Reviews by jkratochvil
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

All I'm Asking 3 Sharon

Bella doesn’t become comatose when Edward leaves. Instead she became angry. She went on to become a world renown researcher, debunking supernatural legends, using her insider information. She even writes a book, all the while hiding from the Volturi. Imagine her surprise when she meets Damon and her entire life is turned upside down. First in a series. Bella/Damon

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Categories: Crossover, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals
Characters: Bella/Damon
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109754 Read Count: 65907
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2013 Updated: 21 May 2014
Reviewer: jkratochvil Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 I’ve Never Been Perfect

Hi,  just wanted to say how much I am enjoying your story. Will we see an appearance of Edward and the Cullens in the future? For closure? I am just curious.  Aloha, Jane

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159804
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: jkratochvil Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hi, I love your story and just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy reading it. Sorry for all the trouble with FFN. I am glad you are able to post here.  Jane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 109873
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: jkratochvil Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just love this story. You write the hottest

& steamiest lemons in fan fiction.  

Aloha, Jane 

Summary:

Time can be a funny. Sometimes it's cruel. Sometimes it's not. What happens when it's got Bella Swan and Edward Cullen in its webs. A/U B&E All Human. (Please remember this is a fictional story, please suspend your disbelief and just enjoy. Thanks!)  


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5252 Read Count: 223
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2016 Updated: 08 Oct 2016
Reviewer: jkratochvil Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Dinia,

Halloween is my favorite time of year. So happy that you wrote a special story. I loved it!! It was very original. Bella & Edward forever!!

 

Jane 😊 



Author's Response:

Mine too.  When I was young(er) I use to dress up and go to parties or clubs, now as an old woman (74 last birthday) I watch scary and or weird movies.  We live in an "old" neighborhood where there are not children coming to the door for treats.  I used to buy candy just for them, but when no one showed up, I would eat the candy myself-not good!

I am please that you enjoyed this short story.  The additon of Edward's pov was kinda a last minute thing.  If you've read much of my later work, you'll know I'm not fond of canon personalities with the characters so I give them tweeks make them or human (like Edward in this one) or less human like Edward in "Edward's Addiction", and Bella really messed up as in my trilogy "Carrying the Torch".

One rule I try to adhere to is the HEA.  Someday I may break that.  Don't know if I can. LOL.

Now that I'm a little more established in the Twilight Fandom, I'm taking more liberties with the story lines and the characters.  I hope you'll read my FBI Guy series (#1 "Edward Cullen, FBI Special Agent & Psychic,  #2 "Edward Cullen & Friends - Down on the Bayou" - #3 "The Down On The Bayou Detective Agency - Case files")

Hope to hear from you soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia