Reviews by dme4nic
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254905
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I just came across your story 3 days ago & I've been devouring it in my free time. It is exceptionally well written & I became attached to the characters right away. While all the chapters I've read so far have been great, this one in particular is just outstanding. It's almost as if you can feel Bella's pain & it just completely took my breath away. I couldn't stop crying while I read. For this being your first fan fiction, I must say you are extremely talented. I can't wait to read more. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh yummy! I like the unrated version of this chapter! WOW!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Me, too. E.

Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

All I can say is....WOW!!! That was amazing! I can't wait to read more. You do such a fantastic job :)



Author's Response:

Trying to catch up on reviews and write chapters at the same time. Thank you for reading and following. I appreciate the review and appreciate you spending your time with my story. 

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Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

You write the yummiest chapters!!! That was some really good kinky fuckery :)



Author's Response:

Intense to write. Thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow. That was a really hard chapter to read. You could feel how intense their emotions were & how tortured Christian felt. I'm so glad the chapter ended on a light note with them eating burgers & fries & drinking a vanilla shake. Great chapter. You're a really fantastic storyteller. Can't wait to read the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate the review. New chapter today or tomorrow.

E.

Dinner with Elena by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

How did Elena persuade Christian to visit Anastasia in Savannah? What was her motivation? How ‘happy’ did she want Christian to be? Read on…


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3352 Read Count: 911
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great story! I can't stand that evil bitch, but it was fun to read your version of how their dinner went!!!

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Nice to see them having some fun after all the angst of the last few chapters. It was also great how you gave us some insight into his subs. I can't stop thinking that Ana may be pregnant again. It seems something is going on with her after all the little clues you've been dropping. Can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

They're a fun couple alright. I should have so much fun.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  E.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen is an A-list actor with horrific taste in clothing. Bella Swan is his long-suffering stylist who wants to strangle him one minute and kiss him the next. When Edward crashes her date, Bella has to choose between dressing her client and undressing the man she loves. 2nd Place Public Winner for the Happily Ever After Twific Contest!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11285 Read Count: 3542
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: (Un)Dressing Edward Cullen

Loved this one-shot! I was smiling as I read it. 



Author's Response:

 Aww, thank you!  Sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your review.

Summary:

This is a sweet little one-shot.  Bella cared for her mother Renee during her fight with Cancer. When Renee slips into a coma she still manages to leave Bella with a message to help her live her life.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Renee (nonslash)
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3112 Read Count: 490
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2013 Updated: 23 Jul 2013
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazingly beautiful one shot. Very uplifting. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110637
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

Renee is such a cold hearted bitch! This story is very intriguing & I can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

This story has weekly updates so next monday you'll get more :-)

Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Shattered Reflections

Very interesting. Can't wait to learn more. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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On one of history's darkest days, Edward finds his other half. Bella wakes to find that her guardian angel may just be a figment of her imagination. A journey of two lost souls as they find the light when darkness surrounds them.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120996 Read Count: 29995
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2014
Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Poor Bella & Edward! I'm so freaked out about what's going to happen to her & how it will impact her life & relationships w/ her parents & friends. Can't wait until Sunday! It's my favorite day w/ both this story & Masen Manor posting!



Author's Response:

Hehe We'll see. ;)

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: dme4nic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Such a heartbreaking chapter with all of Charlie's memories of Bella, but I'm so happy that he's being included in the process & understands (for the most part!) what Bella will become. Amazing, amazing chapter! Can't wait for Sunday. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)