Reviews by Lynne3
Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I hope Ana fesses up finally, about all she learned about on her trip. I can't wait for that conversation. Loved this chapter with the kids. I thought the Ray and Myra thing wrapped up a little quickly and a bit to easily but good for them to find each other and fall in love. Thanks for the chapter and Happy New Years to you and yours.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I dont remember what happened to Eva? Hummm I am so sad for Ana and Kate and the loss of  thier babies, for Gail, Myra and Ana to be without there men, and Christian and Ana for suffering with their marriage problems,and even for Viirginia to not have contact with her grandson. It just all seems so depressing right now. I have always loved how you have guided us thruogh this story and of course  trust that this too shall pass but we need some joy! Maybe their anniverary would be a good place to start.(hint,hint) where ever you lead us I will follow because you are an amazing writer. Cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Christian is back thank goodness! Thank you so much for this update! What a great surprise. I am not really all that sappy but I actually had tears rolling down my face as Ana spent the night alone on her anniversary. Then Christian showed up. Every good relationship goes through ups and downs and at least they are going to talk and that's the first step to working it out. Thank you for getting them back together for their anniversary. I am looking forward to them talking this all out and even for them having some lemon fresh action!

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

You did GREAT with this chapter! Just the right amount of lemons and talking! It was so sweet to see how excited Christian was over the info about his parents.

Maybe next chapter you could have Taylor sharing with Gail about the emotional roller coast that Christian has been on for the past week. I'm excited to see how the kids react when they find out that Daddy is home. You will of course make the next chapter as wonderful as all the others! Thanks for doing such a wonderful job on this story!



Author's Response:

Ohh, thank you so much. I appreciate it.

E.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Anna is a super wealthy woman and she is spending money now like she finally knows it. The good thing is all the money that she spent today was making her feel guilty when it was for herself, however, she did not hesitate to spend whatever money was needed on that sick child. I think that says a lot about who Ana is. Thats another reason why we love this character. 

I Vow To Thee by sunandsurf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

The three nights when Christian fretted over the marriage vows. What was he thinking and what changed his mind?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5236 Read Count: 948
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2012 Updated: 04 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a wonderful look into the " F"-ed up mind of our beloved Christian. His intentions are so pure and sweet, it just takes him a little time to figure out how to make it work. Thank you for sharing your talents with us once again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Takes place after Anastasia has agreed to sign Christian's contract during their conversation in her graduation. Starts when he goes to visit her, to hers and Kate´s apartment, in Chapter 15.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22252 Read Count: 6545
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 01 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Outtake 1 "There's a helicopter on top of my car"

I just read all of your story and was surprised how much I enjoyed it. I don't usually like stories that go off the original but you did a great job with it and still kept all the caracters true to their personalities. Really you have made a believer out of me and I will look for other stories you post to read as well. Thanks for sharing your creative ideas.



Author's Response:

Oh my!! what a great review! thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words. It really was my intention to keep everyone on my story as close as possible to the characters from the FSOG book. 

I'm glad to know you'll be keeping an eye for my next story, and I look forward to hearing from you.

:)