Reviews by blackhairribbon
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Ginny's in debt over her head.  Can Lucius help bail her out?  At what cost?  Contains side pairings of SS/HG and HP/DM.  Very adult content, includes both slash and femslash.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy, Hermione/Lucius Malfoy, Hermione/Other Male Character, Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109708 Read Count: 46550
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This story is developing nicely.  I like the character development - especially of Lucius.  Thanks for writing.  I can't wait for more chapters.

M



Author's Response:

They are all written, it's just a matter of adding them.  It shouldn't take too long. =)  I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review and let me know.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, I can't wait to read the rest of this story.  I don't usually like Ginny, but this is a good story.  And we get SS/HG too.  Nice!

Keep writing - it's good stuff.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  So glad you like it.....oh you definately get quite a bit HG and SS!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Nice chapter.  I can just imagine Lucius in a black leather jacket and jeans.  Yummy!  Thanks for writing - this is a great story.



Author's Response:

And shades....don't forget the shades.  Mmmmm.  thanks so much for the review.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm really liking the way this story is going.  And, yes, Lucius is always right.  :-)  Thanks for writing.  Keep writing - you do a great job.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Nice.  I like the way the story is going so far.  Draco definitely causes some problems.  I'm just wondering if we're going to see a threesome or foursome in this story?  Just curious  Keep writing, you do it so well!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Draco doesn't mean to cause problems, he's just not used to seeing his Dad and his Godfather like this...

 

MMMMMMMMMMMaybe.  ***insert evil laughter***

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Nice!  I really like the interactions between these characters.  And thanks for the previous smut.  Keep Writing!  Thanks!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I saw Season One.  Now I'll have to look for Season Two.  Another fanfic author used the bit from Season One where a woman is giving him oral sex and his mother calls.  :-)  (Michael Caffee is definitely a momma's boy - but in sort of a good way).

Ron is such a jerk at times.



Author's Response:

I can't remember if it's season 2 or 3 that has that scene, it's after his cousin moves in from Ireland and he's living with Cath.  I yes, love the sex scene when "Ma' calls?  "What am I doin'? I'm trying to have a life here Ma".  LMAO.

 

What's the name of the story?  I'd love to read it.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Such fun.  I do like this story.  One minor item:  "And it would be most helpful if you would just except them graciously."  It should be 'accept' not 'except'.

Keep writing.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Yeah!  Happy Ending!  Thanks for writing this.  Lots of smut and a decent plot.  Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.  Pretty much all my stories are smutty with a HEA ending. I'm just a sucker for romance.  LOL.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Hermione and Lucius find a way to enjoy a rather dull dinner party


Categories: Harry Potter, All Human, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Lucius Malfoy
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29046 Read Count: 4980
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Apr 2014
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Anniversary delights

Very nice!  Isn't it amazing what a muse can do to a writer?  I hadn't understood it until I started writing some fanfic myself (unpublished) and discovered that some times the story would deviate from where I planned it to go.  Muses are tricky creatures.  Keep writing!  You're doing a great job.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Severus remembers when he fell in love with Hermione and writes her a letter. Inspired by David Bowies song


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21967 Read Count: 2626
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Holiday Wishes

I'm really liking this story so far.  Please make sure to get those rabid plot bunnies taken care of.  Nobody wants the rabies treatment.

Keep writing.  (I got your name from Tbird - you're listed as one of her favorite authors.  I like her stuff, and now, I like your stuff).  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely review it really made my day. Xx

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Last chance letter

I'm definitely liking this story.  Thanks for having Narcissa set Snape straight.  Sometimes he needs a slap upside the head.  :-)

Just one little nitpick - I should of given them to you long ago.  It should read 'I should have given them to you long ago.'  Snape is an old fashioned man.  His grammer and spelling should reflect that.  While a younger person might say or write 'should of', Snape would definitely use 'should have'.  At least that's my impression/interpretation of him.  Keep writing!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Nights in white satin

Nice ending!  And I was afraid for those poor burning plot bunnies.  I think dancing with Snape would be awesome.  Thanks for writing!

Summary:

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Originally written and posted on Jan, 9.

Today is Professor Severus Snape's birthday. In honor of his birthday, I present you with this smutty little one shot. I hope you enjoy it. Please read and review.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1833 Read Count: 1061
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice!  I  liked the ending twist too.  Keep writing - your stuff is good!

M



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! I glad you are enjoying it.  I hope to be loading some new stories and some new chapters tonight!!!  Thanks you so, so, so much for taking the time to review.  They mean so much to me.

Snape's Story by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 144]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Dark Lord is dead and the magical world is struggling to return back to normal. Severus Snape's past has finally caught up to him and his life is in a downworld spiral. Can one caring woman save him before he destroys himself? This story contains adult themes, situations and language.


Categories: Harry Potter, After Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75584 Read Count: 28977
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 08 Feb 2013
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Cruelty to Hufflepuffs!  Otherwise it's not bad.  Keep writing, I'm interested to see where this is going.



