You are Taylor for those of us that have been around as long as this catagory has!  You give him all the best thoughts they just make anyone smile and laugh out loud! Love that he was mifted at the copy cat out in the Great Room! Thank you again for breathing life into a character that we all became fasinated with but knew very little about in the Trilogy! Liz

I love getting the notices from FF and read there and then again here in TWCS, I don't always have luck with these reviews showing up?? when I try to redo am told one can only review once... That said I am such a diehard Sunandsurf fan, I love the way you write, I love the chances you take with stepping out and beyond in your stories and how insightful you are with your characters. No one has attempted another Taylor POV because you own it!! This as always is a fabulous chapter because it gives us all insight as to what our favorite boy is going thru when Ana goes to see her mom. The love story with Taylor and Gail could not be told by anyone else and it so touching and real. Thank you for doing this it is greatly appreciated!! Looking forward to Georgia and the soaring!Thank you, Thank you. Liz

I never know where I should leave my reviews with you few that double (or in your case triple) post your stories?? So here I am to exstole my heartfelt gratification for this entertaining and insightful chapter! Not that every chapter isn't, but each one gets better and better of course our magic couple are getting closer and closer too! Taylor is a full blown character to us all because of you! There have been a few TPOV's since you started this original storyline, but none as complete and enthralling as yours. I am of course jaded since I love all of your works and even your entertaining blog master :). This is an absolute delight to read and re-read! Again, I thank you for doing this for us! One of your undeserving but appreciative readers. Liz

I was just reading thru your reviews and between the two sites you post on you have almost 10,000 readers is that not the coolest thing in the world to you? I am so blown away with how well you have been received in this media! Congrats you deserve it good writing,great story line and Oh so good at keeping your readers on the edge of our seats. just wanted to let you know you are appreciated! Thanks doesn't sound like enough.

Your fan,

Liz

Awesome! I am humbled by your gift to write. I had to read it again here after FF. a standing ovation is called for!! So happy you have wanted to share with us, don' t go away!!! Liz

Great chapter, she has her hands full with such a big secret! Almost like her father had in college only not so dark. Can't wait to see where you take us! Thanks for sharing.

Poor Pheobe, she will never get a chance to play....but she sounds like she has a lot of good values and she did the right thing to take care of her friend. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.

This is an awesome hilarious (but oh, so believable) chapter! You have hit a vein of gold with this story! Look forward to every 24 karat chapter! Thanks

Truth is so freeing, glad she came clean for her friend. All one can hope is that her friend doesn't use it against her. Good job! Well written keep going!

Innocent for how long? She is the child of Christian & Ana Grey for Pete's sake.....Hot is in her blood. Wonderful chapter, keep it up please!

Big brother to the rescue! Love it! Look forward to where ever you decide to go with your story. It has been a wonderful reading experience, you have really done a great job with it!! Come back soon.

So happy to see you back! Love this story.

I know, I know I reviewed on FF and you are probably rolling your eyes...but I agree with your fan Lynne3 we really do appreciate a rare and authentic intellect such as yours. Just wanted to add to your read count (tee,hee) Thanks for continueing!

There are so many good one liners in this chapter, I had to come over to this site to re-read just for the fun of it, to heck with the lemons this was just plain entertaining!! Ana and her zingers and Christian w/his side comments... You crack me up! You must have had fun writing this? Thanks for the giggles, you really never disapoint!! :) Liz

Grey brothers and Grey sons, sounds like a new dynasty! Love it! As always wonderful chapter to an incredible story. Hope you don't mind the double comments, love reading you twice. Love you Madame E. Liz 

I hope this one stays, have tried reviewing on this site many times and it doesn't show up, try again and am told only one review per chapter. So sorry haven't forgotten you!

This was so amazing in the interplay between the two of them, her pushing for details his not realizing what he may have really done. I gasped again when he confessed his physical reaction, he needs our favorite Dr. to help him thru this. Sorry to be so winded, I am still trying to catch my breath! Such a stellar writing endevor and creative mind! As always am in awe of you. Liz

I reviewed this previously but it did not load, will stick to my iPad, don't have that problem???  Love the set up for things to come;) Giggle,giggle so cute! "I don't do patience" so hope to see you soon. Liz

Madame E, you knew I had to re-read here. Still smiling and still think you are the best.thanks you are so much fun and you are a mighty fine writer! Sorry I couldn't resist! Seriously now great plot, holding on to my iPad to see what's going to unfold with this exciting chapter. Luv you kiddo! Liz

Mdme. E, I see you are spinning your magic thread around us from bringing our favorite guy home (almost in tact) to happy Grey family time and a new apprieciation for sneezing!. Now, you are spinning your threat around our hearts again with worry for our favorite gal... I can only hope that your thread is spinning itself into a hangmans' noose to snare once and for all our favorite most hated villian! Your threads are golden and keep us dangling for more of your incredibily wonderful book! Love what you do with those threads! Liz

Madme. E, I think every one of your reading audience has either gone to take a cold shower or sought out their significant other for "don't ask me why, but need you NOW" after reading this chapter! Very hot, very sweet with adorable Grace and Teddy! I think I'll go look for my husband now, and he'll probably ask me if Nuwriter has posted again? Thanks from both of us;) Liz 

