is doing. It ruins the surprise.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Wow, I thought she was calling Esme.

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday Eeyore!

I like her birthday dress. It was sexy, but still somehow innocent.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I love dressing this Bella!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking Point

I really hope Tanya doesn't continue to be a major bitch, she could be a good friend to Bella. Guess I'll find out, huh?



Author's Response:

Tanya has her issues, but they're more with Edward than Bella.  She'll play an interesting role in all of this...*evil laugh!*

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Slip of the Tongue

All I got of this chapter and the previous chapter was the chapter beginning and end notes. I'm not sure if anyone else had this problem, but felt that I should say something in case I wasn't the only one.



Author's Response:

site glitch...I'm working on re-uploading them now!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Slip of the Tongue

HE'S SO CUTE!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and saw the new chapters!

Summary:

As if starting a new school away from her friends and family isn't enough, she has nuisance and captain of the football team Edward Cullen interested in her. “Hello, I’m Edward Cullen.” She took my hand, shaking it, “I’m not interested.” Bella has better balance, and respect for herself.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 154282 Read Count: 9785
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 08 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Cannon Ball

I would have had a hard time not climbing out of the pool and socking her in the nose.

Summary:

Unhappy with life in Phoenix, Bella picks up and heads out to Texas to live with Rose. After a long drive Bella arrives. Dancing, drinks and a passionate kiss, what does this mean for Bella?


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12110 Read Count: 278
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: An Ending and a Beginning

My great-grandma's name is Mary Lou, it startled me for a moment when I saw such a familiar name.



Author's Response:

My grandmother's name is Mary Lou... it's where I got it from! Sorry for the startle, hope you enjoyed it! ;) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ Jess

Summary:

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Outtake from my story 'The Wonders of Life'.  Lemony goodness; if under 18 please don't read!  JPOV


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3850 Read Count: 523
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Texas Outtake

Damn.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Broken Baby by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Rated NC-17!! Set in NM, Bella is catatonic but Charlie figures out a way to get a reaction from her, he grows angry, and takes things further. Who will show up to rescue her? Includes incestuous situations & rape. very AU & OOC!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21086 Read Count: 23165
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2011 Updated: 30 Mar 2011
Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Her Only Reaction

I'll be honest, I read these stories because they ARE more real, even the ones that have the vampires. So many people act like it's all sunshine, butterflies, and rainbons for everyone, simply because they can when they're writing. I have a hard time accepting it, because it gives some "sheltered' people unrealistic expectations or views for when they're no longer hidden.

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ___!

We're all sick fucks, some of us are just unwilling to admit it. I'm not one of them, lol. It was a pretty good story, if I do say so myself.



Author's Response:

Haha I loved your reviews. You have a great point. And I KNOW things aren't all sunshine and roses so it sucks but we all look for a happily ever after and in truth there just isn't one. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Charlie surely didn't get his HEA LOL.

 

xoxoxoxoxo
M