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to be cruel to the Hufflepuffs....I actually had a really, really good reason why I picked Hannah to be a prostitute.  Really....I did.  Thanks so much for the review!!

 

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I liked the 'American hacker wizard'.  Good idea.  'Stupify' doesn't work on computers.  :-)  Thanks for the story - Keep writing.



Author's Response:

No it doesn't.  And the Police department might notice if all thier computers suddenly exploded.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Severus can read me a list of potion ingredients anytime!  This is an interesting story.  Thanks!  Keep writing - I suspect it's going to take a while until Severus is even partially mended.



Author's Response:

He can too me too!!!  LOL.  He's really, really broken.  It's gonna be a while before he's fixed again.  Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Nice!  I like the way you're interspersing his memories with the therapy sessions.  It's making for a great read.  Can't wait to see where this goes.  Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you are enjoying it.  This is one of the most challenging stories I've ever attempted, so your words of encouragement mean the world to me!!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Whew!  You did a great job with the Pensieve memories.  And, yes, sometimes Lucius does have to be the bad guy - after all, he does such a great job at it.  :-)  Thanks for the new chapters.  This is such fun to read.  Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!  I know, but I hated doing that to him.  LOL.  Glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm still liking this story.  Can't wait to see the Snape/Dumbledore conversation.  At least, that's what I'm presuming will happen.  Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Whew!  I was worried when Lucius showed up.  What a nasty piece of work he is.  :-)  Keep writing.  I like the way this is developing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm glad you are enjoying it!!!

 

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bad Severus, BAD!  He knew better too.  This is not going to go well, I can tell.  Severus is more broken than I had thought.  Great story!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That would be disturbing to hear.  I'm not sure how Severus is going to get himself out of this mess.  Keep writing - I can't wait to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Nice!  I like the use of Phoenix tears - good touch.  Can't wait to see where this goes next.  Thanks for writing - it's a good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yeah - the smut finally starts.  :-P  Great story - glad they finally got together.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Finally!!! I've never taken this long to get to the "smut".  Glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh, dear.  She's made a bit of a mess of it.  Hopefully she can straighten it out.  Keep writing.  This is a very good story.  Can't wait to see how it evolves.

Summary:

Hermione, Ginny and Luna are discussing Superheros but unknown to them they are being spied on, what will our spies find out? Which Superheros do the Witches like and why? Read to find out.


Categories: Harry Potter, All Human
Characters: Other
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13948 Read Count: 3569
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice - I like the interplay between the characters.  So, Hermione = Catwoman.  Luna = Poison Ivy?  I'm not up on my 'red-headed comic book heroines/villainesses'.  :-)  Keep writing - I like your style.



Author's Response:

Yes Luna is Poison Ivy, there is more on the costumes in the new chapter. Thank you for your lovely comments they mean a lot. Xx

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

More, please!  Keep writing, this one looks very promising.



Author's Response:

There's still a few chapters to go yet, Xx

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting story so far.  Can't wait to see how it develops.  Suggestions - Draco = Green Lantern (green for Slytherin).  Harry = Robin the Boy Wonder.  Remus Lupin = Wolverine - naturally.  Sirius Black = Batman - The Dark Knight version.  Hermione = Wonder Woman.  Luna = Supergirl.  Ginny = Catwoman maybe.  I just can't picture Snape as a costumed superhero, sorry.  :-)  Keep writing.



Author's Response:

I love how you think, however I hope to change your mind about Severus as a costumed superhero, thank you for taking the time to review. Xx

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice!  Where do I sign up to get a Snape back rub?  Yummy!  Keep writing, I can't wait to see the costumes.



Author's Response:

*Grins* Unfortunately I keep him under lock and key Xx

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm thinking that Sirius and Remus will win the bet.  I guess I can see Severus as Batman, especially with the billowing cloak.  Keep writing - this is lots of fun!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.   Time will tell who wins the bet, however there's a lot more hilarity too come. Xx

Summary:

Severus makes good on long forgotten promises.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4757 Read Count: 1496
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2012 Updated: 29 Aug 2012
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start.  I can't wait to see the 'present' that Severus slipped in her purse.  Keep writing - it's good stuff.

Summary:

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A lot of you have been asking about this story, so here it is, Snape's Room in the Basement.  Ginny hears Snape alone in his room at Grimmauld Place.  Sneaking downstairs to spy on him, they start off on a strange and forbidden relationship.  Can they fall in love despite all the obstacles?


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Severus Snape/Ginny Weasley
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36077 Read Count: 20631
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Jul 2012
Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Darn that Voldemort.  He spoils all the good times.  Keep writing.  I wasn't sure if I'd like a Ginny/Sev ship, however this one is looking interesting.  Thanks!

Reviewer: blackhairribbon Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Don't we all want Detention with Professor Snape?  This is great - I just wish I could read it all at once.  I need a Time-Turner.  Keep writing, you do it so well.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! I'm so glad you liked it!!