Reviews by dap
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113980
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

Poor Edward had a rude awakening.

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

Nothing ventured, nothing gained, Jasper.

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

Edward the tickle monster. I like that.

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Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

Embarrassed poor Edward.

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Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 10 Part 3

Bella is just not catching on about how awful Tanya is.

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 10 Part 6

I'm thinking kidnapper, paps in the house, Tanya?

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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

How much will Edward stand for from Tanya is the question now.

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Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 11 Part 1

Godzilla Tanya is going to destroy it all.

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Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

Yes, Edward, it needs to end. Kick Tanya out.

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 18 Part 8

Sweet.

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Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

Edward is such a nice guy to do that.

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Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 17 Part 7

I hope he is right about the press.

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Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

Oh yeah!

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

Saved by the bell (knock).

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Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 15 Part 6

This Edward is such a decent guy.

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

Rose and Emmett in the same house for a few days. What a good idea.

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Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Love the picture. Will you look at that dimple!

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Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 16 Part 2

Em and Rose are perfect.

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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Pfft! Tanya doesn't want him. What's her game now? It will be ok.

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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

Is Bella going to tell Tanya off? I hope so.

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Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

That was criminal of Tanya.

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Date: 17 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 18 Part 1

Really liking this Rose.

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Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 18 part 3

Edward grew a pair!

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Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 18 Part 4

Goodbye Tanya and thank goodness you're gone.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

Goodby Tanya and hello love!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 602086
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my. Great with the pictures as always. Can't wait until he lets her know he intends to marry her.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was really exciting. I was worried about Jasper there for a bit but he finally explained himself. Going to be hard to keep Bella in that safe room until she knows Edward is safe.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I don't know who the guard was. I feel like I missed a clue. Great chapter. Very exciting.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Taking Control

I can't review right now. Have to go take a cold shower.



Author's Response:

shower

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter. I am afraid Jacob will cause more problems in the future.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

The dresses and the collar were all just beautiful as was the ceremony. Great chapter!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hi, I've been out of town and off line so catching up now. Very hot chapter.

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Date: 30 May 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So happy you have brought Rose and Em together. Loved the chapter and of course the pictures. My favorite was the one of Jasper.

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Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

That was excellent. The pictures were stunning. I can't wait to see what happens in the next story with Aro and Jacob still in the picture.

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Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Perfect pictures to go with the story. Loved grumpy grandpa. Three such dangerous men but they were all so funny together.

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Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Bella was badass in that chapter. Great job.

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Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

And another great chapter, check. I especially love the older couples getting in all the planning.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Alice was way of of line but that was taken care of easily by Bella. That torture scene was brutal. Remind me to never get on your bad side. I hope Michael is saved somehow.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

James and Aro are truly evil characters.

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Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The older generation came out to play and had a nice time.



Author's Response:

Yep...I wanted to show that a Don and keep being a Dom years later.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I can't decide if Michael wants Bella and Edward together or not. It will be interesting to find out what happens.

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I was curious about the reason Waylon betrayed the Cullens and now we know.

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Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Mob boss Carlisle was impressive but drugged out Edward stole the show.

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Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Bella will choose to remain with Edward. Great pictures as always.

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Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I really liked Bella in this chapter. She showed her heritage and took care of the Irina problem herself.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Followed you here from the No Rules group on face book.



Author's Response:

Thanks for follwing me.  I hope you like the story.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Meeting

I like that you put the pictures at the appropriate point in the story instead of at the end. They really add to it.



Author's Response:

I would never do that, the picture is what helps tell the story.  Thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Everyone knew right away that she was perfect for Edward. A picture is worth a thousand words and these pictures are perfect for your story. Really enjoying the story too.

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Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I did like the chapter. Glad you are adding some drama with the mob and as always I adore the pictures.

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yeah, I liked your tough guy Edward. Wonder what happened to Waylon.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I especially loved the picture of them embracing on the floor. Just beautiful.



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Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aro is her father? Love the pictures so much. Never realized how visually unimaginative I was until now. They add so much to the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for wonderful review.  I hope you like the possible twist to the story.  More will be brought to light in future chapters and I hope I can keep your interest.  I love adding the photos to the story, because like you I believe they add so much to the story and bring the words to life.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Got to get rid of Aro and James and let Alex take over.



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Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Somehow I don't think Aro and James are going to take this news very well.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

You must have so much fun finding the perfect picture for the story. I'm off to find the facebook group now.

