Reviews by dap
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

Take all the time you need, There are more inportant things.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Dear lady, I miss your wonderful story. Hope all is well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Would it have turned her?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

I thought the gig was up.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717315
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Yes, we are

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Really loving this story but having a hard time getting reviews to go through on this site.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Love mobward and Bella too.

The Pull by Janiedoe12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 313]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella left Edward and everything she knew in Forks ten years ago. She knew he would never leave the MC, but circumstances drew her far away to accomplish her dreams. When Bella returns under somewhat mysterious circumstances, Forks will never be the same. AH. Tattward/Bikerward. Think Twilight meets Sons of Anarchy.

 

**Rec'd on The Lemonade Stand- go check out more recs from the TLS ladies!!**

 

tpull


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91763 Read Count: 60928
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Dec 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Red and Maddie have been missed. Doing happy dance to see a new chapter.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

Loved it.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm still loving it. Been rewatching the early seasons of SOA on netflix so I was in the mood for an update on this one.

Incognizant by Jezzeria Rated: M [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set after Allegiant, Tobias is struggling to move on without Tris. When she visits him in his dreams he questions the line between fantasy and reality. How will he be able to tell the difference when everything he thought to be true is challenged.


Categories: Alternate Universe, The Divergent Trilogy
Characters: Beatrice/Tobias
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7676 Read Count: 771
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2013 Updated: 09 Apr 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sorry to hear about your difficulties and hope everything is better. Glad to get the update.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope the one with Tris in it is real. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Seeing the movie made me want to reread also.

Summary:

lhl

They grew up together. Relationships and feeling changing, separating them. When an accident happens, they band together leaning on their faith, hoping that love will pull them through. AH, B/E


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21482 Read Count: 52662
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2014 Updated: 03 May 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Sounds good.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Beautiful Banner moved to chapter 1 due to Google requirements

 

(It all started with a Tweet on 01/11/2014.) Bella's had enough of being a zombie and her handsy "friend" Jacob. She leaves town, and the memories, to head for sunnier, vampire-free climes. No destination, no plan, just a desire to go. Who'd have thought she'd run into our favorite Major in Louisiana?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Peter, Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20880 Read Count: 17271
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2014 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm sorry about the storm but glad you updated early. Usually am faithful to Edward but with the background you provided I'm all for Jasper in this one.



Author's Response:

Prelude to a Sunset, ch 3

OMG it's snowing!

But besides that ... I'm afraid the power and cable Internet will go out again like it did last week and I wouldn't be able to post on the 14th!

Well, I'm almost always FOR Jasper! So thank you!

Rick

Here's a little taste of chapter 4.

 

"I'm Peter. Ain't this a purty picture? Jasper in a bubble bath with a human and smellin' all sweet and yummy," he said, waggling his eyebrows. His rough voice was filled with humor and dripping with curiosity. He waved his hand toward them. "Who's this? Or should I be askin' if she's in the marinade before dinner?"

 

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Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like where you are going with this.



Author's Response:

Prelude to a Sunset, ch 2

Thanks! And thank you for reviewing.

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

Here's a little preview of chapter 3:

Movement in the dark foyer caught her eye and she jerked to a stop, nearly falling over. There was a tall man standing next to her cart by the door. She hadn't heard anyone come into the room.

His face was in shadow, but she knew he wasn't one of the bell boys. He was wearing a cowboy hat, a solid black western-style shirt, black jeans, and worn black boots.

All black? In this heat?

"Oh! I'm sorry, sir. I was just finishing up the suite and getting ready to leave. I'm sorry, really." Nervously, Bella wrung her hands together and tugged at her uniform. She didn't realize it had gotten so late. The housekeepers were supposed to be out of the rooms before check-in time at 4:00. And why wasn't one of the bell boys with him? "I was just making sure everything was in place and-"

"It's all right," said the deep voice. The man stepped farther into the light from the living room. "I'm a little early."

He reached up to remove his black hat and ran his fingers through his hair. She couldn't help noticing his wide shoulders and how his blond hair curled just above his collar.

After removing his hat and lowering his arms, she saw his red eyes.

Red eyes.

 

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Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: epilogue

That was novel and so entertaining. Hope you continue to write.



Author's Response:

Prelude to a Sunset, ch 5

 

I'm going to try and keep writing, Sweetie!

