Reviews by dap
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135076
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Horrible man! I can't think of a fate bad enough for him but I bet the two of you can.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was sweet!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved the whole chapter. Things are beginning to clear up. Is there a sign up sheet for beating up Emmett because I want to join.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I say again Emmett must die!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Seriously Emmett must die or at least be locked in jail with a horny motorcycle gang.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the switching around of the usual characters. Makes it fun.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Hope things are going better with those complications now.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I enjoyed it!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 May 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Jessica was great in this chapter! I am not worried about Emmett at all. There are too many people now who know the truth.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I know in my heart that you all have more twists and turns planned than a mountain road so I'm not guessing anything. Love that Tanya is a friend in this one.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Esme was great! Now, let's all go after Emmett.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 27 May 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Excellent revenge!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Loved hearing Edward's thoughts and love how his family and Bella's are supporting them.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Emmett needs to die for all that! Good luck with the surgery.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm so glad she called 911 and then followed through with the restraining order.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love her friends.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Your stories are so much fun to read.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved Charlie and Jasper.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Truly evil Emmett!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Sweet Edward! Maybe Bella will get some answers about the mysteries in her home soon. You must have some interesting guest reviewers.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think it was more of a shock to Edward. I'm tickled pink.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved the judge And loved the chapter.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 May 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I would love to have heard what Carlisle said to Edward! Great chapter.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 May 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Beautiful wedding. Loved James.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 May 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Justice at last for Emmett and his mother!

Summary:

Edgar the bullfighter needs to cowboy up and admit to his buttercup just how deep his love and affection for her goes. Before he gets the chance, danger strikes. It will be up to him to save the day and the woman he’s in love with.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10036 Read Count: 289
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2016 Updated: 05 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What great characters! I especially loved Charlie.

Summary:

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

 

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

 

 

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9982 Read Count: 1018
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2016 Updated: 12 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so much fun to read. I like that you didn't have Tanya show up to the reunion.

Southpaw by SouthrnContest Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A friendship on a precipice, divided by time and sprawling state lines. Bella travels to southern Louisiana to find what has been missing and in the process, is swept away by the mysterious baseball player who encompasses everything she thought she knew about the concept of ‘home’.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4589 Read Count: 366
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2016 Updated: 18 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, that was fun! Bet Bella transfers.

Summary:

 The story of two women in a constant struggle against time, and the two men that adore them. Will Fate be on their side, or will time run out like sand in an hourglass?



Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3817 Read Count: 236
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2016 Updated: 24 Mar 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Charming

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184231
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Whew! Smoking.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was a fun chapter!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great chapter. I was afraid you wouldn't post it here so I jumped through hoops leaving a review on the blog site. Non stop action. The Edward in the flames scene made me think of the New Moon scene when Bella jumps off the cliff and is knocked out with Edward floating in the water beside her.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Carlisle was impressive!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sweet, fun chapter!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Roberto is not going to know what hit him with these girls. Great pictures Clo!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved Esme and her golf cart!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Carlisle was cool!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I especially liked the lines about Edward running through hell.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Now that's a mysterious sounding development!



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  There is one person who has always been in background who needs to be seen.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Roberto is one sick puppy!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Delightful. Loved the baby names. Poor Edward so upset about Bella being sick. Loved that last picture of Carlisle especially.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella loves the stubble and so do I!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh Bella! You go girl!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The fifties housewife act was genius.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Charlie deserves it!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Alright Esme!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Parties and wedding and pictures were perfect!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

You know I've love the story but man, these pictures were just perfect. You outdid yourself on this chapter!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm going to miss these guys. Edward calling Esme mommy was my favorite part.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was a terrific ending!

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22447
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Off to a great start.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think she won that contest.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

They seem evenly matched.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bet Edward makes her fantasy come true.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 21 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so curious about who it is.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 May 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like Anthony!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Quite a set up!

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 9029
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What fun! Please continue.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm guessing it's Emmett. Such an original story and I love it.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What a marvelous imagination you have!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178668
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So cool! I've been trying to follow this on face book but was afraid I was missing some so I am so glad you're putting it here. (De Perry/2muchtrouble)

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 333172
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So many questions! I know we will get the answers eventually.

Summary:

 

The Prince

In the hot, dry desert, can the Prince find true love or will an arranged marriage dry his heart into sand, or it will she be an oasis to his heart? E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1756 Read Count: 4893
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2016 Updated: 09 Oct 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Look forward to more!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So different so yes I like it. The pictures are amazing.

Summary:

Shadow

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How much heartache and pain can one person take before they break? Will Bella's dreams of happiness come true or will it remain in the shadows? E&B.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2069 Read Count: 1420
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2016 Updated: 27 Dec 2016
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1

Intriguing first chapter!



Author's Response:

It will be a rocky ride and I hope you will continue to the ride with me.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aro abandoned them! Rat bastard. What happens next?



Author's Response:

Yup rat bastard was a wonderful term for him.  Get the tissues ready. 

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91419
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so excited about what's coming.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am happy to go on this journey with you!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I sense trouble ahead!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 11 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Little Edward seems like a darling child. Loving the story.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor kid. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Those memories are sneaking in. Wonder if she will dream about them.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 May 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Louise and Brad are in mortal danger.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was so sad but Esme and Edward are getting closer to Carlisle now.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm afraid that puts Edward on Aro's hit list now.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was intense!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Made for each other! 

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Felix better back out of that situation!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Caius deserves a graphic end!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love these mob stories!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

They're both so close to figuring this out! 

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was great.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Aro will soon sleep with the fishes! Loved the sudden wedding plans. 

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great wedding! Can't wait for Carlisle's revenge.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Such good people willing to change their entire lives for this child!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh, these two are made for each other!

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64413
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Hope Malcolm survives Edward's anger.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

Loved how you got Carlisle out of the way for the night!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid

The tatoo was the crucial element for Bella to trust him.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose

Love that Charlie is joining Edward.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Making a Run for It

Really love the plot and how brave Esme has been making her escape.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

Sweet Edward taking care of Bella.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 20 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

Sweet child, close friends, a new career! I sense drama ahead.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

Oh no, cameras across the street from where Esme's paintings will be shown cannot be good news.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise

Everyone's world is about to change.

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

Bleak future for Esme and Edward!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

Can't wait to read if they recognize each other!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart

Heartbreaking!

Reviewer: dap Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

Carlisle is truly evil!