Summary:

They will pay for every hour that has gone by without hearing her voice. For every tear our lovely child has shed. For every miserable second I haven't been able to kiss my wife. They will pay...with pain.



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2342 Read Count: 1815
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2015 Updated: 30 Jun 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was dark and wicked and I liked it.

Summary:

 

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126038
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I do hate Bella's parents. Tia was really a decent person about the whole thing.

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Date: 25 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

All my theories have been wrong. I'm not surprised. Bella is in the bed with Emmett but sleeptalking about Edward. That had to make him feel good. Rose notices right away that Bella was Edward's type.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella is actually older than we think and is Em's trainer and that's why she doesn't live with her parents? Rose and Alice know her and thought she would be perfect for Edward so they set this up? But probably not right because Em looks at Bella with love.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, this is awkward for Edward if Emmett really loves Bella.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

"we're not going to have sex, she's" I think that line is significant. Maybe Bella is an undercover cop and Emmett knows this and is helping her.

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Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Edward is the only one who hasn't realized that Rose and Emmett are together and that they all know he is in love with Bella.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am so sad for Bella.

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Tia is a wise woman. Emmett and Rose are in love. Renee is horrible as far as we know. Bella is the queen of denial.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't think it will be easy for Edward to convince Bella to let him pay for college. I also worry about her writing that letter to her parents. It might make things worse.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She is giving Edward that bear for Christmas.

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Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, he is such a mess! I feel so sorry for Edward and for Bella too. Both of them are heartbroken now.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is going to be interesting. All your stories are.

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Date: 18 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

It was great and I love Tia.

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

It was only a dream.

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Date: 09 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was cool.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Things went well. They got a lot of things straight. What is Tia up to?

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Date: 02 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I totally like all four of them right now in spite of all the misunderstandings and deceptions. I especially like Tia.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Enjoyed it. Looking forward to the new ones.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Worse parents ever! Tia and Garrett are wonderful though.

Summary:

stories/111906/images/our_last_good_bye_banner.jpg

 

After the battle with the Volturi life seems to be going great except for one day when an unexpected visitor stumbles on their home? Will the Cullens help the Volturi after what happened so few months ago?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6870 Read Count: 359
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 17 Jul 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Witches and werewolves and Lucas. This is getting serious. The Cullens will need help to deal with this.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is interesting. Eager for more.

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229503
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Read this on ffn yesterday but was waiting for TWCS to review. Never did get an alert but found it anyway. Loved firing Jacob. He was nuts. I want to watch that movie.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aro got what he deserved!

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Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Happy times and sadness. Jessica sure is smarter than we thought except for ending up in Forks. Great chapter Clo!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Badass Bella in the house. Her shooting Edward's gun was so cool. Metting Maria and Alec went well also. Alec was sweet.

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Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter!

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Date: 12 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this Emmett and Rose. I also love the pictures of their home.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved Alec. Hated Jacob. Bella shut Emmett up pretty fast.

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Date: 26 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Jacob Black sleeps with the fishes. That was badass. Remind me never to piss you off. It wasn't too rough for me to read. Love DeNiro as Michael. Who is Al?

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That does require a cold shower!

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Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

A chapter of extremes with evil Aro on one end and sweet Alec on the other. I do not know who Lisa's dad is but I bet he is someone known to Edward.

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Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It was great to have a peaceful chapter before the fireworks start again. Love all the pictures you picked for this one.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Hope Edward listens to his gut feeling that something is wrong.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I have total faith in you.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great pictures! I'm so impressed with how the pictures match the story that I forget to add how good the story is too.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Beautiful pictures. I like the way the story is unfolding with Sean and Elizabeth.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aro is in for a world of pain and he deserves it. 

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was intense and the pictures were perfect.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I can't wait til they catch him! So many people want to torture him that there will be quite a long line.

Summary:

Head over Heels

 

Can a broken boot heel mend a broken heart and lead to a HEA?

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 2973
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 15 Sep 2015
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was sweet. I liked it.

Nightmare by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
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Summary: There's a serial killer on the loose and he calls himself Sent From Hell. Edward is a little strange and his past is jaded. He's let his crush on Bella be known, but she's scared of his unknown past. When Bella is hunted down, will Edward be her saving grace or will he be Sent From Hell?

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68989 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start!

Summary:

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The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7836
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quite a change of pace but I like it a lot.

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Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I would never have guessed that ending but I totally liked it. I like being surprised.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135076
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 May 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so glad they've got their boys home now.