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

Rick

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't tell if my reviews are even showing up but want you to know I love the story.



Author's Response:

I'm seeing them! I get an email notification that a review has been posted.

Good to hear you are enjoying the story!

Thank you so much!

 

Rick

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait to hear what Jasper tells her about Alice.



Author's Response:

Prelude to a Sunset, ch 4

We'll get that in the next chapter!

Check your settings to see if you're getting notifications. I always try to respond to every review. I try. And I give a sneak peek of the next chapter!

Thanks for YOUR review!

Rick

Okie dokie! Here's a little bit of the epilogue:

 

Prelude to a Sunset

 

Chapter 5, epilogue

 

She loved making love to him outside under the wide open sky. And she loved what came after-the soft touches, the quiet words of bonded devotion. One of her favorite positions was where she was at that moment-her naked body sprawled across his much larger one, the setting sun casting their shimmering skin in warm shades of gold, yellow, and red.

 

She hummed contentedly and lazily traced the scars over his heart with a single finger. "Jasper, tell me again how we all lived happily ever after."

 

"I already told you, Babe." One corner of his mouth curved upward in a soft smile, lifted his head to kiss her silky hair, and dropped back to look up at the first stars in the darkening sky.

 

"But I was an exhausted human riding off into the sunset in a gigantic black four-door truck the first time you told me, and Peter wouldn't shut up." She chuckled lightly, though the memory was foggy as if seen through an ice frosted window. "You kept asking me about Nessie and then I fell asleep. I still think you did that." She squinted her dark red eyes at him accusingly. "The second time you told me, I'd only been a vampire about a week."

 

Jasper blew out an appreciative breath. "That first week was pretty damn good, too. Insatiable. I think that was the first time I'd ever been tired as a vampire." He hugged her and kissed her forehead. "It's a good thing you have two mates." A small laugh rumbled through his chest.  "The second, third, and fourth weeks weren't half-bad either. All the sex, and the promise of more, kept you nice and close. It was pretty damn difficult to keep clothes on you, too. Not that I really minded that part so much."

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Bella is overwhelmed by how well things are going for her and Edward.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think she knows but was afraid to tell him because she knew he didn't want children. I was afraid Edward would think it was Jake's baby.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I was surprised she didn't even know about the baby. Reviewed on fictionpad also.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh, she finally told him I love you.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward has turned into a real sweetheart. Mike is a jerk.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am so glad she didn't have to testify.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It has been a great read and I've enjoyed it.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That was a great ending.

The Lost by Mamasutra Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

Bella Swan was not normal. She had been born with the gift of seeing the dead, but to her it was a curse. She had sworn off her abilities as she returned to her hometown to live out her final year of high school in an attempt at being normal, but nothing is normal when you are the one hope at redemption for the spirit of a lost boy. *paranormal romance & drama* beta'd


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 115308 Read Count: 9384
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Hi, made the move with you. I'm 2muchtrouble on ffn and De Perry on facebook.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478683
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like the chapter heading.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She is definately up to something.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ursula was in Misery!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is she an undercover fed?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I want Officer Pattinson to handle my problems too.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That rat bastard Jacob beat up an old lady. Hope Edward gets him good and Mike too.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Who is "them"?

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is she already pregnant?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was perfect. Everybody OK with her being older and the baby is fine.

Summary:

lwoc

Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66591
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like a good summer read.

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

SC

Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82045
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just love this. You even brought in Data and Janeway. It's wonderful.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What fun. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is the most fun I've have reading a fic in along time.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It is so cool that you made Laurant be Mr. Tuvok. I just love this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Twenty five years ago the quiet town of Forks witnessed the massacre of the Cullen's cult. Now the FBI has a new lead, and rookie agent Isabella Swan comes to investigate. What will she find?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46161 Read Count: 21802
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 24 Feb 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Eager to see where you go with this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

You'll see *insert evil laugh*:)

Summary:

 

It's been 60 years since the Cullens heard that Bella died, and 60 years since Edward ran off. They don't know where he's been or what he's been doing. Perhaps a small lead will help the family find him.

~ Written for the Halloween one shot request over on BetterinTexasFiction. Warning - Character death, language.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5448 Read Count: 998
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Tell-Tale Heart

That was a wonderful story. Got me in the Halloween mood.