I just read Twifan1228' s review and I think it's most accurate and beautiful review I have ever read! I agree one hundred percent with what she said and am so happy she wrote it for you! I only wish I had that talent... You deserve every compliment and appreciation of your talent that can come your way! Thank you Twifan1228 and the biggest bottle of Bollinger for you my friend! Much love Liz

E, You are a conductor of the symphony of emotions! What a beautiful symphony it is, the low cello in the begining with her sorrow and boardom, that segways into the violins sweetly playing thru Teddy's discussion of Sam. (tissue needed), then the flutes start a happy trill as Grace comes on the scene, and then a full on awe inspiring run when Christian arrives to the rescue!! You take us thru a lovely sound with visitors of love and finish us up with a sweet concert of love at the end that makes us all sigh with a grateful smile. You have a standing ovation from all that have read this and love your work!

Looking forward to Fifty Shades Full Circle!  I would be more than happy to help Ana with designing a new office? :) Liz

Dear LizLemon, I have been a long adoring fan of yours long before you came to this site ans long before there were so many stories in this category FF or here! I just had a unheard of day off and decided to re-read this from the beginning to end non stop. This is a luxury since the normal way we read these chapters is one at a time with what seems to us the fans an intermanal amount of time. I just wanted to share with you what a delightful experience this was in totalum!! You deserve a metal or trophy or some outrageous prize for what you accomplished here! You have captured the true essence of these characters and the flavor of what was in the original books. This effort is supreme and so deserving of congratulations of a phenomenally written piece of work! I thank you again. Don't stop writing you have a gift! Liz S

I am a huge fan of all of your works! This one as you predicted was very difficult to read. I certainly appreciate how challenging it was for you to write. The writing is pure gold the subject .... Near and dear to our hearts this magic character with those fifty shades and to understand his journey we need to understand him. Thank you for putting all of you talents together to help us in that path. An appreciative fan. Liz

Mdme. E, I can't begin to tell you how special your writing is to me. I read it and re-read it to inhale every word digest every dialogue, envision every scene. You never never fall short of pure literary delight! Chapter after chapter it is a lovely escape from the reality of life and the depth of your characters is so real that it transfixes us into your story that we feel them, love them, feel their pain and laugh with their joys! Oh, and of course sigh with their affections for each other. You have a gift of vision with your pen. We are so fortunate you came to us! Your grateful fan! Liz

Bring it on E! Your fans love what you do with a lemon! A very popular fruit with our beloved couple;). Love the rain play a wonderful visual and giggle maker. Happy to hear they are having a little get away much needed and deserved, looking forward to a delightful flight! Comments during the 'punishment' were priceless Ana really does have a 'smart mouth' brilliantly played. As always the pleasure is all ours to read you! Liz

E, Pure delight! the entire chapter right down to the cleaver surprise at the end! Can't wait to see what Mr.G thinks of Paul! Love the ladies room bonding, the vivid description of the Hotel decore! Very well done! Am impressed! You bring joy to my heart when your announcement arrives, your story is so so much why I came to this format. Grateful for your canon, you do it so incredibly! XXOO Liz

E, This is a difficult chapter to comment on since it is such a thought provoking and introspective journey from start to finish. The under tones of unknowns and the mysteries of what is assumed... These two have unique challenges, but don't we all? Love may not conquer all, but as long as it's the foundation, whatever the battles that happen along the path of our lives we have a chance. I love how you challenge us as your readers to think beyond what is on the page. The "what would I do if.. how would I feel if... what would I say..." all proof of your instictive talents as a writer. I love that they love each other unconditionally and as far a Drama, if we consider the Trillogy as the first three books of their life together and your two books now sixth book of them together as having plenty of drama. I vote for what you want to write not what you are pressured to write. I for one trust you! Many others have taken the later chapters of their life in a not so happy direction and it is sad. I love all that you share with us! Liz

I knew it was too good to last.... we were having such a good time in this chapter, make up lemons, work confirmation, redecorating plan, Gand call, party... and then you have to scare the daylights or should I say headlights out of us and leave us to hold our breaths AGAIN! I must be getting old my heart can't take these dangeling off the edge endings.... Please have CG be OK! As always we can never ever get enough of you! Really do Love You! Liz

E, We had wonderful dancing thru your captivating Chapter! Started with an adorable Jr. dance, on to a romantic but inquisitive dance with our favorite couple. That lead us to a snappy little number with In-Laws with reprimands and more questions than answers...Relief dances up to only frustrate with answers known but not shared... until of course the dance of shame with our favorite Dr./Mom. Then you saved the last dance for us in the boudoir that was adorable!! I think I'll be twirling around until next time with a smile!! Loved it and you! Liz

E, I love you! Your humor, your wit, your character developement, your captivating and heart warming writing! Simply the BEST! Liz

Thank you! This is truly a gift to us your readers! Beautifully written, insightful and delightful!! There is a collective sigh a the conclusion that goes with the smile! A pleasure as always to read yor works! So nice I think I'll go back and read again! Liz

Nani posted you were coming back! So excited, need to reread to freshen up my old noggin. So happy to see your name again, we started in this catagory a long time ago. New book coming in June makes me smile. xx Liz