Author's Response:

Tell-Tale Heart

Oh good! And there wasn't even any blood. But I hope it was creepy enough.

Thanks for your review!

Rick - Mizzrick - GeezerWench

Brown Sugar by GeezerWench Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

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Looking at her, he realized he didn't really want to know the answer after all-to either question. Perhaps later he would, but right then, in that moment, it didn't matter. *** Written for the Tricky Raven Weekly Fanfiction Flash Fic challenge prompt #36. AU Embry Call, Bella Swan. Angst, romance.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Embry
Genre: Angst, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 505 Read Count: 352
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2014 Updated: 18 Nov 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Brown Sugar

Well done. I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

It was tough keeping the word count down. The limit is 500.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Rick

 

Summary:

 

On a meandering, cross-country road trip to visit her mother, Bella's beloved truck died, stranding her on a rainy, dark, and desolate country road somewhere in the Mountain State. In a remote, little backwoods bar, she discovered much more than mere road-side assistance. *3rd pl winner in the Get Your Southern On Contest.* Banner by happyghost.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4999 Read Count: 1655
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Wild, Wonderful West Virginia

Oh, that was fun. You do Jasper so well.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

I love Jasper. Have a pretty definite idea of what I think he's like in my head. My "headcanon."

I could sure use a Jasper.

Thanks for reviewing!

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

Summary: Past Featured Story

mm

 

Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

fs


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 8 part 4

Perfect solution. Everybody moves in and Tanya gets out.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Bella must feel like Cinderella.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Why should Tanya even care? She left them.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

That was honest of him and now Bella knows how he feels.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

I don't think Tanya cares.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

Jasper is so going to lose.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

What is Bella upset about? Tanya, I bet.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

I like hearing from Jasper in this story.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Liked his speech. Wonder if Bella realized he meant her.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

He is just miserable with his life and so ready to change things.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 5 (Part 4)

I really am enjoying this story and I also enjoy the excerpts.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

So sorry to hear about your sister in law. Love the story.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 5 (Part 3)

But does he know she has her own child who needs to live there too?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

He wants her to stay I think.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

Hope her child can live with them also.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

Oh no. Tanya is going to want the baby in that tux, isn't she?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 12 Part 2

Loved the picture. This story is fun.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Here we go now!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

Perfect picture for this chapter.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

Oh this is so good.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

True confessions in the dark. I just love this story.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 11 part 5

Charlie has the right opinion of Tanya.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

I love this story.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

I think Esme knows how E feels about B.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

He is such a good daddy and so lucky to have found Bella. Sorry about your ID theft. That must have been a nightmare.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

That was really funny!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

This Emmett is just adorable.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Who does Tanya have in there with her? Barry White himself?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

Jasper spent the night! Perfect picture.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 8 Part 1

Love the picture.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 3 (part 4)

The pictures are as much fun as the story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like them. I love doing it with my stories!

 

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Send Tanya her dresses and all the rest of her things too. She's already gone.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

I got tickled thinking they were taking Charlie to the drive through window for his meal.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 3 (Part 7)

Bella will have an interesting time getting through the rest of her shift after that.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 4 (part 1)

I bet some of those customers snapped pictures on their phones. I would have wanted to.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

She is being so good about this. I know he pays her but still she is worried more about the baby than the money.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Waking up to pics is fun.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 5 (part 7)

Esme shut Jasper up pretty quick. Thanks for the generous offer.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Jasper couldn't quite grasp that.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

How will Jasper possibly handle that.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 5 (Part 10)

Love the pictures.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 6 Part 1

This Bella seems to have such a good heart.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

Alice and Elizabeth will have to move in with Edward and Charlie and Jasper too.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

Alice seems pretty smart about all the attention.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

Hope Edward likes Elizabeth.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 7 (Part 1)

That was a really sweet picture.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

And Jasper just met Alice.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

Took Alice a minute to catch on but she finally did.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 7 (Part 4)

Alice Get Your Gun. Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better. Loved it.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 7 Part 6

Edward liked that bit of information.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Oh, that was precious. I loved it.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 8 part 3

So glad your child is doing better. That must have been so frightening.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

Such a sweet picture.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Sounds good to me Jasper. Thanks for the free book offer too.